Hello ppl…Im back with another update and this is dedicated to Aastha for her perfect guess of Sanyu…(Sanyu will be introduced in the next update)…Tq risu,neehaa,anu,aastha,sonu karki for ur wonderful and encouraging comments…
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” *MALHOTRA MANSION* :
muk – bhayya even m coming wid u to receive dadi…
man – no.. u go wid cabir to doc.. only m going..
muk- ohk.. i’ll go wid bhai.. but dadi ko batana mat k mein aa gayi..
man- ha nai bataounga… but unhe khud hi pata chal jayega… chalo m going bye..
Manik is not aware that alex is already in the car.. as dadi is his 2nd fav after manik.. n he wanted to meet her first.. as he loves to tease everyone… (remember he(alex) met mukti also first after manik
*NANDU IN INDIA* :
* MUMBAI AIRPORT*:
Nandu came out with her luggage n was waiting for a guy who is gonna receive her,(chachi had already managed everything for her.. even a place where she will stay)
other side manik reached airport. mean while dadi is coming out with her luggage before manik could get down of the car he saw alex in the car n before manik could react alex jumped from the window n is running towards dadi to meet her but while running he is about to get hit by a car but our super women nandu saved alex….
everyone gathered around even manik n dadi are shocked…
nan to the man(another man,driver) – dont u know how to drive? dekh k nai chala sakte kya? ise kuch ho jata to?
driver – m sorry…wo ye achanak samne aa gaya… but ise kuch hua to nai na.,,
nan- great… ise kuch ho jata uske baad b tum yahi kehte na…
driver – arre ek kutte k liye aap itna q chila rahi h… mar to nai gaya na.. n ek kutte k marr jane se kya ho jata ……insaan nai h…”
” THAPPP……… nandu slapped that man..
nan- what the hell… koi humanity naam ki chiz hai ya nahi? disgusting.. get lost before i kill u…
nan to alex – hey baby with whom u r here?
alex licks nandu’s hand.. nandu giggles how cute u r..alex runs to manik..
nan – oh to ye tumhara pet hai.. how irresponsible.. agar pet sambhal nai sakte to rakhte q ho..
Manik is abt to say her thanks but nandu’s taunt stopped him.…
nandu continued – tum jese logo ki wajah se bichare ye innocent pets road accident me mare jate hai…dhyan to rakhna aata nai hai…. aur wo idiot driver bina dekh k gadi chala raha tha…. next time se agar mene tumhe itna irresponsible dekha to u r so dead… wese mjhe tumhe firse dekhna b nai…
Manik is hell angry on her n is about to burst on her… but her phone rang n she left… till than dadi came there… he touched her feet n she gave blessing…
dadi – kesa h tu beta? aur tu itna laparvah kese ho gaya?
man- no..dadi mujhe khud nai pata ye kab car me aaya n kab bahar nikla..me khud shocked hu..
dadi – bhala ho us ladki ka… tune thank u to bola na use.. naam kya tha uska? pucha ya nai? kitni pyaari bacchhi thi?
man- pyaari aur wo? plz dadi… bolne ka mauka hi nai diya aur suna k chali gayi…agali baar milegi to chodunga nai use..
dadi – kya baat hai…lagta h ladki badi himmat wali hai… tujhe suna k chali gayi aur mauka b nai tujhe bolne ka… bhagwan kare jald hi mulakat ho tumhari usse…”
“man – bhagwan se kahiye k durr hi rakhe use mujh se… ab chaliye ghar chalte hai…
they drove back to malhotra mansion…”
” The guy is waiting for nandu.…
nan – hey.. Umm you’re abhimanyu right?
abhi- yea… And u r niti murthy..? Nice to meet u… Lemme help u with this luggage..
nan- thank u dear.. Let’s go… They sat in the car n started their convo…
abhi – so is it Ur first visit to India??? N what’s the purpose of coming here..???
nan- yeah.. Its my first visit.. I came here for some official work.…
abhi- so how long u’ll be here??
nan- depends upon the work.. And its official work so pata nai kab khatam hoga… So m gonna stay at ur place right ??
abhi- yeah …like PG…. Its common here…
nan- that’s great .. I’ll experience something new…(smiles)
abhi – we have reached niti… They came out from car with her luggage…
nan- wow.. Its beautiful… Kiski choice h ye??
abhi- u loved it?? Thanks.. Ye amma aur papa ki choice h… this was their dream project..
nan – kaha h wo..
abhi-papa next Sunday aayenge.. N amma she’s no more with us…
nan- m so sorry …
abhi- hey …. don’t be sorry…. Common let’s go inside…. U should take rest.. Must be tired na…
nan- yeah.. Hell tired…. Y your house is so quiet..i mean Ghar pe servants b Nai h kya???
abhi- its Sunday today so all servants are on holiday…”
“nan- so every Sunday u give them holiday ??
abhi- yeah… papa believes k every working person needs a holiday..specially Sunday…
nan- that’s sounds so cool ha…
abhi- I’ll prepare lunch for us.. U take rest..I’ll call u when lunch is ready..
nan – second thing is u can call me nandu… Mujhe Sab pyaar se yahi bulate hai…
abhi – OK nandu.. Wait.. Agar ye second baat hai to pehli baat kya h???
nan – first thing is I’ll cook.. Ab to me bhi is ghar ki member hu..
.abhi – u must be kidding… Do u even know how to cook.. (Laughing) n I don’t wanna die so early nandu… Tum rehne do tumse nai hoga…
nan- how mean… M very good at cooking .. N mujhe Indian khana banana aata h.. (proudly)
She takes pillow from couch n throws on him.. N they started their pillow fight…
abhi – bas meri ma.. Chalo kitchen is all urs.. We’ll cook together ..
nan – that’s a good idea… They started cooking…
abhi- ek baat kahu… I hope u won’t mind ….
nan – ha bolo….
abhi – u know I always wanted k meri b ek Behan ho… Jiske sath me apni secrets share karu… Fight karu ..argue karu.. Pagalpanti…jise me protect kar saku… N tumhe dekh k lagta h.. K I got my sister… Their eyes were moist…(mainly nandu’s as she remembered sum1)
nandu – u know wat.. These r my thoughts as well … Tumne mere thoughts b chura liye… Mujhe b tum me apna bhai nazar aata hai… But agar tum mujhe apni behan banana chahte ho to ek shart hai…
.abhi- shart(shocked)
nan – rakshabandhan pe bohat lutungi tumhe… (Giggles) bolo chalega kya???
abhi – tumne to dara hi diya mujhe… Ha ab Behan mana hai to jhelna to padega hi.. Jese tumhare hath ka lunch bhi to khana h ab.. Hey bhagwan bacha Lena mujhe..( teasing)
They had their lunch which is delicious… And than they went for nap…” …
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So,ya done for today…Pls let me know how is the update through your comments coz that is wat which motivated me to write through my busy schedule…luv u all..
P.S.Ignore Typos….Criticsm accepted..Suggestions are welcum
18 Comments
Nice .I liked it.
Tq so much Sonakshi….hopefully u lykd the story so far…
Thanks for dedicating this chapter to me. This means a lot
And about chapter u nailed it like always. But how come Nandini’s parents agree to send her to India and y mukti is going to doctor and who is Abhi according to this story. I know I ask so many questions but I am confused. Aisa lag RHA hai ki Bich mein ek chapter aur hona chahiye tha
abt nandini’s parents sending her to India they dont know that she went to India ,they thought Some other country outside U.S,nd mukti went to doctor along withcabir bcoz he isnt feeling well(rewind to mukti’s arrival episode where i mentioned cabir wasnt feeling well so he didnt go with manik to receive her) and finally for the question who is abhi,i gave his character sketch in the first prologue where i posted two stories and asked u guys to choose one and detail mein u will know in further updates…U didnt ask too many questions at all…I felt too happy coz if a person is askng questions that means they r taking interst in my story….hopefully i cleared all ur doubts aur bhi hain tho u can ask me without any hesitation
Nhi Abhi aur doubts nhi hai???. And ya thanks for clearing all the previous doubts.
Wlcm.I just came across this today and if I get time I will definitely read the rest of them.
pleasure will be all mine
Y my comments are not posting?? It’s three hrs already. Telly updates
It was awesome but I have the same question on my mind which astha had and I am planning to write ff can you suggest a suitable title like the story would be a saga of love friendship mystery past and betrayal
tq so much neehaa nd ya i answered to astha s comment…hopefully i clarified all ur doubts too ,if not feel free to ask me again nd abt the title can u just direct message me in telly updates,we ll talk there?
Superb yaar fantastic can’t wait
When will you update next part.???? Pls update soon
Tomorrow…..
Super. pls update soon.
Tomorrow
Pls update next part
nice story…