Episode 5
Swasan reached pune..driver while holding a name board waiting for swasan..sanskar sees this and swasan goes to his maasi’s house the house named pande niwas…
At pn
The car enters into the niwas there at the entrance vasundra was standing with a aarthi plate..sanskar came down frm the car and goes to hug vasu but she signals him to stand with swara properly..sanskar makes faces and stands beside swara vasu takes aarti..then sanskar hugs vasu and starts to take rounds swara was smiling seeing his acts..
Vasu : not bad haan bad…ur wife looking very beautiful than me..
San : aunty…
Vasu : ok come lets go in…
Vasu takes swasan inside the house..
San : aunty where is uncle..
Vasu : woo…beta he went to mumbai for some work.he will come back after a week
San : that means i cant see him.no aunty this is not fair..u know na i m coming than y dont u stop him…
Vasu : beta he left three days back and ap inform about ur arival yesterday only..
San :
Vasu : acha what is my bahu’s name..
San : she is .
Vasu : sanskar let her speak na..
Sw : aunty i m swara , swara ga..
San : swara maheshwari…
Swara smiles at him
San : aunty i m hungry.
Vasu : come i made all ur fav dishes…
Swasansu was eating breakfast there lakshu appears water is flowing from his mouth
La : sanskar this all are my fav too please do something i want to eat it…
Sanskar smiles sheepishly takes a panner piece and eats it & licking his fingers…
San : aunty this paneer na no one can made this like u…
Vasu : swara…
Sanskar coughs laksh smiles at him…
San : wo…wo.
Vasu : tell na sanskar who is best me or swara…
San : haan wo…
Sw : aunty i ll say i cant make foods like u…u r the best
Vasu smiles sanskar let out a relief breath…laksh disappears
After finishing bf..swasan spend a whole day pn and at night swasan was about step into their room but they shocked to see the room was fully decorated sanskar again came out.
San : aunty what is this ..
Laksh appears in back of vasu
Vasu : whats happen beta u r a newly wedded couple u came here for ur honeymoon only so what wrong i did..
La : haan beta go enjoy ur honeymoon…
San : u stupid shut up
Vasu : what sans u r saying me to shut up…
Laksh smiles at him sanskar glares at him.
San : aunty…no i m not…wo thats not u…
Vasu : ok leave it go in…i said na go..
Sanskar unwilingly entered the room swara was standing there sanskar was about to touch her shoulder but he remembers that she loves sahil only he takes his hands back…
Laksh appears there too
La : sanskar first u accept that she is ur wife
San : looks at him worriedly
La : sanskar please tell her na..u r in love with her only..please say that today atleast..
San : swara…
Swara turns sanskar sees that swara was having tears in her eyes..
San ( worriedly ) : swara what happen why are u crying…
Sw : sanskar bus sahil ki yaad aagaya…
Sanskar was fully broken now he doesnt have a 1 percent hope also…
La : sanskar please dont loose hope…tell her then we will see the consequences.
Sans cups her face lucky was smiling thought that sans will tell his feeling to her now..
San : swara i said na i m there for u…we will search sahil together its my promise i ll find him…and will make u both together…its my promise
Sw : sach me
San : yes
Sw : sanskar u r my friend
Saying so swara hugs sanskar but this time too sanskar didnt repropriate he was smiling sadly while having tears in his eyes…
La : sanskar are u gone mad. U know what are u saying she is ur wife damnit..
San : swara come u go n sleep its getting we will search him 2mrw…
Swara happily nods and goes to bed. Sanskar wents to balcony he was standing there while watching moon..laksh came there
La : sanskar what are u doing..what i said and what are u doing..
San : then should i do laksh.if i tell her that i m in love with her then i will worst and cheap person of the world in her point of view..i know laksh she loves sahil and considering as her friend if i tell her na then she will leave me completely i cant bear that laksh…
Saying so sanskar was about to hug laksh but he could not
San : laksh what happen..why cant i hug u…
La : yez sanskar i m loosing my days…
San : but that day..
La : haan sanskar from today its been six month i m to earth..only another six month left for my depature to heaven
San : lakshhhh….
Sanskar was crying badly laksh wants to hug him and pacify him but he could not he also crying badly…somehow laksh convince sanskar and sent him to sleep…
La : no sanskar u r friend i ll do something and made ur life perfect its my promise…
In morning
Vasu insist swasan to go for shopping.they unmwilingly go the shopping in a mall swasan was sitting in a restraunt along with laksh..waiter came
Wa : sir ur order please…
San : swara what do u want
Sw : one coffee
San : laksh for u..
Laksh glares at him and sanskar realise what he said
San : two coffees
Waiter goes swara clutches sanskar hands..shivers was going through sanskar’s body..laksh laughs seeing them..
Sw : sanskar i know u r missing laksh but understand laksh is no more…
Laksh laughing fade away he became teary eyed..then waiter came gives them their coffee laksh disappears from there sans feels sad…
Aftersometime swasan was roaming in the mall. There suddenly laksh appears infront of sanskar..
La : sanskar see there rakshu is there take swara to her…
San : who is that
La ; i m saying na
Sans nods..
San sees there is rakshu on the elevator…sanskar nods and tells swara about rakshana both goes to rakshana…swara hugs rakshana
Sw : how are u…
Rak : i m superb how are u…and who is this
Sw : haan he is….
San : sanskar maheshwari swara husband…
Rak : oh hi…
Sw : rakshu do u know about sahil..
Rak : haan swarahe got married..
Sw : whattt
Rak : haan swara 4 days before only dont u know…
Swara become teary eyed
Sw : no…rakshu now where is he…
Rak : i dont know that swara…
Swara then runs from there without saying anything sanskar apolagise to rakshu and runs behing swara…lakshu smiles…
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Precap : sanskar second chance…
Hey guys laa here again ok i think its a bored one sry for that and ya there is only 4 to 5 parts are remaining…so please do comments and thanku soooo much for ur comments and ya if u wants to change the story line then tell me i ll talk to mahu.bye…
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Mala ( maha lavanya )
53 Comments
Mahaaaa… omg this Laksh
thankx di….
awsm chappy dear……..
post asap….
thankx dear…
Loved it……
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thankx dear…
awesome…!!loved it…!!
thankx chandu…
Very interesting storyline. I like the slow build up swasan. And Laksh is adorable! But only few more days? I’m feeling more sad for him than Sanky and that is saying something! 😀
thankx beautiful…
Awesome…?
thankx souju…
Loved it dear… ?????????
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thankx vidhi…
awesome dear 🙂
thankx di…
nyc
thankx anu…
Awesome
nandri tamil…
Awesome dear…post next one soon
dhanyavadhagalu manasa…
Awesome
thankx kaur…
Marvelloua dea…keep it up..u r doing gr8..?
thankx sanswa…
M not liking swaraz bhvr at all…
Shez not even lil bit affctd or feel sorry for sanskar…
Plz show some her emotions or feelings towards sanskar…
thankx arshu…
Nice..
thankx simi…
Awesome dr….
Plz nxt one soon..
And tc sisooo…
thankx dear…
sry akka reply maathi paniten…*thankx akka…
It’s awesome…!!! Haha, laksh was funny…but emotional too…. swara gonna accept sansakr soon…. wow loved this part…
thankx astruu…
V.nice and emotional dear..loved it.. Keep going..
Take care
Keep smiling?
thankx uma…
nice
thankx vyshu…
Nice…
thankx rythm…
nice..
thankx s…
Awesome go sanskar go
thankx simuu di…
yeeee….yipeeee finally i got registered…mahu i m coming wait….
laaa ma i m waiting…
hey guys i m tom aka tamil…mahi & laas friend…i m here to say that 7 th episode is submitted and 8 epi is will be posted after a week…
tamil romba sry ma bcz we already submit the 8th part..
Awesomeeeeeeeee dear 🙂
thankx akka…