AN : I dedicate this to Jasmine Rahul who wished to read a story based on Ritesh, Indu and little Kiara of Bahut Pyaar Karte Hein show. I am writing this on the basis of Kannada movie Bye-Two which is not the same to same concept but almost similar to the theme of this serial. So let’s move to the story . Thanks a lot for suggesting me this show. I haven’t watched show so I am writing it at my own perspective .
Kiara and Indu was looking a film poster
Kiara ; Mumma, When will Paapa come to meet me ?
Indu : He will be arriving soon beta . He is superstar naa and he is very busy man.
Kiara : You always says this, why he is not coming ?I want to see him now.
Indu : Kiara , don’t be adamant . Paapa has work . Please try to understand . Kiara one minute my phone is ringing . It’s urgent call. Stay here only beta . Don’t go anywhere
Indu goes to a corner to attend the phone call and after finshing the call when she came back she saw a man near Kiara
Indu : Excuse me , Who are you ? What are you doing with my child ?
He turned back and looked her
Kiara : Mumma Paapa has arrived .
Indu looked him .
Indu : Leave my kid , what are you doing with her ?
“She needs her Paapa , not just you Mumma. ”
Indu : What ?
5 Comments
Actually even I have not seen this show.i am a ronakshi fan.so when I watched the promo i wished that the heroine with karan was dipika kakkar.so actually I requested you to write a story on ronakshi with this theme.so i am surprised to see ritesh indu ff.its the first time I am reading a ff on this pair.it was a nice experience.i am excited to know that its based on a kannada movie.
When indu told kiara that her dad is a busy superstar I thought that ritesh is her father. But reading indu’s reaction seeing kiara with ritesh,I felt that kiara’s father is someone else.but ritesh told indu that she needs her father too,not just mumma.that time i doubted whether ritesh is his real father n he talked like that as indu was keeping kiara away from ritesh.or they are living together as a family,but his busy schedule is irritating her?its really mysterious. Perfect pics.
Actually I forgot Ronakshi while writing this one, What I remembered was you telling about Bahut pyar karte ho serial and so started in this way with the show’s hero and heroine itself. Thanks a lot, bye two was a nice family movie which came in recent times
That’s OK.i am enjoying this ff.i am watching the scenes of bohut pyar to relate to imagine the leads while reading this ff.if possible in future plz write an os on ronakshi with single mother finding love concept.
It’s interesting start but small Episode. Very nice one..
Next one will be longer one. Actually didn’t get much time. Thanks a lot