Hey fellas……how r u all?……I missed u all soooo much……I know I Hv been out for long…..but I really needed to clear few things off my mind……so here am I….with another instalment of MY MAFIA KING…..do read & let me know ur views…..this one’s dedicated to sathya,aadia,aastha,sweety & Jessie…..love u all & happy Diwali….lastly kindly ignore typos & grammatical errors…
Njoy d ride guyzzzzz…
Radhika’s POV
I don’t know what time is it….but looking out d window it’s dark ….as dark as my life…..it’s been hours since I Hv been crying …all scared!!!….& alone!!!!….how could this happen all of a sudden…..could this be real ….or am I dreaming…..of course it’s real….as real as my life………it feels as if I Hv lost everything in a blink of eyes……love,family,trust,hope….everything….huuuuh……who am I kidding…to loose all this I should Hv thm at first place……LOVE!!!!….dad could never love me…he never considered me as his daughter…..he always saw me as d reason for my mom’s death….he always thought I bring bad luck & death where ever I go….that I don’t deserved to be loved…..no one could love a girl like me…..may be….may be he was right……even though nisha mom(radhika’s step mom) was never bad to me…..but she could never love me like my mom…..Saral ……he was d only one whom I thought of all d people loves me truly……how wrong I was…..even he didn’t loved me…..my dad….d one for whom I did everything…. To make him happy….to make him proud…. To make him love me….everything…. Gave me to a stranger….that too a MAFIA devil……I was just a deal for him…..& nothing…….d only one who cared for me was Sam….even I dragged her in this shit…..what am I????….a whom no could love??? ….is that what my dad believed????… Is that how everything ends????….me being here….with these people???…. Monsters like jai & Arjun???…is that my fate????…suddenly I felt fresh tears forming in my eyes…..all this time I wanted to ask God only one thing….only one thing……”what have I done to deserve all this???????…..t..tell me….tell me…please…p..please”…….I don’t want to be here….I dont….
suddenly there was some moment outside d door….I could hear footsteps…my breath hitched……who it could be….jai????….w..what if it was jai….no…no…panic striked me ….tears started wailing up in my eyes….I quickly looked around & grabbed a vase in my hand……sitting along d bed….crumbled like a ball….my whole body was shaking……when door opened…& someone entered…..I heard footsteps coming towards me…..but I couldn’t dare to look up & see…..who it was…..tears fell over my shaking hands…..suddenly whoever came in stopped near d edge of d bed…..I Sat there looking down for a while…..when I didn’t hear anything …..I looked upwards & saw a pair of black eyes looking at me…..they were as cold as I Hv seen them before…..emotionless…..blank….but dark & evil…..suddenly realisation struck me & I knew who it was….& his name rolled over my tounge..”A..A..ARJUN”..d one who scares me to death….d devil….d MAFIA KING…..fear engulfed me….he want to kill me or even worse….I know why he is here……..he will ruin me…..suddenly he took a step towards me….& I started crawling along d bed….my grip tightened over d vase…..no …no….I wouldn’t let this devil touch me…..I wouldn’t….. Thinking all this I kept shifting….when suddenly he yanked me towards himself with such a force that I yelped in pain…..he held my arm in death grip….his eyes as if daring mine to look down….my heart started beating like high pitch drum….I started breathing heavily…. His stare actually scared me to death……….I quickly held myself together… & tried hard to wiggle out of his hold…..but ……uggggggggh……no use….tears again started rolling down my eyes as I felt helpless…i don’t know from where did I get this much courage…..but……I tried to punch him ……I slapped him with my free arm over his chest…..but he didn’t even flinched a little….as if it was bee sting for him….I quickly bent a little & gripped vase which fell over d bed & tried to hit him with force over his head….but due to my height it landed over his shoulder with quite a force……. But he didn’t blink……now I started trembling…tears still rolling down my cheeks…..I was feeling helpless against him….no….I …i…won’t quit this easily….& I spoke…” U bastard….leave me……I said leave my hand……”….suddenly there was amusement in his eyes for a sec…..or something else….but whatever it was he quickly wiped it off….a scowl appeared on his face…but still he kept his grip tight….& suddenly there was a loud …thump….& I felt my cheeks sting like hell….I felt hell pain in my jaw….he…he slapped me…buckets of tears started filling my eyes…..I felt hurt…it’s not that I expected something bttr from him but………suddenly he yanked me closer to himself & muttered…. ” now…now….I would watch my mouth if I were u……’little regina’.. Or who may know u may end up dead in a few sec…..” Saying this he started moving his fingers gently over my cheek…..caressing d part where he hit …..as if I’m made of wool…… & said in a husky voice “Lei sarebbe certamente la mia morte” ….i didnt knew what it meant….or what language it was……but these words made me feel weird …..something different…..i dont know why but i had this sudden urge to look straight in his eyes…….as soon as i did I thought I saw his features soften a little when Suddenly his eyes grew darker & colder & he muttered next…” I hv a little paitence woman & I don’t repeat my words …u bttr remember this….” saying this he tightened his grip over my hand…..he was standing so close to me tht I could hear him breathe….his face was just few inches away from mine…he kept staring me…..I quickly looked down…….whereas he kept holding me tight as if he owned me……
something churned inside me….I gulped in fear….when suddenly a lone tear rolled down my cheeks ….& fell over his fingers….. Thts when I noticed a mark like a watch made by teeths over his wrist….there was some dry blood surrounding tht area…..thts when realisation sunk in tht I was d one responsible for this …..i instantly looked up at him……he as if knowing my thoughts gave me an angry glare…..I quickly looked down in fear & muttered between my sobs …”m..my hand ….it’s hurting…………p…please”…saying this I again looked in his eyes with my teary ones….he kept looking for long… But didn’t said a word….after few sec he left my hand with a jerk….making me fall over d ground…..he thn called someone….after a min or two someone came in with a tray of food in thr hand…he gave me a look & said ” eat”….I quickly got up & muttered “why?……why me?….I didn’t hv anything to do with all this” My voice cracked…..he kept a plain face & muttered “eat”…now I lost it & yelled ” answer me dammit….why?…why did u do this to me?”….he quickly came towards me , pulled out a gun …& placed it over my Temple …..his eyes were d coldest one I Hv ever seen….I quickly closed my eyes in fear…..when he pressed it further against my skin & muttered…” What Hv I told u abt my patience…. Huh?….”….suddenly door burst open & I heard footsteps….. After sometime I heard Neil…” Arjun…..put down ur gun…..Arjun….”…hearing his voice I quickly opened my eyes….seeing him there a type of relief washed over me….when he looked at me …..our eyes met for a sec….& tears again made their way down my cheeks…..when after few min Arjun didn’t moved d gun…Neil came & stood between us & said..” Arjun…..u know she is not involved in this…..calm down” ….suddenly Arjun looked away as if trying to hide something & thn took a step Back…..Neil turned a little towards me….& gave me an assuring nod…I quickly went to him….& hugged him tight all crying……when suddenly I heard Arjun yelling at someone…..he held d man by his collar & muttered…. ” no one…..& I mean no one dares to stop ARJUN…..didn’t u remember what I said..?..” Hearing this I quickly stood away from Neil & looked atArjun…..neil was looking everywhere but arjun ….while arjun was pointing a gun towards d man ….he was looking hell angry…as if would kill everyone around……whereas this man was literally begging him for his life…..all this while Arjun kept looking straight towards Neil & said to d man….” I don’t forgive traitors…but..I won’t kill u….I will give u a slow & painful death.” ….saying this he pulled d trigger & shot him in both his legs…thn at his hands….thn shoulders….thn stomach….& went away……seeing this a loud shriek escaped my lips……I quickly covered my mouth in shock.& started taking backward steps keeping my eyes fixed at d man…when I bumped in to Neil….I stumbled a little & said….my voice coming out as low as possible… ” n..neil he k..k..killed that man…….oh my god….he k..killed someone ….right here……he k..killed him” I started breathing heavily….. When Neil shook me hard & said….” Radhika…..radhika….relax….he is alive…he is not dead…He is alive” ….saying this he held me for sometime & thn let out a sigh….running a hand in his hairs….as if he was tensed over something else……thn he murmured.. ” um….I need to go…..I think u should eat something & thn take rest” saying this he left me in a hurry
As soon as Neil left I quickly went to bathroom & threw up all d contents of stomach……my body was still trembling….how much hard I tried but wasn’t able to move out d image of tht man from my mind….he shot him….right here….he shot him…..he would kill me …suddenly there was a knock over d door…..I quickly went towards d door & stood beside it…..holding my heels in my hand…..after few knocks when I didn’t replied….door shot open….& someone entered……as soon as d man passed through d door….I quickly started hitting him with my heels….I knew it won’t do much harm….but still….I won’t sit ideally…..suddenly I heard him ” ouch….ouch….stop…stop” saying this he quickly held my hand …..when he turned around I realised he was a man around my age…..I quickly wiggled out of his hold & moved away…..when he thought I won’t hit him again he muttered…. “What was tht for….girl?” Saying this he started rubbing his head making puppy face……where I hit him ….seeing him like this I quickly started laughing…..after few sec when he started looking at me like I was an alien…I composed myself & muttered…. “Who r u? …what do u want????”….thn he said….” Oh….sorry…hi princess…..myself kabir….” Saying this he slowly took my heels in his hand & said…”gosh ….I must say tht was a unique way of welcoming someone in ur room….do u always welcome everyone like this?” …saying this he pointed towards heels….another chuckle made its way through my lips & said…”sorry….I thought u were….uhh..anyways… ..im sorry….but u didn’t answer my question”….he said… “Question?….ohhh….that….actually I came here to c u…..I mean…uhhh…OK….I was dying to c d girl who caused a rift between ARJUN & Neil…..I mean u did what other MAFIA heads couldn’t….u r simply grt……or I must say this was 8 wonder of d world…”… Thn he checked me out & muttered….” Wooooho & I must u look like a princes….even I would Hv stood for u….u r hot princess” saying this he winked at me…..I quickly held my another heel…when he covered his hand & said….” Sorry….sorry…sorry….I was just joking….relax princess” i gave him a look & thn slowly put my heel down & asked ” rift….?” ….he replied with a shrug…” No…not exactly rift….there was kind of disagreement between thm……which I can assure u princes never happened till date….credit goes to u”..saying this he bowed down to me jokingly….but I was worried for Neil…” Is..is Neil alright?…” Coz I didn’t trust that monster….he could do anything…..thn kabir quickly replied” obviously….. What would happen to Neil???….after all he is D NEIL” saying this he shrugged ….but when he saw my confused face he said…” What? Don’t u know?…” I just shook my head….he let out a sigh & said….” First let me sit ….princess” ….saying this he walked towards d bed & Sat there comfortably thn he patted d space next to him & called me out…i quietly went there & Sat beside him..thn he continued…. ” OK so let’s start from start….well Neil didn’t had a good past….he joined d MAFIA at very small age…..& when he did…..his bond with Arjun grew stronger thn real blood….they both consider themselves more thn brothers…..Neil was d best assasin trained to protect d family….I mean d MAFIA family…..when it comes to killing….Neil Hv got best & most …ummm…..disgusting ways of killing someone… Tht too in secs…..well he could think of 110 ways of killing someone…. When he meets them within 2 mins…..I must say he is D dangerous assasin alive…..in a way he is a dangerous killer thn Arjun…….but Arjun is D one for whom I would like to say ….is d dangerous man I Hv ever seen…..dude he has got skills….brain….technique…. & what not…..he is perfect for d title MAFIA KING ……he could kill anyone without any weapon……& d strongest point he has is …..he don’t HV any weakness…… Well in MAFIA they call him ‘D UNDEAD’ ……U know what Neil took bullets that were shot on Arjun almost 12 times…..& Arjun was ready to give him his position ….but Neil….he didn’t want that…..he told him that he wanted to work for him….under him….with him……well believe me Arjun didn’t do any less…..once he was shot near his heart saving Neil…..well in short they were brothers from diff mothers……they Hv never argued over any business issues….whenever Neil suggested something Arjun would agree without thinking…. Same for Neil…..they both could understand whts going on inside thr heart without saying a word…..I know sounds like lovers…” Saying this he chuckled & I joined him….thn he continued… ” well tht was long story in short….princess…anything else?” I just shook my head & said “but still they r killers….killing someone cannot be justified…..may whatever be d reason…. Anyways Neil does looks like a person who could die for one he loves….but Arjun…..ummm” ….thn he said…” Not only them princes …..even im a killer….& there is nothing to justify….its our life now….& Common dont be tht biased abt arjun…..
Anyways u don’t know him tht much…so I would suggest don’t talk bad abt him……uuuuh….in short I don’t want anything against him….u c thts d family bond…..we can die for each another…..& well we don’t kill anyone from us unless someone betrays d family…u can say its kind of a rule…we can’t shoot anyone from our family unless he is a traitor…..well thts all d info I could give u princess” ……i quickly bit my lip & asked nervously …” But why r u telling me all this?…i mean u dont even know me…what if im some spy..or something like tht..?..” He laughed at this & said….” D girl who could beat me with heels couldnt be a spy……& im good at judging people princes…..”now I raised my eyebrow at him & he muttered.. ” what?..” ..I let out a sigh & said ” why do u call me princess? ” …he stood up & said…..” Look at u ….u look like a princess & well in this dress …u look kind of Barbie princess” ..hearing this my face dropped & tears started rolling down my cheeks….he quickly bend down on his knees & held my hand saying….” Sorry …sorry….I didn’t mean to hurt u…did I said something wrong?”…..I shook my head in a no like a child & said….” This is my wedding dress….today I was supposed to be married….but…” Now I started sobbing badly….suddenly Neil entered in & said….”radhika….what…… I c ….this stupid is making u cry…..” Saying this he hit him over his head….while kabir once again rubbed his head ….& said pouting…”aah….what did I do?..” Seeing this both Neil & i started laughing…..when kabir got up & bowed down joking saying..”now I will leave…..c u around princess…” Saying this he winked & left d room….thn I turned towards Neil & said. ” he knows how to make people smile”…Neil nodded smiling & said..” I know…..thts why everyone here loves him….but when times come he could be a grt kille….” He stopped mid sentence & gave me a look I quickly replied…” I know what u r…..he told me…” He raised his eyebrow….& said ” what actually did he say?…” I again bit my lower lip…& started playing with d hem of my dupatta….saying” ….ummmm…..only those things which I shld know…” Hearing this he chuckled & said…”really?…” I just nodded in response…. He stared me for a minute then held my hand & said…” Come with me…” He took me to d balcony……& seeing d view my mouth fell open….it was so beautiful…. Beautiful would be an understatement…… There was garden outside full of tulips….over which moon lights were falling….there was no light except tht….it looked heavenly…..& moon…..it was just perfect…..I looked at him & said…” It’s..it’s…” He cut me out & said smilingly …” I know ….it’s beautiful…. ” …there was extreme silence for few minutes ….when Neil muttered next…”I’m sorry…for arjun’s behaviour……. He is not tht bad radh….” I cut him in mid & said…” I don’t want to hear abt him….he is a monster….today I’m in this mess only because of him….he is nothing but a heartless devil…..”
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Meeeeeeennnnnn……….tight hugs…oh god!! I was waiting 4 this story to be updated…kahan gayi tum…haan!!! Missed u…honestly this one…don’t get angry..!!! Thanks for the dedication….
The story is superb..kabir part was highlight..I Mean exactly how wud one of among them wud speak…wow!! Neil…D best assasin!! Good…and Arjun N neil bond…superb…the other side of Mafia one…cool…and Arjun..man he slapped!!!! I wud say..the best..justifying his character.!! Good one ya..Meen…keep this way…its best…and killed someone…meow!! Am scared…heheheeh…Radz hit with heels and raises a doubt 2 be spy…gosh she is a excellent combination of smartness n naughtiness… her Pov….touching…I loved it like anything…pls dont keep this story away from me….plssssssss….and Arjun d Mafia king…in a black plush high Chair..I did get images like that..and today..wow!!! Am gonna read again n again…tata…take care…bear my lengthy comment…can’t help..love u Meen….
Jess….jessss…..jessssss…….thnk u thnk u….thnk u….sooooooooooooo much……gosh how do u always know what to say….to win my heart……thanks a tonn my girl……lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvve u………u Jess make me feel my updates r not useless…..& I’m grateful for tht……loads of tight hugs & muuuuuuuha
Wowwwwwwwww…..woowwwwwwwwwooooo ……no words to describe yaarr..amazing….. Opppsss forgot to give ma intro….I am a silent reader……but Dis epi made me come out ma shell today….hahaha….any ways plzz update d next as soon as u can..
Hey anushka……I’m glad u liked it & thought of commenting…… U Hv no idea what a writer feel when a silent reader makes a comment…..well I’m not saying I’m a writer…..tht would be a big word….I’m just a story teller…..but I thank u from bottom of my heart…..loads of hugs & kisses
Thanku…thanku meen atlast u posted this. I was waiting for this for a long time. And this chapter it is amazing…. Kabir and princess, I liked that. And Arjun and neil’s bond, kabir’s description for that was really nice. When I read this chapter I was in a different world. I can imagine all scary things like it happens around me. Ur narration is really beautiful.
Plz meen plz don’t make me wait a lot for next chapter plzzz post it soon… I am eagerly waiting to know what will happen next…
Heya jewel….I’m extremely sorry for being late……& I’m so happy to c ur comment sis………thanks for this lovely comment…… U know it means a lot to me……..love u dear…..keep smiling……loads of hugs & muuuuuuha
Awesome episode, love it to the core, waiting for the next update and please update Rehnuma, eagerly waiting to read the next episode. ☺
Hi brin……..how r u?……it’s nice to c ur lovely comment Di….may I call u Di?……thanks a tonn for ur constant support & love……loads of love & kisses
Waooo..meen…i loved this so so much…plz next one update it soon..
Hey hearty…..first of all let me tell u ….ilove ur updates……I NVR got much opportunity to praise u for ur good work….sorry for that…..& a big wala thank u for commenting…. Loads of hugs
Meena where are u….why so late??? God Neil best assassin ever…cool…Kabir superb cute dude…princess…naughty and brave ..i liked all it….Arjun mafia kibg…is there any reason behind him become maafia….and whatever…Arjun u slap????….huh…update rehnuma also…don’t vanish from here…come soon with both updates
Hi rosssssssy……a very very happy bdy girl….may God grant u all ur dreams & wishes………how r u?….tell me something abt u…..like ur age & all…I want to know……& well thanks a lot for such a lively comment……& yes Neil’s an assasin ….tht too best of thm all…..& abt slap….well don’t worry nothing would be left out unbalanced….
Hi rosssssssy……a very very happy bdy girl….may God grant u all ur dreams & wishes………how r u?….tell me something abt u…..like ur age & all…I want to know……& well thanks a lot for such a lively comment……& yes Neil’s an assasin ….tht too best of thm all…..& abt slap….well don’t worry nothing would be left out unbalanced….loads of hugs & muuuuuuuha
Excellent work dear…
Thank uu so much arti……these 3 words means a lot to me…..loads of hugs & kisses…..stay blessed dear
Back with a bang Meen. God how long u made us to wait for this superb one. Meen…. U rocked it dear and thank u so much for give the rocking episode. I loved everything in this… Can’t pick one n say… Each lines makes me hooked till end…. Love the most is Katie n Princess… N arjun the perfect attitude of being a mafia king… Whoooo… Neil is the only who can control arjun aftrr rads… Love u meen n thank u so much for ur dedication
Hiii sathya…….how Hv u been….first of alll a tight hug for such a lovely comment….. Thanks …….thanks…..thanks a tonn dear…every single word in ur comment means a lot to me sis……once again thanks…..stay blessed….loads of hugs & muuuuuuha
wohoaaa that was an oustandin epi dear.
Hey neetz…….thanks for reading & commenting….. Thanks a lot…..love ya…..muuuuuuha
Marvellous.. truly beautiful neen.. pls update sn
Thank u farjana for ur beautiful words…..thnk u so much dear….stay blessed…..loads of love
Amazing?????
Hiii aayushi…..thanks reading & commenting…..hope u will love d next one too….till then take care….loads of love
I was waiting for this ?❤❤❤?
Hello mehreen…..thanks for waiting dear……I won’t make u wait for long for d nxt one…..till thn keep smiling…..loads of love
Meen dear ur backkk …I was waiting for your post… and when I saw this I was jumping with happiness….love you so much dear..I missed u and ur post so much …now be a good girl and post ur other ff soon…I am dying to read it.. take care
Heya starz…..so tell me how Hv u been?……well I missed u toooooo……& thanks for ur magical comment……..I love I will not let u down with d next one sis…….love u loads……..a tight hug & muuuuuha
Hi mean this story is fabulous amazing wonderful marvellous and….. What not? Well you people are just aweesoomeeeeeer. Loved it to the core and please please please please pleaseee3eeeeeeeeeeeeeee…. Update soon!!!??????
Hey we….ur comment made my day…..thanks for tht dear….it truly means a lot….& no need to say please….I’ll post next one soon….let me know ur views abt tht one too….till then keep smiling…..muuuuuha
I’m sorry it’s hi Meen. Typing mistake apologies please???
Never mind …it happens….
Meen chechi!!!!!!!!!!!!! Long time!!!!!!!!!! Its good really good……..Kabir rocked the show………Neil the greatest killer…..Arjun scared me too………thanks for this wonderful epi….could u add more ardhika scenes in the coming episodes?????? Please don’t run away this time………promise me………I updated ” my biggest mistake”….do read….
Aastha….. Gosh…..I missed u so…..so….much…..my cutie pie….how r u?…..a big wala thnk u for ur lovely words…..& I promise I won’t run away like this sis…….a tight hug & loads of muuuuuuuuuha
Incredible…. am loving it…. waiting for nxt try to upload soon plsssssss…
Heya…..crazy girl…..thanks a tonn for reading & commenting…… Hope u’ll like d next one too……loads of love
meen…..yaar, you forgot me….not fair….not done….am angry now….hehe…
yaar, what’s this now…..you haven’t update in like the longest period in history and moreover have stopped coming to the comments section, even?
meen, I was desperately waiting for you to update and finally, you did……
where is rehnuma though?
and what just happened here?
Arjun slapped radhika….what???!! and then even caressed her cheek….height hai bande ki…
and a disagreement between Arjun and neil….what?
update soon….love you….
don’t you dare disappear like that again.
Of course I can’t forget u Myra…….u r d first one to make first comment on my first ff ever on tellyupdates…… Since thn u Hv been with me in my every single update sis……don’t ever say tht……I consider u much more thn just a reader/writer…..u truly r my friend….. Muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuha…..& thanks a tonn for these cute….lovely words…..without ur comment my update is incomplete……thanks for always being thr…….a tight hug & muuuha
Hey dear! Its my first time on your ff asu you see, I loved your story and I am looking forwagd for the next which yo will be updating on?
And hey if you dnt mind, plz dnt put ….. Dots, it will make te writing look attractive.
Have a great day!
Hiii roshni….I’m glad u liked d story & a big wala thnk u for ur lovely comment dear……& yeah I know it doesn’t look good with all d dots everywhere…. But believe me …..I can’t write it without all of these……but I’ll surely try to reduce thm as much as possible……thnk u…..loads of love
hi … beautifully written .. i loved neil’s character… he is like a understanding buddy .. and kabir was awesome some how he managed to make radhika laugh … and radhika hit kabir by her heels was very funny .. i hope neil and arjun will sort out their issues .. arjun killed a person infront of radhika it was horrible .. if i was in radhika’s place i will have a heart attack for sure… but radhika is very strong .. waiting to watch arjun loss his heart to radhika update soon … stay blessed 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Hiii nayan…..what a wonderful comment dear….I mean whatever u wrote I can see it was truly from ur heart……thanks a lot…..& I really mean a lot…..I Hv nver seen u here……well now I hope to c u around……till thn love u…loads of hugs
Meenu…what are you girl??I loved it to the core..thanks a lot for this dedication It’s really amazing.. I mean this Mafia gang,dangerous.. yet they have people like Neil and Kabir..well Arjun..I think he also have some bitter pàst..Iam really eager to know how this story turns to a love story..but do t make Arjun slap Radhika .if that happens Iam sure that Rossy Di will kill him….by the way where is Rehnuma??waiting for that also ..love you sweet sis…
Hiii aadia……how r u????…..believe me I missed u Darling……..& a big big big wala thank u for ur cute & lovely comment……& I hope u will love next one too…..well I’m planning to update rehnuma aftr two more updates of MAFIA KING…….a tight hug & loads of muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuha