Hi,ppl…This is my new ff about our own Manan….
Prologue:
IT WAS A MISTAKE….YOU’RE A MISTAKE”…he yelled putting more pressure on to my wrists ….His voice echoing throughout the large room as he gripped my wrists Immediately a gasp of pain escape my lips…nd my tears welled up…
.”Manik pls stop….” I whispered… softly
His dark green eyes staring at mine…..Anger lacing through them..
No one had ever dared raising their voice against the President of THE WARRIORS…,let alone answer him back,as he slowly leaned in,his face inches away from mine…
I dont want u…I didnt want u..”he yelled glaring at me…as I gasped tears forming in my eyes…nd I tried my best not allowing them to fall
It should not be such a shock hearing those words but y did it hurt so much?
“Manik i swear i didnt please…”I started when suddenly he roared punching the nearest thing possible which so happened to be a wall which I am standing against
“Leave NANDINI….Now…”
Nandini Murthy is the kindest soul you’ll come across…her happy spirit always made every one smile and her dazzling grin melted everyone’s heart.She is pure in every way nd saw the happiness in the tiniest things..
But happiness can only be lasted so long when her father NandKishore Murthy suddenly announces her marriage to none other than Dhruv Malhotra,the biggest player to walk on the face of the earth…
Swallowing her pride,she agrees to this arranged marriage just to have Dhruv refuse last minute nd elope wth his childhood sweetheart..
With hundreds of ppl at the reception,Nandini is asked to marry a man she had never even dreamed of..
A cold heartless man that sucked the life out of evryone…
A man that made her tremble wth fear…
A monster of a man..
The most hated yet respected criminal
Manik Malhotra….
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He was addicted….She was his drug…
He WAS darkness…..She was his light..
He was a killer…She was his prey…
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Done wth the prologue..Other characters will be later introduced in the story…during its proceedings…Nd do let me know whether it is gud nd if u want to let me continue….pls do lemme know…ignore typos…Criticsm accepted….Suggestions welcum..Luv u all..Bye
-prahathika krishnan
21 Comments
Wow! Nice start…eagerly waiting for more looong updates from you…hope you will update daily…happy writing..
sure…hope I’ll b upto ur expectations
Mind blowing start dear…..
Keep going….
k tq
Nice pls continue and try to update regularly
ok…tq
Superb start dear……????
Waiting for your next update……
tq most probably I’ll update today itself..
Its awesome yaar really nice keep going
Tq
Nice start
Hope u update regularly
Tq.. Hope I’ll keep up ur xpectations
amazing yar.pls update soon.
ok tq
Nice story Praha, can we be friends?
I also write a kyy ff: kyy ghost series, read if interested
yes sure we can b frnds…nd thnks fr ur compliment about my story..Ya I saw ur ff it is so captivating…iam sorry as i WAS unable to comment…it is really a gud ff…ALL THE BEST nd ya v can b frnds
Thnx
Kya tum post karogi ya phir sirf prologue hi dogi
not to b rude I have already posted the frst part if u have checked..nd Im not a person who will just give prologue nd leave nd try to understand i have other works too rather than only updtaing this…i maintain two ff’s nd I have to post both daily so i can give only 1 update for both daily..SORRY IF I AM RUDE…dONT TAKE MY WORDS IN A WRONG WAY…luv u ..T.C
#mananrockz
Heyyyyyyw””” what a start.. Agar start Aaisa hai to climax kaisa hoga…… Superb work….
tq tash