Hi guys iam Ashnita back again with a trill story . This is dedicated to my all idols luv u all
Introduction
Kabir Malhotra – A handsome man and most wanted Ganster for police but for poor people is a god.
Sanchi Mishra – beautiful girl madly in luv with Kabir .
Shadhu bhai – A criminal who was a contract killer but now king of crime hates Kabir and want to kill him
Veer Malhotra – Handsome bro of Kabir loves him very much and wants to marry pragya .
Robin – ( any suggestions ) Kabirs right hand
Laksh – (Any suggestions ) Kabir right hand and tail of him
Pragya – veers luv interest and sanchi sis
PROMO
A goon of sadhu bhai – pliz dnt kill me I dnt want to die
Kabir – pehle bol sorry Kabir bhai mujhe galti hogai .
Goon – sorry Kabir bhai mujhe galti hogai.
Kabir shoots him and went near the dead body and said galti q karta hai.
Robin comes running Kabir bhai sanchi came back again.
Oh no jhansi ki rani came back Kabir said.
Sanchi – Kabir I luv u and want to Marry u
Love is not my type Kabir said .
It’s written in destiny Kabir we will be together said sanchi.
Kabir Malhotra makes his own destiny and u r not in my destiny Kabir shouted .
Bula Dena mujhe tujh Jenna hai mere bina sanchi its better for u said Kabir .
Sanchi – I can’t Kabir MEIN PHIR BHI TUMKO CHAUNGI .
Kabir – shoot me sanchi shoot me I said shoot me .
I can’t Kabir said sanchi.
I luv u sanchi i Luv very much pliz shoot me for my luv sake
Sanchi holding a gun with red eyes shoots somebody and drops the gun. Mein Phir bhi tumko chaungi Kabir.
Wat happened to Kabir
Y he asked sanchi to shoot him
Y he confessed his luv for her in tat manner. If you want to know stay tune and drop a comment my sweeties and cupcakes. Luv u all
Regards
Ashnita
38 Comments
GOD UR ARE MAKING ME GO CRAZY WITH THAT INTRO…..YOU KILLED IT GIRL….ITS FANTASTIC….JUST LOVED IT…..HOW CAN U WRITE SOOO BEAUTIFULLY….WHAT AN IDEA YOU GOT….REALLY CREATIVE…..THE PLOT IS FILLED WITH SUSPENSE…AND TRILLER
I AM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT…
PLZZZZZZZZZZ POST AS SOON AS POSSIBLE…
VERY CURIOUS
SIYA
OMG thanks u very much
Awesome ashnita really different nd again a good one dear
Keep it up
Waiting eagerly for nxt one
Plzz post asap.
Thank you very much
Omg wow wow wow again wow I just lie thriller type stories nd this stories is what I exactly love but sometimes the tashan is rare to describe nd u did that too very well wage for next part
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Hi Ashnita.Fantastic,Thrilling and Suspence FF dear.Welcome to TU dear.Ur story is apathetic.Nice suspense.The way u changed all characters and gave a fresh look.That’s too gud.It proves ur talent.l loved it to the core…Kewp writing dear…
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OMG OMG OMG thank you very much saksh. U guys r my idol and inspiration
Oh ashnita u r amaz dear nd i lovvv the kabir character a lot kabir as a gangster omgggggg u nailed it seriously nd the dialogue ohhh what to say ‘galti kyun krta h’ best ashnita dear i lovv u seriously i m fallen for ur writting nd its means to me seriously or kya khe in pragya style abeo kya baat h tum to matlab kamaal h ekdam se chaa gaye ho.. Gajabbbbb h plzzz sab kuch chod chad nxt epi post karo asap plzzzz just kidding but update fast otherwise m tumhe pakati rahungi
OMG OMG OMG OMG thank you very much niya
Oh god I got goosebumps…. It is fantastic… Fabulous… Superbbb… Amazing….. Now just can’t wait to read it. …… Dear ur writing skills are making me fall in love madly!! Love uh!!!
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Superb …full of suspense and thrill update asap
Thank you Neha
Nice
Thank you alia
Mindblowing. …..awesome. ……..fabulous. …….Gr8. ………..amazing. ………..jhakaas. ……..kadak. …….story my dear sis.?.
I’m speechless.
Kasam se keh rahe h ekdum jhakaas episode tha or haan agar jldi dusra wala post nhi ki to muh tod denge.
I was just kidding sis,hope you don’t mind.
And pls update as soon as possible pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls.
Lol???
OMG OMG OMG OMG thank you very much and I dnt mind it
Wow really interesting dear can’t wait for the next part I love the title specially
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Ashnita dear, u left me dumb-struck with this update of urs………… just one ques…r u a huge fan of suspense & action plots?????? cz I too luv it & would surely look forward to what new u r going to give us with ur nxt update……..
Thank you very much riya sweetie and yes iam die heart fan of trill and suspense
Wow that was great pls update next soon..
Thank you
Woohoo!!!! Cheers to you dear!!! This plot is AMAZING ??? you know what even though you’re new you have already won our hearts with your unique talent ???
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Ashnita dear I love thriller movies and this ff will rock…its too good to be praised…loved it to the core of my heart..plz post soon dear
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Nice one
Thank you
Nice waiting for the next part
Thank you for
Wow dear.. u r a surprising package.. u day by day making me go crazy with your stories. Keep it up yaar. Waiting for next update eagerly
Thank you very much sweetie it means a lot
It’s awesome dear
continue
Thank you sweetie
Omg… Loved it …. Its so interesting and unique concept…. Can’t wait for next updates plz keep writing it was really awesome.. ❤
Nice intro