Hello guys on 1st epi I got more than 100 comment… But these r decreasing I guys….many of u are not liking ….but its ohk….I will end it soon….
Swara POV
I wake up but I didn’t find sanskar there …..I knock the door of washroom…. But he was not there…..I took my clothes n go to washroom……I undress my self n took the shower….I was just thinking of Sanskar….. His care….his support shows that he is a very kind person but then I remember our wedding n last night too……which shows he is just a gangster…… Ufff all thought were revolving around me…..huh……its an half an hour I keep on thinking on the same thing….I switch off the shower n wear my clothes…..its a grey n pink suit….I came to check out where is sanskar without wearing any accessories… Or my sindoor……I was walking here n there then I went to some hall …I came here first time….I saw Sanskar doing fighting practice….. He was shirtless….he is hot…I murmur …..I keep on looking him…..he noticed me…n came towards me…..I was shivering…I lowered my face…..he smiles ….he pulled me towards him…..SANSKAR I said……he kissed me n wish me gud morning….. I too said gud morning….. He cuts his finger with a glass ….I get concerned…..he fills my hairline with his blood……I love to see ur hairline filled with sindoor. ..so never forget it…..he say politely…..sorry ..I said…..he was about to kiss my lips but I turned….he kissed my nape….n whispers:- u r my queen…….suddenly ruhani came there n we both were embarrassed…..
Ruhani:- ohoooo romance…
Swara:- hmm ruhani….u didn’t get ready for school…? Come I will make u ready…..n Sanskar…. U too get ready…..
Sanskar:- ohk…
Ruhani:- Chachi….u won’t help Chachi to get ready…..?
Swara:- he domt need my help…he is big na….now come…..
Sanskar POV
Ohio my swara is blushing…. Her this skill kills me……she looks at me before leaving with ruhani…..she always lowers her sight in front of me…..my cute doll….n this pink n grey suit is increasing her beauty…. Huh….this girl will kill me one day…..I get ready for office…..n I saw her running begin ruhani…..
Swara:- ruh …baby…plzz stop m tired….plzz drink ur milk……
She looks like a kid now…..running laughing… Playing like a small child….she was about to slip but I hold her at right time…..her eyes were closed in fear…..I was just smiling seeing her beauty …..she slowly opens her eyes…..n we share a cute eyelock…..
Carefully…I said…..she just nods n say me ty….I caught ruhani…n she make her drink chocolate milkshake ……
I m getting late…..I m leaving…. I said
Swara:- but bf..?
Sanskar:- I will eat in office….
Swara:- no….sit n first do bf n then go….
Sanskar:- are I will…
Swara:- I said do bf….
She orders me…..I can’t believe anyone can order me…..but I loved it…..she is behaving like a typical wife. …well I follow her order n eat my bf quietly……n mom n ruhani was teasing me….huh….
So guys its all about 4 episode…..plz plz support me…
92 Comments
Ur eps r getting more sweet and cute??? post nxt soon
Ty sree
Wow…..what is the story behind making a gangster ????
Ty kanak….n the secret would be reveal later on
It’s good
Ty rosey…..
awsome..plz dont end soon..its interesting
Thnqq dear
No way…I commented in all episodes but just now as I checked I found that Telly updates has not posted even I of my comments…sorry you felt sad but please…please don’t end it…I really love your ff…even my little sister loves them…but most updates I don’t let her read as she is just five and I don’t want to expose her to even small romances such as kissing on the cheek…hope you understand…
Ty dear…..I m sorry …I thought that many people are not liking it….so I thought to end it….but sorry I hurt u…..ty for supporting…
It’s nice dear plzz continue it…..
Thnqqq menaz
Nice….
Thank dear……
Awww !!! Cho cute of Ruhani.
Ty madhu
Amazing
Thnqqq lucky
I am a silent reader but I read all ur episodes In one go I just loved ur ff and story line ❤❤❤❤❤
Thanks harshitha….
How can you end??? I have been a silent reader. Less comments don’t mean that readers don’t like your ff…many of us are silent readers, we don’t comment as we are multi tasking, I read ffs while eating my food, so you can’t exactly comment and read all thousand FFs on tu…it’s a request please yaar don’t end this ff
Ty ankita…..n sorry for hurting u….
Awesome waiting for the next part post it asap???????
Ty sanju
nyc epi..plz dnt end it so soon..plz continue..:)
Thnq kumu…
Yeah itz osm…
Itz cool that swara can order a gangster…
Thnqq meher
The episode was nice.. I loved it…
Thanks dear….
Nice
Thnq kanika
hey… dont think people lost interest… those who started reading will continue it even without reading. im telling this, coz am also this category.
sorry.. that should be “without commenting”
Tysm…..magan
But actually if people didn’t comment then ihow I came to know that u r liking it or not
I’m a silent reader n l like ur ff alot so plz dnt end it sooon plzzzzz it is a humbel request
Tysm ….but dear…if u will always be a silent reader then how I will came to know ur reaction…… So plzz comment
Sooo romantic…little long uhh nxt tym…
Tysm dear…
I love ur ff..continue…dont end it soon
Ty ayesha
Awsm bt short
cute swasan
Thnq jiya
its awesome dr…..but dont end it soon…..pls
Thanks …
Sooooo short…. Nt awsm….. I’m loving it…. Now upload atlast 2 more episodes today…plssssssssss
Thnq radhika
awesome….but give a big update next time……
Thnqq
dr don’t wry abt no of cmmnts.think abt ur regular readers nd silent readers
Ty dear
awesome loved it but it is short
Thnqq aradhya
loved it please continue. awesome. please make it longer.
Thanks dear…
i really love your ff. please post longer ones. please post next part asap
Ty dear…..
No plz don’t end it? its getting interesting day by day ???? but plz try 2 make it long sometimes
Ty areeba…
awesome. plz continue
Thanks mou