Hi I am Gayathri. Since I asked ur suggestions before for my work, I have decided that It will be a short story of our heavenly couple swasan. I don’t know whether I maybe able to match ur expectations of urs about this one.
(But no one has any expectations from me?).. So here my blabbering stops.
Let’s start with the first part of my fews shots.
Well the character sketch is somewhat like this.
Swara Gadodia: A bubbly girl. Soul sister of Ragini Laksh Maheshwari. Madly in love with Sanskar Maheshwari. Naughty. But she has a dark secret which only she and her mother knows. Enjoys her life to the fullest
Sanskar Maheshwari: our hero. Brother of Laksh Maheshwari. Son of Durga Prasad Maheshwari and Annapurna Maheshwari. Love Swara.
Ragini Laksh Maheshwari : Soul sister of Swara. Wife of Laksh Maheshwari. Can do anything for her family.
Laksh Maheshwari: Husband of Ragini Laksh Maheshwari. Best friend of Swara.
Other Characters are like same. But difference is that there is not Ram Prasad Maheshwari and Sujata Maheshwari, Adarsh Maheshwari and Uttara Maheshwari.
And there would be characters from other serials too. And at a time The story would be same, copy to copy, as Ek hazzaron mein meri behana hein.
MAJBOORI HEIN MERI❤❤
The scene starts with two girls arguing.
Younger girl.. I m fine di. Mujhe hospital nahi Jana check up ke liye.
Older girl…. Swara When did I say u r ill. It’s ur routine check up bacha. Mere liye.
Swara.. Ragini di mujhe nahi karni check up
Sharmishta.. Ragu Mein use check up ke liye le chaloongi beta. Tum tension mat lo. Teekh Hein.
Ragini.. Maa aap bolo tho teekh hein. Time se le jaana ise. Aur ma mein na ghar jaa rahi hoon. Mujhe ghar jaake kaam hein. bye
Sharmishta.. bye beta.
And Ragini went
Swara.. Thank you Ma. Aap time pe aa gayi. Varna di mujhe le jaati aur unhe sach pata lag jaata.
Sumi.. Haan beta. Agar mein time pe nahi aati toh pata nahi kya ho jata.
After an hour.
Swara is watching Tom&jerry. We can see Sumi running towards her.
Swara.. Are ma. Kya hua. Aap achanak bhaag sumi bhaag mode mein kyun aa gayi.
Sumi.. Shona, Ragu ki accident ho gayi.
Swara started crying. Both of them rushed to hospital.
SWARA’S P. O. V
When i reached there I saw Laksh jiju crying and Sanskar consoling him. He was broken into million pieces. I went towards him and consoled him. He looked towards me and I was trying to control my tears. He said to me. Tum mujhe rone se rok rahe ho aur khud ro rahe ho. I just hugged him and started to cry..
Doctor came and said that the patient needs blood. Every one asked me to donate her blood. Maa couldnt give her blood as she was Di’s step mother.
But I cant. I just cant. I denied. Every one pleaded to me. But I cant help. Majboori hein meri
PRECAP: SWARA BROKEN
Guys i know you could have guessed a part of the story line. But still. I dont want to discontinue my ss because most of may not like this. If anybody read this I will be happy and do comment.. Criticism are most welcomed.And dont complain later. I am really lazy so I may not update regularly but weekends pakka. Bye.
13 Comments
Update in english
nice concept.swara ko koi bimari hai kya?
???? My all time favorite serial ka storyline in my present favorite serial. ……love u yaar….. awsome episode…… I will surely read…… plz dnt rush…….
interesting
nice….plz don’t tell swara has cancer….i don’t want her to die
nice what mujbhhori swara have? reveal it…
Beautiful. But dear update in english. I think swara has some serious disease like blood cancer? Isn’t it? But why shomi & swara hiding it from rags? & why she isn’t going for checkups? That’s a very bad thing.
nice dear
Awesome dear
nyc
nice
It’s Awsome dear…. N this was my favorite serial…. No worries I will definitely read it…. Update soon…..
one of my favorite serial continue dear