Has she made for me?
At 8 pm kalighat road , Kolkata
The road is busy like other days when our hero is returning from office in his car. When his car stopped at traffic signal , he was busy on his phone when he listened a knock on his car window. When he looked towards it he saw a mid twenty girl has hold a baby on her one hand very protectively and other hand she has hold some bunches of flowers. The girl is looking very simple but a glow or charm was coming from her face. I don’t know from when I was staring her but I came back my sense when I listened her melodious voice.
Girl: Sir you will buy some flowers ?. You can give it your any special one. She will happy to see the flowers. It will bring a smile on her face when you will give it to her.
Sanskar: I don’t know why? But I laughed at her talk. She is so innocent. I bought some roses ? and gave her 100 rupees but she returned me 50 rupees. When I denied she told me to give it some needy person who really need it and leave from there . I was impressed by her thoughts. This time traffic cleared and i leave from there. When I entered in hall everyone was seeing me like I am an alien who has come from other planet. I irritated by their expression . So I thought just ignore them and turned to leave my room when my mom called me from my back
A.P: Beta today you are fine or anything has happened with you
Sanskar:( in a irritated tone) mom I am fine. But why are you asking me like this?
A.P: Because today you have brought red roses ? with you
Sanskar: So what is the problem in it, mom
A.P: I never see you fond of flowers specially red roses ?!
Sanskar: Mom its too much I never fond of flowers that doesn’t mean I hate it. And I have brought it for you. ( gave it to A.P and left from there)
Parineeta came near to A.P : Mom I am feeling you will get your daughter in law very quickly.
A.P:I am feeling same also
Sanskar: A successful businessman in Kolkata. He is now only 25 years . He has achieved all success in a very short time period for which he has set an example for others. Very quite person for outside but in home he is a fun loving person who enjoys his life fully.
A.P : A widow and mother of Adarsh and Sanskar. She is broad minded and very caring in nature
Parinita : Wife of Adarsh and bhabi or sister in law of Sanskar. Same nature like A.P
Ankita : Sanskar’s niece and a 5 years old girl.
Next day Sanskar has stand in front of Ankita’s music school with Ankita. Before one month she has taken admission of this school because this is the one of the best music school of Kolkata and I have come here to meet her favourite music teacher. I don’t tell you na she is very stubborn like me and I can’t also deny her. So now we both have stand in front of her classroom .
There a girl has stand where we are seeing her back . When Ankita called by her name she turned towards us. I saw a beautiful girl or I can say I never see a beautiful girl like her in my whole life . She came near us with having a sweet smile on her face . When i saw her i am feeling like i have seen her some where. But i couldn’t recognise it so I stopped thinking about it. But I don’t know why her every single step my heart was beatings very fastly . When she reached near us Ankita introduced me with her.
Ankita: Swara mam( yes the girl is our Swara) meet my chachu Sanskar Maheswari and chachu she is my favourite music teacher miss Swara Bose
Swara: Hello Mr Maheswari. Ankita everytime tell about you. Finally I met with you
Sanskar: Hello and same as my case too. In home she only talk about you. I must say in this short period you both have created a great bond.
Swara: Thank you. Its all because of Ankita . She is such a cute girl who can stay away from her( pulled her cheeks cutely where Ankita hugged Swara which was just showing their bond.
Swara: ( to said Sanskar) Excuse me Mr Maheswari now I have a class. If you don’t mind can I leave now
Sanskar: Ya ya sure why not. I am also getting late . So having a nice day miss Bose
Swara: Same to you Mr Maheswari and left from there with Ankita
One week has passed . After that meeting I never meet with Swara because I was busy on my work. I am dealing a project if I will crack it then my company will get 200 crores profit from this project because now I am dealing with world’s one of the top company. If i will be impressed on my work then I can get it easily. For this the whole week I have spent on this project. Today is the meeting. So last night I have personally checked all things because I don’t want any mistake for which I will lose it. Now I have stand in front of a flower shop to buy a bucket of flowers ? for my clients. I chosen lavender for this occasion because it is good in smell and will look classy at this purpose . When I was busy on my buying I saw Swara was also buying some red roses. When she gave money to the shopkeeper first he was denying but after sometime he kept money from her. I don’t understand anything why the shopkeeper was denying to keep money from Swara? So when she left from the shop I asked him why he was denying to keep the money and what did he give me the answer I was shocked to listen it.
Sanskar: You have known this girl ( the shopkeeper gave me a weird look) I mean why was not you keeping money from her?
Shopkeeper: Because for her my shop has reached at this place. 3 years before when I got to know my wife is suffering in brain tumour . At this time I don’t understand anything . How I will manage my shop with my wife’ s health. Because she was needing my time . But I was also needing money for her treatment . So for this I couldn’t give my time to her . This time she came to me and said ” you don’t worry uncle you take care of aunty and I am taking responsibility of your shop and then your all Problem will solve” . And from this day she has fulfilled her all responsibility on right time . She sells flowers ? at evening on road because morning she does her job. She is a very mature girl. Before 5 year she had come here with a lady. And the lady died after giving birth a baby girl . And now she is leaving here with this baby girl. I don’t know what has happened with her but sometimes I feel she belongs from a descent family. When I ask her about this she avoids it everytime. So now I don’t ask her about it because I don’t want to trouble her more.
Now Sanskar remembered that night he saw her on road who was selling the flowers ?.
Sanskar: But why did she buy these flowers ?. Today is any special occasion.
Shopkeeper: Actually before 4 years this lady had died on this day . So every year today she buy red roses and go to this graveyard ( pointed his finger at a place which is present a little distance from this shop) to give it to her.
Sanskar: Thank you ( before left he saw towards the graveyard again and moved from there)
At office 10am
Sanskar has waited for his client on the entrance with his some employees. At this time an BMW reached at the entrance gate from which a mid 50 years man and a mid 20 years girl came out from it . She came near the man and entangled her right -hand with the man’s left hand and giving her s*xy look to everyone. She wore a black colour sleeveless tight frock which was barely covering her thighs . And her upper part was exposing by the high cutting v- neck . I just ignored her and welcome to my client Mr Gododia who is one of the world’s top ten industrialist . Now I will deal with him . If I will impress him by my presentation then i will be got this project . Then my dream will fulfill being an india’s no. 1 youngest businessman. I welcomed and gave that lavender bucket to him. He passed it to that girl.
Sanskar: Welcome Mr Gododia to Karma industry.
Sekhar: Thanks Mr Maheswari and I must say you are having a beautiful office. I have heard your name how you have achieved this position in this short time duration . And I am impressed by you Mr Maheswari. ( pointed his hand towards Kavita) and btw meet my PA miss Kavita Malik
Sanskar: Hello miss Kavita
Kavita:( in a husky voice) hai Mr Maheswari
I gave him a smile and took him my conference hall where all board members are present. Everyone sitted on their respecting chair and after some minutes the meeting has started. When I am giving brief idea about my presentation there Kavita was just staring me which is irritated me more. But I thown out all the thoughts in my mind and concentrated on my meeting. When I finished my talk everyone clapping for me. Mr Gododia came and handshake with me
Sekhar: I am really impressed by with you Mr Maheswari. And I am glad this time I will work with you. So from today this project is to be yours. So all the best Mr Maheswari.
Sanskar couldn’t believe he has got his dream project. Now he can’t express his feelings. Now he is top on the sky .
Sanskar: Thank you Mr Gododia to trust me. I never break your expectations.
Sekhar: I believe on you Mr Maheswari
Sanskar: Thanks again. And tomorrow evening I have kept a party for the success of the deal in my home . If you don’t mind then you will join me at 7 pm
Sekhar: Ok then its done. Tomorrow i will see you on party
Sanskar: Thank you Mr Gododia to keep my talk
Sekher: Its ok young boy . Don’t be so formal. Now onwards we are partner. Ok
Sanskar: Ok ( without Sanskar all left from there)
After one hour everyone left from office. But I am present here in my chamber for some urgent work when I listened a knock on my door. I watched my clock it is 9 pm. Till now everyone left from office so who is present at this time in office.
Sanskar: Yes come in . then the door opened I couldn’t believe on my eyes here miss kavita has stand near the door. I couldn’t understand anything why has she come here? And how did she know I am present in office? When I thought about it I don’t know when she sitted on my table in front of me . I came back from my thoughts when she trailed her finger from my forehead to my lip. I thrown out her finger from my face and said in a stern voice
Sanskar: In this time you are in my office. Anything emergency miss kavita
Kavita: ( in a husky voice) ya I am having some problem in my heart ♥ ( pointed towards her heart which is hardly covered by her v – shape neck piece dress)
Sanskar: ( irritated by her talk) so what can I do ? For your information I am not a doctor. So go to a hospital and check up your heart. Now leave from here
Kavita: How will I go when I know myself the problem can solved by you then why will I go to hospital . ( came to near his ear and said) I want you for a night . I will give you the pleasure which you never get from anyone.( Sanskar eyes wide opened to listening her talk . Now his anger is on his peak. ) I never see a handsome man like you on my life . Touched his chest and again trailed her finger from chest to his arms which has perfectly toned by exercise. ( gave her card and said ) this is my card . Whenever you free just call me. Your one call and I will in front of you baby ( started to leave from there)
Sanskar: Wait a minute miss kavita ( while going to near her) thanks for your compliment( kavita gave a smile where unknown the fact that after sometime she will heavily insult for her act) kash I would also tell the same thing for you. But I can’t tell it. Because some days before I have met with a girl who is more beautiful than you or I should say for me she is the most beautiful girl in this earth . ( tore her card thrown it on her face) never do this things with me understand. I am not that type of man who will impress to see your body. Never cross your limit in front of me. ( come near her ear said) now leave from here . ( come back to his real position said loudly) get out( showing his finger towards the door) Kavita felt insulted by his act and immediately leaved from there
Next day evening all has gathered in Maheswari mansion for the party. Its a private party so everyone have dressed in formal manner. Sanskar has wore black pant, white shirt with black coat. He is looking breath taking on this look . Where every girls are drooling over him but he is least interested about them. When everyone were enjoying the party but he has waited for someone or we can say special one. At this time Sekher came with kavita near to Sanskar . When they were engrossing their talk but Sanskar was looking towards door when she will come . Yes he has waited for Swara. Today he wants to introduce her with his family. Now he does not want to wait more. So knowingly he has ordered flowers ? from this shop where she is working. And till now she doesn’t come. At this time a girl entered to the hall holding flowers ? on her hands. When Sanskar saw her he forgot to taking his breath. First time on his life he want to complementing a girl. There she has stand wearing a red anarkali suit. Her free long silk hairs are touching her waist and she is not having any make up on her face. He was thinking Without makeup how can a girl looking so beautiful and here all girls has done with a high makeups on their faces. Swara is searching sanskar to hand over the flowers and leaved from there. When she saw him she came towards him but in middle she stopped and her eyes wide opened. Sanskar don’t understand anything so he will get for his answer he looked towards the source where he got same expression from Mr Gododia. Now I don’t understand anything why they are behaving like this. They have known each other from before. I would understand anything I saw Mr Gododia was going near to Swara where she stopped him by showing her hand. She immediately hand over the flowers to a waiter and left from here. After some seconds Mr Gododia also left the party.
Sanskar: Oh god I never understand this girl. Why was she behaving so weird today ?Why I am feeling Swara and Mr Gododia are having some connection between them . At that time I listened two persons were talking about Mr Gododia
1st person: Are Mr Berma the girl is Mr Gododia’ s daughter Swara Gododia na
2nd person : Ha Mr Mehta she is Swara Gododia who has leaved her house before 5 years.
Now I am shocked to listen their talk . Till now I was thinking she is just a music teacher of my Ankita and who is having a golden heart for which I have fallen on love ❤ with her. Now all of sudden she was introduced in front of me she is Swara Gododia. But the big question is When she would get everything from her father why is she living a middle class life. And the little girl what is her relation with Swara ? Now I am confused. Only one person can clear all confusion that is only Swara. So tomorrow I will meet with her and she will bound to give my all answers. So I kept all my thoughts in one side and attend the party.
Next day I have stand in front of her table in staff room where she was avoiding the eye contact with me which was giving me a pain inside my heart.
Sanskar: I want to talk with you
Swara: Now I am busy Mr Maheswari. Can we talk later?
Sanskar:( a stern voice) I want to talk about Mr Gododia.so can we talk about this matter.
Swara looked at him sometime then nodded her head.
Now they both are present at a park near the school.
Swara:( crossed her hands near her chest) why have you brought me here ?
Sanskar: I want some answers without it I will be a mad
Swara: I am listening go on
Sanskar: Who are you? If you are Swara Gododia then why are you living there? Who is the little girl? What is her relation with you? Please tell me ..
Swara: Finish. I listened all your talk so now I am going. Because I am not bound to give you any answers. So by Mr Maheswari ( and started to leave from there)
Sanskar: ( hold her arms very tightly like he doesn’t want his life go away from him ) no you can’t go before giving my answers . And yes you bound to give me answers ( now he cupped her face in his palm) swara I don’t know what has happened with you? But trust me I will heal your all wounds . For only once can you believe me I really want to heal your wounds by my love.
Now this is it for Swara first thing she never allow anyone to close her and now he told he loves me . The love word which is irritated her more
Swara: What did you tell now ? The big business tycoon love a simple girl ( think something) wait a minute no you don’t love this simple girl you love Swara Gododia which information did you get from last night.
That is it for Sanskar. He loves her so much from the day he has seen her but now she is blaming his love which he can’t listen
Sanskar:( hold her arms very firmly) stop it Swara just stop it. You have no rights to blame my love. What did you say I love you because you are Swara Gododia. So for your kind information I love you from the staring day when I have seen you in the academy. I really love you. Everytime your kindness and caring nature attracted me towards you. I love you Swara I really love you. Why don’t you see my love Swara.
Swara:( throw out his hands from her arms ) because I hate you . I hate you Mr Sanskar Maheswari ( sanskar closed his eyes don’t want to listen it from his love’s mouth . Its paining. A lone tear flowed from his eye) . I hate all businessman in my life . So I hate you. You want to listen my answers na then listen yes I am Swara Gododia the daughter of famous businessman Sekhar Gododia ‘s only one daughter. And why am I living that place because my father have no time for me . He is busy with his business he has forgotten he is having a family. For him only my mother died by depression. And your last question who is the little girl? Then the girl is( said with a chocking voice) my father’s illimate child. She sitted on ground with a thud . First time in this 5 year she is sharing her sadness with someone. How many days would she keep it in her heart. Now she is tired to hide it from everyone . Now she wants some piece. Here Sanskar condition is also same . He doesn’t understand how to react on this situation where Swara continued her story
Swara: I was 7 year when my mom died . I am cried a lot because now I was alone in the mansion. After some days my dad came with a lady and told me now onwards she is my care taker. Only for this I will thank him because for him I had get sumi maa. She is treating me like her own daughter. I love her so much and she also loved me. You know for me only she never married in her life . When I tell her about marriage everytime she tells me, ” mujhe bhagwan ne tumhe de dia to phir Mein shadi kyun karu. Mujhe ab apni jindegi se aur kuch nehin chahiye. Mujhe sirf meri Shona beti Ki pyar chahiya” . You know we were happy to get each other. Yes sometime I feel bad because my papa is having no time for me but her love heel my all wounds . I loved her like my own mom and she loved me like her own daughter. But that night everything snatched from me. I never forget that night in my whole life .
Flash back start
28th Jan 2013 I had been attend my farewell party. This was my last day in my college. I am very happy because after my college I was wanting open a music academy with my maa’ s name . Because she is my first teacher in music. For her now I have seen this dream. At 1 am I returned from party but for my surprise today my maa did not wait for me near door. First I thought she will sleep today but I know my maa she never sleep without see me. So for checking I went inside her room. But what did I see I couldn’t believe my eyes . My mom lied on floor in fully naked . She was having many wounds on her body like she tried to protect her dignity but she couldn’t do this. Now she was unconscious. I covered her in a blanket . Tumhe pata hai mujhe kuch samajh nahin araha tha. Yei sab kaise Hua kyun Hua when I saw my father has slept on bed in fully drunk. Us waqt mujhe pata chala yeh sab papa ne kiya hai. Next day when I confronted him and telling him to take maa’s responsibility. He denied it because his status Is more important than anything. And he can’t spoil his reputation for maa because for him she is a care taker. From this incident I lost my maa somewhere ( while saying this now she is crying loudly). After one month I got to know she is pregnant. I told my father to accept my maa and give her rights on society but he never listen me. So I took a decision and left my dad’s so called palace for everyday. Then I had come here with my maa. After 8 month she gave birth a baby girl. But that day she left me for ever. She had died this day in this hospital. I lost my mom again. I became an orphan again for him.
Flash back end
( now sanskar is having tears in his eyes . Now he could feel her pain which she has been through her all life. Now he want to heel this pain with his love, care and affection) .You are listening, for him only I have became orphan two two times in my life. First he snatched my mom then my maa. If he didn’t have time for my mom then why he was marrying with her and who had given the rights to snatching her happiness. Every businessman same like my father. They don’t have time for their family . So I hate all of them. You listened I hate you, I hate you, I hate you and ran from there.
Sanskar had stand there without any emotions. He didn’t understand why is he getting punishment for this which he never do. He sat on a bench . Everytime her words were echoing near his ears.” I hate you , I hate you. , I hate you”. He immediately closed his ears of his hands. No you can’t do this with me Swara. You can’t. First time I love someone from my heart and you are rejecting me because of your father. But I am not like your father Swara , you listened I am not like your father. And trust me I love you. I never ever ditch you in my life.
Sanskar ‘s pov start
Today I got to know about her. She has get pain from her childhood which is not cure so easily. But I know my love to be cure her all wounds. Love is a medicine in which all the wounds are cure. But now main problem will she believe me ? Can she trust me when so many things have happened in her life. Today I saw her eyes where I got only hatred for me or I can say for every men. Everyone say that love and time heel all wounds. Can my love heels her wounds? But its also true sometime some pains can’t heel by love and time. Now her condition is same. She has suffered so much from her childhood. Now I have stand in a position where my heart is saying believe yourself u can less her pain where my brain is saying she hates you . Her hatred never change for you. So forget her and move on in your life. My heart is saying you don’t read every love story is having a happy end . You love her truly so your love story is also end with in happy mode where brain is saying this is only happen in stories and dramas. In real every love story end in a sad end like hirranjha, kedargouri love stories have ended in a sad mode. Now I have situated at this point where I don’t understand what is right and what is wrong. Should I forget her like a dream or should I try to make her trust on me ?
Now only one question come on my mind , ” Has She Made For Me ?”
Sanskar’s pov end….
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Now its upto you what you want further in this story
1) sad ending means the story is ending here or
2)happy ending means you want one more part.
So through comments tell me your opinion. I will go with majority.
87 Comments
Happy ending
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Nyc dear
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Wanted pls post next part
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Dear u didnt showed sanky as a bad person or like that he hurted swara… swara is having misconception that every businessmen dont have time for their familiess.. soo i think sanky can change her mind.. with his love and care.. becoz u wrote awesomee.. and sad ending i dont think its needed.. other things r upto u ?
Thanks rabia and I will try my best to give you a nice end. Thanks again
Awesome.really superb yaar.just need 1 more part. Happy ending. Plzzzzzzz. Nd ya it was really gud.
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happy ending
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Awesome dear…But I feel that u should show sanskar healing her wounds and making her live her lifehappily…she shld even confront her father…This is just my pov dear…but whatever u wrote i loved it..u portrayed swara’s emotions so well…
And for this os sad ending is not needed as Sanskar is not at fault and swara hating him is due to her father..So he must win her heart with his love
Thanks dear and I will think about it
Happy ending plzzz
Becoz it was so nice
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I want one more part please and happy ending
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Happy ending
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Hey seema ur again bck… It was amazing ??? i need happy ending or else i will kill u???
Thanks dear and plz don’t kill me. I am a little jaan dear. How can u kill me ? ( pout)
Then hw cn u give abrupt ending in ur os???
So continue lil girl??
wow!!!!!
just loved it !!!!!!
post asap……
ya happy ending……
tc……..
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happy ending
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Happy ending plzzzz. Swara is in misconception. She is thinking all men r same. Sanskar should make her realise that all r not like his father. He has to show his care. Love to her n should make her forget her past n give her happiness which heals all her wounds. Will be waiting for next part.post asap
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Wawww !! Seema, it’s awesome dear.. loved it., i agree with Rabia Di.she is just having a misconception due to bad memories of childhood..Hope Sanskar will erase them n give her love n exactly what she deserves.!!
Continue soon with the next part! Thnk u… ;-*
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Happy ending plz plz….update next part soon….take care….
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omg!!!!!!! Seemaaaa….. it’s the best story of you i ever read…
well…..how can you stop here when Sanskar even don’t try to prove his true love for her..
He don’t give any effort to his love yet!!!! ganbatte Sanskar!!!!! Semangaatt!!!
Thanks dear ?. What is the meaning of last line?
hmm….. maybe it’s kinda when you yelled Jaihoo!!! in hindi 😀
well ganbatte is japanese meanwhile semangat is indonesian lang
Happy ending
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Of course… I want next part… Bcoz sanskar had not done anything… It’s her thinking that every men are same..so I want sanskar to heal her…. Update soon dear…
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its Awesome!!!!!!!!!
swara is having misconception and u shld clear it she is thinking tht all businessmen are same.she is misunderstanding him so sanskar shld heal all her wounds bty his lovee <3
its amazing <3 🙂 😉
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awesome
happy ending
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Hey dear u showed swara emotions clearly same way show sanky love heals her pain and removes her misconception, there is no point in sad ending actually it seems to be incomplete na, let show sanky proves his love for her ☺
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Hey seema!!! Loved this story but i prefer happy ending bcs sad ending is already done with this part…now u may show sanskar healing swara’s wounds..like that…truely loved it dear
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Awesome ….i want happy ending
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Awesome and sanskar deserves a chance to prove his love so no sad ending
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awesome..my answer is 2
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Its really awesome
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Amazing…… Happy ending
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pls give a happy ending and the os was amazing ?
Thanks and I will try my best
Loved it..
Y r u even askin abt happy ending???
Ofcrse we all want happy ending…
His love n care can heal her ???
Do post soon
Thanks dear and I will try to post it soon
Thanks dear and I will try to post soon