Hello friends .. I m back … thank you for ur appreciation … I knw I write very boring stories .. but u all appreciate me for my hardwork .. whatever I wrote … Thank you so much … Love u all
Priya .. I have read your comments … nd I am extremely happy that u liked the poem … The request which I was talking about is that only …. I want to talk to u … But u r not registered … so please try once again … why its failing … I don’t know .. but plss try .. as I can’t give u my whatsapp number … So plsss get urself registered on TU … Plsss plss … What is the problem … pata nhi kyun register nhi horaha tera account … u knw me bhi tujhse bhtt bhtt pyaar kerti hun …. BEYHADH .. so plss register hoja … or mujhe nhi pata kya problem hai … but ye mera order hai … toh u have to do this ….
Nd u r ill … Take medicine .. na jaan … ab kesi hai teri tbyat …? Khaayal rakha ker na apna … tu jaanti hai tu meri jaan hai .. phir bhi … teri tabyat kharab hai toh mujhe bhi fever hogaya haiii … or haan priya … agr tera account nhi ban raha .. toh mein bana dun … apni email id send ker dey … taa ke mein password wahan send ker dun … if u don’t mind haan …. I will make the account of yours … jaldi batana haan …
“Tum apni khaas hifazat kiya karo DOST
Beshak saasnsein tumhari hein JAAN toh tum meri ho….”
“Unhein kehna ye tum hi thay jisse hum ko mohabbat hogayi,
Warna hum khud gulaab hain kisi khushboo ki tamanna nhi kertay…”
Bht bak bak ker li me ne …
Yrrr friends listen …. I am so sorry …. Me ne episode kal hi post ker di thi but ye TU waly na … They didn’t post it in TEI page …. sorry for delay …. But mistake TU ki thi …. not mine …. So I am postimg it again in TEI page … ?????????♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥
Chalo epi le lo …
Episode 14 –
Scene 1
Twinkle went towards the boarding area with tears in her eyes … Kunj went to parking lot crying miserably …
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I FALL IN LOVE WITH THE MOST UNEXPECTED PERSON … AT THE MOST UNEXPECTED TIME … she thought ..
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“Twinkle ….was it so important to leave me … why … why u do this …. i can’t live without u” he said in between tears sitting on the car …”
“I know .. i did a very big mistake … not trusting u … was the biggest mistake of my life … mgr us galti ke liye itni badi saza … me mar jaaun twinkle tere bina …” He closes his fist nd hit it with the car ….
“Why twinkle …. I m dying … plss come back ….”
He shouts on top of his lungs …
“TWINKLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE”
Yeh dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Yeh dil tanha kyun rahe
Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye
Kyun rooh meri yeh saahe
Mein adhoora jee raha hun
Har dum yeh keh raha hun
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Andheron se tha mera rishtta bada
Tu ne hi ujaalon se waqif kiya
Ab lauta mein hun in andheron mein phir
To paaya hai khud ko begaana yahan
Tanhayi bhi mujhse khafaa hogayi
Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Khud par hi ek saza hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Ho teri chudiyon ki woh khanak
Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hain
Sunkar ise aata hai yaad
Haathon mein mere zanjeerein hain
Tu hi aake inko nikaal zara
Kar mujhe yahaan se riha
Main adhoora jee raha hoon
Yeh sadaayein de raha hoon
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
Mujhe teri zaroorat hai
(Guys it was 2 am)
He fell down on his knees … crying loudly …
Just then a car came …. Uv stepped out of the car ….
“Kunj … what happened … where is Twinkle …??”
“She left me Uv …. wo chali gayi …. apna promise poora ker diya usne …. chali gayi mujhe chod ke .. hamesha me liye …”
Uv was shocked…
He thought “How could she do this … she left her brother ….”
Tears welled up in his eyes..
“Don’t be stressed Kunj … She will come back … She can’t live without her brother nd without the one … whom she loves … “ Uv said
“R u mad or what … she left me … she left u … I saw her going away from me with my eyes …. nd u r saying that she will come back ..” He shouts .. not in his senses …
“Kunj … plsss .. calm down .. let’s go home ….”
“No .. I will not go …”
“Kunj plss … sambhalo khud ko … We can’t change the truth … she is hurt .. I knw she will come back to u … she loves u ..”
“No uv ,. She said that she hates me … she doesn’t love me ..” replied Kunj ..
Uv gave him support to stand … He makes him sit in car nd left from there …
Scene 2
Twinkle was in plane … she called Uv ..
“Twinkle … how could u do this …. u left me .. u left Kunj … i know uski galti thi per aesy kesy …” uv said
“Bhaai … plss me ne woh kiya jo mujhe thk laga … Or ap bhi uski side le rahy ho ..” crying
“Twinkle …princess … I know u love him ,. Then why u do this … u should have try to solve the issue here only but no .. tumhe to jaany ka bhoot sawaar tha ,.” Uv replied
“Bhaii … I don’t love him .. I hate him …”
“Ohh I see … u r lying infront of me …”
“I m not lying …”
“Then why u left him … tum yahan per bhi reh sakti thi …”
“I left him coz I want him to realize his mistake .,” She replied unknowingly …
“Ohh … why u want him to realize his mistake ..?” asked Uv
“Because I Lo …” she stopped ..
“What I haan … accept na that ,. U love him …”
“Yes .. I LOVE HIM … I love Kunj … I love him ..” she replied breaking down in tears ..
“But … U will never tell him … Promise me….?” She asked ..
“Ok baba .. I will not tell him .. but I will wait for that day when u forgive him nd accept his love…”
“THANKS Bhai …”
“For what …?”
“For understanding me …. I m blessed to have u …”
“No need of thanks .. i m here for u always …” He cuts the call ..
Twinkle looked at her phone nd said “I am sorry bhai … I have to do this … I can’t tell u …”
Scene 3
Kunj came in his room …like a deadbody …
“Me ne kyun kiya wo sb kuch …kyun …. I m hating myself…. I hate myself for hurting u …. Twinkle u did right … bht acha kiya mujhe chod ke … Atleast I can realize my mistake … Meri life ki sab se badi mistake …”
He sits down on the floor …
(English translation is after Hindi lines)
“KITANI MOHABBAT HAI … Ye usi song ki line hai na jo tumne mujhe us din sunaya tha …” he stopped nd took out a photo frame from the drawer .. it was of Twinkle ( guys plss don’t ask me k us ke pass photo kahan se aagayi … mera ff hai kuch bhi hosakta hai is me … hehehe )
“ Ye lines jab me ne suni .,toh mujhe iska matlab samajh nhi aaya …per aaj me iska matlab achi tarah samajh gaya hun ke tum kya kehna chahti thi … He wiped his tears
“Kitani Mohabbat Hai … Ek dil ke liyye duniya …Ek pal ke liye zindagi.. …. Bas itni mohabbat hai ….” He stands up nd sits on bed ..
“Aj mein bas ek pal ki zindagi maangta hun us bhagwaan se jisse na maine aj tak maana or na kuch maanga …. itni mohabbat hai ke aj me usy maan nay bhi laga hun or aj us se maangna bhi chahta hun …Kya wo mujhe 1 pal dega … jb me tumse maafi maang lun …” (Kitani Mohabbat Hai music plays)
“Aj mein bhagwaan se 1 sauda kerna chahta hun …. Apni zindagi ke badle tumhari zindagi chahta hun … shayad tum mujhe maaf ker do .. Agar tum ne mujhe maaf ker diya to me apni pooro zindagi daau per laga dun ga … tumhare liye .. Apni zindagi ka har 1 pal tumhare liye jiyun ga … Tumhari khushi ke liye ..”
“Kehte hain .. mohabbat ke 10 stages hote hain… or un mein se aakhri stage .. wo bhagwaan ki hoti hai … is mein pyaar .. duniya ke kisi bhi ehsaas se badh ker sab se pure emotion ban jaata hai ..”
(He caressed her pic) Music plays
“Jaise ganga ka paani sab se oonchi choti per pohanch ker … sab se pavitar hota hai .. wesay hi pyaar jab apni shikhar per pohanchta hai ..toh sab se pavitar hojata hai …Aj Me vaada kerta hun twinkle ..ke me us oonchai tak pohanchun ga …
Apne pyaar ko uss had tak ley jaaun ga … jahan us mein or ibaadat mein koi farq nhi reh jaaye ga ..Aj ke baad mein apni zindagi sirf tumhare liye jiyun ga … Agr tum pe dhoop aaye gi toh mein tumhari chaaun banun ga .. Agr aasman mein badal garjayn gay toh me tumharu dhaal banun ga .. agr zindagi ke kisi bhi mod per tum ladkhadao gi … toh sab se pehle mein tumhara haath thaamun ga ..”
He wiped his tears …
“Me maanta hun Twinkle … mujhse bohat badi galti hogayi … Me ne tumhari qadar nhi ki … tumhare pyaar ki qadr nhi ki ..Me bhagwaan se sirf 1 mauqa maangta hun … Bas ek pal .. Bas ek ehsaas ..bas ek saans ..”
???????Kese Kahein .. humein kitani Mohabbat Hai … kitani Mohabbat Hai ..!???????
“Jis ke badle mein apni saari zindagi … tum per qurbaan ker dun ga …”
Winds started blowing faster …. He kissed her pic ..
His eyes welled up ..
“Aj mein vaada kerta hun … tumse or us bhagwaan se .. ke aaj ke baad mere jeeny ki wajah sirf tum hogi .. Log marne ke baad apne pyaar ki misaal qaim kertay hain .. Me jeety jee .. apny pyaar ko amar banaun ga … Aj ke baad .. me tumhara haath kabhi nhi pakad paaun ga … Hamare beech chaahy kitni bhi dooriyan hun … chaahe kitne bhi faasle aayen ..chaahe hum dono ek dosre se humesha humesha ke liye alag hojayen … mera saaya humesha tumhare sath rahy ga ..”
He kissed her pic again …
“Yeh Vaada Raha..”
English Translation
“How Much I Love You … this is the line of the same song that u wrote nd sang that night .. right? When I heard these lines … I didn’t understand the meaning of it ..But today, I have understood very well .. what u wanted to say .. How Much You Love .A world for a heart .. A moment for a life .. That’s how much I love you ..Today I ask for a life of one moment …From that God whom I didn’t believe in until now ..nor asked for anything .. I love you so much that I have begun to believe in Him today … And today .. I want to ask from Him too .. will He give me one moment ..? I want to strike a deal with God today .. Against my life .. I want ur life .. May be u forgive me .. if u forgive me .. then I’ll stake my entire life … I will live my life’s every moment for you ..for ur happiness ..It is said that there are ten stages of love … And the last stage is of God ..In this stage, love is greater than every other feeling in the world and becomes the most pure emotion .. Like the water of the Ganga is most pure at the highest peak .. Likewise, when love reaches its peak … it becomes most pure … I promise you today .. Twinkle .. that I will reach that height .. I will take my love to those heights ..where there will be no difference between it and worship .. Hereafter,I will live my life only for u ..If sun falls on you .. I will be your shade ..if clouds thunder in the sky .. I will be ur shield ..if you falter at any turn in life … i will be the first one to hold ur hand .. I admit Twinkle .. I made a very big mistake .. I didn’t appreciate you, your love … I seek only one opportunity from God ..just one moment .. just one feeling .. just one breath .. against which .. i will surrender my entire life for you … Today, I make a promise to you .. and to God .. That hereafter .. you’ll be the only reason why I will live …. people set an example of their love after dying … I will make my love immortal while I live …Hereafter … I’ll never be able to hold ur hand .. Whatever the distance between us .. whatever differences may come .. even if we separate forever..my shadow will always be with you … It’s a promise …
He looses his senses nd shouts “Twinkleeeee …”
He stands up nd throw all the things on the side table … vase fall down nd water jug broke … their were pieces of the broken vase nd jar everywhere …
In the hall
“What sound is this…??” Asked usha …
“I don’t know …?” Manohar replied ..
Kunj broke the mirror of his room … He was not wearing any shoes .. so his the glasses pierced into his feet … Blood started oozing out of his feet …
“Vaaye guri ji .. ye awaazein to kunj ke kamre se aarahi hain …” Babe said ..
“Bebe chal ke dekhte hain ..” Usha said ..
They quickly heads towards Kunj’s room … Door was locked …. Kunj was messing up the room … He was throwing all the things in his room …
“Kunj … what r u doing … stop it …” Shouted manohar ..
Kunj didn’t pay any heed to his words …
“Kunj beta .. stop it …” cried Usha
“Kunj puttar … shaant hojaa …” Bebe said ..
Kunj was continuously blabbering one thing “Twinkle Please come back …”
Manohar called Uv .. He came without wasting anytime …
Uv shouts “Kunj ……” He started knocking the door …
“Kunj … plss open the door …”
They heard a sound of things cracking…
Then after sometime .. there was complete silence …
“Uv beta .. dekh na Kunj thk toh hai ….” usha said crying …
Uv break the lock of the door ….
They all shouted “KUNJJJJJJJJJJJJ ….”
The scenario which they saw was enough for them to break down … Kunj was lying unconscious half on the bed nd half on the ground …. Blood was flowing from his wrist … nd in one hand he was having a glass piece .. He had cut his wrist …
Uv ran towards him ..
“Kunj plsss open ur eyes … what u did haan ..I will never forgive u ….”
He nd manohar took him to the car … they all sit ….nd Uv quickly drove the car towards hospital ..
Scene 4
Kunj was lying on the hospital bed ….
Uv,Manohar,Usha nd Bebe were outside OT … waiting for the doctor …
Doctors were trying their best to save him …
Bebe nd Usha were crying …. Manohar was consoling them …
Just then doctor came out of OT .. they all stands up … Uv quickly went towards the doctor ..
“Doc .. how is he … is everything fine ….”
“Mr.Yuvraj … we r trying our best …but its very critical … its very difficult to save him … there is a huge blood loss …. nd the cut is very deep … Pray to God …”
Usha sits down in disbelief … Uv nd Manohar were shocked …
Doc went inside the OT …
Scene 5
Twinkle was sitting in plane resting her head on the seat closing her eyes …
“Babaji … ye mujhe kya horaha hai … Aesi bad feeling kyun aarahi hai jesy kuch honey wala hai … bht bada … Kunj ke sath kuch bura hone wala hai ….”
In Hospital ..
The heartbeat monitor goes blank … His heart beat stopped …
The screen splits into two ..one side twinkle praying … other side Kunj’s heart beat stopped ..
Twinkle prays “Babaji … plsss Kunj ko kuch mat hone dena … bhale hi mere hissay ki zindagi us ko de dena ….”
Just then she felt ascendant blow …
She heard an announcement ..
“Passengers … Its important to inform u all that the plane’s engine is not working … The plane is running out of fuel ..”
She felt that her prayer has been answered …
There Kunj’s heart beat increases …
After about 15 minutes ..
Doc came out …
Uv “Doc … is he okk ..?”
“Mr.Yuvraj Taneja … CONGRATULATIONS … Its a miracle … His heart beat was stopped before 15 mnts… Nd then it started increasing .. It was like someone’s prayer has been answered …”
They all felt relieved …
“Thanks Alot doc ….” Uv said
“Don’t thank me ….. thank the one who prayed for him …”
“Doc .. when will he gain consciousness …?”
“I don’t know … Maybe 2 .. 3 hours …”
“Okk doc …”
Doc left from there …
Uv hugged Manohar .. nd Bebe hugged Usha ..
“Dekha Usha rani .. hamara puttar ab bilkul thk hai …ab aanso saaf kero …” bebe said smilingly ..
“Haan Bebe .. vaahe guruji ka lakh lakh shukar hai …” Usha replied
“But Twinkle …?”
“Uncle … plss Twinkle jahan kahin bhi hai usy chod dein … we can’t force her …” Uv said ..
“Lekin puttar .. twinkle ko aise jaana nhi chahiye tha …” Bebe said
“Bebe … me kya ker sakta hun … ap jaanti hain kitnj ziddi hai wo … jo kerne ka keh de .. bs ker ke dikhati hai …Mgr wo bht hurt thi …” Uv replied ..
“Galti .. Kunj ki hai … gusse mein us ne pata nhi kya kya bol dya ….” Usha said
“Haan keh toh tum thk rahi ho … galti kunj ki hai …” Manohar said ..
They sit down waiting for Kunj to gain consciousness …
Next Morning ..
Kunj was sitting on the hospital bed .. Usha was sitting on the chair feeding him breakfast …Kunj was holding the glass of water …
Uv was watching TV … holding remote ..
They heard the news anchor saying
“BREAKING NEWS”
Usha nd Kunj turned towards the TV ..
“The Famous Fashion Designer TWINKLE TANEJA … died in a plane crash …”
Uv Kunj Usha was stunned …
Glass of water fell down from his hand … Breakfast tray fell from Usha’s hand nd Remote fell down from Uv’s hand …
The screen splits into three … with Kunj.. Usha .. nd Uv’s shocked+crying face …
Precap:- “TUM BIN JIYA JAAYE KESAY .. KESAY JIYA JAAYE TUM BIN …” 1 YEAR LEAP ..
Soo … friends kesi lagi epi …. or kesa laga twist ….. I hope i have reached upto ur expectations … Next one will be a super blast …
Comments please …!!!
Next Update:- Tomorrow ..!!
Wait for another shock in next episode …
Nd wait for me ..
Note:- No proof reading. Ignore the mistakes ..
Take _Care
Keep_Smiling_Always
Be_Happy
Loads of Love ..!!
29 Comments
Wow wow wow you nailed it
The twist was awesome dear u full filled my request thank you so much
Felt Lil bad for kunj
But iam crying now coz of twinkles death
Plz I can’t bear more suspense
Post next episode and shock soon
Do continue
Thanks alot Sohi … Next epi will be posted by today ..
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The episode was so emotional …. just loved it each emotion was portrayed so well Kunj’s dialogues were just awesome …. God answered Twinkle’s prayers…. I hope she is safe ….
Love you ???
Thanks di ….
Love you yoo ??
Purvi meri jaan, my sissi, my love ❤❤❤ Tujhe pata hai ki 1 momnt ke liye to i thout ki mene kuch galti kardi or tu mjhse angry hai or isliye tune cmnt rply naii kiya its ok but m not angry wid u, and I thout ki leave TU 4ever mns 4ever but I cant stay in a sngel dy widut u & all of urs & evryone butiful ff,coz its made my life, day & mst of imptnt coz of this I found u, And now finally m soo much happy that u rply nt t coz IOLCE
Priya …. how can u even think that i am angry wid h … never meri jaan ….. but 1 thing …. TU chodne ka socha bhi kesy …? Haan ..? How dare u …? I will kill u if u ever leave TU … do u get it …?
Or 1 more thing … tu ne meri bat ka jawab nhi diya ..? Me tera account bana dun …. apna email address send ker day …. plssssss ..plsss
Reply zaroor kerna haan ….?
Love you ..!❤❤❤
Hey purvi aswesome yaar loved it yaar
U know u really nailed the emotions very well
Loved it to the core
The lines made me to cry it was full of emotions yaar
Love u
Muaaa?????
Thank you Presha for ur lovely comment …
Love u tooo
OMG
This was FAB….especially Kunjs dialogues and that kitni mohabbat hai part was AWESOME…you described kunjs emotions so well…I felt twinkle won’t leave him after all this..but what ever is in the store will be something good too
But the leap ?
Anyways waiting for the next chapter
Post soon please
Love u
Thanks alot Liza ….. I know kesa laga hoga sb ko read ker k .. coz even I was crying writing all those things …
Next epi will be posted by today …
Love u too
Are jab tera ff post hua tab rat ke 2 bje hue tha or mai teri ff padh rahi thi us time mene teri rply dekhke khusi ke mare mai meri bed se gir gayi ? thn jmping thn mom said is m gn mad ?? thn i told ki mom kisi CHUDAIL??ne mujhe yad kiya isliye itna khus hu?but itni emtonl epi padke crying agyi or mujhe nini?agyi isliye kya cmnt krdya or haf likh ke post krdya pata naii?And twnki ko marke tuje cain nai mila jo tu mjhe marna cahtahe ? Zalim ourat ?? pgl tjhe kvi chdke ja sakthu vala tu to meri DAYAN hai r8?? And no pblm tu WhatsApp no nai dskti i didn mind it but (fb id) to hoga na but pblm hogi to koi na ? and meri regstr tuhi krde mai to krnese rahi ye lo ji mera email id
( [email protected] ) and post ur ff soon jaan..
Love you ❤❤ my candy crush ??
Priya …. tu to bach ab…. Me chudail dikhti hun tujhe …… tu bhi Dayan hai ….. ?????????
Chal koi nhii … chalta hai pyaar mein …..tu raat ko 2 bje mera ff padh rahi thi .. I m Amazed …. chal acha hai ab tu ne email id de di .. to ab me tera account bana deti hun or haan . Apni gmail check kerti rahiyo …. me password or username send kerun gi wahan ….
Or next epi jald hi mil jaaye gi ….
Tab tak ke liye wait ker mera …
Love u till infinity … ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ My Vanilla … cold coffee .. jaan … jhallii …
Ummmmmmaaaahhhh
Purvi I can say is brilliant and made me ???? and kunj love her lots and as always twinkle prayer works on kunj and precap you show is my favorite song which I never get tired of listening ? well waiting for twist and turn in your ff I hope twinkle is fine and make twinj together soon ??????
Thank u so much
Wow purvi this was Mindblowing very emotional yaar I’m waiting for the shock in the next update post soon and plz unite twinj soon
Thank you Sushmita …
Woaaah!!! Its soooo emotional. Loved it. Lovely. Rullla diyaa tune tohh?????????????
Chaaa koi baay nahi. Jaldi jaldi post kar next plzzzz
Post soon??
Thanks alot dear …. Maaf ker dey … me ne tujhe rulaya …. will post next epi today …
awesome amazing emotional sad epi….
Thanks
So much emotional episode… plzz dont make tw die… plzzz make them unite soon…
loved it.,
Hey Purvi loved it to the core of my heart I am literally crying after reading it you are really an amazing writer and kunj dialogue I loved the most you written it like professional writer but feeling really very sad for kunj and twinkle I know twinkle is alive but I can’t wait to see them together plz unite twinj soon, love you so much ??????
Purvi
Mai kya bolu
It’s awesome amazing beautiful episode loved it
Means d way u showed kunj feelings na r amazing
Aur yeh twist ucfff
I thought dey will unite
But in ur brain something else is running sweetu
I’m ssooooo excited fr precap
Post soon
Loved it to core
Just awesome amazing
Love u keep smiling
It was very emotional yet superb
Awesome twist dear
Liked it
Do continue
That was a very emotional update.. just loved the way u wrote all those emotional scenes
Hey cutie I’m extremely sorry for commenting late actually I’m hell busy with my records assignments projects etc I’m hardly getting time to read ffs and this would continue till 27th Feb my practical exam… Plzzzz don’t mind if I comment late or don’t comment coz of my hell busy schedule… I’ll try my best to comment on my favorite ffs if I fail to do so plzzz add my one comment…
Now coming to epi its just beyond words… Its so emotional and u have very excellently pinned down the emotions… Kunj’s dialogues tho???? loved it????? u just nailed it Priya my cutie my baby… Kudos girl… I just want to give u a tight hug for writing such a amazing awesome superb fab mind blowing epi…
Love you tons???
hiya jaan,
so emotional epi yaar… and I loved the part when twinkle said to give her part of life to kunj… I mean I loved every bit of it
with love,
Urs shona
ohhhhhhhhhhhh god☺
purvi dear sooo cute n emotional♥
hayeee yr how did u portrayed d emotions soooo beautifully☺
sooo lovingly sooo nicely n d dialouges which kunj said
or twinkle usse kya hua
noo it isnt psbl at all……..
love u lods♥♥☺☺♥♥
d emotions were amazing n shocking twist………☺