Hey! Everyone?….. Thank you to those who took out their precious time and read my work…. Thanks for the love and support…With that being said, we have reached the shot #3 i.e the last shot…..but I have divided it into two parts- (a) and(b)….so this is part (a)…Now let’s go…..
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Kunj- And that someone is……..Twinkle!!…..Are you listening or not???
Twinkle who had closed her eyes became startled and said- Huh?? Oh yes…yes I am listening….
Kunj- So that someo…..
Kunj could not complete her sentence as Twinkle kept her hand on his mouth…
Twinkle- Kunj! No ….now I will speak…
Kunj- Nahi..nahi…I want to speak…you promised me naaaa???
Twinkle-???Ok….You speak….
Kunj- And that someone is Chitzy…
Twinkle- huh?Chitzy Masi kahan se aa gayi?[ Huh? Where did Chitzy Masi come from?]
Kunj- Aree Twinkle I mean that I love our Chitzy….The way she talks,the grace she has,the beauty she possess had made me fall for her…..
Twinkle was confused at his statement….
Twinkle-???? Kunj what are you saying??
Kunj- Aree I mean I love Chitra….
Kunj’s confession was a peircing dagger at Twinkle’s heart…Her grip on that little box loosened….She now understood what Kunj meant….Her heart did not know how to react….Her pain came out from her eyes in the form of tears….
Twinkle – ……K…uunnj…..Do….yo..u lo…ve her?
Twinkle was finding difficult to even speak…
Kunj- YES….but please do not tell this to her or our family…..I will tell them myself…
Twinkle seemed to loose her senses….so she left Kunj’s hand and ran away with her broken heart…..
Kunj- Twinkle!!! Twinkle… Where are you going??? Areee Twinkle!!!
Oh God this girl naa ..silly!???……
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Twinkle was running as fast as her legs could carry her….in her way she dashed against Chitra but she ignored her and went away…
Chitra-What happened to her?? Maybe she is not feeling well…. Thinking this Chitra went to attend the other guests ….
Here Twinkle reached the washroom and locked the door…
Twinkle-…. God!!! Why this happened to me……..The one I love …loves……loves my M..as..i……why???? …………she threw the box which contained the ring with full force such that ring came out of it and fell….And cried her heart out……..Kash ….ye…h din aata hi nahi………Kun…jj Kyu kiya tumne aisa???…….Kyu babaji?…..She didn’t want to cry but her tears were adamant on flowing……..Kyu yeh aasun nahi ruk rahe……Kyu??? …Mujhe kush hona chaiye mere best friend ko pyaar hua……ha..I…..Lekin……She sarted moaning with pain…..Kyuuu???….Kunj……aisa ky..u..kiya?? Mera Dil kyu toda?….Kunj Chitzy see pya…rr..Kar….ta..hai…..mujhse nahi…….But something struck her so she got up ….Washed her face and picked up the ring……
Twinkle- No…No …this can’t happen….Maybe Kunj is just attracted to her….I should talk to him now…..I will go and talk to him….She still had a little hope left in her broken heart….
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On the other side…..Chitra was talking to some guests( Typical aunties) When Kunj came there and kept his hand on her shoulder and said a Hi to the aunties there….Those aunties started mumbling among themselves as Kunj was talking to Chitra frankly….all laughing and keeping his hands on her shoulders….
Aunty1 – See….How this boy has kept his hand on her shoulder…
Aunty2- Huh! These people are like this only…..
Aunty3- She has not married yet… pata nahi kab Shaadi karegi?
Aunty1- Shaadi kyu kare? Jab isse aisa ladka mil raha Hai…Doore dal rahi hai iss par ye….[ Are will she get married? When she is getting attention of such handsome boy…She is just trapping him in her Beauty..]
Kunj heard thier conversation and began saying- Tuch…tuchhuu tuchhu….I feel pity at your disgusting brain…..You feel that if a woman is unmarried she has a cheap character?? Haan?…
Chitra- Kunj…leave it..let’s go from here ….and she smiled at the ladies..
Kunj- No….NOoo….Kunj said like a kid…No No…..
Aunties- See how this boy is talking to us …drunkard…..
And we didn’t say anything wrong….she is just like that that’s why her to be husband had left her at the day of wedding…..
This phrase of those ladies pricked Chitra’s heart ….Her respect was hampered….Tears brimmed in her eyes and she went outside running…….but no one noticed her as they were standing at the entrance …..
Kunj- Chitzyy!!!! ….Chitzy…… Stupid women….Kunj said and ran after her…..
*****************************************Twinkle came out of washroom and started to go towards the poolside, where she had left Kunj….She was running to go their but this time Leela called her….”Twinkle …..beta please keep these gifts in the car”,said Leela….
Twinkle- ohh!! Ok Maa!!!
Twinkle went to keep gifts in the car….
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Chitra reached the lawn which was calm and quiet….She had acted strong her entire life but such women always made her feel that she is an ill luck to society….
She was crying….venting out her pain when Kunj tapped her shoulder…..She turned around…..
Kunj held her face with one hand….and said- Chitzy….please don’t cry…It’s your birthday today and Birthday Girls do not look good while crying…..
Chitra was still sad…..- These women always make me feel like a pr*stitute…..
Kunj placed a finger on her lips at this sentence and said- No….No… Chitzy….you are very important to everyone ….. including me……So don’t cry…..No more crying….you are strong woman…No….Give me that Beautiful smile now…..
Chitra smiled…..But Kunj still held her face and brought his face close to her so as to wipe the tears off….He kept ascending his head towards her and was about to attach his lips to her when Twinkle reached there and saw Kunj trying to kiss Chitra……..Her heart was now completely broken into zillion peices and without even wasting a second ran away from there crying heavily in her car………There,Chitra pushed Kunj back…..
Chitra- Kunj!!! Kunj what are you doing??
Kunj held her hand and said- Wahi Jo bahut phele kar dena chaiye Tha…..
Chitra- Matlab…..
Kunj- Matlab I love you …….
Chitra- what??? Oh I also love you …..and Twinkle ….
Kunj-No OooOo…..Not that love….I love you as a lover loves her Beloved…I have fallen your beauty , your smile , your grace and you…..
Chitra was completely shocked at his illogical confession…..
Chitra- Kun…jjj…..This is a joke right?
Kunj–Nooooo……I love you….I love you…I love you and only you….
Chitra- Kunj….you are not in your senses that’s why you are talking rubbish….you are drunk….let’s go home …..
Kunj- No…. first tell me…do you love me?
Chitra- Kun…nj why don’t you understand ….you don’t love me neither I do as a lover….Yes I love you and Twinkle….a lot….but this is not right…You are much younger to me and……. let’s go home now…we will talk later haa…
Kunj- No……First kiss me then I will come with you….
Chitra was shook completely at his illogical and senseless demand….
Chitra- Kunj….let’s go home…first …let’s go….she held his arms….but he was still adamant- NOoo….Noo….I want a kiss…Noo…Noo….Give it to me….?
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Chitra- Let’s Go kunj…..
He was half concious but Chitra managed to take him home …..
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Twinkle reached Taneja Mansion deviod of people as everyone was still at the Farmhouse….
She Opened the door and barged into the house completely numbed ….by what she saw….Her tears were dried and anger took her over….she held a vase and dashed it against the wall…..She scattered the things on the table….. Twinkle screamed with pain- Kyuuu???? Kyu….Maine socha tha ki…….Kunj ki samjhaongi….par sab barbaad ho gaya……..The scene of proximity between them made her mad and she threw the box with thousand times more strength….
Meanwhile Chitra reached the Taneja Mansion after dropping an unconscious Kunj at Sarna Mansion…And was shocked to see the scenario….Twinkle was sitting on floor with all things scattered around her….She reached to her and held her face…..
Chitra- Twinkle!!!! Kya hua tumhe???….. Twinkle!!! Twinkle answer me….
But Twinkle was sitting lifelessly….
Chitra jerked her few times but still she was lost…..Chitra- TWINKKLEEEE ….
Twinkle came into senses and jerked Chitra away….
Twinkle – Go Away…..Go…. away from….just go…. away……
Chitra-What happened ? Twinkle why are you behaving like this? What has happened??
Twinkle- You wanna know…ha….You wanna know….Then listen……
This has happened because of you….All because of YOU….
Chitra- Twinkle ….Calm down…..See…..calm down and tell me…..
Twinkle-…. Because of you my heart is broken…. Because the one I love loves you…..And saying this she burst into tears…..
He loves you….He loves you Chitzy…..He loves your beauty , your grace…..Not me.
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Chitra was numb by now….She was the reason of her Kids plight…..
Chitra kept a hand on her shoulders and said-Twinkle,..please listen to me….Twinkle Kunj does not love me…He really doesn’t….He just attracted to me…or rather ………
Twinkle jerked her hands off and said-Oh….. really??? Chitzy I always thought of you as my role model I just wanted to become like you… strong like you…. Beautiful like you…but no I realized today that you are like a typical woman- a home breaker……Did you not like when Kunj paid attention to you?….. After all you are also a woman ……You also ejoyed a young, handsome man’s attention towards you…You also felt an attraction towards him….After all your to be husband had ditched you so you wanted another man in your life…….Did you not want to kiss h…..
Twinkle could not complete her sentence as Chitra slapped her…..
As she slapped her,hurt and guilt was clearly seen in Chitra’s eyes..
She immediately caressed her cheek to lessen the pain…..
Chitra- The world used to say bad things about me but I never thought that my own girl would say such hurtful words against me…..Twinkle look I am sorry that I slapped you….but you……( Chitra broke into tears)……you …. questioned my character….I love you both as my kids….and ….you……see, Twinkle, Kunj is just Infatuated by me..He is just attracted towards me….but…..I guess we should talk later about it….. Twinkle go and sleep…..
Twinkle understood her mistake…..In her pain and anger she spoke badly with own her Masi….She questioned her character…..She was guilty ….She was ashamed of herself….Chitra was about to go but Twinkle held her hand and hugged her tightly and cried…..
Twinkle- I am sorry…..I am sorry Masi….I a…m…. really sorry….Main pagal ho gayi thi……Masi ……muj…he maaf…ka.r…do…..Main bilkul pagal ho gayi thi…..
Chitra- I know Twinkle…..I love you a lot and I won’t let anything wrong happen to you……Both of them sobbed in each other’s embrace to lessen the pain which their hearts had….. It’s so weird that we don’t have a medicine for our mental pains…which could lessen our agony….
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So….here is the part (a) of 3rd shot is completed……. Comment and share your views…..Part(b) shall be posted soon….
Byee….???
21 Comments
Amazingg..
Just a perfect fabulous epi …
U nailed it…
The emotions the feeling the dialogue…just awesome…
Post soon..ur ff too…
Love u
Thank you so much!!??
Nice keep posting soon
Thanks ?
oh god….ye Kunj bilcul gadhaa h…. bechari Twinkle aur Chitra…. feeling bad …..
BTW nice epi Cheenu
Thank you dii…..And I am Happy for you…. Finally jigs mil hi Gaye??
amazing episode dear yrr tum kitna jhakass likhti ho???????
post soon dear
??? Thank you……
So emotional
sad episode
gonna kill this kunj
what a character he had
he loves a woman of her mother age
and was going to kiss her
chiiiiiiiiiiiiii…….!!!!!
that blo*dy shameless creature
just hate him
huh…….!!!!
just go to hell kunj
but its about kunj not sidhant okay
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz POST ASAP
ho sake to aj hi post kardo
ok jaldi karna chenuu
love u a lot…….♡♡♡
byeee
Oooo Mouli ??……Itnaa bada Comment ???? Thanks and yes maybe sometimes we get crazy in so called love…..
Hey Cheenu…!!
What a blast…..!!!! Omg.. I m spellbound..
Kitna bara gadha hai Kunj..! Like seriouly..!!
I felt very bad for Twinkle and Chitra also..!
These women.. disgusting…
Everything was described beautifully..
The emotions were portrayed amazingly.
I just loved Twinkle’s dialogues…
Post soonest..
Plsss..
Love you❤?
Thank you so much!!??…..I am glad that you liked the outburst of emotions…..?
Amazing. Epi cheenu di jhakkas.Bindass.
Lekin hate this kunj huhh feeling bad for twinkle post next soon
Thanks a lot!
Awesome episode
Thanks ?
Di I won’t be able to comment till August
To mujhe maaf kar dena
Kyu ki Aapki baato se dar Lagta hai ??
Jaise Lagta hai ki aap Mar dalogi???
Awesome cp amazing one
You nailed it dear
Loved it to core
Post soon.
Can’t wait
Love you keep smiling
Thanks a lot!!??
Wow yaar cheena amazinggggg loveddddddd it threeeeeeee much yaar felt sooooooooooooooo bad for twinkle and Chitra ..????..
Sorry yaar late hogayi bzy thi …
Love you post soon ???
Fabulous