Manmarziyan 24th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Arjun recalling Radhika and their moments. He gets restless and recalls Nandini’s words. He comes out of the room and sees Radhika. Khwaishon pe likhi……….plays……….. He goes. Nandini sees Radhika crying and smiles. Its morning, Sam wakes up from sleep and asks Arjun to wake up. Neil asks who Arjun…. And smiles. She sees him and gets shocked. He says no Arjun, Neil…. I told you, you are in love with me….
Neil and Prerna have a talk. She sees him happy and asks did he say Sam. Neil says no, now Sam will tell me, you said if I see love in Sam’s eyes, I won’t move back, I did not see it yet, but I know I m in her heart, I have to get it to her tongue.
Arjun gets the divorce papers and looks for Radhika. Nandini says she has gone, did you take her signs? She says its my mistake, you are not ready for divorce. He says no, I will take her signs. She says you said this yesterday too, I know you love the most and can do anything for me, you acted love with Sam, but you are really in love with Radhika, don’t deny this, I know you can fight with whole world, how will you win over yourself, I can’t see you in this state, I free you from my revenge motive today, no need to leave Radhika because of me, I m ready to sacrifice my revenge for your love.
He says no need, I will prove how much your tears are valuable to me, Radhika will sign on these papers today. He leaves. Radhika comes to meet Sam. Sam sees her at door and asks her to leave. Radhika says I need to talk to you, its imp, why did you not go with Arjun on dinner. Sam says I had imp work. Radhika asks if there was no imp work, would you go on date with my husband. Sam says he was my fiancé before becoming your husband. They ask each other to leave Arjun. Sam says you cheated me. Radhika says even Arjun cheated you. Radhika says I can’t move from his life till you leave him.
They have a talk and cry. Arjun asks Radhika does Arjun love you. She sees Radhika crying and is about to hold her hand. She asks Radhika to leave him, why is she with him, it won’t help anyhow. She says just go away somewhere far and leave me and Arjun away. Radhika asks her does she still love Arjun. Sam recalls Neil’s words. She says I don’t know, I just know if you did not come between us, then I would have not known my heart truth ever. Radhika leaves.
Piyali asks the team about their idea. Neil says ideas will come and asks everyone about their ideas seeing the pen. He asks Arjun. Arjun says to start love. Neil asks Radhika whats her first thought. Radhika recalls Arjun’s words to sign the divorce papers, and says to shut some ways. Neil asks Sam. Sam says to sign resignation letter, one sign can change whole life. Neil says its very positive and smart life. Sam asks him to say. Neil says pen has just one thing, especially for girls, and tucks the pen by tying her hair. Piyali says that’s why I kept Neil’s resignation letter on side.
Samrat joins them and says he is giving a party today, to celebrate Arjun and Radhika’s marriage. Sam looks on stunned. Radhika comes to Arjun’s cabin. He says this is not your home to come in your boss’ room like this, get out. She goes out and knocks to take permission. He recalls Nandini’s words and asks Radhika to come.
Radhika says Samrat kept party to celebrate our marriage. He says whats use to celebrate if there is no happiness, you have one chance, sign on these papers and go far, you will stay happy. She asks will you go to Sam, do you have courage to love her truly. He asks will you sign on these papers if I truly love her. She says yes, I will move off your way then. She holds his hand and keeps on her head, asking him to say will he be able to love Sam truly, and return her trust, will he give love to Sam as much as Sam loves him. Dastaan………….plays………
She says say me once, I will move away. He takes his hand away and says I don’t have time for this, you did not see my badness. She says I have seen your goodness, and argues with him, saying she will not sign on these papers.
Precap:
Nandini asks Radhika to wear this dress and come in party. Radhika thinks its Nandini’s plan and she won’t let plan work out.
Update Credit to: Amena
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Neil who had been counting to ten, told himself to f**k it, flew across the room, grabbed the bastard’s neck and pushed him to the wall voilently.
He pushed his face up and growled a warning that could get through the f**ker’s thick head.
“If you ever touch her or even think about it, swear to god, Rohan, I’m gonna tear you limb to limb, get that dick head.” He whisper threatened, and tightened his hold on the chocking bastard’s neck.
Whoa!!!! My hand got numb typing dis PART!
Soooo..how was It?
Don’t like it? Telllllll me, I’m gonna tone down completely 🙂
Til den, water break:)
ComMeNT plssss, if only possible:)
Renu as always u rocked it yaar…every day i fall for aradhika more n more…m too addicted to mmz al…badly miss this shw….i used think whole day abt this couple they so passionate abt ech other bt they dont notice it…after watching yesterday epi i cant sleep at night thinking nw what will happen hw radz accept her feelings… pls save me god….this is mmz magic n its story… plz sp do favour on us n save our manmarjiyaan…Renu pls if u got time then cherish all the moment of aradhika frm starting….kfar ur story also brilliant.. like to read it…
Even while chocking for life, the loser was grinning..
Rohan smiled slyly, his eyes watered but he needed more to get a rise out of this bastard too. He had used his father’s power to get himself the position of team captain. Whereas, Rohan, who worked hard, went back and forth to hell, to make ends meet to pay for his studies, working as f**king waiter, did not even get a gleam of appreciation from the coach. It cooled his temper to f**k with this rich brat.
Hi RENU ur pov…totally agreed yaar..very nice
oh again…nein! neil! neil!..wat r u man!…outstanding move 2day…
neil’s convo wid hs mom…no words needed…hs eyes talk evrytin…powerful
in office,wen he 1st asked opinion 4m arjun, i laughed out loud..arjun ws lik an absent minded skool boy & reacted as if a math teacher askin hm the next step in all of a sudden…thoroughly enjoyed…also luvd the way he gave hs opinion in the usage of pen…clever & mischievous guy…
in radz & sam scene…wen radz askd sam 2 leave arjun,sam countered radz wid the same…couldnt control laugh as she replied lik a school girl…
comin 2 our hero arjun..oh! he is restless…totally obsessd wid hs doll radz…wen he went on 2 c hr, hs eyes wer filled wid luv & hw many of u noticed the same ws the case wid radz which she didn intepret still…wen he ws about 2 leave the room ter ws a little jerk in our radz lik “wer r u gng arjun(not arjun sir) wen am here”…i ws in the corner of my seat as if she ws gonna call hm arjun 4 the 1st tim..wat 2 do..the short tim of tis serial making me think tis fast…
my dolly radz believe me..u ve already started feelin 4 ur arjun sir…congrats 2 u Mr.Arjun Mehra…u ve succeeded in cultivatin feelings 4 u in ur radz…wait a little man..she ll confess hrself…actually she fails 2 figure out hr feelings 4 u cos she thinks she is wid u ly 4 sam…she too is strugglin inside…so giv hr sum tim man…
bt he is fully devoted 2 hs di…thinks hs life is meant 4 hs di as she had been lukin after hm since childhood… 2dy arjun ws totally ready 2 giv up hs doll radz 4 the sake of hs di..he ws evn lil rude 2 hr in office..bt evrythin wsnt the outcum of hatred instead pure luv…nw he is lik”oh my baby luv me r leave me..pls don stand inbtw”… hs mind wants radz 2 leave hm 2 live a life of hr content aftral pure luv lies in luv’s happines know…bt hs heart badly craves 4 hs doll al hs lyf…cos in the last scene wen radz said “if u don promise then i ll not leave u”,i wondered am i the ly 1 who could sense the uncontrollable rays of grin in every vein on arjun’s face though he seemed 2 b grimmed outside…bt he isnt aware of the fact tat if radz luvs hm it ll make the situation evn worse cos he is standin btw the 2…nandu & radz…cant really choose 1…wish arjun shud know the real face of nadu b4 radz realises hr feelings fr hm…
“Can’t leave this one alone too, huh?” He said hoarsely, his throat raw, his neck still held tight by Neil. “How many will be?” He sneered mockingly.
Neil pushed him off, disgusted. He saw the guy the flop down on the floor coughing hard. God, he could have killed him today.
He walked on fuming to the gym locker. He opened it, took out a pair of track paints and black tshirt.
He poured the cold water over his hot head. His fingers gripped the locks and pulled at it. He then put head on the locker wall and hit his hand hard on it. The empty locker room vibrated with the force of his hit.
day by day i can grip it more 2 ur story…luvd it scene by scene…especially tat guys convo about ruby & neil’s possessiveness 2wrds hr…hats off 2 u bud..keep gng…
Oh!!farha, missed u yesterday. Where were u? ?anyway, just tell me how can u write such a shortest corner of the story? ?u must join with media. Only a writer has such quality.??✒?ur story have got from me⭐?⭐??
(Sorry, for the stupid cut out parts. Network here sucks:/)
Neil still was sliding his hands and pulling at his hair thinking frustatedly about what happened in the gym room.
Four times? He grounded his teeth thinking. Four times, Rohan asked her out? Four times, and where was he, when this shit happened.
Neil knew each time if he was aware, then each time he would have ripped the guy’s head into two.
It’s the way they were talking about her. f**k. His blood simpered. Made his head go crazy with pure sheer anger.
The thought of anymore of anyone touching her. f**king hell, it made his temper sour. Already crazy head to mad. Clenching his hands in a fist he walked into an aisle of a different corridor of the campus. He didn’t know where he was walking. His feet were taking him somewhere.
What had made him react, he didn’t know. The girl was making him out of control. He has to put a stop to this insanity. Right away.
With that his jaw hardened. His resolve strenghtened.
He took out his iPhone and dialed a number. He need to get her out of his system with something else.
He put the phone to his right ear. It went into voice mail.
“Lyra, meet me at 10, tonight, at home, aliright.” He succinted.
He cut the call and walked on. He look around irritatedly. Where the f**k was he?
It was a blo*dy maze, the campus, he thought while walking.
His walked on, crossing a room, he had went a good feet long, he froze then. Irritation vanishing from his deameanor, he walked back the same, taking steps backwards.
That’s when his world closed in on a pink gliding fairy figure on the floor.
His eyes, breath, limbs, mind went into a state of trance as his feet took him deeper into the room.
He walked inside looking at her, really looking at her. The pink fairy, her back was smooth creamy, porcelain, the dress was a ballet costume. Legs pointed in a poise, the girl twriled by clutching tight, the left hand the pole. The dress was short, to the tighs, made perfect to move around freely the limbs.
The girl twirled around and Neil looked on mesmerised, that’s when his jaw dropped.
The girl, the pink beautiful, elfian looking fairy looked bizzarely like Ruby. Her face flushed red, covering a pleasing deep hue of pink on the rounded cheeks. Sweet angelic face. Buttoned down nose. Full red luscious lips, dark expressive eyes.
Sweet god in heaven, the girl was not Ruby looking. It was Ruby.
His gaze slid to her naked thighs, legs and back. His jaw locked in anger. Almost naked Ruby.
Heaven help him, that’s why the guys wanted to bang her, staring at her perfect round sweet bottom.
He almost went and taken her away from the room, his angry stare froze on her face. For the first time in his life, he was looking at a full smile. It shocked him. He never saw her smiling fully. She was always scowling, glaring and snorting. He thought that was cute as hell but this he was looking at was f**king beautiful.
@all could use with some comments guys:) so sooorrryyy I’m askin for…hehehe almost begging but I need to know if it’s okay.
I will update soon, half an hour later coz im being stared at weirdly n my phone wi be takn from me soon.
N wil see epi n read comments here:)
Byyyyyye
Hey,Farha.u don’t need to ask anyone for reply.as u have a sstttronggg talent. And we r commenting as well.AND may I know where r u from and what do u do (if u have no problem )
*don’t delete it*
Latest update; show mmz is heading towards a happy ending with proper pairing. …… sorry guys….gonna end on 29th. ..This is the latest mmz update. …
I liked that writters bring friendship which is the main concept of this show back. I liked neil’s pen holding meeting. Hope that everything to get fixed between all.
For me mmz means a lot. This show is so beautiful that I could not stop myself for commenting for the first time for a show. As I always can’t see the episode so I take help of wriiten updates. Here in this page I found friends like u all. We are bonded with each other through this comment page.
I am always lonely as I have very few friends. But u all have welcomed me as ur friend. Here I found friends like MITTY,HAPPY,RAASHI,ABI,DEVGA,RENU,FARAH,NITYA,SAJI,IREENA,NAKSATRA,RIYA,THENA and u all.(sorry if any of ur name I haven’t mention as there is so many friends)
Can u pls contact with any star of mmz to confirm if they have end their shooting?
Heya@all- Sorry for the break in, I had to really be somewhere. Yes, coming straight to the comment section.
As I said before, Intense romance is not for faint heart (really not for faint heart) So, don’t read any further if u dont like such scenes…:)
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As Neil was staring at her smile, Ruby looked serenly unware in her glide and twirling, she was unware of the storm that was brewing in him. In his
mind. In his heart. All over his body.
It was playing havoc, the gleaming golden hue of the skin over her neck. It was calling his deepest desire. He tried, hell, he tried hard to control the rising rush of a wave. To tamp it down but she was making it hard for him.
He tried it. He smelled the lilacs breeze. He took it in. He took it sniffing deeper into his lungs. He closed his eyes
He opened his eyes and that’s when all hell broke loose.
He walked further, a change coming over him that he had no reign to it. So, he let it freeze.
He went mere inches to the delectable body. Her back was to his front. She was still holding on the pole. Unable to contain, he put his lips on the smooth slide of her neck. Sweet as hell, he groaned.
He only merely touch her as a whisper that she jumped around with a squeak.
Her chest was heaving up and down. Her eyes were wild with fear. Her face crimsoning then those eyes flared an ignite.
Then, her face took over a look of relief
“Shit! You scared me.” She breathed out.
Neil wasn’t looking at her face, he was glaring down at the costume. He thought the back of it was hot as hell but this was pure desire wrapped on a pink candy stick. Teasing minx.
“What the f**k are you wearing?” He roared at her.
Ruby jumped up and moved back a little. The confidence which had been a potent quality of her nature left altoghter at the tone he used. Traitors she thought taking a step back slowly. Something was different about him today. He was looking at her, as if she was a piece tasty snack which made gulp audibly. He looked like, he worked out hard in the gym. His black hair was gleaming in different directions, as if he had pulled the locks frustatedly. He smelled of sweat, cologne and something else. Vanilla, yes. He took a step forward and she took a step backwards.
He looked really angry. At her? What did she do now? She did not have the courage to look at his eyes, so, she settled her gaze someplace at his shoulder.
“Eyes up.” He snapped.
Ruby jumped again, her gaze flew to his glaring one’s at his command. Her breath whooshed out looking at him. What has happened? Her mind panicked.
“I. Asked. What. The. f**k. Are. You. Wearing?” He asked brazenly, enunciating each word in fury.
“c..c..c..clothes.” She breathed out a word, stuttering.
That’s when his eyes snapped, and he smiled an unseeing one. His eyes though weren’t smiling.
“Of all the moments, babe, you chose now to be cheeky with me when I’m this close to losing control.” He murmured, looking down at her from head to toe with blazing hot warmth.
“Not good, babe.” He completed hotly.
He then crossed the distance, grabbed her waist and cornered her to the wall.
He was done talking. He bent down and took a deep breath putting his face in the crook of her neck.
“God, you smell sweeter than lilacs.” He groaned.
Ruby’s heart beat stopped, her breath in her throat when he grabbed her waist. His hands tightened and she felt his weight on her. Hot flush rose up into her chest when she felt his groan vibrate on her skin. On her neck. Into her body.
“Neil…” She breathed.
His body froze and his hands tightened some more on her waist. But he toned it down.
“Did you go on a date with him?” He asked.
He needed to know this. Very much. It mattered.
Ruby was still breathless but when she heard him, she frowned.
“Went out with who?” She asked.
“With Rohan.” He murmured on her skin.
Ruby’s body went blazing hot to freezing cold. Her mind zoned on the words and the question. So, this was all this is about. A game they were playing. His team mates and he. It was not news, that Neil and his teammates placed bets. Bets on go on dates with most boring and ugly girls in the campus. That they could bag anything and anyone walking in a skirt.
Now, Ruby was in focus. That’s why the stupid Rohan asked her out. She told him to f**k off. It did not work out with him so Neil here thought he could give it a try.
He made sure many times to tell her that she was ugly and boyish looking.
How dare he! Her blood boiled. How dare he to place a bet on her.
Neil meanwhile felt her hesitate, and his anger went into an overdrive. So, she had gone with that piece of shit and she couldn’t even give a smile at him. He only got a prickly pear, didn’t he. He growled inside.
“blo*dy hell, Ruby, answer me, did you go out with him.” He glared into her flat looking hazel brown eyes.
“Get off me.” She whispered.
Neil slid his assesing on the change of expression. Then he froze.
“Did he try to touch?” His breath hit her lips.
“What the hell are you going on about? You know what, I don’t care. Now, get off me, Neil, before I scream blo*dy murder.” She warned, looking straight into his coffee brown eyes.
His breath hitting on her lips. His chest. His vanilla scent. His nearness. His hands now sliding up her waist was making her body go crazy.
Neil’s eyes flashed. f**k! She was not answering nor was she declining it. Her lips luscious were quivering. Only a touch and whisper. He wanted to feel her.
“f**king, did he touch you or not?” He thundered.
That’s when Ruby lost it too.
“No, no, no, he did not touch me. It’s you who is touching me, you pig!” She shouted, and struggled hard to get out of his arms.
That’s when Neil froze, his eyes flamed and his lips fell hard on hers…….
DaATs IT GUYs NOw:)
I’m Tired…
Need a break:)
I haven’t read any comments sadly:(
But wil do so read about the episode now:D
thanks:)
@ireena -Heyyaaa thanks for liking my story. Yaaaay!!!!
Hehe, feels good that you gave it stars too 🙂
Thank you so much. I’mfromsouthindia:) compled grad:)
Yeah, I can write in short spaces well I’m short hehehe (kidding)
@Raashi- Nobody has ever praised me and my story soooop much in life. I’m mostly the ignored one in family. Felt actual tears float in my eyes 🙂 Thanks so much dat u love Ruby n Viren too
And also were waiting wit anxiousness for my update just madey day :)@raashi
@Mandy- Yaay thanks:)
Haha, thanks for finding me cool buddy and loving my story constantly and praising me:)
@thena – All ur comments drive me create much more interesting plot. Thanks alot for commenting right away@Ireena It actually made me write the next sequence wit great energy!
@tia- Yeah, I’m thinking about it now. Thanks alot u find it best among the other website@raashi…felt really good.
I’m so sorry for forgetting anyone guys:) thanks to the silent readers too. I hope you all are finding it interesting. You can say me to get off the site if u find me irritating..hehehe i kinda tend to get overboard sometimes with my comments:)
I found good friends here @ireena @Mandy @thena @raashi @natasha @tia @renu @anu( I find ur assesment and comments amazing, all of you, very much :))
finally made time to watch todays episode….. ufffuuuuu , no words have spoken till now…
arjun’s sensible look when he looked at radhika in 1st scene… her heart sensed that her heart’s love has come to know her whereabouts… (hmmmm jumping with joy) radhu your turn made me spell bound darling…. muaahhhh….. 😉 … radhu your heart sensed and your turned,tell your brain to realize feelings for arjun.. come on, hurry up before nandini di makes something fishy..
coming to arjuns reaction when she turned noticing her love at back, he dont have words to speak but he wanted to say something with his lips, he got stunned for a while..
my heart is shouting from the moment when he came and saw radhu COME ON RADHU RUN & HUG HIM, everything gets clear to him, no need to say i love you, he can hear it from your heart.. come on, come on.. but didnt happen.. 🙁 ….
we all know ardhu’s(arjun-radhika) eyes have conveyed apni dil ki baatein… ♥♥♥ ….
sam-neil : on bed sam calls neil as arjun wake up… she finally got her heart realized ita neil not arjun…
sam-rad convo : expected a hug but bit disappointed, but convo was good..
coming again to arjun-radhu : when radhu takes his hand and asks him can you love sam heartfully and truthfully, he said he dont have time to all these talks..
arjun, your heart has screamed out I LOVE YOU RADHIKA,NOT SAM…. RADHIKA, DONT GO AWAY FROM ME. I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU HEARTLYFULLY & TRUTHFULLY.. speak out the truth buddy..
overall episode was good.. by felt something is missing… i may felt like that as it is getting too draggy for the confession.. i am wrong sorry guys.. but i said my opinion..
@all- what happened? Nobody here:(
I kinda have to go away now so i hv only half an hour to browse…sad sad miss all @ireena@mandu@reni@anu@natasha@Raashi@mitty@happy@Riya(for playin song)
@mitty- Yaar, I wss so happy u tellng it’s entended den read now dats It’s not:(
Dedicating da song: to all.
Saajna…jude toh tere khwsbse tute hum neendhse ye kaisa tere ishq hai saaajnaa
tu haathon me toh hai mere hai kyun nahi lakiron mein…..
thanq so much kfar… loss u and miss u tooo…. ;( ;(
Hey Farah ur really great I mean tumne itna zyada Lika its FANTABULOUS the bester u write d moster I ll miss u dear !!!
Tumne apne yehi talent ku wajah se meta dial hi Jeet liya !! Thanx u made my day !!
Hy guys can’t imagine dere r only 5 eps to go I don’t no what to do coz feeling imotional coz I m gonna lose d friends I ve been cmnting n chatting !!!
Like Farha , thena, Renu ,Ireena , Devga, Natasha, Mitty, Dipika, Tia, Anu , Raashi , n all others I dint mnsion n yaa even though I don’t cmnt or no all of u , ur still my friends dat I gonna lose after a few days so !!!!!!
Oh smone pls tell me not to be a cry cry baby coz I m very centimental yaar !!what to do ??
hey Mandy i too will miss u dear…found great friends here…we didn’t seen any one of us bt still share great bond..its really overwhelming… i m too crying thnking wht i will do without mmz n u guys..i check my phn to read comments on this page…will badly miss renu,mandy,anu,kfar,ireena,riya,mitty all who cmments here..
hey guys anyone create a page in facebook and post the link here… we will stay connected on it… what u say guys??
Perfect Anu !!
Great idea
thanq so much kfar… loss u and miss u tooo…. 🙁 🙁
@yaar dont cry…feeling sad too…! N thanx fr prsng me:)
@Anu and dipika willlllll you toooo 🙁
@Mandy- merabhi tumne dil jeet liya mere story pe comments karke…means a lot…
@Mandy – n ur way cooler too..
Hello, farha.see u at todays page. Talk to u then.come soooooon!!!
🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
amazing episode !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…..
luv u both pair neil sam and arjun radhika !!!!!!! other all casts are awesome. ….
I most like pen scene in which ardhika express their feeling indirectly….. wow neil also act cutely … now neil regain their actual character and behaves as he is only sam’s friend not love … hope sam will soon understand that .
And also guys may be sam says that she still love arjun cause she want neil become jealous and he give up n confess their love to sam….
But eagerly waiting for tomorrows episode . don’t know nandani’s next plan…. till now she only blackmailed arjun by her crocodile tears. …aahhh
Radhu plzzz expose all truth about nandani though the powerful proof. …..
Anyways countdown would be start yaaarrr…..
plzzz sp don’t do this we are really like manmarziyan plzzz don’t end show its a humble request don’t breaks audience heart….
frnds your comments are mindblowing renu , kfar, natasha , ireena, ira afroz, abi, happy, mandy, mitty, thena, dipika, annie, raashi, anu, divya, nakshatra, …….all fan of manmarziyan I really enjoy your comments daily coz I’m silent reader I’m not mail comment daily but read whole comments every day and now its addict me…
all of thnx to explain n express your feeling with here…after 29 ,I really miss your comments dosto….luv u all n manmarziyan too!
Hey guys plz tell dem nt to end dis our fab show manmarzia re…..ma life z incomolete widout manmarzia……..m watching dis show bcz of arjunradz……1 of ma mst fav couple……
@Ireena- heyyya missed u:(
Yeah wil come on the today’s page surely…
@Zaara- Heyaaa thanq u for mentioning meeeeee, wil mis u too….
Plz frds ………..tell sp to end tsm..
Yrkkh….yhm…..sns……..n al saasbahu serials frm star plus…….
God knws Y dey r nly behind our manmarzia???????
plz plz end da mom n law n daughtr n law based stories. da only thng happen whn i watch them z boiling my blood.. hate them so much for unrealistic twists and scenes. manmarziyan and badtameez dil r da only ones i enjoy aftr nisha aur uske cousins. plz dont end manmarziyan. (dont drag t too much too)
Ya plz don’t end manmarziyan. It’s a different show from the other ones. So plzzzzz don’t end manmarziyan.