Hello guys … I am Purvi … A huge fan of DevAkshi … Love them alot … This os is my first writing on DevAkshi … Presently .. I m writing two ffs on TwiNj …..
Hello guys … I am Purvi … A huge fan of DevAkshi … Love them alot … This os is my first writing on DevAkshi … Presently .. I m writing two ffs on TwiNj ….. Nd I thought to write a one on DevAkshi too … This is an os .. nd I will soon comeback with a ff … Its an os which I have written on TwiNj nd I m posting it here on DevAkshi too … Hope u don’t mind …
So let’s start …
A garden is shown … Where there are many trees … The camera rotates and a handsome .. Good looking .. Hot .. boy is shown … He was having a beer bottle in his hand .. The camera comes infront … He is none other than our hero Dev …He was standing under an Orchid tree .. But wait .. What is this .? He is looking so sad .. His face was very gloomy … He was having tears in his eyes .. He was murmuring something … Let’s listen ..
D – “See na … U always wanted to be buried under an orchid tree … I fulfill ur wish … Not only I fulfilled all ur wishes my love … Yeh joh beer bottle dekh rahi ho na … Chod di peena .. Tum yehi chahti thi na …. Ab peeta nhii hun … Bs jb tumhari bht yaad aati hai to thodi thodi ….. Tu chahti thi ke me 1 acha insaan ban jaaun … Wo wish bhi poori ker di tumhari … Tumhari wish list dekhi me ne … Jo wishes rehti thi .. Saari poori ker di …
He was not able to speak coz of continuous crying …He stopped for sometime …
He continues – tumhari wish thi na ke me tujhse pyaar karun …
His started crying badly at this statement …
“ Sonakshi … Me to tumse hamesha se pyaar kerta tha …. circumstances hi aesy thy ke kabhi tumhe apny dil ki baat nhii bata paaya … Jaanta hun bht bura kiya me ne tumhare sath …. Mgr tum itni achi kyun thi Sonakshi …Mujhy maaf bhi ker diya …. Mujhe chod ke kyun gayi tum …. Hey Bhagwaan mujhe punishment de dete … Sonakshi ko kyun di ..Sonakshi …. Plsss wapis aajao mere pass … I promise ab tumhe har khushi dunga … Saying this he fell down on the ground crying miserably …
Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Bin tere mera kya hai
Jisko sunu jisko kahoon
Bin tere mujh mein kya hai
Jisko jiyun jis mein rahun
Tujh mein hi duniya meri hai
Tere ik pal mein sadiyan meri
Bin tere main sehra saa hoon
Bin tere main qatra bhi nahi
Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hain toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu mere chehre pe hai
Raahat saa jo thehra huaa
Main bhi tere haathon mein
kismat sa hoon, bikhra hua
Tu meri rooh saa hai
Tujhko chhu ke main zinda lagun
Jab bhi main mujhko dekhun
Mujh mein bhi main tujh sa lagun
Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
After some time … He stands up …. On the stem of the tree it was written “SONAKSHI DEV DIXIT” He caresses that part with his hand … And kisses it … He goes into flashback …
Flashback –
A boy was yelling on a girl … She was having tears in her eyes …
B – Just stop your nonsense …. U very well know that I don’t love u … And just married u for my mum’s sake … Why u didn’t get that Sonakshi ..?
So the girl is revealed to be Sonakshi …. And the boy is Dev only ..
S – Dev … Believe me …. Kabir was lying … He just want to create differences between us … Me us se milne nhii gayi thi … (Guys … Imagine Karanveer Bohra as Kabir)
D – Ohhh nice ….. How can I believe u … Haan .. ? U r the most disgusting girl I have ever seen in my life …
S – Dev … Plss believe me ….. U know I love u more than my life … U r my life … My everything . ..
D – (laughs sarcastically) Ohh … I see … Mrs.Dixit .. Is in love with her husband … Woww great …. (He wrenched her wrist) but u know what … I am Dev Dixit .. Ur husband …n he can’t even think for a millisecond about falling in love with u …. He Hates You …. Dev Dixit hates Sonakshi Bose …. (His grip on her hand tightened nd she winces in pain)Do u get that …
He leaves the room … Having tears in his eyes … He controlled his tears and emotions infront of her …
He went into a room …
There Sonakshi fell down on her knees crying vigorously … She was used to it … He everyday do that … She was used to listen his harsh words …
Soankshi thinks ..
Why is this happening to me … Is there any happiness or love in my fate or not … or i don’t deserve love nd happiness … What to do Sonakshi ….. Itna pyaar kerne ke baad bhi u can’t expect the same love from him .. He hates u .. He hates his wife .. you hurt me more than what i deserve .. i love you more than what you deserve ..my silence is just another word for my pain .. I don’t know .. I always think that I am the one who loves more ..i was born again because of ur love .. but i died because of the same reason ..
She put her head into her legs … She can’t do anything except crying ..
There’s a weird pleasure in loving someone who doesn’t love you .. sometimes you love people in a language they cannot understand ..one sided love is such a painful curse .. Love hurts like hell when it is one sided .. its crazy right? To love someone who hurts you? No .. its crazier to think that someone who hurts you, loves you …..
Whenever he hurts her … He will then always hurt himself …. He breaks the mirror with his hand … His hand started bleeding badly ….
D – Sonakshi … I am helpless …. Nhii bata sakta tujhe kitna pyar kerta hun tujhse .. Meri jaan hai tu .. Zindagi hai tu meri … Tere baghair rehne ka soch bhi nhi sakta … Bs tujhe sach nhi bata sakta ….
Kuch Rang Pyar Ke Aise Bhi plays in BG
Yeh lamhein hazar se hote hain
Rang pyaar ke
Laakhon phool bahaar ke
Hote hai rang pyaar ke
Dekhe hai phool jo khil ke kabhi na khile
Dekhe hai dil jo mil ke kabhi na mile
Kuch rang pyaar ke hai aise bhi
Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi
Chulhe pe phulke sa phulhe
Yaadein jaise hawa mein jhoole
Raat ko lori ban
Chupke se maathe ko chhule
Taanke hue shirt ke button sa
Godh rakh soye bachpan sa
Haath ki laali sa
Kabhi laage dhaga resham sa
Pyaar mein lipte kitne rang mile
Dekhe kabhi woh rang jo
Kabhi na mile
Kuch rang pyaar ke hai aise bhi
Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi
Kuch rang pyaar ke aise bhi
He goes into a flashback
(Flashback mein flashback)
Flashback –
Kabir and Dev were standing face to face …
Kabir – Teri shaadi to hogayi Sonakshi se … Mgr wo teri kabhi nhii hosakti .. She is only mine … Sirf meri hai Sonakshi …. Hahhahaha
Dev – (rubbing his chin with his indexfinger) Ohhh .. … So Kabir Mehra has started day dreaming….. so.. let me clear that … Sonakshi mujh se pyar kerti hai …. Or me bhi usy apni zindagi se zyada chahta hun …
Kabir – Ohh …I see … Romei Juliet .. but U knw what Dev … Tu bht bada budhhu hai …
He showed him some pics …
Pics were of Sonakshi in which she was sleeping with a man .. In a compromising position .. Dev was shocked …
Kabir – What happened …? Shock laga ..?
Dev – No she is not Sonakshi …. I blindly trusts her …. These pics are morphed …
Kabir – Haan tu sahi keh raha hai … These r morphed pics … But ye tu jaanta hai .. Me jaanta hun ..duniya to nhi jaanti ye … I will leak these pics and then … Hahahaha ..
Dev – (pleading) Kabir plsss .. Tu aisa kuch nhi kary ga … I will do whatever u say …. But plss ye pics mt leak karyo …
Dev – Great …!…This is what I wanted … So me chahta hun ke tu Twinkle ko kabhi na bataye ga ke tu us se pyar kerta hai and u’ll never touch her … Or tu kisi ko ye bhi nhi bataye ga .. Ke I have said this to u ..Nd u have to make Sonakshi hate u … Hurt her everyday .. nd she will start hating you … then u will give her divorce … nd after that I’ll marry her nd she will be mine forever .. no one between us ..
Dev was shocked … He doesn’t know what to do …
D – No … I can’t do this …. I love her … nd i am not going to do all this …
Kabir – Think thrice before answering … dude … the choice is urs … Her respect .. dignity … or ur love …
Of course for him … it was always her before anything else … He can’t be so selfish … Her respect is his respect …
He said in shaking voice – Oook ..ookk .. I .. I .. Will …ddo . do .. thaaa .. that ..
Kabir laughs in his own style ..
Flashback ends
Dev cries … He cuts his hand with the broken pieces of mirror … His hand was bleeding badly .. Kitna pain horaha hoga na … But this physical pain was much more lesser than his heart pain … Everyday .. His heart break into pieces seeing his love in so much pain ….
He slept there only ..
Days passes like this only … Everyday Dev hurts her and she cried whole night … then he will always hurt himself after hurting her …
One day Sonakshi received a call …
S – Hello .. Whose there …
Voice from other side – Baby come to XYZ place … Ur husband’s life is in danger …
S – Kabir . …. Tu .. I swear I will kill u agr mere Dev ko kuch bhi hua ..
Kabir – Baby … Don’t be angry .. I am here for u na ..
S – Kabirrrrr … she shouted ..
K -If u want to save him then come to the place …
He cuts the call
S – Hello .. Kabir .. Kabir ..
She grabbed the car keys and left from there …
She reached the place …
Kabir was standing pointing gun at Dev …
S – (shouts) Kabirrrrrrrrr ….
D – Sonakshi … Please leave from here .. I will handle the situation …
S – No Dev … I cant leave u alone …
D – Sonakshi plssss …
Kabir – Ohhhj love Birds …
S – Kabir .. Plss tujhe kya chahiye .. I will give u that .. Plss Dev ko chod de …
K – I want u baby …
She made a disgusted face …
K – Dev .. U r free now … If u want to say anything to Sonakshi .. Just say it … Tumhari aakhri saansein bachi hain …
D – Sonakshi … I always hurt u .. Everytime … I know u love me so much … But I was helpless .. This Kabir . he ..
K – Let me tell her ..
He narrates the whole story … How he blackmailed him …
DevAkshi’s eyes welled up …
Sonakshi looked at Dev … they share an intense +painful eyelock
S – Dev …
D – Sonakshi … I .. I .. Am sorry … I always loved u … And I love u … U r my life .. My jaan …
S – Dev don’t be sorry … I love u too …
She ran towards him to hug him … Kabir loads the gun nd points at his head .. He shoots …
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D – (shouts) SONAKSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
The bullet hit her on her chest … Dev ran towards Kabir … He ran from there …
S -(shouts) Dev ….
He came running towards her … She fell down …
He places her head on his lap and holds her hand …
D – (crying) Sonakshi … I will take u to hospital … Apni aankhein khol ke rakhna
S – (in heavy voice) De …. dev .. Nhii.. Me … hos.. hospital ..nhii ..nhi jaaungi … bs .. meri ..baat ..sun…sunoo ..
D – Aesy kesy … U have to go to hospital ..
(Guys …. …they were very far away from the city)
S – (trembling voice) Dev ..Dev .. u know …i . i always …wan..wanted ..to ..to spend …my….my whole….life….with u …….i ..i wan ..wanted u …to …to ..lo…love …me …and …atlast…i knw ….that ….that…u ..also ..love me …this..is …the best ….best ..feeli…feeling …ever …to…to be …loved…by you ….u..u ..r my ….li ..fe …
He was nodding his head all the time .. Having tears in his eyes …
D – Haan .. Sonakshi .. I know …u r my strong girl na …. U will fight for life …
S – Nnn…oo…. I …i ..am …ti..red …of ..figh…ting …i …will ….not fight…. U knw … me ne kasam ….khaayi thi …that …agr …mujhe ….ap…ni …life ..bhi …apke liye ….qurbaan kerni padi…to … I will … Or aaj …wo kasam …poor..poori ..karne …karne ka…waqt …aagaya hai …
D – Sonakshi kesi baatein ker rahi ho … Me kesy rahun ga tumhare baghair … He kisses her hand …
S – Dev ….apko …ab…ab …apni …poori life ….mere baghair….spend kerni hai ……me ne apko maaf ..kiya Dev …..for …for …hurting me …
D – Sonakshi aesi baatein mt kero …. u r my life .. Me nhi reh sakta tumhare bina …
She moves up a lil bit nd came close to his ear ..
She whispered
T – I Love You Dev …
Her head fell down on his lap
Her hand slipped from his hand … He hugged her tightly ……. ..Nd then shouts
SONAKSHIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
Crying vigorously ….
Betahasha dil ne
Tujhko hi chaaha hai
Har dua mein maine
Tujhko hi maanga hai
Tera jaana jaise koi badua
Tera jaana jaise koi badua
Door jaaoge jo tum
Mar jayenge hum
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam
Tumhe dekhte hi ankhen ho jaati nam
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam
Hua ye kya hashar mera
Judaa hua sabar mera
Main tere bin ek lamha
Kyun kabhi na jiya
Raat bhar ashqo ne tujhko pukara hai
Har dua main maine tujhko hi maanga hai
Tera jaana jaise koi badua
Door jaaoge jo tum
Mar jayenge hum
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam
Tumhe dekhte hi ankhen ho jaati nam
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam
Nasha tera dil ko laga
Dena nahi mujhko daga
Main teri aadat ka maara
Hai kya meri khata
Tere bin namumkin
Apna guzara hain
Har dua mein maine
Tujhko hi maanga hai
Tera jaana jaise koi badua
Door jaaoge jo tum
Mar jayenge hum
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam
Tumhe dekhte hi ankhen ho jaati nam
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam o
Sanam teri kasam
Flashback ends …
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Comments please ..?????????
Nd I want to share something to all of u …
Guys I m really sad about what is happening in KRPKAB … Dev .. he is so dumb …. Can u plss tell me that the news of leap is true or not ..?
Note:- No proof reading … Ignore the mistakes …
I want ur support guys …
Will come back with a ff … soon ..
Bye
Love u loads
#Regards#Purvi#
20 Comments
Hey!
This was really nice! And, the fact that it was so long made it even better!?
Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed this!
And yes, the seven years leap which is to be seen in KRPKAB is absolutely true!
Post another work of yours soon!
Thank you so much Anshita …I m glad u liked it … I will post the ff soon .. ❤
It is true that 7 years leap is coming…
BTW…nice OS..
Thanks?
Hey purvi?The OS was awesomeeee❤️
And the ending was sad??but happy endings r not possible every time☺️
And yes the news of the leap is true I know Dev is dumb but post leap it will be interesting Dev will turn into a Casanova and Sonakshi into a business woman and they will have a daughter her name will be Suhana and she will be living with Sonakshi??
And do comeback with a ff??
Love❤️
Thanks alot Manya … Yup its true … happy endings aren’t possible everytime … nd thank u for telling me about the leap …
Ohh god Dev Casanova … Can’t believe this … strange …
Will soon come back .. may be with an os or ff
Awesome
Thanks
Hey she need not die yar.. I m on the verge of crying.. Please please save her na.. Change the end and let the end be happily ever after..please
I am sorry yrr … I planned the ending like this only .. sorry .. i will write a new os with a happy ending..
Superb work purvi…. Loved it…. So emotional and awesome one….. Do come up with a ff… Will be waiting …. U also did it amazingly well…. And as everyone told, the leap news is true….
Love,
❤❤❤
Thanks alot Maleeha .. Thanks for ur appreciation … It means alot to me …
Will come back with three shots soon …
With Love ❤❤❤
Awesomeeee …heart touching epi……..
Thank you priya di ..
No di and all….I m also ur age …ur just 23 days younger than me
Okkkkkk sorry … I will not call u di …. But I will call u … Ummmm …
U tell me na .. Me tumhara nick name Kya rakhun …??
Priya or priyu or padmajaa ….what ever u want….ur choice
It was soo touching..?
Thank you Aarti ..
Amazing and heart touching????