Hi readers, I m Pui and I m back with the second episode of my new ff. A very big thank you to all the readers who read and commented on the first episode. I was very nervous but your comments gave me encouragement. As i say appreciation is welcome and criticism is more welcome. Here we go…..
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In the hall ,
Pinky: Why don’t you understand everything by yourself ? Why do I always have to explain everything. Generally , you act very intelligently but in the most important matters you act very dumbs.
Anika : What do you mean Aunty?
Pinky: Oh my Mata Aneeka! (Yes, this is the way she calls Anika) U still not understands it? This was all my plan to put down your image in front of Shivaay. I dont want you in his life at all, so this was just the trailer.
Anika: What ? Pinky Aunty! You did all this! You know na how happy me and Shivaay are with each other . Then why do you want to do such a thing which will destroy your son’s life. You are his mother.
Pinky (controlling anger): Yes, I am his mother but I don’t want garbage in my son’s life.
Anika: But Aunty we are happy with each other. Doesn’t Shivaay look happy to you ?
Like son’s sadness, son’s happiness also can’t stay hidden from a mother.
Pinky (shouting): Enough! Enough of this. What is this mother mother you have put up? I am not Shivaay’s mother .
Anika(taunting): What are you saying Pinky Aunty ? You are not his mom? Then who is Shivaay’s mom? Is it that Kamini Aunty?
Pinky (shocked) : How do you know about this ? No one except Shaktiji , me and that Kameeni know this.
Anika: Auntyji, I also know that Mahi is Shivaay’s brother , Kamini Aunty was Shakti uncle’s mistress and that means that Shivaay is illegitimate.
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I had tried my best to post longer as per your wishes. If i go longer than this, then your suspense will break into a thousand pieces.
See you all very soon…..
34 Comments
Nice one. ? please post next ASAP.
Thank you dwet. Yes asap for me. ?
good one……..
Thank you so much ?
Awesome yaar.. waiting for the next one.. post it soon
Thank u so much . I ll post next part soon
nice
but plz do it more longer
Thank you a lot. I ll try my best ?
So good Pui. I’d say you’d better get writing quick because an quick update would be so nice
Thank you so much. Sure, I ll update quickly.
This was too short but nice too.
Thank you. ?
Tis was ammaxing…
Liked it…
Waiting for that suspense,. 😛
Thank you so much ?
Just now I read ur ff. Awesome dear. I liked it! But it is too short. Try to make it bit longer.
Thank u a lot. I ll surely try to make it longer.
Nice…waiting for next update soon
Thank you…?
Hi pui
Can u plz pm me the episodes of your ff when you update next? I’m going overseas so Ya..
Hi Priyali. Yes surely I will pm you the next update. Enjoy…
Too good. Post soon Pui. Love yaa??
Thank u Jerry!! Luv u 2 ?
Nice update
Thank u so much ?
Nice one Pui…i really liked your update….keep writing dear…
Thank u so much Ashlyn ?
Nice update..
Thank u ☺
Good one dear
Thank u so much ?
Great..Anika revealed everything…next time a longer one…!
Nice?
Thank u ?. Sure thing longer next time.
Nice…
Thank u ?