Helo my lovely sweeties. I hope u guys remembered me. Thank you for ur lovely comments.
For some reason I have to end this ff iam really sorry.
Akri alvida mere dosto ke naam
Episode starts
Kabir gets call from unknown number he gets shocked.
Sanchi -wat happened
Kabir -veer Laksh Robin pack ur bags we r leaving.
Veer -wat we just came yesterday.
Kabir -yes I know but we have to leave now.
Sanchi -wat happened Kabir u can tell me.
Kabir -we r leaving now
They packed their lugguage. And went back to airport.
Ashnita – sorry actually
Kabir-it’s ok ashu we will meet again.
Ashu -yeah
Laksh -bye ashu I will really miss u.
Ashu – bye Laksh.
Robin – let’s go with us
Veer -yes ashi pliz come with us.
Ashu -Iam sorry I can’t.
Sanchi – it ok ashi we know that u got urgent work.
Pragya – phir milenge
Ashi – hmm.
They hugged eachother.
Laksh -ashu will u miss me
Ashu -y will I miss you
Laksh -yes y will u miss me
Ashu -offcourse I will miss u idiot.
Laksh gave gift to ashu. They hugged eachother and went.
Back to malhotra mantion
Veer -bhai wat happened
Kabir – sadhu bhai
Sanchi -wat
Kabir -Sadhu
Sadhu -welcome Kabir and family.
They turned back and saw sadhu bhai goons captured them.
Sanchi -dad wats happening
Laksh veer and Robin gets shocked. They looked at Kabir with many questions in their eyes.
Kabir -yes Sanchi and pragya is sadhu bhai daughters
Pragya -wat i thought my parents died.
Sadhu and his goons beat Laksh Robin and veer .After that Kabir fights with them. From behind one of sadhu goons banged his head. Kabir collapsed.
After that they tie him in chair. And they throw trio in a cage with blindfold and cloth on their mouth. Kabir gets conscious and gets shocked to see trio in cage but in other cage is Tigers which is hungry for 1 week. Sanchi shouts no Dad they r innocent pliz leave them.
Shadhu -look Kabir they will become Tigers lunch today. Should I opened other cage
Kabir – no sadhu pliz leave them.They didn’t do anythinng .They are innocent.
Sadhu -really Kabir they slaps me.
Kabir -pliz shadhu leave them. Kill me leave them pliz I beg for u
Sadhu -wow nice idea sanchi
Sanchi -yes dad
Sadhu -cum here
Sanchi went near him. He took gun and gave to sanchi.
Sadhu -kill him u want to kill him with ur hands kill him
Sanchi points gun at Kabir. She couldn’t meet his eyes tears flows from her eyes.
Sanchi -i can’t I can’t kill him dad
Sadhu gets a shocked.
Sadhu – wat Sanchi i said kill him.
Sanchi -no dad i can’t kill my husband.
Shadhu – y
Sanchi -because I LOVE HIM
Shadhu gets a big shocked. He slapped her. Sanchi fell in the ground and her nose bLeeds. Kabir gets shocked.
Sadhu -sanchi kill him or I will open that cage. So choose between ur husband or his bro.
Kanchi saw his goons going to open cage. Kanchi recalls their moments with eachother and with them. They cry.
Kabir -Sanchi shoot me pliz save my bros.
Sanchi -no I can’t
Kabir -shoot me sanchi shoot me
Sanchi -no no i can’t kill u i love u.
Kabir -shoot me I said shoot me damn it.
Sanchi -no
Sadhu -oh enough of ur bak bak open the cage
Kabir – sanchi I LOVE U
Sanchi gets shocked to hear him.
Sanchi -wat
Kabir -yes Sanchi I love you when I saw u first time. I really love u but I couldn’t confess. I Love u Sanchi. Pliz shoot me for my love sake.
Sanchi recalled all her moments with Kabir and sadhu bhai. Sadhu was laughing.
Sanchi shot someone and breaks down. She cries.
Sanchi -iam sorry Kabir mein phir bhi tumko chaungi.
END OF FB
After sometime police arrives and arrest sanchi. Sanchi was going just then someone holds her hands.
She turned back and quickly hugged him. She cries. That person consoles her.
Sanchi – iam sorry I have to do it. I always chose my dad i know he was bad person and his bad deeds but after meeting u i got to know between right and wrong. I am daughter and wife so I chose wife duty iam sorry for not listening u. Mein bhi tumko chaungi.
She again hugged him .Person was holding her tightly.
Sanchi -kabir.
That person reavealed as Kabir. Yes he is Kabir. But wait Kabir is alive. How cum. Sanchi shot him. But if Kabir is alive so y police arrested sanchi. So whom did sanchi shot. ????
Sanchi -i killed my dad Kabir. I killed him.
Shadhu body is going on stretcher. Sanchi caresses his face.
Sanchi -iam sorry dad iam really sorry. I love u dad
Kabir -Sanchi it was not ur fault. Don’t think that u killed him think that u gave a beautiful gift.he died with his daughters hands. Tumne apne dad ko azad kya iss gun se.
They hugged eachother. Police was taking sanchi.
Kabir -i will wait for u. Mein bhi tumko chunga.
Sanchi smiles and police took her. Sanchi got 1 year prison.
After 1 year
Sanchi came out and saw all waiting for her. She quickly ran and hugged Kabir.
Veer -bhai aur bhabhi
Robin -aa laut chale
Kanchi -where
Laksh -jaa hum apne adhura trip choda. Iam missing ashu can we go there again.
Kanchi -offcourse.
At Nadi International Airport
They arrived Laksh was looking for Ashnita. His eyes went to her and smiles.
Laksh -ashu we r back.
Robin -yes and I missed you so much
Laksh -I missed her so so much
They argue.
Ashu -ok ok enough
Kabir -congrats ashu it was a lovely journey
Ashu -yeah so let’s have a selfi.
They took selfie and screen pauses on their smiling face.
THE END
I HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT. ITS BORING AND THANK YOU GUYS FOR LOVING MY FF. IF I DO ANY MISTAKES PLIZ FORGIVE ME. LOTS OF HUGGS AND KISSES TO U GUYS AND LUV U LOADS.
TAKE CARE
ALWAYS KEEP SMILING
REGARDS
ASHNITA
12 Comments
nice ff …but come back soon…a big hug for you…
Wow Ashnita……………..Kiya ending thi yaaar…..Main bhi tum ko chahungi..after this……This is beyond everything……………..you rocked ashu dear…………….Amazing……..keep write….Luv you dear……swettiee….&&&&&& one more thing it was no boring in any way got it???
Ashnita dear… i read both ur stories back to back..so here i am commenting.. you stories are best dear.. plz don’t stop posting.. i love ur stories..
Thabks for entertaining us
It wasn’t boring at all Ashu.
Well done Sanchi. Crime is always a crime be it done by ur dad or somebody else.Sadhu bhai died n they lived happily ever after.Yayy….It was awesome.
mere Ashu ke updates ko koi boring kehne ki himmat to kare, taange tod dungi uski………….& Ashu, main tumhe aise, itne asaani se chodne waali,,,NAHIN………ok ok…….jaldi se kuch aur updates karo…….I’m waiting……..zyada intezaar karwaai toh, tumhare phone ya laptop se nikalke tickling karkarke tumhare pet mein dard karwa doongi………..haha…….luv u sweetieeeee………….
Wow jhakaas story especially kanchi’s emotional scenes… I’m very happy at last everything was fine…
Nice episode
Awesome super fabulous fantastic mind blowing all ur stories are khidki tod
Great end Dr…
Hey awsome jouney ashi dear happy ending vbut sad u end it but no more u came back with many other ff they work like a aid on wound,…hehee..nd sorry for late
Ashi tum chahe is ff ko end kro PR mai pjir bi tumko chahungi mai phir bi tumko chahumgi……loved the ending poor sadhu but achcha h ek don ki life jeene se better marna shi h!! Jadu ki jhappi to u and luv uhh!!
Don’t even date to call it boring… It was so amazing… Marvelous… Superb… Jhakaass… Khidki tod epi.. Loved it… Will miss your ff sweetie.. It was so unique and different concept.. Always loved reading it… But happy you have such a beautiful happy ending… Tc love you..❤❤❤