?? Hey lovely ppl….. ? ??
How uh guys doing??? How much lazy ppl uh all are….? Huh…. See not even replying….???
I was feeling so bored? so thot to have some talk with uh… But uh guys don’t seem interested…. Uh all love just my ff…? And not me…. ?? show baddd… Hmmm
But I wanna tell all of uh I love uh all very very very much???
?Zikra wer r uh lost??? Didu ko rulayegi kya ab????
?Chehak…. I hope there are no more request for changes uh need in my ff??
?Satuu miss uh darling…. Come soon…?
?Sujina…. Appreciate ur mind yaar too good… Plz lips sealed?
?Jwala….. Ty dear to like my ff even though u only read swasan ffs…?
?Shan…. Dear I guess uh know more about me…. Do ping me dear if uh r on fb… As my instics says uh r….?
?all the amazing ff writers: Aaffa, Ritzi, Shamz, Krystal, Shatakshi, Sameera, Shona, Zaku, Sayeeda, Lovely, Dreamer, Ria, Joonakanksha, Happiness, Lover, SMC, Lama, Fatarajo, Mannat, Sana(aamu), Crazy, figo, fan….. So sorry if I didnt comment… But uh guys are really the the the best…. Keep it up??? As i always say uh guys are my motivation…. ??so sorry if I left any name….
? Readers And Commentators and also writers: Sidhantian(isabella), kinjal, asha, callmenazu, bulbul, dheemahee, sonali, ariya, ayesha khanum, tasha, Sam, meeta, priya tripathi, poorvi, sohi, radhika, sudhika, jenny, Alisha, Chandra, angita, rashiverma, priya, aayushi, sidmin, maggi, baby, amii, riya, shreya, romaisah, jaya, sara, saira, aashi, komal, paavu, riaA, sidmin_lover, kavina, misha, twinjfan(tamanna), simran, dharti, danu, kruti, esha, srija, kaira, dolly, jenisha, apoorwa, ashli, heena…. Again sorry if any1 left…. Every1 of uh even though uh have commented once or been my support system till now… I m really glad to have uh lovely ppl…. To motivate me by ur comments….
?silent readers….. Or just became readers…. Anam, shan, franciee, mavo, and many more….. Do comment we writers need that a lot? tysm for giving a start, to comment on my ff….
?Mysteries to unfold……..
?Kunj and twinkle’s misunderstanding created by UV to be revealed
?Mystery man who met twinkle and bitruti in the restaurant
?Kunj didn’t want to reveal his marriage and the mystery girl
?Twinkle sees blur images of kids
?Twinkle faints…. Is she pregnant?
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Twinj’s room
Twinkle is lying on bed and doctor is inspecting her…. while kunj is tensed. Just then bitoo rushes inside the room followed bt shruti….
B: (to the doctor) wat happen to my twinkle? doctor is she ok?
K: bitoo let her inspect… have patience
B: uh just keep ur blo*dy mouth shut…
D: (cutting him) will uh both carry on with ur fight out of the room, bcoz the patient is disturbed by uh both…. (both fumes at each other and stay quiet) I said leave…. (both agrees and leaves… shruti was just about to leave wen the doctor stops her) mam plz wait, I need to talk to uh…… (they both talk which is muted…. Doctor priscribe some medicines and leaves… bitoo and kunj ask her but she ignores them, and leaves… kunj gets frustrated and gets in the room)
K: wat the hell was that… she didn’t even tell me anything…. (holds shruti) shruti wat happen? Is she ok? She must have told uh ri8… tell me tinkle is ok na…
(kunj is about to cry…. When he gets a tight slap…. Chatttak….. shruti slapped him)
S: (sarcastically) uh r asking me wat happen to her? is she ok or not? (kunj is shocked) don’t be shocked kunj its all bcoz of uh…. Uh r terrible kunj…. uh force her to bed daily… that to without her wish…. (kunj feels guilty and awkward hearing this from shruti and his eyes turn heavy remembering all his torture just then bitoo comes near him and hold him by collar and punch him hard that he falls on bed near twinkle’s feet…. Twinkle gets concious and slowly opens her eyes with difficulty… but all were busy fighting. Bitoo holds kunj and make him stand and he was about to slap him when kunj holds his hand …..
K: bas bitoo…. Enough… she is my wife… I have all rights on her
B: she is my sister. And I cant allow any rascal to ruin her life
(shruti finds twinkle concious and motions there and make her sit on the bed as she was not able to do that… boys still not aware of the fact… are still fighting)
K: twinkle is mine bitoo
B: twinkle is not ur property kunj….
K: who the hell are uh to tell me that?
B: twinkle is my sister do uh get that…..
They both are fighting when twinkle again sees some unclear images…..
FLASHBACK––––––––
TWO SMALL KIDS AROUND 3-4 YEARS ARE FIGHTING AND A 3 THREE YEAR OLD GIRL IS COVERING HER EARS THAT SHE DON’T HEAR THERE FIGHT
BOY1: ANGEL IS MINE
BOY2: NO SHE IS MINE. JUST MINE
BOY1: SHE IS MY SISTER, WHO THE HELL ARE UH?
BOY2: I DON’T KNOW THAT BUT ANGEL IS MINE JUST MINE…..
BOY1: NOOOOOOOO ANGEL IS MINEEEEEEEE….
AND THEY KEEP ON FIGHTING LIKE THIS…..
FLASHBACK ENDS––––––––
Twinkle feels dezzy when shruti yells
S: will uh both stop fighting…. Twinkle…. twinkle (pats her face slowly) are uh ok?
(both looks at her and finds twinkle awake…. And rushes towards her)
K: twinkle… are uh ok…
B: twi…
T: (to bitoo… ignoring kunj) bhai don’t take stress, I m ok…
S: (gets up from bed and shouts at her) no twinkle uh are not ok….
T: no shruti I m… trust me…
S: stop acting twinkle… have uh ever thought of urself? Ur body…. I can’t even imagine that took pills daily that uh can’t get pregnant….
(takes a small pause) Just entertaining ur husband is not the only responsibility of urs, got dammit
K: wat r uh saying?
S: ya kunj she has been taking contraceptive pills to prevent from pregnancy…. Bcoz of the overdose of those pills she is ill and has turn so weak….. And all thanks to uh…. Uh didn’t bothered to look at her difficulties….
T: (she doesn’t make eyecontact and closes her eyes stopping her tears to flow) shruti plz… stop…
S: y twinkle…. y r uh stopping me? did uh stopped (pointing kunj yells on the top of her voice) this beast, this devil, ur beloved husband…..? no na….. then y stopping me now….
(comes close to her and cupps twinkle’s face with her palms)(with a conserned and low voice) look at me… twinkle listen to me… (twinkle faces her and looks straight into her eyes) twinkle doctor saw ur wounds… how cruely your body has treated by this animal…. U are weak, ur body cant tolerate this daily… have pity on urself…. Uh love him but he cant love uh back…. Cant uh see he is all surrounded with his so called revenge….
K: …shruuu…ti (stammering)
S: (yells)just shutup kunj… I don’t want to hear a single word from ur mouth…. (standsup and moves to him) is this the reason uh wanted to marry her….? is this the reason uh wanted me to support uh? Uh was hurt… I thought uh need twinkle to heal ur pain… but uh… uh gave pain to her, uh hurt her again and again…. daily that to like this….. chi… I have seen the worst in uh kunj, but never thot uh will do something like this to her…. have uh forgotten this is ur same angel for whom uh cried for every night….. she is ur same angel for whom uh build this palace, the same girl for whom uh rejected proposals of marriages…. She is ur same angel, whom uh stalked for whole 5 years. And she is the same angel, kunj for whom uh were even ready to give ur life away…..
(Twinkle is stunned to hear all this and she gets teary-eyes but sumwhere happy to hear that kunj never stopped loving her… all this is just his aggression but somewhere he still loves her…)
S: yes twinkle he attempted suicide just for uh… the day when he came here… within 1 or 2 week he got the news that uh have slit ur wrist and attempted suicide… and ur case is critical…. That day he dranked whole night because he knew sumwer he is only responsible for uh behaviour and then tied a rope on the fan and hang himself just then we reached in time and got him out of the rope…. We had no idea who he is/ and for what he did that, we just had came to meet our new neighbour and found him in this condition… from that day we take care of him…. Slowly I came to know about his angel… his only love…. He was hurt and this made him to slowly emerge in smokking, drinking and ….
Twinkle starts crying and now is unable to stop her tears…. Kunj is also sad and controlling his tears to flow…. Bitoo had enough now… he walks towards twinkle and makes her stand by her arm…
B: twinkle is no more staying here…. I cant take risk this time…. (he takes her out of the room while twinkle walks with him like a deadbody…. Kunj is now not able to control his tears starts flowing down her eyes…. Shruti notices him crying but ignores him and follows bitoo…. Shruti and bitoo heads their home with twinkle and makes her sleep in the guest house… because of the effect of the medicines she dosses-off but Kunj cry endlessly throughout the night on his sins with a guilt….
Next morning
Twinkle is wakesup due to the sunrays falling on her…. she getsup and find herself in an unknown place, then she remembers what all last night happen and now she is in bitoo’s place… all of a sudden she gets scared remembering something and getsup from the bed and run towards her house… she runs from the hall… bitoo and shruti were in the hall discussing about the new project…. And vitnesses her going and follow her….
116 Comments
Very nice episode……eagerly waiting for the next….jaldi post Karo pls pls
Tysm angita?
I will surely post it as I get time from my project work….
Awesome epi saby…plz post the nxtvone asap
Tysm fan?
I will post it asap
Waaah NYC episode. ..I am a silent reader ..but today I can’t control myself. ….
Tysm Ami…..?
For commenting and I m glad for that…
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Ab aur mat tadpaana nd jaldi se next episode upload karde.. cant wait more to read another episode. ..
Tysm chehak?
Lil busy yaar thoda toh tadpane ka hakk hai muje plsshhhh….
Another amazing episode by you!!! Love love ove every single one of it. Excited for the next post!
Tysm Maya?
I can sense ur excitement through ur words…. Tysm?
Sorry its jaya…. This dumb spellcheck…. Plz spare me
you are awsome sabyyy
omg i cannot express my feelings
you cannot imagin that how muh i missed your ff
ab ff ko hi miss karon g,afterall i know you as a writter
btw loooooooooooooooooooooooove it
Tysm misha?
Oh god I m so happy by seeing ur comments….
I can sense the excitement…
I undrstnd uh know me just as a writer…
And so sorry to make uh wait….
It was amazing Saby!?
Tysm ria?
Hey bhagwan koi itna aacha kaise likha Sakta hai per di Aapka ff and story humesha upload hone ki wait karti hoon u r one of my fav. Ff writers the way u mold story is just ???????? so keep the good work going and I noticed that u change ur Dp according to episode
Tysm bulbul?
Yeh baat toh muje khud nahi pata chal raha….. K itna acha mein kese likh sakti hu? love uh dear…. Keep supporting
Marvelous …..fantastic …..fabulous ….amazing
Just can’t tell anything more than this bcoz I’m speechless…….. Shruti ka confrontation kunj ka guilt twinkle ka pain……ufff just a perfect epi
Tysm kruti?
I m so glad to here these words…..
Very nice epi.. N babes its not like that v only luv ur ff v also luv uh afterol u r the 1 who gave us such a beautiful ff.. N ur ur writing skills are superb.. U wrote very well that’s y v all just loved it.. And alsop luv uh saby.. Keep updating asaaapppp dear coz u never no make my day whenever u post.. U don’t knw that how eagerly I was waiting for ur ff..
Tysm amii…..?
Uh know I just said that awwiyee…..kidding
I didn’t mean it really…. But ur words made me undrstnd that I m so loved by uh all….
Thanks for giving ur superb ff.. Luv uh luv ur ff.. Muuuuaaaaaaaahhhhh..
Love uh too dear
Yrrrr….Saby …sacchi mucchi ek baat bataun tumhe??
Batao …bata dun ….
Nai kahogi batane ko toh kaun sa chup hojaungi ….main toh tabhi bolungi …toh ab suno ….
Saby darling tu insaan hai bemisaal ;
Teri cute si baatein hai lajawab ;
Tera ff toh hai poora dhammal ;
Teri writing ki toh main kya dun missal;
Bas itna hi keh sakti hoon tu hai hum sabki jann….
What a episode…. hats off…the way u portrayed Twinj pain were amazing….. each nd every dialouges were superb …Kunj’s guilty feelings awesome…
I’m so excited to see kunj turning a good one….
Love u soooooo much nd ur ff toh puch hi mat kitna pyar krti hoon…shayad tusse zayada ….lollzz…
Muaahhh
Sayuuu…….?
Ty ty ty ty so much………?
Kese batau tuje k yeah mein kese mar leti hu
Jabki iska and mere khud k paas nahi….?
Par tumlogo k yeah cute comment dekh k smile aa jati hai…. ?
Thanks again darling…..?
Can’t explain my happiness towards uh…?
Love uh darling so much….????
ohhh saby hw cn i xplain u ……tht ur ff is jus brilliant…i wish i wud hv got smthng to say beyond dese cheesy words…..truly ur skills r mr amazing thn i cn xplain in words….
Omg loveleen????
Thank you so much darling…..?
And ur words are not at all chessy…..
And even if it is den I wud b obliged to here this…. Throughout my ff?????
Amazing epi
Ty aayushi?
Mindblowing… Amazing..
I just can’t express it..loved it.. Just loved it..
With every episodes u r making me hooked
And today’s was speechless…
Eagerly anxiously and what not waiting for the next episode
Plz plz plz update it asap
Tysm priya?
I hope i get uh more attracted towards my ff …?
I will post it as soon as i get time from my cllg work….?
wow…wow…wow…
Twinj pain…Kunj guilty…confrontation…
d way u express keeping us awaited 2 know what’s next is amazing…
Do contd. asap….<3…<3…<3…
Ty ty ty so much sujina?
Will cont as soon as possible… ?
Amazing,fablous episode dear soooo nice looooooovvvvvvveeeeee it
Tysm simran?
awesome amazing fabulous marvelous epi….words hi ni h yr….plzzz next epi jaldi se upload krdo….can’t wait….plzzz….& hope kunj London naa jaye…..
Tysm purnima?
I hope he doesn’t go…..?
I will post asap???
Ur work is superb..
Now alys out of comment dea..
Dont have a enough compliment for ur amazing job ?
M following in love with your ff & with u too ?
Keep doing..
Tysm Isabella?
Love uh too darling and hope uh fall for my ff more…..???
Amazingggg…………. Epi…….
Tysm aayushi?
Saby…….this episode got tears in my eyes…..loved the confrontation part….amazing…. How well u depict emotions…. Commendable job….fantastic….marvellous
Ohh Rashi…… Darling so sorry to bring tears to ur eyes…..
Sho sorry….
Love uh darling and tysm dear?
are yar intezar mat karwao jaldi post karo na
how can we contact u atleast give ur gmail na
So sorry ayesha to make uh wait long….. Plz spare me…..
Yr awesome tha yeh. .i know har baar yehi bolti hn…bt i m speechless
Tysm joon?
Love uh darling…..
Oh my saby……ur just…..ummm…u r a thief….ya ri8…..u stole my……words….how can I even appreciate u…..u left me wordless!
Omg ritzi….. I m speechless wat to reply uh..?
I m myself in love with ur writings and uh telling me this words…?
I m so much glad to hear this darling??
It was amazing
Waiting for the next one
Plz plz plz cont asap plz
Tysm saira?
Where were u ??
Epi was amazing ??
Suspense ?
????? Post asaàp
Tysm zaku?
Darling I m sorry to make uh wait…
Awesome sad for kunj but i think finaly he realise his mistake
Tysm priya?
I love this ff and plz comment silent reader because i can’t imagine my life without reading this ff plz saby never end this ff plz plz plz………………………………………..plz
Omg dharti…..
Firstly thankyou so much?
And don’t worry darling I m not in mood to end it so soon……
I really love your Ff and you too?
It’s a request please post the next one soon
Tysm yara?
And love uh too dear…..
Have too wait a lil more…. Plssshhh