Thnx guys for all the comments I got so far.. IDK Y but I have a feeling people r losing interest cuz the meeting is taking ages. So I’ve written this update and some of it is in note form so I can get to the meeting ASAP. Enjoy. ?
Note: * * = Olv (in mind) and Thapuja= Thapki and Tanuja
Recap: KN orders all the boys 2 come office, Suraj disobeys it and Thapki punishes the girls 4 lying about the vase. Naina gets fooled by Thapki and Tanuja.
Chakor: Umm. Di! What should I do with the vase?
The girls stop laughing with a shock as they had completely forgotten about the vase
Tanuja: (hesitating) uh…uh…Thapki! Go get the super glue….we’ll try and put it together
Thapki: I’m just doing that.
Thapki gets the glue and they all fix the vase.
Ragini: Finished!…Gudiya! Go put it back now!
Chakor comes to pick up the vase but in the meantime, Imli and Sharda return home. The girls were like ???? and they hid the vase behind their back.
Tanuja: We can’t tell Massi about this! She’ll probably get really angry
Meghna gets irked
Meghna: o really! I thought u lot said that we should never lie or hide anything. Now what happened? Why r u hiding the vase?
Thapki: Meghu! Ur taking revenge on us na? Plz don’t! Not like this! Do something else but not this plz.
Meghna: Why!? Who is gonna stop me?…U?
Swara: No..Me!
Meghna: Sanu!…I thought ur on our side
Swara: I am!..But the vase is all of our responsibility… We all need 2 work 2gether to handle this problem.
Naina: Sanu di is right…We r all guilty of the vase so we all need to help out each other..Plz Meghu di!..plz understand
Meghna: Ok. Fine! I’ll help.
Imli and Sharda enter the hall only to see that the girls r standing in a line smiling at them.
Imli olv: Something has definitely gone wrong! Its clear on their faces
Sharda olv: What happened?
Imli: Massi! I’ll just put these in the kitchen.
Imli goes behind the girls and into the kitchen with some bags
Sharda: What happened?! Y r u all smiling?
Ragini: * I can’t take this lying anymore! Its too much 4 me! I am going to be absolutely honest with this * Wo…Massi!…Vase!
Swara pinches Ragini when she says vase and Ragini screams
Swara olv: Doll! Ur gonna get us killed one day!
Sharda: Vase????
Swara: No Massi!…Not Vase…Vast!
Sharda raises her eyebrows as she is confused
Sharda: Vast???…Vast What?!
Tanuja: Majority!…The Vast Majority.
Sharda is even more confused
Sharda: So…Vast Majority of What?!
Tanuja: * I am so dead Now! * Umm..umm. the vast Majority of….of..
Chakor: People!
Everyone looks at Chakor as she had shouted that
Chakor: * Maiyya re! Y is everyone looking at me * The vast majority of People! * Does that make sense? *
Sharda: The vast Majority of people??..Carry on!
Chakor: Who me?
Sharda: Yes U! Who else am I looking at?
Chakor makes a puppy face and looks to her sisters 4 help and Imli comes from the kitchen and she notices the vase behind their backs and smiles.
Naina: The vast majority of people did it?…
Sharda: Chiku but what?! What did they do?
Imli: The vast majority of people voted 4 Donald Trump as their Prime minister and they were hesitating to tel u this as they know how much u hate him. (guys! Seriously! I couldn’t think of anything else ?)
Sharda: Is that so?
All of the girls nod happily and when Sharda wasn’t looking they gave fly kisses to Imli. Then they decide to somehow put the vase back.
Tanuja: Umm. Massi! We have done a lot of work today. We’ll just go and freshen up.
Imli: I’ll just put these bags upstairs
Imli takes the bag upstairs and the girls try to walk backwards upstairs but Sharda stops them.
Sharda: What’s behind ur back
Thapki: Nothing Massi..Nothing!
Sharda raises her eyebrows
Sharda olv: Something is fishy
Naina: What’s wrong mumma?
Sharda: All of u! Show me ur hands!
The girls hesitate but all of them do show their hands and everyone gets confused except Chakor as she was smiling.
Chakor: What happened Massi?
Sharda: uhh…Nothing..u guys can go
Sharda leaves to the kitchen and the girls look at each other and then at Chakor. Chakor winks at them and tries to go but Swara grabs her hand.
Swara: How?!
Ragini: When?!
Thapki: Where?!
Chakor: huh?!
Tanuja: They meant when, where and how did u make the vase disappear?!
Chakor: Easy…When Massi stopped us, I quickly put it in one of the bags Imli was taking upstairs..simple!
The girls were like ???
Chakor: And Imli knows so she is probably putting it back in Massi’s room
All of the girls grab Chakor to give her a BIG hug
Chakor olv: Aree Maiyya re! Nothing is as dangerous than all of ur hugs together. Y am I always in the middle? ??
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The next morning….A big building is shown and there was a sign board written:
RAJVANSHI AND SONS. All of the boys except Suraj enter building and r shocked to see so many people. Bihaan notices a girl on the reception desk
Bihaan: Gajab! Check out her!
Sanskaar: No Bhai! Don’t even think about it!
Bihaan walks towards the girl
(Note: This is from the Disney film Tangled. Flynn Rider’s best dialogue and my absolute fav part)
Bihaan: Hey! How u doing? The Name Bihaan Rajvanshi. How’s ur day going?
The girl stood up
Girl: Rajvanshi! Good morning Sir!
The rest of the boys get into a burst of laughter ?? and Bihaan frowns and goes next to them.
Karan: Nice one!
Lakshya: Well tried!
Bihaan olv: Ha Ha Ha! Laugh as much as u want cuz u won’t be in a good condition to be able to laugh next time. This is B for Bihaan’s promise!
They all go the into a room
Kunal: OMG! look at everyone. They look like they have literally stuck their eyes to the computers.
Sanskaar: wonder what they’re working on?
Lakshya: don’t know. Looks boring to me. Rather go and play the Xbox at home than stay here.
Rishi: This one is gonna be tough!
Karan: Your eyes are gonna literally bulge out in here. Staring at a computer all day long.
Kunal: o come on guys! There is more than this!
Sanskaar: what’s wrong with you lot? If we get scared just by looking at this, what will we do when we get the job?
Vivaan: Don’t worry guys! Its nothing!
The boys look at Vivaan with a blank face
Lakshya: That’s easy for u to say!
KN comes in and everyone on the computers leave their work and stand up and greet him
Karan olv: whoa! What was that?
KN: sit down. Sit down. I’d like to make an announcement! These r my sons: Rishi, Bihaan, Kunal, Sanskaar, Lakshya, Su…Where is Suraj?
Rishi: Umm. Papa! He didnt come.
KN: Why?!
Kunal: He didnt want to.
KN olv: That Rat! He is running too fast. I need to get hold of him.
KN paints a fake smile
KN: Not Suraj then…umm…Karan and this is Vivaan my nephew. From now on Kunal will be working here and I’d like all of you to be respectful and treat him as how you would treat me. Do you understand?
OP: (quietly) yes sir.
KN: I can’t hear you. Speak louder.
OP: (louder) Yes Sir!
KN: better. come on sons. I’ll show you Kunal’s cabin.
KN shows the boys around the office in complete details
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It is night and the girls r getting ready for bed
Ragini: Hee Maara Katu Shaam Ji / OMG! Today was a very hard day, wasn’t it?
Everyone nod
Naina: And some people find it extremely funny to do something bad
Tanuja and Thapki bite their tongue
Thapuja olv: Oh no! Completely forgot
Meghna: Joking also has a limit to it. But no. They don’t want to understand, do they?
Swara: And. When they prank then we tolerate it quietly cuz they r older than us BUT when we prank THEM, they get angry on us. So tell na. What should we do?
Naina: Ye sahi hain!/ That’s right! We respect them and they do not!
Thapuja come in front of them holding their ears
Thapuja: Sorry!
Meghna: Sorry? Who even invented this word? Just say it and all ur mistakes r forgiven right?….Well..Its not the case here…Sorry won’t work
Thapuja: Ok. Fine! U van give whatever punishment u want. We’ll happily accept it and we’ll also promise that we will never joke around like that again. Promise matlab Pakka wala Promise. / Promise meaning An Actual Promise!
Meghna: We’ll see…I’m sleepy now. Going bed…Goodnight
Swaina: Me too!..Goodnight!
Thapuja frown and the rest as in Chakor, Imli and Ragini come and hug them
Imli: Don’t worry di. They’ll probably cool down in the morning.
Tanuja: Gudiya! U always have a good idea…plz..how should I cheer them up?
Chakor day dreams what will happen after she helps them..THE BIG HUG that makes her bones feel broken.
Chakor: NOOOOO!
Thapki: No? U won’t help us?
Chakor: Uhh…I…I mean Yes!
Thapuja smile
Chakor: But only on 1 condition
Tanuja: Condition? What condition?
Chakor: Plz. plz.Plz.plz.pleeeez. Don’t give me that hug.
Thapki: Hug? What hug?
Chakor: THAT hug!
Tanuja: Idk What u mean?
Imli: My cute Didi is talking about the HUG that she always feels like her bones r breaking with. Right Didi?
Chakor: Imlu! No one understands me as much as u do
Ragini: After all. Imli is ur blood related sister Gudiya.
They smile
Thapki: Oh! So THAT hug…. Fine…We won’t hug u even though we really really love it
Chakor: Pinky Promise?
Tanuja: Pinky Promise…Now how do we cheer the trio?
Chakor discusses her plans with the girls
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The boys r on the terrace chilling out and Suraj is there too
Sanskaar: Wow Kunal Bhai! U’ve got the job
Kunal: Thanx. But I’m not sure I’ll be able to fulfill Papa’s expectations
Rishi: Don’t worry. It’ll be fine..Just give ur best
Kunal: I will thnx. BTW y don’t u work anymore?
Rishi: I don’t feel like it after THAT incident
Lakshya: But u do realise that it has been almost 3 years since that incident right?
Rishi: Yes I do. But what do I do? I need HER with me!…I need my Tanu!
(Note: I’m sure u all r confused right now. ? Tanu isn’t Tanuja. Tanu is Rishi’s 1st wife who died, hence the INCIDENT. Tanu is a lookalike of Tanuja. How she died and all that will be revealed later)
Karan: We all miss Babhi too..But we can’t give up on life cuz of that!
Bihaan: Just think! Babhi is watching us right now. How would she be feeling when she finds out that U have given up on life cuz of her?!
They all look up to the stars
Suraj: Do u remember? Whenever Rishi Bhai used to try and beat us up, Babhi would always come in front of us and save us.
They all smile with tears in their eyes
Lakshya: Yep! She was our Super Babhi
Karan: No! She was our SUPER DUPER Babhi
Sanskaar: U guys also remember, whenever Bhai leaves crumbs on the bed, Babhi used to scold him a lot and the whole house would wake up.
Rishi: Her scolds. Her behavior… Everything
Kunal: and the way she looks at the moon and talks to it
The scene shifts from the boys to the girls where Tanuja and Chakor r staring at the moon
Chakor: Today Chandu Ji/ Mr Moon looks so bright na?
Tanuja: hmm
Chakor: It seems like he wants to bring a smile to someone’s face
Tanuja: And telling someone at the age of 21, to get into bed, close their eyes and dream.
Chakor: But di! U know na, I don’t get a good sleep unless I hear my fav lullaby
Tanuja: Is Ragini asleep yet?
Ragini: No di! I’m here!
Tanuja: Ragini! As u have got a wonderful voice, plz sing Gudiya her fav lullaby
Chakor: But I want to be with u di and talk to Chandu Ji / Mr Moon
Tanuja: Y don’t u just say it straight that u want to sleep in my lap?
Chakor: Can I?
Tanuja gets up on the bed and crosses her legs
Tanuja: Aa ja! / Come on!
Chakor smiles and runs to lay her head on Tanuja’s lap. At the same time Imli looks at Thapki.
Thapki: Imlu!
Thapki also crosses her legs and Imli comes to lean on her
Ragini: Sanu has gone with them otherwise I’d be laying my head on hers….No problem!…At least I’ll have a good sleep…Goodnight!
Chakor: Di! Lori! / Lullaby!
Ragini: o haan. Sorry I forgot.
Ragini sings a lullaby. (U can think of any lullaby u want but I was mostly thinking about the Chakor bird lullaby in Udaan that Chakor’s mother sings to her)
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The next morning, the boys r eating breakfast with Teju
Teju: Did u think about what I said?
The boys look confused
Teju: About Marriage!
Rishi takes an Apple and gets up
Rishi: Mom plz! Don’t talk about marriage with me cuz in my life there was Tanu, there is Tanu and Tanu will always be there. So no more discussion with me!
Rishi leaves in anger
Teju: I can understand him. But what about u lot?…Kunal?
Kunal: Can I focus on my work first as I just started?
Teju: Take ur time…Bihaan?
Bihaan: I…I..Idk yet.
Teju: Thnx for saying….. Sanskaar and Lakshya?
SanLak: Ummm…Not sure yet
Teju: OK…Suraj?
Suraj: Let the biggest get married first then I’ll decide…OK?
Teju: But Rishi said…
Suraj: If not Rishi Bhai then Bihaan Bhai
Vivaan: Before u ask me, my answer is the same thing as Suraj
Teju: hmm…Karan…
Karan interrupts
Karan: Maa! I’m the youngest! Don’t decide on me yet plz!
Teju: I wasn’t going to ask about marriage. I was going to tell u to focus on ur studies and NOT think about marriage yet.
Karan was like ???
Karan olv: Thank God!
Everyone eat their food silently as it was an awkward situation
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So here am going to write in points of what I wanted to happen and get to the meeting ASAP.
• Thapuja make the trio their fav breakfast but the trio still don’t forgive them. They then help out the trio in every situation in hope that they’ll get forgiven. Still the trio don’t cheer up. Sharda finds out about the vase and gets really angry at the trio. (Ik this doesn’t sound like Sharda but I had to in this situation. Its her fav vase that someone special gave). Thapuja then stand up for them and puts the blame on themselves and they get punished. The trio feel bad for Thapuja and forgive them.
• The boys have a chat again about Tanu.
• The girls leave and also decide that Sharda will not be working anymore. Meghna decides she will work for the family. She gets a promotion in the Rajvanshi and Sons company as Kunal’s PA.
The next day, the girls wake up in their new home and Meghna gets ready for work. Chakor enters a basketball club, where she turns out to be the best player. Imli joins a dance club. Naina goes art college, swaragini stay home with Sharda and Thapuja go shopping. The same time, Kunal goes work, Suraj and vivaan go to the same club, karan goes music college and bihaan and rishi go out for a drive
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AT THE FOOTBALL CLUB
Vivaan: Suraj! What’s wrong? U don’t wanna play football?
Suraj: Nah! Heard that there’s a new champion in Basketball though.
Vivaan: So..U wanna play basketball?
Suraj: Have to go and check the “CHAMPION” out.
Vivaan: Whatever..I’m staying here
Suraj: as ur wish
Suraj leaves to Basketball club
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AT THE OFFICE as in RAJVANSHI AND SONS COMPANY
Kunal was reading through some papers which show who is who and he stops flicking when he sees Meghna’s pic.
Kunal olv: Who is this?..Meghna Solanki…As Kunal Rajvanshi’s Personal Assisstant..Wait! My PA?!…I never asked 4 one..What does Papa think of me?
Meghna is coming into office and before she enters Kunal’s cabin, she gets nervous
Meghna olv: Come on Meghna! U can do this. This isn’t any exam that u r getting nervous about.
She takes a deep breath and knocks. Kunal feels more nervous
Kunal: Come in!
The door opens
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AT THE MALL, Bihaan and Rishi’s car stop near a water fountain
Bihaan: Gajab!…it’s so hot 2day! I’ll go get some water
Rishi: I’ll stay here then..U go.
Thapuja come out of a building and Thapki is checking some of the bags
Thapki: Tanu! I think I forgot my phone inside
Tanu: oh no! Go and get it! Meet me near that water fountain ok?
Thapki nods and goes back and Tanu goes near the water fountain. Bihaan enters the same building as Thapki and Rishi gets shocked as he sees Tanuja
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AT COLLEGE
Naina is talking to her new friend Jhanvi when she notices a man with an umbrella (obviously Karan but he has no allergy. He walks around with his umbrella 4 style). Karan goes near a coffee table and orders a cup of coffee.
Naina olv: Who is this? And Y is he walking around with an umbrella? What does he think of himself? Some kind of boss?
Jhanvi: Naina! Where r u lost?
Naina: Jhanvi. Who’s he?
Jhanvi: Karan. The youngest of the Rajvanshi family
Naina: Rajvanshi?
Jhanvi: The richest family here in Aazadganj.
Naina: Y does he walk around with an umbrella?
Jhanvi: idk..Don’t u dare go ask him!..He is a grumpy person..He likes to stay on his own.
Naina: oh an Intravert! And btw..I LOVE DARES
Jhanvi: Naina no!
Naina doesn’t listen to Jhanvi and approaches Karan.
Precap: The moment u have all been waiting 4…THE MEETING
Thnx guys, hope u enjoyed it. Ik I rushed but I got bored I wanted to get to the meeting as well..Plz do comment silent readers
24 Comments
Great episode enjoyed it alot keep going dont worry just follow ur pasion and contuine writing?
Thnx Di. I will. ?
Like it sunny waiting for next episode .
Thankyou dear ?
haan like tippu said continue. I’m waiting for the meeting ?
Thnx Afa. Will update the meeting soon. ?
Chutki it was just superb!!! Finally they all got to meet each other. Rishi lost his wife tanu (sad about it ). And thank u so much for the long update. Just loved it. The girls together helping each other. And karan thought his marriage?. Everything was too good. Eagerly waiting for next. Update soon.
Thnx Di. I will update the meeting soon. ?
Amazing update. Finally they will meet. Feeling sad for rishi as he lost tanu. Loved how girls were helping each other. Loved tejaswani & boys talk about marriage. Boys remembering tanu was nice. Just write as you wish. No need to rush anything
Thanku soo much Sonu Di. I’m glad u didn’t mind it. I’ll try not to rush next time and ill try update soon. ?
I think Tanu’s death story is same like kasam. I m very big fan of kasam n tanshi. Plzz update soon???
Thnx. I had to add Tanu as I miss her alot. Tanu is 100% way better than Tanuja. Will update soon. ?
Great episode! Love how the girls work together and Teju’s words to Kunal were funny. Looking forward to the next part. Like many said, continue and follow your heart.
Thnx Didu and I think u meant Karan. Will update soon ?
Sorry, I was thinking of karan but wrote kunal, I’m familiar with all these shows except thapki
If u like nok jhoks then u should watch the beginning of Thapki. They r soo good.
Dear it was amazing
And i want to ask u what does massi mean
Actually I’m not indian
And i can’t wait after the meeting
Keep going ???????
Thnx alot. Massi means Aunt ( mum’s sister) . I’ll try update the meeting ASAP. Keep reading ?
Shanu amazing dear n very long mja aa gya. N aapne jo chakor ka mayiaa reee n vihaan ka gjb kiya awsm lvd it n waiting for next part. ?????????
Thnx Anni di. Wo dialogues ko tho mujhe rak na hi para as they r too good. Jaldi update karne Ki koshish karungi.
Hats off to you and your skills.The episode was really nice .Post ASAP.
Thnx. ? will do
amazing one and its lovely that hug scene of girls ha ha ha I was laughing poor chakor. As u know sukor and thahaan love story start from hatred so I want u to add nOk jhok first between them ok. And so nairan. Love others update ASAP CAN’T WAIT
Its’s so amazing I love each nd every part of your story.keep it up
Your beloved doll