MAJESTIC AUGUST : JUST FEEL IT– Rikara, Rumya FF- Part 4 [By Renima]
Hi friends, am back with a faster update..But episode is very short as from monday my workload will be increasing, so from next week onwards I will not get time 2 update my ff’s….I don’t know when I will get a break, so guys u have 2 wait for me….Thanks 2 all of u for reading and commenting……
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Scene – 5 { @ Oberoi mansionhall}
Rudra : Prinku….pls stop crying……And what’s wrong with u, why are u saying like these ??
Prinku : I am saying the truth only, bhaiya……I feel I am losing my mental imbalance…..I will kill myself….
Rudra : But why u are saying like these ??
Prinku ; Everything is wrong, whenever I tries 2 do something the out come will result as wrong bhaiya…. I don’t know how it happens, my mistakes have created troubles for ranveer…..I can’t trouble him any more, bhaiya……
Rudra : Prinku…….listen 2 me….Be calm…..[rudy makes her 2 drink a glass of water] See, I will convince ranveer and am sure he will listen 2 me….
Prinku : No rudra bhaiya……I always commits mistake and ranveer have tried his level best 2 console me ….U know what happened last week, I forgot 2 off the gas cylinder and auntyji…….[ prinku literally cries]
Rudra : Prinku…..[rudy holds her hand]
Prinku : For god sake nothing happened 2 her……She says am facing mental stress and ranveer also feels so…..But I think it’s not stress….I am losing my mental imbalance…..
Rudra : Shut up….prinku…Just shut up…..Don’t say like these….Nothing has happened 2 u…..Okay….. It’s just a misunderstanding…. We will solve it….[rudy gets emotional]
Prinku : It is getting complicated day by day….I am scared because of me, any one will get hurt…Bhaiya… I once tried 2 commit suicide also, but ranveer stopped me……
Rudra : What ??? Suicide !!!! Prinku……
Prinku : I know that was a stupid decision, but I don’t know what I have 2 do now……..
Rudra : Prinku…..we will…..[rudy finds jhanvi and pinky arriving in hall] discuss abt this later…..Just wipe out tears….Mom is coming…. [prinku nods her head and smiles]
Jhanvi : I missed u beta……[prinku and jhanvi hug each other]
Prinku : Me 2…mom……
Pinky : By the ways, where is ranveer ??
Prinku : Choti maa , he is busy with his work…..
Pinky : Oh My Maata, What makes him so busy that he can’t attends his brother in law’s engagements ……..
Jhanvi : Pinky, he might be busy….just chill…..
Pinky : But still he would have come and….
Rudra : [interrupts] Choti maa….prinku seems 2 be tired…I think she needs rest…..
Jhanvi : U are right, rudra……Prinku…..go 2 ur room……
Rudra : Yeah…I will make protein shake for u…. [pridra leaves, pinky stares them]
Pinky : Jethaniji…..Did u notice, prinku has changed a lot….She didn’t smiled and doesn’t asked where is shivay and omkara……
Jhanvi : Just stop doubting our children, pinky……
Pinky : I am not doubting , jethaniji…..I just tells what I feels…….that’s all……
Jhanvi : Whatever, am happy that prinku has arrived….Pinky , have u called panditji ??
Pinky : Oh My Maata, I forgot it, jethaniji u never fails 2 remember me what I have 2 do……Really I some times wonders what I will do without u….
Jhanvi : Pinky….Better u start learning things from now itself…..I can’t remind u always…..
Pinky : Jethaniji….U are telling like as if u are leaving oberoi mansion…..
Jhanvi : [smiles with wet eyes] Don’t know if it is written in my fate…..
Pinky : I didn’t get u….
Jhanvi : Time will tell it, pinky….[jhanvi hugs pinky and leaves]
Pinky stares jhanvi with confusing eyes….
Scene – 6 [ @ Police Head Quarters] Ranveer’s view
It was a rainy night…As part of patrolling I asked the constable 2 stop the police van and started passing my eye sight 2wards the whole area with his torchlight……I find some pedestrians who were running 2 catch the respective trains and buses and some vehicles which continued 2 raise their horns ….. I get down from the van and managed 2 clear the traffic, but suddenly my eyes went on the edge of bridge, I find a girl who was standing there and staring the sea deeply…..Her face was not visible 2 me due 2 the darkness , but without thinking much I rushed there and made her 2 get down by holding her in my arms…..My hands were entangled @her waist so tightly since she was trying 2 run and climb on the edge again….. She screamed so loud and when I touched her cheek and realized who is she, it made him 2 stare her deeply…….With a heavy heart I understud that it was none other than my wife, I gently whispered “priyanka”, but she was not ready 2 hear me…..To get a release from my arms, she scratched my palm with her nails, but I refused her 2 go….. Ranveer, just leave me……She continued 2 scratch on my palm and was trying her whole force 2 release my arms from her body……. I raised my voice again 2 control her, but she didn’t listened me…. Without a second thought, I slapped priyanka which made her 2 burst in tears……I don’t know what’s happening with my priyanka…….Today I scolded her so badly ….. I think I should call her and talk…[ ranveer tries prinku’s mobile but finds that it was switched off…He gets emotional and leaned back on the chair ]
Constable : Sir……Are u okay ??
Ranveer : Yeah, am fine……
Constable : Wooh crime file, it is been kept so long in table, u haven’t checked it…..
Ranveer : Kishan….I am on duty and am aware of my responsibilities……[ranveer takes the file with much anger and starts turning it’s pages in frustration ]
Scene – 7 { @ Tejvi room}
Gauri knocks the door and enters there with a cup of coffee…..
Tej : I didn’t asked u 2 bring coffee…
Gauri : Paapaji…….Have it , u will feel better , u will be tired seeing those big files …….
Tej : Seems, u are not interested 2 change ur identity……
Gauri : Ji….
Tej : [tej throws the cup down and stares gauri sharply] Clean it chulbul…..
Gauri was shocked 2 see her father in law like these……
“Mr.Oberoi “ This voice raised like a storm which was ready 2 hit the rocks……Tej turns his eyes 2wards it and finds omkara’s angry face and redish eyes before him……Omkara makes a heroic entry in tej’s room……Gauri turned her teary eyes 2wards om and stared him…..Om stood beside her and holds her hand…..
Omkara : Mr. Oberoi……Gauri is my wife and u have no rights 2 insult her….If u dare 2 do this, then I will forget that u are my so called father……
Tej : I don’t have any interest 2 talk with ur loyal servant…….
Omkara : [interrupts] Mr. Oberoi!!! U degraded my mom for years and she tolerated all of them because she respects the relationship of husband and wife and whenever I questioned this she reminds me that it was u who hold her hand and brought her 2 this house as ur wife…….Before omkara’s mom, she is Tej Singh Oberoi’s wife and I have 2 accept it……. I am supposed 2 witness my mom in pain, but if u will insult gauri before my eyes then I will never tolerate it…. First of all She is my wife gauri kumara Sharma singh Oberoi and secondly she is the bahu of this house…… [Om presses tej’s neck in anger]
Gauri : Omkaraji……pls…..leave him…..He is ur paapa…..
Omkara has almost lose his temper in anger…..Gauri gets scared 2 see omie like these…….She tried her level best 2 release om’s hand from tej’s neck, but omie’s hands were strongly tied around the neck and tej started coughing …….Gauri felt situations are getting worse, she ran from the room screaming
“ Shivaay bhaiya “…….Her scream awakened everyone’s attention, all got worried 2 see gauri like these…..Finally she was managed 2 find shivay who was engaged in a phone call……Gauri rushed near shivay and screamed …”Wooh..omkaraji……” Shivay rushed behind gauri and reached tej’s room…. Other oberois accompanied them ….
Shivaay : Om, what are u doing ??
Omkara : Don’t stop me shivay…u don’t know what this man has said now…….
Shivaay : Whatever it be, just stop it….om….[shivay came close 2 tej and om, mean while rudy also comes and joins them….. The joint effort of shivru made omie 2 release his hands from tej’s neck…..]
Shivaay : Om, what was u doing, man ?? [ shivaay touches om’s shoulder]
Omkara : This man has crossed his limits, shivaay……..[ om leaves the room with a frustrated mind, tej also leaves the spot]
Rudra : O…..listen….
Shivaay : What happened, gauri ??
Gauri cries and stares shivru……She narrates the incident….
Jhanvi : Now he has started torturing my bahu also…….Why he is doing this ??? [jhanvi leans back on the wall and gets emotional]
Pinky : Jethaniji…….[pinky sits beside jhanvi] Prinku beta…..go and get some water…..
Prinku : Ji…..
Gauri literally cries and leaves the spot
Rudra : Shivay bhaiya…..O…….and bhabhi……
Shivaay : We have 2 talk with them, rudra…..
Rudra : Prinku, u just stay here with mom….We will come back…..[prinku nods her head]
Scene shifts 2 omkara’s room
Gauri finds omkara punching his palm on the glass……
Gauri : Omkaraji……..what are u doing ?? [gauri rushed near omkara and hold his hand] U will get hurt…. Pls…..don’t do this….
Omkara ; I have got already much hurt in life…..I am not new 2 this, gauri…….
Gauri : I am sorry…….[ gauri takes the first aid box and starts caressing om’s bleeding hand]
Omkara : Why ??
Gauri : Whatever happened now, it’s because of my stupidity only….I should not have entered there…. I just thought 2 talk with paapaji …But he…..
Omkara : When he doesn’t consider me as his son , then why he will talk with his son’s wife ?? U didn’t committed any mistake…..And whatever happened, pls don’t take it ur heart……Mr. Oberoi is…..
Gauri : Omkaraji…..If u don’t mind, may I ask u one thing…..U never felt from heart that u have 2 call him as paapa ??
[Rikara stare each other’s eyes…..Om recalls the bitter past [ will reveal it on upcoming episode….just wait for it……]
PRECAP : In the Deep Sea of Pain , I am unable 2 find a hand……How far I will swim ???
Some memories don’t go so easy, it will stab my heart again and again…… How will I find the way ???
17 Comments
What a shocking revelation from Prinku side ,she lost belief in herself,she broke down befire Rudra so painful, then Ranveer pov and his care but will survive their relation.Gauri-Tej-Omkara violence drama.Last question of Gauri hit the spot.Painful and hopeful precap.loved it.
PS-I love Ekta,RajshreePHouse,Rajan shahi and sashi sumit’s show because they manage their all characters an their tracks unlike Gulkhan
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait ……Missing dbo also that’s why filled bit drama , it was necessary 2 show as part of story……prinku will get more importance in my ff….i don’t watch other shows, so don;t know abt it…before ib buddy project was my favorite show , loved ikrs also, but skipped when eisha singh quitted….
Wow.I loved om’s attitude in 2dys epi n his protective avatar towards gauri. Gd job om. ( he shouldn’t hv behaved dat way vth his father bt tej deserved it) eagerly waiting 2 know about om’s past. I’m sure gauri will take his hand n will show him d way out of darkness. She will be d light 4 his life. Eagerly waiting 4 nxt epi dr.bye tc
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait …….
AWESOME EMOTIONAL??? FANTASTIC INTERSTING MIND BLOWING SUPERB??????
Dear Renima Di
PriRu Scene And Talk??Jhanvi Pinky Talk Miss The Pinky In Your Story Also Miss Old
Pinky In Show??Ranveer Pov??Tej ShiOmRu Gauri Pinky Jhanvi Scene??OmRi Talk??All Is Awesome And Nice??????
Take Care And Stay Safe?
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait ……
Woowwwwwwwww diii such an awesome update… Full of emotions and revelations and drama…and what not… I really loved it… Read this part only but somewhat got the idea of ur storyline…
Trust me its superb… Also di sooooo sorry as I am not able to post or reply these days… I am really stuck with my tests and submissions… Next whole week is fully packed with the same…
Also sorry for not able to read ur ff too. And one big question plz try to reply DI WE HAVE THOUGHT TO START PUBLISHING UR STORY (when passion meets compassion) ON WATTPAD GIVING U THE DUE CREDITS. SINCE U AREN’T ON ALL THE SNS AND WE THINK UR STORY DESERVES EXPOSURE TO THE AUDIENCES. PLZ GIVE US UR PERMISSION SO THAT WE CAN START POSTING IT ON OUR WATTPAD CLUB ACCOUNT penpals_funpals IS THE DESTINATION WHERE ALL THIS IS GONNA TO HAPPEN.
PLZ plz plz do reply… I guess shama di had asked u this and u might have replied to her but she is not in our contact these days neither through WhatsApp nor on call… So plz do reply.
And once again a big applaud for this chappy.
Luv u to infinity.
Miss u too
Take care.
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Kuhu, I don’t have any prblm regarding publishing that one on wattpad, thing is am comfortable in this Tu only, which is like a family for me and so close 2 my heart and nothing can replace tu’s space….. If it’s passion meets compassion, then i don’t know what 2 say…..Many episodes, i myself felt struggling and thing is many of us cried a lot also while reading that one….i don’t want any one 2 weep more,….Don’t know when it comes for ishkara, it will certainly turn as smthng very emotional which will make me as well as many of the readers 2 weep….Many frnds told me in pm what they felt and it somehow made them 2 remember their own life’s tough times, and i actually felt much bad for making people as sad…So if u will publish in wattpad, am scared if any one will weep…..So it’s better 2 keep that in tu itself……Hope u get me in right sense and currently am writing 2 works for rikara and their way of execution is different…..So if u still want 2 publish , then u have 2 wait until i completes this ff and it will take time also…..I guess this time no will weep, i hope so……I replied shama the same thing only…..And no need of sorry, even am not a regular person here, and am damn busy with my office work and field visits… Will return back after 13 days only…..So hope we can talk there…. And thanks for coming and commenting on this ff, feels so nice 2 see u here…convey my regards 2 shama if u finds her anywhere and 2 mirakee friends also….Bye..and love u 2……miss u a lot
Superrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr dr……
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait ……will read ur work later and will comment
Superb update
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait ……
Awesome fabulous ???????update
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait ……
It is awesome dii.. Such a pain full revelation from Priyanka side… Love you take care and stay blessed dii…
Thanks a lot and sorry am damn busy with field visits as part of my job, will come back after 13 days only.. so u have 2 wait ……
Renima di, aapko yaad hein mein kaun hoon?? Aapki wahi sielnt reader jinhone aapko my heart’s desire ishkara fiction ke baad likne ke liye bola thaa. Aapne toh likhna hi chodne waali thi, lekin mere lagatar msgs ishkara page google plus me paake aapne phir se do ff likhi. Mein jaanti hun passion meets compassion likhte waqt aapko kaafi life mein sturggles udani padi aur har ek episode inspiring aur realistic tha. Jaise ki aapne kaha aap ki ff’s fairy tales nahi hein aap har ek character ko jaanne ki koshish karti hein, mujhe samajh mein aa gayi ki wahan take aake aapke liye kitna mushkil thaa ishkara ko depict karna. Aap rikara pe currently ff likh rahe hein ,woh acche hein. Aapko pata nahi aapki ff mein woh jaadu hein joh kisi aur ff writer ke paas nahi hein. Aap rumya pe jab likhti hein toh woh ekdum innocence aur cuteness se bhar jaate hein. Ishkara mein to kehane ki zarurat hi nahi hein,kyunki aapse accha uss pair ke liye koi likh hi nahi sakta.Bahut zyada ishkara ki kami mehasus ho rahi hein. mein ff ke liye request nahi karungi,lekin aap agar kisi ke liye bhi os likhte hein, toh uss mein ishana ko portray kare toh mujhe accha feel hoga.jaanti hun yeh aapke liye bahut painfulhein aur ho sakta hein hum sab royenge,lekin uss aasu mein bhi ek muskan chipe hein.Aapki fan sweety ,maine aapkp naam diya thaa-renishkara. Aap bhool gayi hein kya woh naam?Jab aap lautengi mujhe aapke Os kaa intezar rahega, aapki fan and admirer sweety