IN LOVE….AGAIN…. ISHQ KA RANG SAFED …Tenth Part
So guys…. Here I am with the tenth part of IN LOVE…AGAIN…
Hope you will read it and express your views on it..but before that… if you have not read previous episodes..here are the links…do check them if you haven’t…
Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Part 8
Part 9
As per the previous episode,you gotta read that Dhaani and Viplav have finally got married…and now begins their journey of exploring the love they had been living without since couple of years… while living for their kids…
Moving on to today’s episode…
Dhaani and Viplav finally got married…Both of them reminisced their wedding rituals in the past which was with their love of life…that had happiness..and this was emotionless… However,the smile they showed seeing their kids happy was the only emotion they felt as the right one… Neither of them married for the love or anything close to love between them…It was purely a relation for the sake of their kids… It is yet to be seen how this relation blossoms and completes the journey of starting as strangers devoid of emotions for each other to going on as a couple in immense love…..
The rituals were finally over…Viplav and Dhaani got married… Dhaani is now Mrs. Dhaani Viplav Tripathi…She sighs feeling her nuptial chain and her hair partition filled with vermillion.. Viplav looks at her…and they give a faint smile devoid of any emotions… to each other..They are asked to take rest for sometime till the arrangements for Bidaai is done..Dhaani looks on in the name of Bidaai and sighs…Viplav looks at her but does not say anything..Dhaani thinks about the changes she is gonna deal with from now one… Viplav and Dhaani are asked to go to Dhaani’s room till the time of Bidaai so that they can have some minutes to rest.. Kids slept long back and they would be waking up soon… Suhaas then asks Dhaani to go to her room along with Viplav…Viplav looks at Dhaani.Dhaani too is looking at him… Dhaani then leads Viplav to her room while having the flashes of Suhaan entering in that room with Dhaani…
She tries hard to control the tears that were forming and ready to roll down her cheeks.She wipes them silently while Viplav is lost in his thoughts…Now they were in Dhaani’s room..Viplav hesitates to go to Dhaani’s room while Dhaani too hesitates to move her legs.. Both of them wanted to talk to each other…they were longing to talk to each other…Not that they had some lovey dovey talks to do…But the thing they wanted to talk about was all related to their kids… They had no idea how would they manage something like being a known stranger and at the same time be together for their kids… But they had to do it and now there is no looking back..Promises were already made…holy vows were already taken…Now was the time to come together to fulfill the promises… Both of them knew that this is not gonna be easy…But they had thought this was something that they needed to do to make their kids happy…Both of them did not dare to initiate any conversation at that moment… Viplav was looking around hesitatingly while Dhaani too was not in her normal self…She asks him to sit down.. Viplav goes towards the sofa but Dhaani says wait… there is bed..why… Before she could complete,Viplav narrows his eyebrows in an attempt to ask why in bed??? Dhaani looks on realizing she messed up… And then says… no sorry…carry on… Dhaani could not believe she was the same person who boldly refused living only on Viplav’s money that they when they were setting their conditions of NOT BEING IN WIFE AND HUSBAND RELATION ..She was now nervous…Viplav too was nervous..Viplav sits on the sofa and takes out the garland that was bugging him since long… Dhaani too goes towards the mirror to take out the garland and keep it in the side table besides the mirror…
Viplav struggles to set him right on the sofa as he is dead exhausted and at the same time he thought it would not be right to just lie down on any other person’s sofa just like that… Dhaani sees that and asks Viplav to lie down for a bit as the journey is gonna be long… Viplav who is lost by then…says indeed the journey is gonna be very very long….his eyes closed and his hands on resting on his head..Dhaani realizes what Viplav just meant… For a moment…she goes silent but then continues..she says Viplav…. Viplav says Bolo Dhaani… Dhaani says Viplav….we both know that this is gonna be difficult for us…but …but …Viplav continues with still his eyes closed…we can try Dhaani… Dhaani sighs.Viplav,now not being able to close his eyes and relax..just sits straight on the sofa… Dhaani looks on… still standing near the mirror… A long silence is there in the room… Viplav then looks at Dhaani…and asks her to come and sit besides him…Dhaani looks on… Viplav asks her not to take in the wrong way…and says he has so many things to tell her…Dhaani sighs..and goes to sit besides him maintaining the respectful distance *writer chuckles*..
Dhaani looks at him and gestures him to begin….
Viplav:*leaves a long sigh* Dhaani… I want to say something….
Dhaani looks at him…and says..Viplav…you know…we both are in same situation… I too want to say something to you…
Viplav : I love….I ….
Seeing him struggling to continue without choking…Dhaani tells him that she knows he loves Richa a lot…
Dhaani:Trust me… I don’t have any objection with that… She is your first love…and first love is impossible to forget…Saying so …she too chokes… Tears were forming in their eyes…but both of them did not dare to wipe those tears from each other’s eyes…
Dhaani…looks back to Viplav…and says their relation is for kids…and for kids’ sake,they need to be THE PERFECT MOMMY DADDY…they have been longing for… She knows all the conditions they agreed for..but when they are with kids they need to be sure that kids are not disturbed with the thoughts of not seeing their mommy daddy together…So…..she stops…
Viplav asks So?? Dhaani says…she thinks that all this awkwardness should be left behind… Now they are gonna be together for the rest of their lives…they cannot spend their entire life in misery…Maybe they shall not be the normal couples like others but being something called civil and initiating a healthy friendship would not be harmful…
Seeing Viplav all silent…she curses herself for saying about being friends…and she stands up to go thinking Viplav will get angry…She then repeats about the conditions…. Seeing her standing up,Viplav holds her hands…Dhaani turns to him…
Viplav: Shall we be friends???
Dhaani looks on…. and shifts her gaze to the hand that Viplav was holding… Viplav leaves her hand on realizing it… Dhaani nods…and says Friends!! They smile…They share an eyelock… but quickly compose themselves..when they hear kids… Dhaani goes out…and Viplav too follows her hearing kids….
Moments later….It is now Bidaai time… Dhaani looks around her home…Viplav finds her looking around..He thinks about their conversation…and goes to her…Dhaani looks on and asks if he needs something… Viplav nods and says Dhaani..if you want to spend some more time here …we can just…Dhaani looks at him…and says..No..No…that is okay Viplav… She tells that..she was only looking at her home… from tomorrow..these things won’t be there..
Rishi and Su are with Meenakshi… They both call her Daadi…Meenakshi smiles…and says Babies…from now on…I am your Naani…okay… Su looks on…and asks why so?? Meenakshi smiles and says Su… Mommy was here till now…but today your mommy will go along with daddy…that is why I will be your naani..okay…Babies nod…while Meenakshi kiss their foreheads turn by turn…Tears start to roll down her cheeks and Rishi wipes those tears with his little fingers..Meenakshi smiles and hugs both of them saying she will miss them a lot… Su looks at her and says then you can visit us Naani.. Meenakshi smiles when Rishi also pouts and asks her not to cry ….Meenakshi hugs them caressing their heads…while Dhaani and Viplav are watching them far away…
Dhaani has tears in her eyes..seeing so much of love of Meenakshi for kids… She wipes her tears when she feels a hand squeezing her other hand…She looks on finding that Viplav squeezed other free hand of hers to console her…She smiles faintly…while Viplav says he is trying to console a friend who is crying…Dhaani wipes her tears.. and mumbles Thank you….while Viplav smiles…and asks her to proceed… Seeing Viplav and Dhaani,Rishi and Su run towards them…and Viplav carries Su,Dhaani carries Rishi in their arms…Meenakshi comes to them…and says she will go and see the arrangements of Bidaai..and goes asking them to come soon…
Su turns to Viplav and says Daddy..Viplav looks at her… Su says she will miss everyone here… Viplav smiles and says Su… Daddy will bring you here whenever Daddy gets free okay.. Dhaani tries to say something…Rishi also adds he loves to stay there… Dhaani smiles… Viplav says…Babies…once we go there…then both of you will go to school… It will be fun… and whenever you have holidays…daddy will bring them there… They say Yaaaaaayyyyy… Viplav smiles… He looks at Dhaani who is already smiling looking at the kids and Viplav’s care for them… They go from there…
Scene changes…. Dhaani is following the Bidaai rituals while kids were with Suhaas… Meenakshi hugs Dhaani and tears start brimming in her eyes… Dhaani asks her to wipe it cupping her face…Meenakshi nods…and blesses them when ViDhaani touch her feet..Kanak assures that she does not need to worry about Dhaani as she is going to one mother from another mother… Dhaani smiles…and feels blessed because she got so much of love from her mothers though they were not her biological mother… Viplav smiles watching the bonding… Suhaas comes there with kids… He asks Viplav to take care of Dhaani..and himself… Viplav smiles…and they share a hug… Kids then hug Suhaas…while Suhaas caresses their head hugging them back…He cups Su’s face and says he will miss his honey… Su giggles…Then Suhaas turns to Rishi…and says Champ… and ruffles his hair…Rishi smiles..and both the kids kiss him…while he smiles… He goes to Dhaani..
Dhaani looks on..Suhaas hugs her..and asks her to take care… he will miss her… Dhaani nods… She looks around… and turns to Meenakshi…and says “I am going Maa”… Meenakshi looks at her…and kisses her forehead…while they share the motherly hug once again…Rishi then cutely pouts and then says chalo mommy…jaldi chalo…bye everyone …Su giggles…Everyone chuckle..Dhaani smiles….She looks at Viplav who gestures her to proceed…..Viplav opens the car door for Dhaani… giving each other a faint smile,both of them sit….Kanak smiles watching them..and pray for their happiness.Rishi and Su then sit on ViDhaani’s lap…while Shaalu settles besides Dhaani…and Kanak is at front…
Finally ….they are on the way…Suhaas has gone to drop them till airport…On the way,Dhaani strokes Rishi’s hair who is sleeping…and looks at Su who is sleeping on Viplav’s lap… Viplav and Dhaani look at each other…..They smile at each other while Suhaas watches them from the mirror..and smiles…praying happiness in Viplav Dhaani’s life….
Soon they are seen in the airport…Dhaani hugs Suhaas and asks him to take care of himself and Maa… He nods…and everyone bid bye… Suhaas goes back home from there… Viplav Dhaani soon get seated in their seats..along with others… Seeing Su and Rishi all excited.. Viplav Dhaani smile… and caress the kids’ head…while Shaalu and Kanak smile thinking now Viplav’s life will be complete… The void that Richa left would now be filled by Dhaani…with all the love…
Moments later,it is seen…Viplav and Dhaani have dozed off… Dhaani lies her head on Viplav’s shoulder…while Viplav’s head is above Dhaani’s head…kids are also sleeping…they are held tight by their mommy and daddy dear… Hearing the announcements…Viplav wakes up to find Dhaani dozed off keeping her head on his shoulder…He sees Dhaani hugging Rishi tightly and keeping her hand around Su also who is sleeping on Viplav’s lap…An unknown smile is seen in his lips… but he composes himself… and looks at Dhaani again… He then slowly moves Dhaani’s head from his shoulder… Dhaani wakes up and realizes she was keeping her head on his shoulder… She hurriedly says sorry…while Viplav asks her to calm down….Dhaani,being embarrassed,does not dare to look at Viplav…while Viplav also does not maintain eye contact to avoid Dhaani from saying sorry and feeling embarrassed….
Soon…they are seen in the Mumbai Airport…To their surprise..they see Raj already waiting to receive them… along with another car to take Viplav and family home…Viplav smiles seeing Raj…and kids exclaim..Chaachu…seeing him… Raj goes to Kanak and hugs her… He then goes to hug them and take them in his arms… Kids happily go to him…while Dhaani smiles looking at them… Viplav realizes Dhaani is happy seeing kids like that…and smiles..watching his wife…. Raj looks at him…and says Ghoorta hi rahega..or you will keep your luggage in the car…I am toh busy with my kids…. Hearing this kids giggle… and Dhaani looks at Viplav…to find him hurriedly moving luggage towards car…and smiles…
Scene changes…and they are finally at home…. Dhaani looks at the house and reminisces the first time…she entered the house…and saw Rishi playing… She then reminisces seeing Viplav for the first time…and talking to him… Viplav also reminisces the meeting…and their talks in the garden…and then their friendship that began few hours ago…Viplav Dhaani look at each other…. Kanak hurriedly goes for the arrangements of grah pravesh rituals…Su and Rishi look on with excitement..
Kanak comes with all the items for the ritual…and places the kalash asking Dhaani to push it lightly with her right foot… Dhaani does it… and places her feet in the red water… making her mark in the houses… Viplav looks on reminiscing all those rituals done by Richa.. while Dhaani also reminisces doing all those rituals back in Delhi…with an extra excited Suhaan with her…A lone tear escapes from her eyes…only to get noticed by Viplav…who sighs watching this…Dhaani hurriedly wipes it…and passes a smile to Kanak who asks her to embrace the journey of her home…. Rishi and Su are all excited to get their mommy and daddy….Amidst the juggling between past and present,seeing the kids happy,ViDhaani too are happy…. They look at each other and pass a smile….Raj goes back checking all the arrangements asking them to take care…while Shaalu and Kanak see the kids between Viplav and Dhaani holding hands…They pass a faint smile to each other again…and look at the kids firming the hold of their hands….
Shaalu comes to them and asks kids to come to her to let their mommy and daddy rest… Rishi then pouts and looks at Su…who pouts back in return and say…they want to sleep with Mommy and Daddy… Viplav Dhaani look at kids and then at each other… Seeing this Kanak smiles…and asks Shaalu to go and rest… Let kids sleep with Viplav Dhaani…Viplav looks at Dhaani…and Dhaani smiles assuring him that its okay… Viplav takes kids in his arms…while Dhaani walks behind him… saying good night to Kanak and Shaalu… Shaalu and Kanak smile at each other…and Shaalu hugs Kanak saying she can see happiness on Viplav’s face after freaking four years… Kanak smiles… and they go their rooms…
Scene changes to Viplav and Dhaani’s room…
Dhaani looks at the room…and then at Viplav…who gestures her to come inside… Rishi and Su are about to sit on the bed jumping from Viplav’s arm..just then Dhaani stops them…Rishi and Su pout..Dhaani comes to them…and says Dress change kare babies… chalo… Rishi and Su giggle…and hold Dhaani’s hand to go and change their dress..while Viplav looks on with a smile…. He then realizes something..and stops them… He comes to Dhaani…and asks if she knows where are Rishi’s clothes… Dhaani looks on…and then says…she knows…She informs that she had asked to set Rishi’s and Su’s room and their clothes too..Dhaani smiles and goes smiling listening to her kids’ talk…while Viplav goes towards the window and looks at the sky….
Dhaani is seen helping kids in changing their clothes…when Rishi hugs her and says Mommy…you know I missed you so much…Su caresses Rishi’s hair and says Bhaiyaa… Rishi smiles…while Dhaani looks on…She takes kids in her embrace and says she will be with them from now on… and asks Rishi to forgive his mommy as she could not be there with him all this time…Rishi and Su kiss her on her cheeks..and hug her…while a lone tear escapes from her eyes..which she manages to wipe quickly… Viplav is watching all this from outside…He has his hands folded across his chest..and his lips curl to give a smile…and his eyes turns moist… Dhaani sees Viplav looking at him…and forces a smile …She does not know Viplav was looking at her from quite long..and he noticed her lone tear too that she wiped hurriedly…
PRECAP: Mommy,Daddy,Rishi and Su holding hands in sleep….
Hey people….sorry for the super late update…
Hope you enjoy reading the story….
Will post the other part soon….
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Happy reading…..Take care everyone… Much love….
6 Comments
Hi Sujie,
Super duper Episode. You nailed it Sujie… It was worth the wait… NO words to express the delight in reading the update. Thank you dear.
I liked each sentence written in the episode…
Every line was fabulous. Will come back again in detail with what touched me the most in this episode.
Take care … Lots of Love.
I also replied in the comments column of the ninth episode. Do read it.
Hey Janice…
Thank you for your comment dear…
I did check your comment on the previous episode’s column….
Lots of love to you too dear… You were not impatient dear… It is your interest in the story and love for this story … I am really really thankful for that….Will try to come up soon..but no promises okay…Will try….
Thank you for keeping the love and support coming…Much love to you….
I saw your question in the previous episode’s comment section…..
I am not an Indian dear… I am from Nepal 🙂 🙂
You too take care 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Arrey waahhh sujjieee it’s …..I don’t know what to say about this episode that much emotional kardiya tune mujhe….
U exaplained each nd every scene beautifully yaar…..I love rishi nd dhaani,su and viplavs bonding…I liked it a lot….
Plz update next one soon sujjie….
Take care dear…..
U too keep writing….
Love u??
Hey Lalitha….
Thank you for the good words dear…..
Sorry..for making you emotional…par kya kare??? 🙂
Thank you for keeping the love and support coming …… 🙂
Much love to you too dear…Take care…. 🙂 🙂
Will try to come soon….but no promises..as always….
Bye….. 🙂 🙂
Hi Sujie,
Great to read your reply. No worries. We will wait patiently for the next update. … So easy to say this, but once 4-5 days have passed, I begin to get restless again.. Just wanting to read more and more.
So you are from Nepal. Good. It is a beautiful country with beautiful people.
I have yet to revert on the episode. Still trying to think which scene touched me the most.
The Bidaai, when she weeps & her husband holds her hand as a comforter. That was so touching!
The next scene, when they all retire for the night & the kids hug her. That was an emotional scene.
What I like best is that you always portray the emotions of the lead pair so well. You explain so well their deepest feelings. .. Keep it up!!
Take care… Loads of Love
Hey Janice….. Thank you for liking that part… I am trying to write the parts little by little…whenever I get time… And will surely post it… A little patience okay…. Thank you for all the love dear….
Thank you for the compliment about Nepal… Hope to see you someday here…..
Keep the love and support coming dear… Much love….. 🙂 🙂
Take care 🙂 🙂
Bye 🙂