hii guys…..i am sreenandana with an os…….i wanna write an ff on both d shows ishqbaaz and dil bole oberoi…….so guyzz….plz kindly avoid all d mistakes that i make…..also….comment about ur pov on my os……so my ff starts with anika getting shot by kamini after d exposing…..in my os mahi z a villain but ranveer z innocent….. Prinku and ranveer loves each other madly…. But ranveer acts rudely 2 her as he holds her responsible for his sister’s death…….they both got engaged as in d show…….Kamini is ranveer’s mother…..she instigated ranveer against d oberois by telling that they r responsible 4 his sister’s and father’s death…… she is shakti’s ex-girlfriend………
ON OBEROI MANSION:
Kamini was about 2 shoot shivaay but anika came in between and gets shot….kamini sees thizz…she shootz anika repeatedly that too on her chest…..she fallz down in shivvays hands…..every1 getz concerned 4 her…….shivaay in rage shout at kamini….
Shivaay-how dare u 2 shoot my anika????she z my life and shivvay singh oberoi z incomplete without her…..she z my life and i love her…..
Every1 including anika gets happy hearing this….bur all were concerned 4 anika…..anika tries 2 getup but in vain….she was crying inpain….she tries 2 confess her love and struggles….
Anika-shivaay….i…love….u…to….
She falls unconcious…..shivaay shoutzz anika…..meanwhile police and ambulance arrived….anika was taken 2 the hospital….prinku, janvi, tej,dadi,pinky,shakti and ranveer was there…kamini and mahi tries 2 run away but in vain……police arrests them…..ranveer sees that…..kamini shouts 2 save her and mahi…..
Kamini-ranveer…i am ur mum….save me….
Ranveer-u r d worsest mum in d world….after all ur doings did u think i will save u????u killed my sister…..
Kamini-she z not ur sister….she z just ur cousin….did u understand???
Ranveer-she was my sister, she z my sister and she will b my sister….
(2 d cops)-take them….
He goes 2 prinku and folds his hands…..
Ranveer-I was wrong….. I punished u 4 d crime in which u we’re innocent……. I even made u 2 say a lie 2 ur bhaiyya…… Plz forgive me if u can….. I am sorry…. I love u……
Prinku-its ok ranveer…..even i should have done this if i was in ur place….i luv u too………now v should go to d hospital….
They both takes permission from elders…..they both leave 4 d hospital….
In d hospital:
Priveer reaches there…..shivomru was already there…..doctor comes there….
Doctor-sir, i am sorry 2 say…..i am not sure whether i can save her or not……..her condition z getting worse…..
Shivaay(shouts)how can u save that???u r a doctor and u should save her….;
Doctor-Mr shivaay….plz calm down….she needs 2 be operated…
Shivaay-then do it……
Doctror-okay…
Anika was operated….d operation was successful…..now every1 z returning 2 oberoi mansion……Every1 was waiting 4 them…..every1 goes 2 their respective rooms…..
In shivika’s room:
Anika-shivaay…..do u remember what u said when i got shot????so can u say it now???
Shivaay-i….i…i love u…..my paanika….
Anika-i love u too billuji…..
In om’s room:
Chulbul goes 2 om 2 confesses that she z gauri….
Om-chulbul….y r u here???i think u wanna say something 2 me…
Gauri-haan omkaraji….i wanna say that….that…
Om-u r trying 2 say it from d last few days….plz say it….
Gauri-i….i am not chulbul….i….i am gauri……i am sorry 4 hiding it….i was helpless….i was hired by sultana aunty 2 spy on u…..but i didnot help her till now….i swear….
Om(shouts)-so u was cheating me….i am a fool….i trusted u so much…..just get out from here…..
Hearing this shouting every1 assembled there…..every1 tries 2 calm him….
Om-in bareilly…..i married 2 save u….u r a gold digger…..
Rudr-o plz calm down….
Jhanvi-om……u too hid this fact that u r married 2 her….then y r u shouting on her?????r u sure that she cheated u???did u find whether u r innocent or not???
Oberois finds every truth about gauri from her mum and frndz….om was feeling guilt…..he goes 2 talk 2 gauri….gauri was staying in oberoi mansion…..
Om-gauri…..plz forgive me……i was wrong about u…..i love u……u saved me and my mum…..even then i scolded u…..sorry….
Gauri-thank u om….i love u too…..i alredy forgave u…..
Om kisses on her lips…..she gets shocked first then she too reciprocates……rudy and saumya was standing there…..they too gets shocked…….Rudy gets a rose from d vase nearby…..he goes 2 saumya….he sits on his knees…..saumya gets surprised….
Rudy-sumo….shivaay bhaiyya loves anika bhabhi…..o loves gauri bhabhi….prinku loves ranveer…..now just u and me r left…..sumo….i love u…..
Saumya kisses on his cheeks…..
Saumya-i love u too cry baby…..
Rudr-sumo…call me rudy….
Saumya-ok cry baby….(she laughs)
DADI ASKED EVERY1 2 COME 2 HALL….
Om-what happened dadi????
Dadi-we decided 2 conduct d marriage of every1…..
Rudy-so is mom and dad, chote papa and choti maa too r going 2 get married???
Tej-duffer…..just u and saumya….shivaay and anika…..gauri and om…..
Om-tnq dad….
Every1 was surprised and happy 2 hear d word dad from om’s mouth….
AFTER A WEEK EVERY COUPLES GOT MARRIED WITH ALL D RITUALS….
AFTER 2 YEARS, ANIKA GAVE BIRTH 2 A BABY GIRL….SHE WAS NAMED ANSHI….
AFTER AN HALF YEAR AFTER BIRTH OF ANSH, GAURI GAVE BIRTH 2 A BOY….HE WAS NAMED KARAN……
ONE YEAR AFTER THAT, PRIYANKA GAVE BIRTH 2 A BABY BOY…..HE WAS NAMED AS VEER…..
TWO MONTHS AFTER VEER’S BIRTH, SAUMYA TOO GAVE BIRTH 2 A BABY BOY…..HE WAS NAMED AS KARAN….
D 4 COUPLES LIVED THEIR COLOURFUL LIFE FILLED WITH THEIR PARTNER’S LOVE…..TILL THEIR DEATH…
GUYS…..i hope u liked it….if u like then comment……
by sreenandana….
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Awesome
tnq…..
Awesome
thanks charitha…..
EXCELENT AMAZING NICE AWESOME SUPERB???
tnqq uf…..
Nice one dear
ttank u nikitajai……
It’s was an awesome os ????❤❤❤❤❤❤I have one doubt is rikara and roumaya son name is same. you mentioned the both couple son name is karan.
I’m also an fan of Nairan and avneil.
thank u so much……actuallt….that was a mistake…….i am so sorry 4 that…
are you a malayalee?
*actually….
yes….and r u a malayali too???
Awesome…
thanq lilly…
Awesome
thanks ahaana….
Loved it….even I m a fan of nairan….
ohh!!!!thanq…..
Awesome…
thanks adhya….
Yes I’m a malayalee from Thiruvananthapuram. can you become my friend? viroda millenkil njan “sree “ennu vilichote. Keralatil evidaya?
ente pet name ammu enna….if u like u can call me that….illenkil sree ennu vilicho….i have no problem with that…..do u have any pet name????njan kottayath changanacherry yil ninna….
njan 9th ilekka ini….chechiyo????chechi oru account create cheyyathath entha???
I have a friend in my school days her name is sreerekha I call her” sree ” .Ninde Peru kandapol eniku avale orma vannu. Ada njan chodichadu sree ennu vilichote ennu. enik ninne “sree” ennu vilikananu Ishtam. njan ippol degree second yearnu padikunnu. ende S4 le exam June 2am teyadi tudangum adu kazhiyambol njan 3rd yearlek Kadakum. thank you for your reply.
u r welcome chechi….chechi eth collegilaa padikkunne???
Sorry dear I not mentioned my pet name in my previous reply. My Nick name is Ahaana(adayad ende peril ninnu (AHSANA) S aksharam mati A add cheyyumbol.Njan Mar ivanios collegilanu padikunnadu.
ente chechi engineering aa padikkunne…..chechiyum 2nd year s4 aa….
chechi login enna option edukkanam……appol username, password karinjaal register enn option und….athel click cheyyanam…..chechi ennitt venda info type cheyythitt i am not a robot click cheyyt ath verify cheyyanam….
Sree thank you for replying. Njan ippozhum register cheyyan sramichu pakshe pattiyilla. eniku oru samshayam njan robot allannu engane ya verify cheyyanulladu. enne sahayikamo .I’m waiting for your reply.
sure chechi….robot allennu confirm cheyyanaayi i am not a robot enn ezhuthiya box inte left side le square box il click cheyyanam…..appol oru question verum with some pictures…..appol aa pictures il question umaayi bandhappettath undengil athel click cheyyuka…..and verify ennullathel click cheyyanam….thats all…..
Beautiful
THANKS DEAR…
Awesome story
thanks raksha….
Sorry SREE I not mentioned my pet name in my previous reply. My Nick name is Ahaana(adayad ende peril ninnu (AHSANA) S aksharam mati A add cheyyumbol.Njan Mar ivanios collegilanu padikunnadu.
sorry sree ende comment randu pravashayam vannu.adyatadu ende kayi Keri tatti post ayadanu.
its okay chechi….
Its to much over role is sveatlana plz finish her privacy role we r just fedup
kk prashanth…
Hi ammu..comments illu kandu nickname ammu aanenu.malayali right.me too..njan kollam district..and your story is superb dear..I loved it..can we be friends…and I am also in 9th…ok bye..
sure chechi….so nice 2 meet u…..ente cousin chechide perum anu enna……
Good morning Sree… nee innale chodichille enda TUyil account creat cheyyatadennu. njan onnu randu pravashyam register cheyyan nokki pattiyilla. TUyil enkane yanu register
cheyyunnadennu paranju taramo? I’m waiting for your reply.
Awesome
thanks shuklarashi….