Hello chunks..
Its me..Abhi.
Iam super duper happy seeing your supports.Also Iam glad that I got many of my old friends back.Now,anyway iam not gonna leave you people?.So be ready to bear me.Chunks..If you dont mind,please say about yourself.N about me I will say at the end of this episode.
Lets move in to the first episode..
Episode 1
A big mental asylum is shown.Its written “THE MAHESWARI MENTAL ASYLUM”.(haha..The biggest company ko meine mental asylum bana diya?”
The camera is moving towards a cabin..Where it is written “Dr Sanskar Maheswari”on a board.
A staff comes there.
Staff:Sir,She is getting violent.
Before him completes the sentence itself Sanskar ran from there being worried.
In a room…A girl is breaking all the things around her.
Sanskar comes there.
Sanskar:Sweetie…Stop all these..
(Sweetie is none other than our chweetie Ragini?)
Ragini runs to him and hugs him tightly.She is crying loudly.
Sanskar:Sweetie ..what happened?? why are you crying??Stop crying na,if you cry,then your sansku also will cry.
Ragini:Sansku,they are trying to inject that nail on my body.Say them not to do that.Please…Its too paining.please sansku..
Sanskar looks at the staffs.
Sanskar:Give me the medicine kit.
He signs them to go.
He makes her to stand straight.
Sanskar:Ok baba,,now stop crying.They all left.
Ragini starts looking around the room and she starts jumping happily seeing them all gone.She kisses on this cheek and said:”Thanku sansnku..you are my superhero”.
Sanskar gets shocked by her sudden action.But Ragini was still behaving normally ,I mean childishly.
Sanskar then looks at her …he smiles seeing her childish acts.
Ragini:Sansku what are you thinking??
He then comes back to normal hearing her.
Sanskar:Woh..actually…nothing.
he then remember about the injection.
Sanskar:Sweetie…if i say you something,will you do it??
Ragini:I will do anything for you sansku.
Sanskar:Then sit there Sweetie..
Ragini sits on the chair.
Sanskar:Not there..on the bed.
Ragini:No sansku..i like sitting on the chair.
sanskar smiles.
He slowly arranges the injection.by seeing the needle Ragini gets scared.
Ragini:Sansku..why are you taking that needle.
Sanskar:He then brings it near to her.
Ragini was about to run but he held her hand.
Ragini :Sansku..Please leave me..Iam so scared of it..
Sanskar:But Sweetie,this will cure your disease.
Ragini!No sansku.
She tries to escape from his clutches.But sanskar maheswari is too strong.Ragini bites on his hand and starts running.He runs behind her.Finally he got her.he holds her by her waist and made her sit on the chair.
Ragini:Sansku..leave me..
Sanskar:Sweetie..plzz…For me..plzz..
Sanskar’s eyes are glittering.She gets lost in his eyes.Suddenly he gives the injection to her.She was about to shout,but sanskar keeps his hand on her mouth.After finishing the injection,he releases his hands.
Ragini starts beeting on his chest.
Ragini:I wont talk to you.You cheated me.(she pouts)
Sanskar:Sorry Sweetie..
Ragini gets unconsious due to the injection.He takes her in his arms are makes her lie on the bed.
he smiles seeing her sleeping.
(enna sona kyun ,rab ne banaya)(plays as bgm).
He:I promise u Sweetie..I will make you normal soon.
episode ends.
Precap:Randhir…?
Guys..i know its short.but I cant post long ones due to lack of time.But I will try my best to post daily.
Now…i need an actor as Randhir.He us a positive character.bonding with Ragini.So he should suit Ragini aka Tejoos?.Do reply.
N about me..
Myself Abhi.Iam in 10th grade.Iam from Kerala.Would love to have some friends from Kerala.Not only from Kerala,from everywhere.I love making friends.
so how was the episode??
Will post next episode soon.Till then!bye bye..c u..take care..?
76 Comments
If Randhir is love interest I suggest Parth samthan and for sibling I suggest Arjun bijlani…. Awesome episode love my ragsan
Thanku so much?…its not sibling.its kind of love interest..? So I will think about parth
hey dear awesome update…… loved ragsan bond…….
Thankyou so much??
Superb dear n i abhi lam also Kerala
Thankyouuuu,.??
wow..i which class u r?
if not personal)
Hai abhi this is shrilatha aka shri….loved u r ff …I am from Maharashtra but Telugu girl
Yes about. Randhir I suggest parth or Arjun bijlani
Wow,.u r Telugu girl..its my dream to study Telugu..will u help me??
n thank u so much??.
gud suggestion??
Hii abhi episode was really nice and ragsan’s bonding was really cute
I m Ekta . I m in 11 (commerce), I m from Chandigarh. And all the best for your 10th boards
Thankyou so much.wow nice nice??,.
commerce!!!wow..iam gonna take commerce next year…wats your future planning?? Like MBA,CA,bcom CS…??which one
Thankyou so much.wow nice nice??,.
commerce!!!wow..iam gonna take commerce next year…wats your future planning?? Like MBA,CA,bcom CS…??which one??barun is ma fav too..let me check other suggestions
I m gonna try for CA or IAS or maybe both
And for randhir I would suggest barun sobti
Wow..finally I found someone who’s trying CA..actually iam also going to try CA..actually how many years it will take to complete?
It takes 4 to 4.5 years to complete CA if one passes every stage in one go
Awesome dear
Thankuuu?
Mindblowing chappy Abhi.What’s your full name?I’m Anisha from West Bengal’s Kolkata.RagSan scenes r sooo cheeewwtt.Love this innocent kiddo Rago.I wanted to see Teju in this kind of role & u fulfilled my wish 😉
Post soon dear,loving your ff.If Randhir is Rago’s bf then i’ll suggest Sidhant Gupta or Parth Samthan
Hehe..Thanku so much?? its my pleasure!
my full name is Abhirami.
n in which class u r?
yes..he is bf..gud suggestion??
Superb
Thankuuuuu??
Nice randhir like a friend I suggest lakshya keep going
Not friend…kind of love interest..anyway laksh is there in my ff..as laksh itself??
Awesome…Haven’t read the promo yet but will read it soon and about Randhir I suggest Parth samthaan for it
Thankuuuuu?? mostly he wil be Randhir..all r suggestng him?
OK OK OK Abhi was very happy after reading ur frist episode… But now mad do you know why for frist time I got someone who is from kerala… It’s really great wow yaar I’m really so happy at last I got someone who is from kerala… OK I’m coming to ur ff…
Fantastic yaar I loved it core.. Please do continue… I love Ragini so much… So I’m going to love ur ff also…
Wow…u r from Kerala…from which part”??iam from Ernakulam.!
Thanku so so much dear..
in which class r u????
Hahahaha I’m from kasaragod… I must say we very near… Njan fashion designing… Padikkna.. Ninak exam start Aya… My Malayalam is different right…
Hmm..slang ichiri differentaa..?
Hmm.enikk 22ndinn start cheyyum and 8th April theerum…
wow..fashion designing..i love it!
Awesome
And i suggest sidhant gupta as randhir
Thanku so much..gud suggestion
super abhi..nice start…loved it..by the way I’ll suggest Parth for that character..nd all the best for ur board exms..I’m Bharathi..frm Chennai..a Tamil girl..dng my first year clg..
Thankuuu?gud suggestion..
so u r my di
??
its okay..it’s ur wish..u can call me di or anyway u wish..I’ll be supporting for u..take care dear..
hai abhi, I’m also from Kerala but I don’t live in India anymore..I’m a junior(11) in high school…im happy to know that you are from Kerala as well. Which part of Kerala are you from? I’m from kasargod. You nailed the first episode…looking forward to read more of your fan fiction story?
Wow,..now in which country r u??.
iam in Ernakulam..
Now I live in America. I moved to New York when I was 10 years old but I’m very close to my relatives in India.
Wow,..now in which country r u??.
iam in Ernakulam..n thanku so muchhhh??
Yaar kasaragod… Same pinch hahaha… Appoo njamak Malayalam mundam apoo
Njan Malayalam nannayi samsarikilla especially writing Malayalam in English??
Kidukki 🙂
From which state ?
Oops district ? 🙂
Haha..thankuuu…
from Ernakulam ?
Awesome
I completed my studies
And i am telugu girl
Telugu!!wow..i wish to study Telugu ?thankuuu
Superb friend i finished my studies and i am from tamilmadu and my suggestions randhir _ laksh lalwani dear friend
Gud suggestion diii..thanku.??
U r welcome dear friend
Superb epi. I am from tamilnadu. We are neighbours in that case. Nice start.
Haha..yes we are neighbours….thankuuu???
awesome
I’m from andhra
Thankuuu vennii ???
So u kno Telugu na?
Nice
Parth or did
I’m from andhra
Thanku…??..mostly it will be parth??
Nice abhi. I am also a mallu yaar.
Wow..whicch district??me ernakulam?
thankyou?
all the best for ur exam and i had read ur ff yesterday itself but could not comment since i admitted in hospital due to fever and lack of blood in my body. Ragini state was only mine i too scared of injection. U know 3 injection in my hand and needle size is the size of little finger. Shouting like anything my parents got tear in their eye since im only child…. I too like marathi so im learning with app by downloading from playstore u too can do it. By the way im from tamilnadu we are all same family and born to same mother means dravida. Im in the 10 floor of hospital enjoying the racecoarse,coimbatore
Thankuuuu ??….
oh my god…injection!! Even iam damn scared of that..n u got 3 injection..oh no!..and too with thick needle..oh…
Take care yaar…r u fine now??
10th floor…wow…thats cool.
hmm…i will also try that idea..
gud suggestion for Randhir!
I know a littl Tamil too…along with mal,hindi and english.
love u loads…?
i wish to place shakthi arora or harshad arora and i m a junior in higher secondary
awesome dear….oh my ragu s kiddo….i loved her childish act….Sanky s soo caring…..love them…..eagerly waiting for nxt one….
am asra…..doing 2nd year degree….tamil girl….
All the best for ur exam in advance….takecare dear….
randhir character i suggest shravan reddy….
Thankuuuuu…so muvch…
nice suggestion…
looks like all are elder than me!?hehe..
Heya sis welcm to TU again i guess i just read ur story now its a cute unique love story and i really enjoy it and about injection so injection to har larki ka dushman hai ? even i m scared hehehe maheshwari mental assylum sounds cool ? hehehe dp the mental head lol ok so now intro time so Hi its fiza aka fizo i m writer of ragsan and raglak ffs ? 1 year pre medical student hope its done now looking frwd to read ur story an hoping a new one
Oooops i forget to tell i m from Pakistan and parth smarat as randhir character
Hellooo…
thankewwwww
medical student!!too much hardwork is needed na..all the best..
n thanku,.gud suggestion?
awesomee yaar
Thankuuu dii ?
Hi Abhi. I am Riya. Your ff’s new commentor. I am from West Bengal and my city’s name is Asansol. I am in tenth standard and my boards are coming soon. Well the episode is amazing and superb. Waiting for the next episode. Update it soon. And I have a request. Would you like to give your email address to me? Then we will chat there. Actually I also like to make new friends. So that’s why I am telling. If you have any problem then it’s OK. Stay blessed.
Hellooo….mee too 10th…getting mad due to studies..dont kno wat to do…hehe..thankuuuuu…
even I like making friends..
my email id:[email protected]