“I Love You” – A Twinj journey
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http://www.tellyupdates.com/love-twinj-journey-chapter-49/
(Cover pic credits: Laddoo)
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Chapter 50 (An evening with you)
Sarna mansion
Evening
Kitchen
Mahi and Yuvraj had left for Goa while the children along with Kavya had left for their adventurous trip to Manali. Twinkle was busy working in the kitchen preparing dinner for both of them when Kunj came and hugged her from back. “Hey!”, said Kunj. Twinkle smiled and continued working. Kunj moved her hair to one side and gently kissed her neck. “Kunj, let me work”, protested Twinkle. “How can I? I’m not able to stay away from you”, replied Kunj. Twinkle turned around and said, “Kunj, something is wrong with you. You’re behaving as if we’re newly married.” Kunj held her hand and pulled her close. He moved his hands to her waist and tightened his grip. “We’ll always remain newly married”, whispered Kunj and winked at Twinkle. “Stop your nonsense”, replied Twinkle trying to move away. Kunj pulled her closer and said, “You’re behaving as if I’m some stranger.” Twinkle gave a disgusted look and said, “What do you want?” “An evening with you”, replied Kunj. Twinkle wrapped her arms around Kunj’s neck and said, “Who do you think will work for me then?” “Trust your husband and give him sometime”, replied Kunj kissing her cheeks. “Fine. Tell what I need to do”, said Twinkle. “Go to our room. You’ll find out”, replied Kunj loosening his grip. “I’m too tired to walk upstairs”, said Twinkle winking at Kunj. Kunj naughtily smiled and picked her up in his arms bending down. “Nice to see the bold Twinkle back”, said Kunj. Twinkle wrapped her arms around Kunj’s neck and kissed his left cheek. They smiled at each other as Kunj climbed up the stairs and entered the room. He made her stand in front of the bed. Twinkle noticed a gift on the bed and turned to look at Kunj. “Open it”, said Kunj. Twinkle opened the gift and found a knee-length black coloured dress with netted embroidery done all over and matching accessories along with it. “I love this. It’s so beautiful”, said Twinkle. “Not more than you”, replied Kunj making Twinkle blush. “Mrs. Sarna, aren’t you lazy to change?”, asked Kunj naughtily. Twinkle turned around to look at him with widened eyes. She smacked him and said, “No. Get out now.” “But”, said Kunj but Twinkle pushed him outside the room. She closed the door and stood there blushing. After a few minutes, she took her dress and went to change.
Around 15 minutes later, she came out of the room after changing. She was looking absolutely gorgeous in that dress along with the little make-up and her hair tied up in a pony tail. She walked down and found Kunj waiting for her in the hall. He was wearing a black suit with a white shirt. He looked up at Twinkle and was mesmerised to see her. “Shall we leave?”, asked Twinkle. Kunj walked towards Twinkle and pulled her closer by her waist. “I don’t feel like going anywhere now. I just want to see you the entire evening”, said Kunj. Twinkle smiled and said, “Let’s leave.” “I’m way too hungry. Let’s stay at home”, replied Kunj. “What will you eat at home? There’s nothing you..”, said Twinkle but was interrupted as Kunj kissed her lips. Twinkle reciprocated and after a while they both pulled back. Twinkle started blushing while Kunj smiled looking at her and said, “You’re there na, why do I need something else to eat?” Twinkle smacked his arm and said, “Stop it. Let’s leave.” Kunj smiled and walked outside the house entangling his hand with hers.
Kunj stopped the car in front of a resort. “Why did we come here? I thought we were going for dinner!”, said Twinkle. Kunj smiled at her and got down the car. He opened the gate for Twinkle and asked for her hand. She gave her hand and both of them went inside entangling their hands. “Kunj, isn’t this the place where we first met?”, asked Twinkle. “Ahah, you remember”, replied Kunj. Twinkle smiled as they continued walking. “Kunj? Where are we going? Any plans to have dinner?”, asked Twinkle. “Siyappa Queen, shaanti! Kitne sawaal puchti hai? (Siyappa Queen, keep quiet. How many questions do you ask?)”, replied Kunj while Twinkle frowned. After 5 minutes, they entered the private beach of the resort. The beach was very quiet and calm and in the centre a date set-up had been arranged. The set-up had been covered with transparent white cloth and flowers of blue and purple combination put up everywhere. Twinkle looked at Kunj and said, “You did this for me?” “No, for Navya and Naiyya”, replied Kunj teasingly. “Shut up!”, said Twinkle and both of them laughed. Both of them walked towards the set-up and settled down. “Kunj, this is just so beautiful”, said Twinkle. “I know. After all who’s choice is it!”, replied Kunj. “Your choice isn’t good. Only sometimes it works out”, said Twinkle. “My choice is good. I can prove it to you”, replied Kunj. “Okay. Prove it”, said Twinkle. “I showed”, replied Kunj. “Where?”, asked Twinkle looking here and there. “What are you looking here and there for? Look at yourself”, said Kunj. Twinkle blushed and replied, “I agree. Also, my choice is the worst because I chose you.” Kunj slid his leg on hers from under the table and said, “Is it?” Twinkle smiled and said, “Yes.” “Oh really?”, asked Kunj. Twinkle nodded her head in a yes and quickly ran away towards the water.
Twinkle spread out her arms and was standing in front of the water when someone came from behind and sensually moved his hands on hers. Twinkle blushed while he made her put her arms on her stomach. “Kunj!”, said Twinkle. Kunj rested his chin on her shoulder and said, “Shh!” Twinkle smiled and both of them stood like that for a while enjoying the scene and the cool breeze. “Thank you for this amazing evening!”, said Twinkle. “Anything for you darling”, replied Kunj and kissed her shoulder. He was about to slid the strap from her shoulder when Twinkle pushed Kunj and ran away. “Twinkle, I love you!”, shouted Kunj. Twinkle turned to look at Kunj who had spread out his arms. She ran towards him as he lifted her up. He spun her around while Twinkle said, “I love you too!” Both of them smiled and touched their foreheads.
••• THE END •••
Hey all! Firstly, thank you to all of you who’ve constantly supported me right from the beginning. It was a great pleasure to see all your comments. Your comments have always enlightened up my mood. Thanks to my silent readers as well who even though didn’t comment but, still supported me.
Well, I’m really sorry for not informing you all from before about ending this fan fiction today. As I told it would’ve a shock so, here it is! The only reason for which I didn’t tell was that I can’t let you all down. If I would’ve told from before you all would’ve told me to continue it and I surely can’t let you all down. Sorry if I made anyone of you upset today.
I would really request all of you to answer these two questions.
– Did you all like this fan fiction or it was kind of boring?
– Do you all want me to continue writing? If yes, then I would start it once I finish my second fan fiction – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? I won’t mind if anyone says no as opinion matters from person to person.
Lastly, please don’t forget to express your views on this chapter/fan fiction whether it’s positive or negative.
Love you all loads! Take care! Bye!?
35 Comments
Hey Ria i think i read ur ff till chap 35 and now i started reading and love ur ff and u ended it? But I didn’t read the ending as I wanted to read the other 14 chapters first 😛 i enjoy reading ur ff u r amazing 🙂
Golden jubliee of ur ff n also d halt…u hv given such a beautiful ff of d journey of twinj…it was so nice,sweet as if it was real…u took us through d whole journey…so i hope u’ll again come wid a new ff n make us flow wid it…n post nxt epi of 2nd ff…love u
ria yr it was of course
a mindblowing blockbaster ff
n yr yes u askd some questions of course wuld nt lyk bt luv if u cntinue to ryt it aftr ending ur odr 1 pls ria
cntinue it dear
luvd d episode last episode it was so cute romance was also dere hmari romantic queen yaya i remember me phele bolti thi bich mein chut gya tah bt yr osm
kya episode tha n isliye aaj ek baar phir bulana chati thi romance quen yr
pls cntinue it aftr ending dat ff of urs
luv u dear amazing update missing sidmin
Ria sorry bahut late hu naa mei but kya karoon you know naa busy thi… You know Maine tumhara ff padha hai from start but comment nhi kiya I mean kiya but bahut kaam…
I am sorry for that.. You are really an awesome writer . you give us such a beautiful story I LOVE YOU..
I AM BLESSED TO HAVE A FRIEND LIKE YOU….
I HOPE WE ARE FRIENDS RIGHT?
AND YES I WANT YOU TO WRITE INFINITY OF MORE FF DEAR. I LOVE YOU….
OK BYE AND POST YOUR SECOND ONE SOON.
I’m soooooooooooo soooooooooooo soooooooooooo soooooooooooo soooooooooooo sorryyyyyyyyyyyy for such a late comment as I was terrifically busy and exhausted to check up my fone…I did only once or twice during break time for few minutes…. But I’m bit sad that u end this ff so soon but with a hope dat u wud come up again soon…. The episode is just awesome….the words are just less to aprreciate ur skill as well as ur story line…u just gave us a memorable sweet journey of our lovely couple Twinkle Kunj Sarna and Kunj Sarna…. Aka Twinj and Sidmin…. Plz do come with ur amazing new story with a head bang… 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂