Hello friends!!!!! First of all kaan pakad ke badi wali sorry for this much late but actually I don’t get time due to change in time of schools and tutions and I get really tired due to this. So now let’s move to our story!!!! And this is last shot of mahi ve!!!! I hope you all love it ….though i see a huge drop in comments and ……but its OK my frnds who have supported me with their beautiful heartwarming comments …….its all because of you all that I don’t give up !!!!
One more thing that if anyone dislike it then plz do comment and tell me how I can improve it because what’s use of dislike button if it only downs moral and not improve and I believe in bringing best out of me …..yaa nowadays I m lacking ideas but that’s personal issues. So enough of my chitchat. Thankyou to my silent readers who begin commenting and my other readers cum frnds who have supported me from starting.
Recap- kabir gets fine and decides to confess sanchi !!!
Precap- kabir’s flight leaves………sanchi is in dilemma!!
Now let’s go!!!
At 2nd Anniversary party of MD hospital-
Whole hospital is decorated beautifully ……..all staff memebers are really excited. All are waiting for their boss!!
Pragya comes wearing golden desighner crop top carried with long skirt looking breath taking. Isha comes wearing red floral frock looking like fairy. Karan and veer are formally dressed .
Kabir comes wearing simple formal dress like he wears in serial.His eyes are only searching for sanchi!!!
Sanchi comes wearing greyish silver designer gown looking breathtaking…… Gorgeous!!
Kabir was dumbstruck seeing her …….sanchi looks at him but ignores him…..kabir make faces.
They all perform ganapti arti !!!
Speech time-
Sanchi- first of all ganpati bappa moreya!!!today its a very special day…..first of all thank you all for being this good staff and being a family. This hospital was my father’s dream and when it has become best hospital of India in just 2 yrs ….my happiness becomes twice . so a little gift from me is increments in ur salaries . thank you!!!
All claps!!
Party time!!
All dance on disco songs.
Its turn for paper dance!! All take out chits for their partners.
Ishveer……praan …….kanchi!! Etc
1st round-
All dance on nazm nazm
5 couples left….
2nd round paper fold…..
All dance on laagi na choote…..
3 couples left….
3rd round …paper fold to 1/4th….couples were unable to dance
Song plays- sab tera from baaghi(actually this is my favourite song so I include it in every story)
Ishveer and praan were struggling on paper ….kanchivwere lost in each other……sanchi was about to fall …kabir holds her and pulls her in his arms!!!
Ishveer and praan discolified……winner is kanchi!!!
Kabir- u can’t go away from me…..
Sanchi- if u can go why not me?
Sanchi leaves!
Kabir calls someone.
After some time …all after having snacks an dinner were gossiping….. Party was half over because only outlr group was left while others have left for duties and guests were back to home.
A girl comes in pink top with white miniskirt.
Girl- kabbu!!!! My darling….
She comes and hug kabir……sanchi was left mouth opened…
She kisses kabir on his cheek ……
Kabir- yr overacting to mat kar….
Sanchi was red in jealousy and anger……..
Girl was just sticking to kabir …..
Sanchi comes-
Sanchi- are you invited in this party….
Girl- if my kabbu is here then I can also be….right kabbu?
Kabir- ya shona
Sanchi- shona…..kabir chuckles….sanchi understand
Sanchi- OK enjoy party with ur kabbu….and go only after taking dinner….
She leaves
At night in garden
Sanchi was looking at moon….
Kabir- sanchi!!
Sanchi- what u want?
Kabir- sanchi I know what happened in past wasn’t wrong …but just tell me onething?! Do u love me?
Sanchi- no…
Kabir- look into my eyes….
Sanchi- see kabir ….I don’t have time for all this….why can’t u let me happy here…..what’s your problem?
Kabir- what’s my prblm??…….what’s ur prblm??
Sanchi- u only….I have learn to live alone so why?
Kabir- OK fine…..goodbye Dr sanchi Mathur! I m going forever ….live happily!!
Kabir goes…..sanchi cries;!
Sancho’s pov- sorry kabir I can’t do this….this would be wrong with my bestie…….I can’t take her place!!
At midnight!!
Kabir is unable to sleep…….
Kabir’s pov- I lost her Mira…….I lost her…….
Mira’s soul is seen on window!
Mira- no kabir you can’t lose hope…..when love is true no power can separate u both ……I tried and see my condition..
Kabir- no Mira you didn’t did anything …..yaa I love sanchi lot but one truth is that ur place in my heart is special too……u and sanchi both have a different and unique place in my heart!! It is because of you even that I realise my feelings for her.
Mira- shhh…..kabir u and sanchi are meant for each other…..this dark night will pass soon and a new sunshine will spread happiness!!
Mira fades…..kabir smiles!!
Scene shifted-
Sanchi is turning sides and unable to sleep….she is reminiscing everything from beginning…. How she met kabir ……how they became frnds and she begins to love him……how she was obsessed…..how they got separated and met again…..
Sancho’s pov- I love you kabir and I will love you till my last breath but I can’t marry you…..mira has already done a lot for me….she gave her heart which has ur name but its her right…..and kaira …..how she will accept me when she would know that I have her mother’s heart and this is one reason mira sacrifice her life……..
Mira’s souls come-
Mira- sanchi who told u that u would take my place…..u know me and kabir were besties and I have that place in his heart but kabir live you and u have that place….we have different places in his life….and if u said itself like this then first of all its my fault na that I tool ur place……and about my heart ……I have done a lot of wrong things for my father ….this was my repentance…….and kaira loves you a lot and even she deserves a mother’s love so please accept her……none can be a better mother for her than u…..u have my heart so if u go in kabir an kaira’s life….then I would feel like I m there……please sanchi you love kabir !!
She fades…sanchi smiles.
At morning –
Kapoors are leaving for Mumbai !!
(One thing I tell you all that sdch is closed due to lot of scams and etc)
They all reach at airport!
Veer- Bhai think again …..
Karan- yaa Bhai do u really wanna go?
Kabir- yes…what’s the use if she don’t loves me !
Kusum- kabir don’t take any decision only by brain.
Kabir nods
Kaira- where is sanchi Masi?
Kabir- she won’t come my princess.
They move towards flight.
Scene shifted-
Mira’s words echoes in Sanchi’s ears….
Prasha- sanchi go and stop him……..
Sanchi’s dilemma comes to end …she grab her car’s keys and runs!!
Sanchi starts her car at full speed…..she reaches airport!!
She ask about flight but gets sad when she is told that flight has left………
She cries and walks on road ……she sees an old man and her illd daughter trying to earn money through some music but people are paying no heed…
Sanchi- may I help you uncle?
Old man- how beta?
Sanchi- I will sing…….
Sanchi in mind- it is said that feelings can flow through music ….I want my pain to flow!
Sanchi sings-
Chaand se bichhdi raaton ki
Aadhi si mulaqaton ki
Kuch baatein hain dardon ki
Tujhe sunaani ae
Ik yaad purani ae
Teri meri kahani ae
Baarish na samjhi’n tu
Akhiyaan da paani ae (x2)
Ishqe di laqeer ka
Qissa hai Ranjhe-Heer ka
Vichhode ne uda diya
Ye panna taqdeer ka (x2)
A voice comes ……..
Aaj bhi uss deewane ki
Ek deewani hai
Ik yaad purani ae
Teri meri kahani ae
Baarish na samjhi’n tu
Akhiyaan da paani ae
Sanchi was shocked to see kabir!!she continues!!
Ik yaad purani ae
Teri meri kahani ae
Baarish na samjhi’n tu
Akhiyaan da paani ae
Khat tere pyar ke
Abhi bhi mere paas hain
Alfaazon mein dhadak rahe
Tere hi ehsaas hain (x2)
Kabir continues-
Tu toh nahi hai saath mere
Teri nishani hai
Ik yaad purani ae
Teri meri kahani ae
Baarish na samjhi’n tu
Akhiyaan da paani ae (x2)
All claps for them ……..sanchi was in tears and happiness….
Old man’s bag was full of money…. He gives sanchi and kabir lots of blessings! And leaves.
Sanchi an kabir comes toward each other…….they hug each other……… Rainfall starts …all run for shelter…. But kanchi are still there hugging each other…..
Sanchi- I love you kabir!!
Kabir- I love you too !
Sanchi- lier…..how dare u go away….
Kabir- u only told!
Sanchi- then why did u comeback?
Kabir- u only told but through ur heart!!
Rainfalls starts more heavily…. Like clouds were expressing happiness!! Kabir takes off his jacket and covers their heads (ashiqui 2 scene)
Both kissed each other wildly !!
Fb
When kapoors were entering flight…..pragya calls karan and asked to not enter flight….. As pragya knows that sanchi could get late….kabir himself was not willing to enter flight as he was feeling somewhere in his heart that sanchi would come…..karan did drama of getting unwell and all took him hospital …karan ask kabir was left as all have lest in taxi!!
Flight leaves and kabir gets karan video call with prasha and family eating ice cream!!
Kabir runs for sanchi!!
Fb ends!!!
3 yrs later-
A house is shown written mira mansion over it!!!
In house kaira who is approx 5 yrs now is playing with her karan and veer Chachu and isha and pragya are with kusum welcoming guests!!
Kaira- Mumma …papa!!!
Kanchi comes holding a little baby boy of 2 months!!
Its namkaran ceremony!!
Priest ask for name!!
Sanchi- Samir!!
Sa- sanchi
Mir- mira
Kabir was speechless.
All smiles!!!
Mira’s soul looks from door.
Screen freezes on kanchira’s faces!!!
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So guys plz do comment as its my last ff of this yr maybe forever!!!! And plz share ur views ……I request that all who have read this from starting or middle plz do commment!!! Maybe it is not up to ur expectations but nowadays I m not getting many ideas…got this one only!! Even I wrote an os last Sunday which took 7 hrs as I wrote twice but still it wasn’t submitted …thanks to my deafaulter ms word! Now a big wala thank you and virtual hug for the frnds who encouraged me and my silent readers too!!!
Luv uh all!
Keep smiling!!!
44 Comments
Speechless dear,,finding words to praise tht fntstic epsd.. Bt,,as u late so ur pnshmnt is tht u have to write a roooomantic os of kanchi.. Lv u..
Thank you soooo much dear……..really I haven’t words to thank u…….u all have always supported me …….and about punishment ……I will try but after exams!!! Luv uh too dher Sara!!! So happy u liked it!!
abhilasha it was superb story with happy ending and you know i’m your big fan of your writing specially this and love………phir se story………i don’t know what happen with you all writer please don’t demotivate your self……..you all are including you are superb writers…………..don’t you dare to say this is your last one story on TU you have to stay on TU write next story i’m waiting for it and this is not request it is order and you have to listen it…………..please yaar esa mat karo………….pata he abhi tera post dekha to kitni khushi hui ke haash post to kiya tune………………sachchi me i’m so happy when i see your post…………………post next story (ff/fs/os) soon………………i’m waiting for read it………………love you abhilasha……………………tc……………….see you soon………………….
as you late so panishment to milegi hi milegi……………….or agar panishment puri nahi ki to bhoot banke daraungi tuje yaad rakhana……………….so your panishment iiiiiiiiiiiiiiissssssssss…………..that you have to write a new story like romantic one, which shows frindship between sanprasha……………also……………..
Bas kr pagli rulayegi kya………yr dhruvi ….mai jitna demotivate hui ti na uska double motivate ho gyi ….sachchi………mtlb meri khushi ka thikana ni rha ………I m so happy ………….u don’t know how much it means for me………luv uh yr………..and my punishment ……I will try with os ….ff is not possible for me…..u can understand life of a medical student very well……neet ka bi pressure h …..I m without coaching na……….wish me luck ………and best of luck to u too………but I will try for os after exams!!! Luv uh!!
it’s dhruti but it’s ok most of all mistake to speak my name
and i understand your situation because i’m also engineering student and now my entrance is also coming on 26th nov and entrance exam is “CAT” and many more exams are there………….
ALL THE BEST for your exam i know you do your best in exam……………..
Sorry galti se mistake ho gyi ……dhruti!!!!
Oh my god!!! ❤❤Though im really sad that this ended.. It was amazing.. Best 10 shots ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Omg ???????….best 10 shots ….I m in tears ?????……..really yr it means a lot ……….glad u like it and took time for commenting!!
Abhi!!! It was suuppperrrbbb…….ky bolu.kuch smj ni aa rha…..mtlb tri writings k saamne meri bolti band ho gyi??……dont worries…..agle yr pist kregi toh bhi chalega(u nhi ki next november ko kre??) but jab tre itne bde ming m chota sa idea aa jaye tab kr dena…..aur 1 baat bolu…mje khud ko nhi pta m ky bakwaas likhe jaa rhi hu??…buss tu bhi sirf itna dhyaan rakh ki mai tri writing ki taarif hi kr rhi hu…jo bhi mre comment ko padhega vo pgl ho jayega kyuki m har kuch likhe ja rhi hu???…bye, gn, sd and come soon wid new ff (1 baat aur bolu-ab tak ka ye mra sabse bda comment h??)
Oho dhruvi tere cmnt ne meri bolti band kr Di…….yr sachchi me …….rula hi diya …….thank you sooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh…….loveuh……and I will try to write something whenever I get time!!!!! Umaaah!!!
Abhi Di it was so good and u are so fantastic acha tell me when u will come back with your other ff or os please reply or haa ye pagli bhen ko na ek emotional sa romantic sa os chahiye please please ????warna main na aap se katti ho jao gi ☺☺?? take care all the best for ur exams love u di?????
Awww so sweet of u my prachu ……..thank u soooo much …..and promise I will write is soon be exams achche hobjaye ……thank u for ur wishes…. Luv uh toooo dher Sara!!!?
Awww so sweet of u my prachu ……..thank u soooo much …..and promise I will write is soon be exams achche hobjaye ……thank u for ur wishes…. Luv uh toooo dher Sara!!!
Awesome and fabulous…. Whatever work you have , have a smile always in your face.. Take care…
Thank you so much dear for always supporting me and encouraging me with ur beautiful comments ………u never miss to comment …..u too take care!!
Its so amazing…. Awesome…… I am speechless….. Loved it
Thank you so much dear for supporting me from starting….. Glad u love it!!
Yaar kya bolu …. tune to bolne layak hi nhi choda. …. ab agar bola bhi to meri dictionary me words khatam ho jayega . Yaar koi itna acha kaise likh skta h yaar. Mujhe v idea de de behen. Pyaar se bol rhi hoon wrna naagin ko apne style me batana v aata h. ????? luv u meri jaan.
Or sochna v mat chodne ka ….. tujhe every weekend ek happy os likhna padega ab itna to kar skti h na…. tujhe ff se baksh v diya. … pls happy os likhna kyuki show me RS ne hume bohot rula diya ab yha mat rulana. Promise kar abse har weekend ko tu happy os post karegi. ?????.
Luv u meri siso. Come asap. Kya karu greedy hoon but kaanchi ke liye itna to chalega na. ???????
Take care atleast for us.
Thank you sooooo muchhhhh dear…….chl formality gyi tel lene…….aur nagin se zada powerful witch h ……….teri nagmani leke tuje bataungi……hihi….jokes apart……..and ok meri behna mai os post krti rhungi ya fs but regular hone ki guarantee ni h…….luv uh itaa sara samundar me pani h jitta sara!!!! Tc!!
Wowww! Yaar what a perfect ending!! I m soooo speechless….each and every part was heart touching….I loved kaira the most….hats off to this story and u too….really was missing u a lot…thoda sa time mila toh socha padh loo! And it made my day dear.brought a big smile on my face….and kya kaha tumne? Last article huh! Agar tum chali gai naa toh mai tumhare dreams mai aa kar bhoot ban ke tumhe sataaoongi?! Not done yaar! Jab time mile tab post karna but choodne ki baat mat karna! Aacha toh him chalte hai! Bye…love u loads…??
Vrushti a virtual hug to u first of all……..thank you soooooo muchhh sweetie ………itti tareef………..I m so happy and i have led glow on my face……luv uh!!! I will try to write pakka!!
This was too nice yaar I am speechless. I read all the episodes but couldn’t comment. Sorry for that. But it’s awesome.
Thank u soooo much dear for this beautiful cmnt and its OK……at last u cmntd ….that’s enough!!!!!
wowwwwww.amazing dear
you are one of the best writers dear ..
plzz continue writing
and ha this story is very unique and loved it
and obsessed with it dear
hope you come with another blockbuster ff
love u tc..
Thank u once again dear……..I will surely try to write something whenever I will get time!
Thank you so much dear …….ur cmnt brang a wide smile on my face………luv uh!!
So so beautiful and amazing and mind blowing episode yaar………..asqhi2 bala scene is awesome and outstanding………..iss episode ke liae jitna vi comment karu sab comment ficke par jata hae iss ke pass………love u dear
Thank you sooooo muchhhhhhh dear…………..so happy an glad u like it!!!!!luv uh tooooo!!!!!!
That was one of the beautiful endings ever!!!! And I am sad that it ended. But I am not a person to let you go so easily.. you have to come back ASAP since I can’t spend my day without your ffs… all the moments were heart touching and commendable. The episode made me really happy and I was smiling throughout… loved it sooo much and you gave it a beautiful ending.. thanks a lot for posting the ff. I was missing it.. hope to see you again soon.. keep shining and keep writing.. love you loads!!?
Omg……so happy that finally u commented …….u know what I was habitual of ur cmnts but they disappeared ……..let it be…….the main thing is that my happiness knew no bounds on seeing ur wonderful cmnt ………and really ur cmnt make me smile brightly ……….I will try to write whenever I get time ………loads of love to u………hoping to see ur is again!!!! Take care!!!
Hey abhi……. I hope u know me… I am ‘MISBAH’ … If u have forget I don’t care… I was readin urr ff from starting.. But can’t comment due to studies.. As am in 10th.. But thoughted comment to comment at the ending…
GOING THROUGH THE STORY
It was just fabulous… Love AASHIQUE 2 scenes…. And BTW I too love SAB TERA song too,…. It is also one of my favourite.??
Which s singed by my fav singer ARMAAN MALIK and ome of my fav actress SHRADDHA….??
So at last they were blessed with a boy SAMIR…?
And do come up with a new stories again with swasan??
First of all thank u big wala …….and dear I never forget my frnds……….of course I know u…..
And really ur cmnt made me happy by heart……and our choices an favourites are quite same ……..and u made my day…….luv uh….I will try to write ASAP!!
yarr abhi…..it was superbbbbbb….amazing as usualllll you rocked once again dear……love your updates from core of my heart…..ek baat kahun….yaarrr jab bhi time mile toh ek aad post ker hi dena bilkul post karna chodna nahi….understand study sab se zaroori hoti hai….but kiya karen teri updates bhi humare liye zaroori hai na?? luv you dear….tc….and hann it’s me your Anee.
Thank u soooo much anew….missed u a lot….and mene pehchan liya ta anosha se…….u made my day…….luv uh dear!!! I will try to write ASAP!!!! u too write something soon!!!
Too good dear. It was worth the wait. Loved it. Do come up with new one soon…???
Thank you sooo much dear……glad u like it……..ur name is really cute….what’s its meaning?
Thank u dear. It means light or glow. It also has meaning splendour in Arabic???
Hi abhi finally iss zombie ko TU pe aane ki fursat mil hi gyi..?? … ending super duper.. ur all ff os r fab.. per sach kahun mujhe teri ending jis tarah tu karti h sabse best lagti h.. koi nhi kar skta..love phir se.. mujhe abhi tak yaad h uska epilogue part bestest yaar.. nd this one too…u again nailed it.. lovv u my witch..????? bye tc.. came back soon
Oho my zombie……. Finally u got time ………but koi ni ur cmnt made my day……thank u bada wala ……love uh too dher sara!!! Umaah!!!???…….aur witch will comeback asap!!!
Di, ending is so beautiful… U just nailed it….I am biggest fan of your writing always but don’t say that this ur last post….whenever u got time, then u post next OS / Fs…..Waiting for your next article ….love u ? ?
Omg niyu ……….ur cmnt is as sweet as u …… Thank u so much my sweetipie….luv uh…..I will try to write soon!!!
meri pyaari witch…….ab sorry bolungi late comment ke liye toh tu mujhe halaal kardegi………but yaar, ab main kya kahoon tujhe khidkitod,mndblowing,ravishing………ye sab kehte kehte main insaan se tum sabki brahmrakshas tak ban gayi……haha……jokes apart……ab meri abhi kuch likhe & wo kamaal na ho, aisa kabhi ho sakta hai bhala………luv u meri witch……..