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Home»Fan Fiction»MAN MAYAL part 16
Fan Fiction Kumkum Bhagya

MAN MAYAL part 16

PrabhiBy PrabhiApril 15, 201719 Comments4 Mins Read
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The curtains closed. Abhigya stood there still haggling each other. Abhi pecked her forehead,when purab came and asked them to go talk in the room. Abhi who was in full romantic mood just lifted her and took her too the green room. Pragya to loved to be in his arms.
As they entered the room Abhi closed the door with his leg and pinned pragya to the door. She looked away in shyness. Abhi held her chin and turned her face towards him.

The next moment pragya’s mouth was occupied by Abhi’s lips. Their kiss growing passionate by each passing moment. Both of them pulled away due to lack of breath.
P: I missed you soo much and I want to hear those 3 magical words again.
A: I didn’t miss you at all and I love you
P: what say it again
A: I kept on dying to meet you just for once but there were some problem I had to handle.
Abhi’s face tensed.
Pragya who saw this tried to change the topic
P: leave it. U go and sit on the couch,couch potato
A: you called be couch potato, what about you rotten tomato.
P: rotten??
A: always angry and ready to fight so only rotten.
P: you…… you………( pragya started to move her arms back and forth and then pointed her finger towards him) you are and AB
A: AB??
P: African bandar ????
A: African Bandar , what about u PA aka paagal aurat
P: ahh stop texting my nerves

Purab who was standing leaning against the door kept on smiling thinking that to. And jerry have started again.
P: a take your words back
A: well you’re a hot potato
Pragya hearing this blushed
A: wait u are taking me in a wrong meaning not that hot but the idiom. But you do look hot and if you want it then……..( his armsheld her by the waist)
Pragya lightly slapped his shoulders
A: ouch well people are buzzing about you. This album is a big hit all because of u jaan.
P: acha. But ……
A: what
P: it wasn’t possible without you
A: ok now let’s go

Next day
Abhi texted pragya
A: hey hot potato
P:??
A: ?? ok let’s meet
P: hey couch potato
A: ??
P: ok let’s meet at the Chinese restaurant.
5 mins later
P: are you alive
A: no dead
P: ok meet you there in 10 mins ???
A:??
Abhigya met at the restaurant.
P: so let’s eat some noodles
A: ok waiter one bowl of noodles
P: why one you know I eat a lot
A: we will get another one but we should eat from one plate as by eating from one plate love increases between lovers
Pragya blushed hearing this.

The noddles arrived.
Both of them started to eat. Pragya who was in full romantic mood took took the bite from where Abhi had and placed it in her mouth and then when swooping it a noodle came which was in both Abhi and pragya’s mouth. The two ends in each other’s mouth. Both looked at each other and had an eye lock. Abhigya then swooped it and in the end pragya backed away. Abhi was sad. Both of them were then walking out of the restaurant. They came and sat in the park under a tree.
A: baby I want a kiss
P: where
A: here (pointing towards the cheeks)
Pragya pecked his cheeks
A: once more he signalled
This when she was coming forward Abhi turned his face and pragya ended kissing his lips.
She backed off and turned away shying.
Abhi just hugged her and pecked her forehead.

Precap: where was Abhi when pragya needed him will be told. Then their marriage and a storm might be approaching them.

Guys I am so sorry for the late update but there was an internet problem so only. And my final are in May so I am so slow but trying to give an update on weekends.
And thank you everyone. It’s short but next one will be long.

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    19 Comments

    1. di on April 15, 2017 10:24 pm

      nice lovely n super

      take care ,,,,,love u

      • Prabhi on April 16, 2017 12:40 pm

        i missed your comment dhivu missed you
        did see your comment on other ffs and thought you must be busy
        now you are back
        love you

      • di on April 16, 2017 2:34 pm

        no as i must read u ff n comm also…dear..never ever miss it…

    2. Saranya24 on April 16, 2017 10:42 am

      Supr cute dear?????

      • Prabhi on April 16, 2017 12:41 pm

        thanks sis
        missing your ff a wrong path to the right journey.
        update soon

      • Saranya24 on April 16, 2017 1:53 pm

        Wil update tmrw fr sure da???

    3. priyanka on April 16, 2017 11:05 am

      Lovely

      • Prabhi on April 16, 2017 12:42 pm

        thanks priyanka

    4. Reshma_Pradeep on April 16, 2017 12:11 pm

      Lovely!

      • Prabhi on April 16, 2017 12:43 pm

        thanks reshu

    5. Abhigya on April 17, 2017 1:52 pm

      Nice and I am new to this ff so sorry for late commenting.

      • Prabhi on April 18, 2017 6:20 pm

        No problem abhigya

    6. B_Ani on April 17, 2017 8:25 pm

      hi prabhi… great update as usual.
      i have become so irregular it seems.
      ha! but finally glad that i commented atleast now.
      well… this update was no less than great. loved the romance dear.
      and ha ha… loved the silly texting and fighting too.
      i want to tell sth… purab is definitely the only man on earth to understand abhigya!!! loved his part too*ok even if it’s so small*
      precap actually seems so much interesting… i was actually pulling my hairs off thinking of the next storm!!!
      hope it turns to a breeze soon…
      anyways, love u…

      • Prabhi on April 18, 2017 6:23 pm

        You can expect a kkb kinda twist and thank you for commenting
        It’s a long comment though
        And purab you will get to see more of him in the further updates as an understanding man and helper or I say Cupid
        And his love story with bulbul and his daughter Riya
        About the precap don’t bustle your mind just that something from Abhi’s past is going to come but not for long but surely another twist
        Thank you love you and want to see your updates soon and that my exams are in May so might be really irregular too?????

    7. Maya on April 17, 2017 8:49 pm

      I just read yours! So sorry for the late comment! It was very lovely and nice???????

      • Prabhi on April 18, 2017 6:24 pm

        Thank you even I am oh no tongue slip no sorries in friends
        I also never get time to comment on yours but they all are great

    8. MassSneha on April 17, 2017 9:20 pm

      superb only no words to say awesome just loved it waiting for next update

      • Prabhi on April 18, 2017 6:25 pm

        I think you are a SL but thanks for commenting it brings a wide smile on my face

    9. prabhish on April 18, 2017 6:13 pm

      Hello sister.
      Love it.

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