Hey Everyone!
Aamna here?
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This is the Same OS I wrote for OS COMPETITION? N by Ur Support and Voting secured 4 th Position in Top 10 Entries?
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Well SomeOf U said while Voting that Twinkle should have suffered a bit and I agree U people.. I also wanna write but due to word’s restriction wasn’t able to? But know I am here to give U complete part of it?
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AND A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY MS MAAHI
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MAY U HAVE A BLESSED AND HAPPY LIFE AHEAD??LOVE U DEAR??????
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Hope U all will Enjoy it?
CHARACTER SKETCH:
TWINJ are married to eachother as per their parent’s wish leaving their Love Alisha and Uv.. But Fell in Love with Eachother as they overcame the Evil plotting of Alisha and Uv.. Uv turned positive after TWINJ saved his live during almost a Fatal Accident but Alisha is still after Kunj and want him and his Money at any cost.. Whilst Uv apologized and promised TWINJ to never come on between them and even oathedto never let anyone come between TWINJ.. TWINJ to Forgave him..
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Now let’s peep in My story?But with a Smile?
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_DARK ROOM_
A dark Room is Shown Flooded with Happy Couple’s Memories.. Full of Love; Passion; Affection and Gratitude For Eachother?But Know all Grave and Silenced like the Life of the Man standing in the Middle of the Room Facing Main Wall that had a picture of a beautiful couple looking deeply and madly in Love as the Picture Potray..Both Individuals Engulfing Eachother in a Hug.. A back hug pose.. where the woman snuggled into the Man’s Chest.. His Hand’s around her Waist.. The Couple was revealed to be TWINJ?
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The Man looking at the Picture has Some Un-Shed tears in his Eye’s.. Unknown Pain?that could pierce any loving soul.. He was standing all lifeless there.. He was revealed to be Our Hottie.. Our Kunj?
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KUNJ’s POV:
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Why twinkle? Why U left me? I Loved U with whole my heart and Soul but just broke my heart and shattered my soul by saying that I am a betrayer?I betrayed U…
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Really Twinkle was our Love so week that Ur Trust Vanished.. Got broken by those mere Pictures and Proves.. Was my Word’s.. Was My state was all Fake and those Proves that were morphed were True to U?
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Why Twinkle? U broke My Heart! I gathered it’s all broken pieces somehow.. U shattered my Soul Still I Composed it.. I locked all the Emotions I had in a Far Corner of My Heart that no one Can broke Now.. Though I know U are the Only One who Can?
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But I just Can’t agai let U break my Heart once Again?I am scared what if U will leave me Again saying that I am cheater.. I am betrayer?
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No I can’t Forgive U Twinkle?I just can’t cause I know if this Heart Even Once Again got broken by U or Anyone the other time I won’t be able to compose it.. Gather My self ?
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I am Sorry Twinkle I can’t Forgive U?Though I know that U Know the Truth Now.. U was Mis guided that time?But still I can’t ?I just know how I had composed myself in these 5 Yrs with help Leela Maa and Bebe’s Help..
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By Now Kunj was crying?Tears Spilling his beautiful Ocean like Brown Orbs?He Fell on his Knees Crying?All broken and shattered once Again?
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All the beautiful Moment’s and heavenly Memories Savoured with Twinkle came Flooding infront of his Eye’s..
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_FLASHBACK_
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A Couple is Shown running in Whole Room.. A boy is running after a Girl.. Fits of Laughter and Giggles Echoing in the Small yet beautiful Apartment of them..
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KUNJ was running after Twinkle who was dressed in just his white shirt and shorts barely covering her thighs.. Kunj was bare chested..
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K:Siyappa queen Ruk tu.. I won’t leave U once I catch..
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T:Once Catch me SADU SARNA then we will think who will leave or not..
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She said sticking out her Tongue on him.. Giggling and Laughing..
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Finally Kunj caught her winking at her.. Twinkle pouted Cutely?And Kunj chuckled seeing that.. He pecked her Pout..
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A Smile appeared on Twinkle’s Lips..
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K:(Huskily)Ab kon bachaye ga tujhe siyappa queen?
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Kunj said this smirking.. Twinkle’s Mouth Form an ‘0’ but before she can react twinkle was in Kunj’s Arms and he carried her to their bedroom.. They spended an intimate Evening in Eachothers Embrace Laughing and Giggling.. Moaning and Groaning showing their Love and Passion For eachother..
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TWINJ were standing on the Edge of a Cliff in a Back Hug position.. Kunj’s hand’s wrapped around twinkle’s petite frame and twinkle snuggling into him more and more..
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Both watching the setting sun.. Darkness engulfing the Environment yet the beaming rays of Sun giving the message of coming back with a new hope of life for everyone..
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TWINJ cherished this beautiful momemt in Eachothers Embrace.. Savouring the Moment in the Album of their beautiful memories??
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Twinkle was on bed cutely arguing Kunj who was trying to make twinkle drink the vegetable soup as she was ill.. But Twinkle was adamant to not drink that ‘YUCK’ tasted Soup..
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She asked Kunj for a Sweet after it but Kunj refused and Twinkle being stubborn continued her tantrum when something struck Kunj’s mind and he smirked and agreed to Twinkle’s Condition stating that he will gave her.. Her most Favourite Desert..
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Twinkle was more than Happy and quickly drank Soup from Kunj’s Hand.. After finishing she asked for her dessert to Kunj.. To which Kunj leaned forward and kissed twinkle.. Twinkle was caught up in suprise but reciprocated equally..
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After breaking the Kiss Kunj whispered in her ears:Ur Most Favourite Sweet?My Kiss..
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Saying this he bit her Earlobe and Twinkle blushed Hard..
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Twinkle spend next two day’s almost in Kunj’s Embrace.. Kunj taking care of her.. She didn’t wanted Kunj to go away from her even for a minute.. She just behaved like a Kid and Kunj treated her like a Kid too.. His Lovely and Cute Kid??
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Everything was going well until the Villians Entered there life or U can Say make a comeback.. But this time Alisha and Anita teamed up against TWINJ and even succeeded in their evil plotting separating TWINJ..
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Alisha came back in their lives claiming that Kunj still loves her and offenly meet her now.. They Even shared Intimate relationship and now she is Pregnant with Kunj’s Child..
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TWINJ were shocked at first.. Twinkle refused to believe her when Anita made an Entry stating she had proves..
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At that time Bebe.. Leela and TWINJ’s other Family Member’s were also present there as they were here to meet TWINJ..
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Anita showed them morphed pictures and unclear video’s that was of Kunj with Alisha..
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Twinkle was shattered and Kunj was shocked.. It wasn’t True.. He can’t cheat his Love.. His Twinkle..
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He expected her to believe him.. But what she said shattered him??Broke his Heart into Zillion of pieces that were un repairable??
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T:Kunj How can U do this to me? U are a betrayer.. A cheater.. I Hate U Kunj..
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K:(Shocked)Twinkle TRUST me.. It’s all Fake a plotting against Us..
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T:TRUST (Mocking)Really TRUST Kunj… U broke that TRUST Kunj.. U broke that.. I Hate U.. I Hate U Kunj..
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By saying this Twinkle left the house.. His own Family.. His Mother.. Father.. Brother and Sister Even didn’t believe him?
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But two person’s never left his Side.. His Bebe.. And His Mother-in-law.. his Leela Maa.. More than a Mother to him..
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She trusted him and even tried to make twinkle understand but all in vain?She refused to even listen his Name?
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After she left his family member’s to left leaving Alisha.. Anita.. Kunj.. Bebe.. Leela and Uv back..
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Uv who came back just now to meet TWINJ was shocked seeing the scenario.. Kunj pleading to believe him and his So Called Mother Anita and Alisha spitting the Oil on already burstedFire showing Fake tears and consolence word’s..
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The thing which shocked him more was twinkle’s reaction..
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After Twinkle and Sarna Family left.. Alisha came toward’s lifeless Kunj and said:
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A:Aww Kunj baby?Ur Love don’t Trust U.. She hates U?I said na Baby no one can love U more than me.. Now look what happened?I said na Uare only mine..
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K:(jerking Alisha off him) No.. I can Never be Urs.. Never means Never Ever.. I will Always love twinkle and be hers..
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A:Tuch.. Tuch.. Tuch baby.. But ur love don’t believe U..
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Leela came and slapped Alishaand throw rd both Anita and Alisha Out of the House..
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Kunj was resting his head on Bebe’s Lap having tears sitting on Floor.. Babe was caressing his hairs and silently crying on his broken and shattered state..
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K:Bebe (Lifelessly)Bebe U be live me na.. U trust me na..
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B:Haan puttar I trust.. Nd I am always with U.. Not only me but Leela Ji and Uv too..
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Kunj hummed in response.. This was witnessed by Teary Eyed Leela and Uv?Feeling bad for the poor innocent soul?
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Bebe asked kunj to have dinner but he refused stating he wasn’t hungry..This broke everyone more?Always Laughing and Loving person was All quite?
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After that day though Kunj didn’t changed nor his Loving and selfless Nature towards other? But Surely his heart forget to best?The once smiling face was All pale?
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The Smile which always makes everyone smile was now lost somewhere?
Somehow Kunj composed himself..He busied himself in work so Much that even forget about his health.. He beared Twinkle’s Ignorance..
Twinkle Ignored him like he never Exist.. She never left a chance to hurt him.. Though his shattered Condition pierced her Heart but her anger for his betrayal Overpowered her Love..
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She left for London for Four Yrs.. Even when she came back she ignored him..Never let a Chance to taunt him.. Never tried to find out the Truth..
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Kunj who once even fighted for stranger’s right’s also without any intention or anything stopped fighting for himself?
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Though he smiled for his Family..His Bebe..Leela Maa and More than a Friend yet brother to him Uv..But they know it was All fake which never reached his Eye’s..
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Leela Many times tried to make Twinkle understand..Asked her to Find truth herself..But Every time twinkle refused..
L:Twinkle One day U urself will Regret Ur Deads..U will Regret that why didn’t U once believed that Soul..The day U will realised this na..It would be very late..Mark My Word’s Twinkle..Mark My Word’s?
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T:(Proudly) I won’t Maa..Cause he is Betrayer..N u are believing a person who betrayed ur daughter?
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Uv came from back and spoke..
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Uv:Cause U don’t know the Whole truth twinkle..The day U will Know the Truth Na..It would be Very Late..Twinkle as a Friend I advised U..Don’t be So blind and trust those who once tried to ruin it respect and even kill Kunj..U will have nothing after that than regretion..
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Uv and Leela left the place..There word’s kept ringing in her Mind but brushed them when the same day incident when Alisha claimed to be pregnant with Kunj’s Child..Her Anger rosed again n she went through her work..
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Here this Shot End?It’s a Three Shot Story☺If U want then I will Continue it Soon?I will be posting LOVE CAN OVERCOME ANY OBSTACLE by Evening☺
Sohi U asked me how will I be able to manage up with so many FF’s and FS? Well dear I am having holiday’ s till First week of August?
In that Span I will Complete My FS ‘FRIENDSHIP N LOVE’ ; ‘TASHAN E ISHQ FS’ ‘LOVE:A BLESSING OR A PAIN’..
N it’s Sohi’s Birthday tomorrow so birthday special is ready??
Well MS MAHI’s Birthday was also there but I am Late sorry dear??
This One was for U??
Hope U liked the Gift??
HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY DEAR???
LOVE U SO MUCH????
Chalo Now I will take a Leave? Do Comment Haan??
Love U All??
Bye Bye??
Take Care??
Keep Smiling??
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Supporting??
Bye Bye??
17 Comments
awsm one Aamu ???❤❤❤
Continue ittttttttttttttttt
I demand continue it plzzzzzzzz soon dearie plzzzzzzzzz
Awesome OS!!!i Loved it thoroughly!!!!TWINJ flashback description was very nice………their happy moments when they spent together…………………………………………n at the same time their separation track was also good!!!!!On the whole,superb OS!!Keep writing!!
Happy Birthday MS Maahi!!!!Live a happy,long n healthy life!!!
thank u soo much dear….
luv u
Awesome..
Loved it…
Do continue soon….
Love u..
Post soon..??
Superb plot dear
Sorry for not commenting before
This is for all
I’m very happy and blessed to get u all as my friends and sisters
I already got my gift in the form of u all
Before I was a loner but now I’m proud to say I have precious gems like u all in my life
I thank my God infinite times for this
Lastly I really love you all
It blessed to read from u and that Anita and alisha were so evil and twinkle could understand and trust kunj but hope soon twinkle will understand and came back to kuni and happy birthday mahi
thank u sweety…
luv u
Amazing. Pls continue. This
Luv u so much
I loved it dear aamna. …..???????????
thank u thank u soo much my cute sister ????????
yrr mujhe bahut khushi ho rahi h mujhe tumhare jaisi fr aur sister mili tu par aakar ?????
luv u dear
aur tera ye pyara sa shot padhkar maza aa gaya yrrr
ab jaldi post karna OK
luv u dear bahut sarrrrrrra????????????????
Awesome aamna
Plzzzzzz continue soon
Loved it
Amazing
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I am crying reading this??
Poor Kunj??
Twinkle should have believed him??
Plz don’t let Kunj forgive twinkle easily??
She deserve to suffer??
Plz continue??
Post soon??
Love u??
Nice Shot
Post soon
Wow yaar aanu awesome loveddddddd it sooooooooooooooo much ??????????????
Awesome aanu amazing
U like nailed it
Seriously
But twinkle should have trusted kunj
And this is very bad
Mujhse kunj ki halat pada nahi jaa raha
It’s so emotional
Yet amazing
Please continue soon
Love you keep smiling
Aanu it was mind blowing fabulous superb nd romantic nd too emotional episode. Hate that Alisha. Feeling bad for twinj. Loved it so much. Post next soon.
Love you ? ? ? ?