Hi guys …I m back with 10th episode of my ff …Sorry for delay … I know u guys were waiting for so long … I m really very sorry plsss forgive me for the delay …
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Ab wait nhii karaun gi … episode le lo …
Episode 10 –
Taneja Mansion
Yuvi was watching TV .. just then he heard Twinkle’s voice …
T: “Bhaaiiiiiiiiii ….. Office jaana hai .. uthoo ..” (Standup .. we have to go office)
Y: “Ohh god .. twinkle Seriously I forgot … Thank u for reminding me ”
T: “Ufff bhai … itne bade hogaye ho .. per bhoolne ki aadat nhi gayi ..” (Bhaii .. u r grown up now .. but ur habit of forgetting will never go ..)
Y: “Twinki .. sorry princess …”
T: “Or haan ..abhi me apka room saaf ker ke aayi hun .. kya halat bana rakhi hai …” (I have cleaned ur room just now .. what mess u have created)
Y: “Twinkle… actually vo …”
She cut him in between
“Stop it bhai … u always do that … don’t worry.. I am used to it …”
Yuvi bows down his head …
She continued “Bhaii .. when ur wife will come na … then me sukoon ka saans lun gi .. kyunki atleast mujhe apka room nhi saaf kerna padega ..”
Y: “Ooo hello … madam .. aesa wesa kuch nhii hai samjhii … meri shaadi ho bhi gayi na .. tab bhi mere saare kaam tum hi karo gi ..”
T: “Bhaii … not even in ur dreams ..”
Y: “Ohhh .. we’ll see ..”
Twinkle makes faces …
Y: “Achaa .. now we have to leave for office ..”
T: “Bhaii .. vo actually .. i have some work … u go ..I’ll come after sometime ..”
Y: “Ummm .. okk .. Take care ..bye ..”
T: “Bye ..”
He leaves ..
TWINKLE’S POV (Guys .. I m writing POV for first time .. I don’t know how is it .. but pls tell me .. how is it?)
Bhaii leaves for office .. ohh god .. I have so much work .. first of all I have to go to that place …where Kunj was kept by the kidnapper ….
I took the car keys & left … I don’t know the exact address of that place but I have to reach there somehow …
Aftet about half an hour … I reached a place where it was no one … There I saw a house .. a big mansion … it was easily shown from the condition of the mansion that its very old …The mansion was in the outskirts of the city … I wonder who lived here ….
I started taking steps towards it with an unknown fear in my heart …
I saw that the door was slightly open … I peep through it … I entered inside keeping my fear aside …
It was dark inside .. though it was 2 pm .. but there were hardly any window through which the sunlight can reach …
I said “Anyone is there ..”
No response .. I took few steps ahead and opened my mobile’s torch … As i opened the torch .. I saw dust everywhere … it was a big hall .. everything was there … it looks like though someone lived there long ago …
I started taking steps .. I saw a door … I opened it & entered inside … It was a lavish room … I thought “maybe i can find proofs here or not …” I then thought “Be positive Twinkle .. u’ll find the proofs surely ..”
I opened the wardrobe .. it was empty … i opened the drawers but i found nothing … it was very dusty ..
“Aaaaachiiiiiii” I sneezed .. “Ohhh god .. its so dusty …”
After about 20 mnts … I thought “Babaji … me ne poora ghar chaan maara .. per kuch nhii milaa … kya karun .. kya karun .. babaji kuch to madad kero .. kuch to hint do na …” I was walking down the stairs & my foot slipped … I fell down from the top of the stair and stopped on the end of staircase “Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh” I shouted … My forehead hit the table … and the empty vase that was kept on the table fell down & broke … I touched my forehead … the blood was coming out of the cut … I got a deep cut … I stand up & walked towards the exit … As I passes from the broken vase … A thing captured my attention … I kneeled down & picked something from the broken pieces of the vase…
POV END –
T: “What is this … Babaji .. yeh kahan phansa diya mujhe ….
It looks like a mobile ..”
She examined it carefully …
T: “Ohh god .. ye to bht purane zaamane ka lagta hai .. kya karun .. kese open karun ..”
She pressed different buttons .. atlast the mob opened ….
T: “Wahh .. ho bhi gaya … strange .. bht ajeeb sa hai ..”
She pressed different buttons…. and a video got opened …
In the video .. it was shown …
A little boy was tied to a chair … A man is sitting infront of him talking to someone on phone …
The whole conversation was recorded … The man was aditya .. who kidnapped kunj .. and is talking to Usha .. He was saying that He will kill Kunj if she doesn’t listen to him …
He then said that u have to leave ur family and have to come with me then I’ll leave ur son …
End of the video ..
Twinkle was very happy that atlast she got some proof …. but the video was not clear & the voice was not also clear … Twinkle understood that somehow coz Usha told her all the things …
She kept the phone in her bag .. and leaves from there …
In Office ..
Yuvi was working in his cabin .. just then kunj entered …
K: “Hi Yuvi ..”
Y: “Hi .. How r u .?”
Kunj felt something strange .. yuvi always greeted him by hugging him .. but today he did not do so….
K:(thinks) kahin Twinkle ne yuvi ko kuch bataya to nhii… per achaa hai uv ko pata chalna chahiye .. uski behen kerti kya hai ..”
Y:(thinks) ohh god ye me ne kya kiya … Kunj ko kuch pata nhi chalna chahye .. twinkle ne mana kiya tha …
Yuvi stands up from his seat & hugged Kunj …
Y: “Why r u tensed ..”
K: “Noo .. no .. I m not tensed ..”
Y: “Ummm okk ..”
Just then Twinkle entered the cabin …
T: “Uffff bhaiii … I m so …”
She stopped in between as she saw Kunj …
Kunj also saw her .. they share a painful and intense eye lock … (Sajna Ve plays in BG)
Both were in so much pain ..Their eyes were telling how much they r suffering …. Twinkle’s eyes welled up …
She breaks the eye lock .. and wipes her tears … yuvi was witnessing all this … He can’t see her sister in so much pain …
Y: “Twinkle … ye kya … ye chot kesi .?”
T: “Vo .. nothing bhaii … its just a small cut ..”
Y: “Twinkle be careful ..”
T: “Hmmmm ..”
She looked at Kunj who was looking at her …
She avoided eye contact with him …
Kunj left the cabin without saying anything ..
Y: “Twinkle. Tell me na .. Ye kesay lagi chot ..?”
T: “Bhaii .. vo actually …”
She narrates the whole incident…
Y: “Twinki .. U should have told me … Me bhi chalta tere sath….”
T: “Bhaiii … mujhe ye kaam akele kerna hai ..”
Y: “Acha meri princess .. me haara tum jeeti .. khush?” (Ok my princess … I lost you won … now happy)
Twinkle smiled ..
She comes out of the cabin & saw Kunj talking with a guy …
Her eyes welled up remembering Kunj’s words … She wiped her tears & was about to go from there but she heard the voice of Kunj ..
K: “Hello .. everyone ..”
He gathered the whole staff ..
K: “I want to tell you all something … a very important thing … I know sb ko shock lage ga per mujhe batana hai .” (He said this looking at Twinkle)
He continued “ You know what … ye jo ap sb ko apni boss dikh rahi hai na seedhi saadhi (pointing towards her)itni seedhi hai nhi jitni dikhti hai ….ye kya har ladki hi aesi hoti hai … jhooti,makkar,dhokebaaz … shayad kisi ko yakeen na aaye .. mgr sach hamesha karwa hota hai … ye ladkiyan na hoti hi aesi hain .. har dosre din 1 naye ladke ko apne jaal mein fasanti hain … example hai na .. ye Twinkle Taneja ..
Pata hai is ne kya kiya … nhii chodo .. bechari ki insult hogi nhi batata … mgr 1 baat hai … ye na un ladkiyon ke jaisi hi hai .. jo har din 1 naye ladke ko pyaar jatati hain ..”
(See this is your boss .. she is not that much simple as she is looking … not only she .. but even all the women are same.. liar,vulpine,betrayer …Maybe no one believes .. but truth is always bitter … these women r like this only ..Everyday they trap boys .. example is infront of you Twinkle Taneja … You know what she did .. No leave it … No I’ll not tell .. her respect will be ruined na .. but 1 thing is clear .. she is like those girl who everyday signify their love to a new boy …)
It was enough for Twinkle … She couldn’t help and shouts
“Enough Kunj ..”
Tears fall down from her eyes …Yuvi comes out of his cabin listening to the voices ..
“I never thought u will do this … tumhare pass shayad dil nhii hai .. ya tum nhi jante ki 1 ladki izzat kya hoti hai … Tum waqai 1 heartless person ho … kitne ghatiya ilzaam laagaye hain tumne … tum bachpan ke us 1 incident ki wajah se har ladki ko kyun blame kerty ho …”
Kunj shouts “Kyunki har ladki ek jaisi hoti hai … meri maa ki tarah …”
She shouts “Nhiii … Aesa nhii hai … tumhari maa tumhe khud chod ke nhii gayii thi .. majboori thi uski … Me janyi hun Usha maa ko .. 1 NGO chalati hain ab … Me ne unhein apni maa ki jagah di .. or unhon ne mujhe apni beti ki … “
Kunj: “Ek aurat ke liye uski family se badh ker kya hosakta hai .. koi majboori nhii hoti aesi jo koi apna pareevar chod de ..”
T: “Haan .. sahi keh rahy ho tum .. apny parivaar se badh ker kuch nhii hota … unhon ne ye sb bhi apny pareevar ke liye hi kiya ..”
K: “Just stop it .. twinkle … tum kya samjhii .. tum kuch bhi kahani banao gi or me yakeen ker lunga ..tumhare meri life me aajany se bht kuch kharab hogaya Twinkle … I wish kabhi tum meri life mein aati hi naa …”
Yuvi was boiling with anger .. Twinkle signalled him not to say anything ..
T: “U r right Mr Kunj Sarna .. infact tumhe yakeen kerna hi nhii chahiye … or haan mere tumhari life mein aajany se sb kuch kharab hogaya na to thk hai …3 days .. (she said showing her three fingers) just give me 3 days .. and I’ll prove that Usha maa was right .. unho ne kuch galat nhii kya … and after that I WILL LEAVE YOU FOR EVER … I will go away from ur life … itna door chali jaaun gi ke peechay mudne per tumhara aks bhi mujhe dikhaayi naa de … MARK MY WORDS…”
Saying this she left from there & moves towards her cabin … He too leaves from there & moves towards his cabin ..
They both were crying vigorously …
(Judaai from Badlapur plays in BG)
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (Repeat once)
Aisa bhi kya milna
Saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi
Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena
Tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai
Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe kyun likh di kyun judaai
Gair sa hua khud se bhi
Na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari
Dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein
Bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage
Lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta judaaiyaan
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (Repeat once)
Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke rabba
Lakeeran vich likh di judaai
Phewww … Atlast complete hogayi epi …
Hey guys I want to tell u that I have started a new ff of twinj named a DEVIL falls in LOVE with an ANGEL .. Plsss read & comment …
Or haan is epi pe comment kerna mt bhoolna ….
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Love u loads …❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
19 Comments
Purviiiiiiii di u nailed it it was sooooo intresting plzzzz post as soon as possible
Love u
Waiting for the next part
Post soon
Buy di tc
See u soon ???
Hi jhalli sister… Finally tu agayi…but no pblm.. post to kiya tune. Chal maaf kiya tujha meri janu. OK
Oye jhalli rula dia na last part may..god this epi was too emotional.. And the song is my fav…just loved it..or kunj be kya insult ki twinkle ka..twinj were is to much hurt.. But love twinkle dialogue so much..
OK ur previous epi may mene 1 demand kiya tha tujhe yaad hay yah vul gayi..ok twinj ki office wala romance when there problem will get solve.. yaad rakhna vul na nahi…ok now plzzzzz kripa karke jaldhi post kijiye ga purvi mata…he he..ok
Stay happy and keep smiling..
Love you so much.. Jhalli.. Muaah.
It was damn good and feel sad for twinj hope soon twinkle find the prove to show that usha was innocent and not all girls are same
Purvi
Awesome amazing twinkle got proof
Wowww n kinj wts wrong wid him kya bakwaas bole jaa raha hai
Post soon
Loads of love keep smiling
Today’s episode was Mindblowing I loved it purvi pls post the next asap
Hey its too good loved it
Hey purvi
Missed this ff like hell… Its just amazing… U nailed it girl… Its so emotional… Felt very bad for Twinkle when Kunj insulted her in front of all staff members… Desperate to know how will twinkle prove usha innocent in just three days… Plzzzzzzz next epi jaldi post Karna…
Love you?
nice epi purvi dii
Hey purvi
Hayeee ff kitna pyaaaraa hai. I loved it. Its just amazing ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?I missed it so much.
Waise tu mijhe bhool gayi☹️☹️☹️☹️Mien harbaad tere ff pe comment karti hun. Chal koi baat nahi. Tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi
Next jaldi post kar?
Ohh chiku yrr … I am so sorry .. Actually me me tera name likha tha .. But I don’t know kesy nhi aaya … U know me tujhe bhool hi nhi sakti .. Tum Mujhe har roz yad rehti hai … But phir bhi I am sorry … So sorry ..
Yaar the episode was soo emotional
Kunj behaved very badly with twinkle
Waiting for the next update do continue
Awesome meru ev fan its jst sooo emotional u made me cry yrr srry fr nt commmenting on prev posts of urs u knw I was bzee maafi pls bt pls yrr ye hate pls end it and give some romance of demm plsssss oderwise mere tears kham ho jayenge
Hey Purvi,
Well, I don’t know what to comment as you’ve left me spellbound by this amazing piece of creativity. Seriously, you rocked it Purvi. Stupendously written and the emotions were conveyed magnificently. But this Kunj is too much, without even thinking he said so much to Twinkle, but the reaction of Twinkle was amazing! After all she’s our ‘Sherni’
Also, how’s your health, and if possible post the next episode soon as I’ll be waiting for it 🙂
Loads of Love and Support!
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Wow purvi you nailed it.. the emotions were perfectly described.. but kunj shouldn’t have done that ??.. felt bad for Twinki when kunj insulted her infront of everyone.. but, the epi was amazing as always.. loved it.. do cont soon ❤
Wonderful piece of writing as always Purvi??? all the love to youuuu???
Di it was awesome loved it ???
Wow Just loved the episode … I remember your first episode which was that Twinkle was leaving Kunj … I am waiting for the coming episodes and feeling bad for Twinkle beachare
Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂
Amazing work dear
awesome emotional epi