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Hi….said kabir to girl in the new year party… only back shown of the girl….she turned to see him…..
Tum?? Girl
Tum?? Kabir
Both’s reaction was that.
Haha…both went in flash back…
Kabir beta be ready…we are going to meet you…with your dream girl…she is very nice girl…your and her jodi will be world’s best jodi…I must say you….Mr. Kapoor.
But papa they are live in village….and I studied from London….and you are really thinking that this village’s gawar girl will be match with me….kabir…
Kabir sunil is my childhood friend…we were fix your marriage since your childhood…and I will never break my promise.. OK now we are going to our village…understand…. Said Mr.kappor in angry voice….
Bechara kabir….wasn’t able to argue with his dad…
Kabir beta chal Dekh let’s gain kiya cheez hai woh ladki…kabir thought with smirks…
They reach at mishra’s house…..where all family members welcomed them…while sunil and Mr.kapoor hugged……
Isha and pragya downstairs to saanchi….kabir looked at her…
Her eyes were down…
Then ishgya leaved them alone for talk…but they were pepping them through window.
After some silence kabir started talk..
Hi…..kabir.
Hello ji…saanchi.
Gee??….ohh yeah hello…kabir.
Toh kiya lenge app??… Saanchi.
Main kuch Bhi….kabir.
Jee acha chai(Tea) lenge….she.
Jee thik hai (Ok) …kabir.
She started making tea..suger??
2 spoons…kabir.
Then she confered tea’s cup to him he drunk…
Are you went out side the Village??..Asked kabir
Umm…no…Answered Saanchi…with nodded No
Ohk listen….what I want to say u..Kabir
One minute..can I ask first gii..saanchi.
Ohh yeah sure..Kabir
OK so if after our marriage… I will not want to go abroad.. Do u agree with that??..Saanchi
What??. Listen.. I have planning to go abroad already..kabir
Ohk..she became silent…
OK now listen…I came here to tell you that….dekho….won’t get me wrong… But I feels that will true…as you are not that girl….whom I want in my life….are you getting my point…ohk..so can you plz understand my situation… I’m not interested in you….may be you are nice girl..but not for me… Sorry…kabir
Her heart was broken hardly…but still she was smiling… She was trying to hide her pain behind smile….but kabir wasn’t able to see her pain..
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I’m so sorry Sunil but kabir ko saanchi pasanad nahi aai….Mr.kapoor.
Arrey tumara Kabir kia meri saanchi ko manaa karega saanchi ne hi iss shaadi se manaa kar diya hai…chale jao…aaj se tumari humari dosti khatm…Sunil Mishra
Han han jao jao…humen Bhi nahi karna yahn Rista…Mr. kapoor
They were fighting…while kabir was happy and saanchi was upset.
Fb ends…
Ofuuuu….so friends this was their story…..main toh preshaan hogai…
Let’s see how their story further proceed??.Are You Excited?? Okk Okk Let’s see..
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Present time.
Wow surprise… What are you doing??.. Saanchi.
I’m fine….but u are here… I mean…big surprise…how are you??. Kabir..
I’m good actually I came here with my friends isha and pragya….saanchi.
Ohh that’s good….now you are too different… I mean jab mene tumen pehli baar dekha tha uss se kaafi alag..Kabir
Yeah….actually… Tum ne mujhe jaana hi kab tha..saanchi..
Yeah..kabir.
Well you are still looking very charming like before..saanchi.
He smile….thank you..
Your welcome… Saanchi.
Ohk…so have you any partner?? Kabir.
Umm well not yet…saanchi..
He got Happy… Ohk so would you like to dance with me???… Listen if you don’t mind…Kabir
She smiles…what are you thinking.. Main abhi Bhi uss baat ko lekr bethi hun…hmm??.saanchi.
No I mean I hasn’t mean that…kabir..
So just move on..let’s dance..saanchi.
Ohk..kabir
Then they were dancing on the song of.
In the mid of the dancing… Saanchi whispered in his ears…salsa dance ki champion hoon main…kabir was surprised… And smiled…
After finished the party they were going to their homes…kabir asked saanchi for drop her…bcoz ishagya went in their home along with veer and Garv….they were told her to go with kabir…coz they are going…with their respective partners.
Now kabir and saanchi were going to home by car but in the mid way their car batryard them…now they were walking alone on the road..saanchi was shivering due to cold..kabir take off his coat and put on her shoulders.. They shared romantic an eyelock…
They were walking talking… Smiling.. Having eyelocks in the way….suddenly some goons attacked on them…actually goons pointed gun on Kabir’s head and said to saanchi that Jo kuch Bhi hai jaldi nikal…
Saanchi was scared… Kuch mat krna uss ko Jo Bhi Lena hai lelo lekin un ko chhordo..she is removing her ornaments.. And offered them..
Kabir was just looking at her…he didn’t understand that why sanchi is doing that…
Saanchi What are doinmg this Stop It inn ko toh main….kabir
Tum chup raho kabir..Main handle kar rahi na?? Saanchi
Girl is smart…said one the Goon.
Goons goes but they also hits on kabir’s head by gun coz they didn’t want to kaanchi came behind them….kabir fell down goons disappeared.. Saanchi rushed to hold kabir…
After sometimes… Kabir lied on the grass’s bed…he got consciousness… Saanchi was sat beside him…
Saanchi where we are??? And are you alright?? Where is goons??… Ahh..yeh mera sirr itna dukh kiun raha hai??… Kabir putted hands on his head from backside…
Kabir we are fine…and we are absolutely safe here….she introduced a old man…he is Ramu kaka he helped us and we are in his hut…
Thank you ramu kaka aap ne hum par both pada ehsaan kiya hai…kabir said with folded hands.
Acha ab humen chalna chahiye….raat kaafi hochuki hai….kabir..
OK kabir let’s go shukriya ramu kaka take care of your self….bye..
Beta meri chinta mat karo tum log apna khayal rakhna raat kaafi hochuki hai…..main toh kehta gun aaj rat yahin ruk jao kal subah chale Jana … Tum log yahn ghar ke ander aarraam karlena aur main..dusre kutiya(hut) main aaram kar lunga…Ramu Kaka
Ohk so kabir we are staying here tonight.Saanchi…
Kabir grabbed to saanchi aside…but saanchi I will not stay here…try an understand..kabir
Kabir u know…We have to get experience everything in the life….think about it you were spend every night in the luxurious environment…. Now god is giving us chance to experience this night in this hut … U know I’m very sure about it this night will be memorable night for you…just one night..keep free yourself from all your tantrum… Just enjoy this particular night….saanchi
When saanchi were trying to convinced him…then he was just starring her lovingly…. Then he agreed for stay here..
Kabir burned fire…outside side the Hut then saanchi came beside him Holding glass of tea….kabir…took glass from her hand saanchi sat beside him…both were drinking.. Tea…both feels some awkwardness…. Both starring at the fire….kabir stared at her hiddenly…
Tum boht badl chuki ho?? Kabir
Main toh aisi hi thi humesha se…saanchi
Toh main tumen Jaan nhi paaya..Kabir
Kia farq padta hai…saanchi
Hann..Kia farq pqdta hai…in said and dim Voice..kabir
Saanchi stood he also…both starring at Sky…both seeing stars that shine the sky…
Look at them kabir…how beautiful is looking stars…here you can feels peace… Everywhere silence…. These stars….are appears every nights to shine the sky…it is very pure feeling…. I want to shine like in the sky….u know what kabir every person has special qualities… And they are perfect in their place no one has right to judge them without knowing them…saanchi
I’m sorry saanchi…. But what could I did on that time…mere Bhi kuch sapne hain….mere Bhi Kuch armaan…and I want complete them…so what’s wrong in it??.Kabir
Nothing wrong in that…but we have fulfill our dream without hurt anyone….saanchi
I’m so sorry for that..kabir
Ohh god how many times you say me sorry…. Its okk yaarr..saanchi
He fell happy… Then he came behind saanchi..saanchi were flying her arms..she told him… Kabir just feel the wind…kabir also flied hands…started breathing long…. Then wind was blowing only their faces are shown….then kabir suddenly start starring at her..saanchi was unknown about as such.
In the mid night both saanchi and Kabir were lied in outside the hut…they were counting stars…..
U know kabir the stars are countless but still peoples try to count them just as we are doing now…just like as…many things that are impossible that we know but still we are trying to do that….kitni ajeeb bat hai na??.. Kabhi socha hai aisa kiun??…saanchi said him looking at sky.
Kiun ke humen umeed hoti hai ke hum yeah karlenge…kabir.
Yeah may be you are right….this hope na…Umeed pe duniya qaayam hai…just like as…saanchi.
Hmm..may be…kabir.
Suddenly Weather changed….rain was happened..they stood and rushed to hut….they were drenched….saanchi stood near the window… Kabir was came to her…start starring her lovingly… And gradually raised hand and caressed her hairs…saanchi looked in his eyes….they were shared beautiful romantic eye contact…. Just like worlds every thing pause for them…
First kabir’s eyes shown…then saanchi’s eyes shown…kabir’s eyes..saanchi’s eyes…romantic music played in background… La La laaalaaa hmmmhmm la la laaalaaa
Then Ramu kaka came in their hut and disturbed them…(ohh no guys Ramu kaka ko Bhi abhi aana tha…kitna romantic imagine ke rahi thi main….but koi nahi let’s continue to the story what’s unfolds further)
Bitya…babu aap log thik toh hain na??.. Ramu kaka.
Yes kaka we are fine…saanchi.
Beta yeah bin muasm ki baarish na tum logon ko bimar kar degi..take care of your self..OK?…
OK kaka…you don’t worry….we will manage….now u go and get rest…kabir.
Then kaka went…kabir and saanchi goes for sleep…. They both sleep on the grass…with chadar…both slept so far from each other and turns sides to see each other then smiled.
Night passed peacefully… Even I can say that…haha.
At the morning they both reached on the road for the lift…they bid adieu to Ramu kaka early morning..then reached on the road…
Saanchi was finding network.. While kabir asking lift from others…then saanchi got network…but she got call from her dad…
Hello Saanchi beta where are you?? we are coming to Mumbai… We are in the way…where are you??.. We are coming to fix your alliances with very good looking handsome boy…that is far better then kabir…Sunil.
Saanchi’s smiles faded….the phone was fell down from her hands….kabir noticed it…
Saanchi what happen?? Kabir.
Papa aarahain hain kabir..and he wants to fix my marriage with another person…saanchi.
Tears appeared in his eyes…he leaved and took two step back…
So what you want to do now?? Kabir.
What I want to do?? Jo papa kahenge wahi karungi??..Saanchi
No saanchi you cannot do that?? Kabir
Why kabir why?? Saanchi
Bcoz I love you??.yes saanchi I love you I love you so much…. I was stupid that I was rejected you…u know the whole last only one question was coming in my mind how could I was rejected you?? Without knowing you…. But see how is I’m helpless when I realized my love…love going far from me….. ( he knees down) saanchi will you marry me??
Tears were welling from her eyes…sorry kabir now it’s too late..kabir….papa will never agree..I love you too but that’s Not Possible as of now..saanchi
Both are hugged then sunil’s car passed from there eventually Mr. Kapoor also passed from there…both stopped car’s then comes out from the cars…and broke their hug..
Tum Itna Kaise Gir Sakte Ho?? Mere bety ko phasane ke liye apne beti ka istemal kar rahe ho?? Mr. Kapoor said to Sunil
Mind your language….And by the not my duaghter but your son is trying to trap her…Sunil
You?? Mr. Kapoor
Enough is enough….what are doing this?? Kabir
they both .snatched them..their hands slips from each other’s hands…kaanchi looking at their eyes..
No, no ,no never that girl will not come our daughter in law..Mr kapoor.
But papa he is your best friend na??
He was not now….we are kapoors….hum dosti nibhana jante hain toh dushmani bhi uss se ache se nibhaate hai…Mr. kapoor
And yes get ready we are also going to see girl for you.. And this time I won’t listen no…akhir sunil ko Bhi pata chale humara laakhon main ek hai…mr kapoor
No dad..kabir
Yes…Mr. kapoor
Kanchi were remincing moments that spend with each other… But saanchi was helpless… She came down to meet with ladke wale….while she did long ghunghat according to village rituals… She sat besides the ladke wale….khushboo said to saanchi beta ab ghunght uthaaloo Zara ladke ko Dekho…bcoz saanchi was stayed in Ashok and khushbu’s house…kabir was didn’t knows them.
Saanchi takes off ghunghat she got surprised to see kabir as a boy..
Kabir was too surprised… Then jaya sunil came with laugh…they hugged to Mr. kapoor… Kaanchi was completely shocked…
Papa what was that?? Kabir.
Kiun kiya samjhe??…how was our act?? Asked sunil
Act?? saanchi.
Yes act to units you..to make kanchi.Mr. kapoor
It means that enemy and all that was just an act..Kabir..
Of course… Jaya
But papa how was you know about us?? Saanchi.
Then ishveer and pratish appeared….Through us…budhu.
Means?? Saanchi
Beta it was all our plan to unite you…pratish and ishaveer leaved you alone it was our plan….your tyre puntured it was our plan….and see God also takes our side and united you…beta We were knows that you are made for each other but didn’t realised that before that’ y we decided to do that….Kusum
Kaanchi looked at each other.
Now are you waiting for mahurat just purpose her for marriage we all want see your proposal…isha said in excitement.
Then kabir holds saanchi’s hand and start saying…
Saanchi I wish like this our fan writer united us…I wish in this new year rashmi sharma will unites us she
will give kanchi pair to all our diehard fans….I wish this new year will bring lot of happiness for us…I wish our all TU writers write more ff on us……and this is happen when you will be with me… So will you be mine fore ever..are you ready to fulfill our die hard fans demand?? Will you marry me??Would you love me like you do now??.Will you be my better half?? Would you allow me to come in your life?
Saanchi nods yes…
Kabir smiled both hugged..
While all family members clapped…
They end.
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