Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Radhika asking Mala and Dada ji to what will she disagree. Dada ji makes excuses and tells about her earpain, asking her to clean his ear. Radhika asks Mala to say. Mala says someone is coming to meet you today. Radhika says she does not want to meet anyone, she will not marry. Mala asks her to settle down. Radhika says she won’t marry. Mala asks her to tell that person herself. The door bell rings. Mala asks Radhika to come. Radhika says she can’t love anyone else and recalls Arjun.
Arjun come to her while she picks the papers blown by air. She says she won’t come and asks Mala to go. He looks at her. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays………………. He smiles and comes close to her. He holds her. He says your life is like blank paper Radhika, you are incomplete without ink of love. She turns and looks at Arjun. He asks why did she not marry. She says I m willing to marry, someone is coming to see me today. He asks such will with someone else’s signs. She sees mangalsutra and says I was removing it. He asks her to remove and give him. She turns and asks why did he come here.
He says I have to come to take whats mine. She says he can get other mangalsutra in Mumbai and asks him to go. He says he will go after taking his things. She says she has got her everything here. He holds her face and says you can’t lie well even today, if you got your everything, why do you make me feel your presence all the time……………… he asks why is her name in all his talk, why does his every moment wish to have her, I love you Radhika.
He says you left me and came here, but I could not leave you. She says Sam loves you. He says Sam does not love me. She asks then…. He smiles and says where there’s Samandar Singh, there is her idiot too. Sam eats food and Neil enters Radhika’s home. He says wife is resting when husband is working. Sam tells Dada ji about her choice, asking if he is good. Dada ji asks Neil does he know to clean ears. Neil asks what. They all laugh. Dada ji says love is great when there is friendship intact in it. Mala says she will get Radhika. Sam says let them be, even Lord should not come between husband and wife.
Radhika asks Neil? Arjun says Neil… no one knows how love happens, look at me, I fell in love with my way’s stones, I have my heart to my problem. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays……………… He holds her close and kisses her. She says Sir… He says Arjun…. Just Arjun. She says Arjun and he hugs her.
After two years, scene shifts in Mumbai, Radhika wakes up Arjun romantically. He hugs her and she reminds him the schedule. He says he is getting best copywriter award today. He says you never used to take my name, and now whenever you call, you scold me and call. She says Arjun… and combs her hair. He says just name will not work now, and holds her close. Sam is sleeping. Neil wakes her up and she greets him good morning. He says now this is yours, and handsover the puppy….. They think what to name it, and suggest like Nesam, or Apple.
Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil come to Birdsong and greet Piyali. They all work together. Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale……………….plays…………. Arjun puts sugar in his coffee and they laugh seeing him. Some light moments while working are shown. Sam and Neil fight. Arjun and Radhika stop them. They discuss about work, while the title song plays in BG. They all hug and smile.
The show ended with a cheerful scene in Birdsong depicting their happy lives.
Update Credit to: Amena
2,074 Comments
Awesome Thena!! U r giving us what d cvs couldn’t coz of time constraints….loved it all…Dadaji n Arjun………Sam n Rads moments….Ardhika together….Nesam wid their teasing………I’ll b waiting to read ur remaining part….n m sorry for giving unasked opinion..but can’t resist hehe…I’d love to read about some Neil n Arjun moments too n ofcourse about both d cutiepie couples!
oh oh oh…tis is my raashi…tellin me scene by scene…oh dear..u made my day buddy….s i too ve planned 4 neil-arjun scenes dear…no sorry pls yaar…warm hug…
Hey Farha where r u?? M waiting for ur next update!!
There’s no end to my demands!! haha..
N bud how can it b that I don’t give my viewpoint on ur updates….I posted my comment as reply to ur last update:) U can’t get rid of me so soon:D
Hey anu,
im nt,so,active in fb…bt iv joind our dymtelly fb page…il try to login to get all d updates regardng mmz n our frnds…thanx
From last 4 days I was not commenting I felt very sad on ending the show so I tried to resist for few days so I could come out of mmz but our mmz fans comments made me to reply and mmz remains best forever ..but in these days I was reading ur comments esp theena, annie ,anu ,renu ,kfar ,rasshi u r amazing people who will cheer up the fans even the show ends great job people
hi ARADHIKA…thank u so much dear…glad tat tis cheers u up buddy…
Theena continue ur story its quiet interesting. ..
hi ANJU…s am continuin dear…glad tat u feel tis interstin buddy…loads of luv
Till when we will comment here without manmarzian episode,friends?I always feel empty without it.we r nt ??regular,actually that passion is nt coming from inner.we may comment till twelve days,but there is no passionate feelings without manmarzian.all wishes have finished with the ending of MANMARZIAN.⁉❔❓❕♦〰〰
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…
i already typed my pov aboout previous ardhika scenes here but accidently i pressed back button in my lap,..n my long comment got deleted,…now m not in a mood 2 retype the same but ll try 2 scribble their first meeting alone,…
MY MAYBELLINE GIRL Is,…i dunno but i still love this dialogue yaar….Arjun saw his soul partner 4 the first time n he felt attracted in their very first encounter,…this makes him 2 stop his presentation 2 ve a long stare at radz that he even 4got every1 s looking at him n his long staring,…Neil understood arjun’s stare n so he made a comment 2 cool the hot situation prevailing there,…’wat an entry chasniji’,..i love this too yaar,…
Still arjun s not out of his glance,…v knew arjun,..ur heart’s screaming yaar,..n ur eyes requesting ur mind 2 not end this stare as it gives immense pleasure 2 them,…
But this makes every1 2 look wat makes him 2 stop his presentation including piyali n sam 2ve a look at chasni,….Arjun,clever man understood the situation n makes himself as a rude boss b4 all n he chided radz 4 his mistake,…but i liked his dialogue,…’Either come n sit inside r go out,…n its better if u decide it by 2day itself’
Radz entered inside with coffee with some glances at her rude boss n also loved how he distanced himself 2 give way 4 her 2 sit,…i felt arjun’s spark in his eyes 4 her in their first meet itself,…He wanna introduce sam as his maybelline girl but irony s his heart wants radhika as his maybelline girl n he succeeded in attaining his goal yaar,…
@ all,….I ll write old scenes wenever i get tym yaar,..cox i made my self busy by engaging myself in studies yaar n no more daily soap now so,if i get bored i ll come here 2 share my thots n read all ur comments,…
@TELLYUPDATES,…PLEASE DONT CLOSE THIS SITE N PLEASE OPEN A FAN PAGE 4 MMZ N WE LL DISCUSS LY ABOUT THE STORY WHICH REMAINS INCOMPLETED WITH MANY FILL IN THE BLANKS BY CVS,…SP IGNORED OUR EFFORT N HURTED OUR EMOTIONS BUT I HOPE TB LL HEAR OUR REQUEST N FRIENDS PLEASE REQUEST TB 2 OPEN THIS SITE 4 FEW MONTHS TILL V REMAIN ACTIVE HERE,..WAT SAY GUYS,…I DONT WANT 2 LEAVE THIS SITE YAAR,…PLEASE TB,…
Nice idea but who vil listen to us dear?
Anu has created a fb page for telly update friends. ..If u r intrested I ll ask her to send a link okay Wat u say
Renu mind blowing. …my maybelline gurl is ……. meri maybeline gurl hai….. dat was the best part of the show dear….ny way renu waiting for more. ….do well in ur studies. …god bless
my dear RENU…thank u so much tat u likd 2 read mine…means a lot my buddy…visit here at times…al the best 4 ur studies yaar…i lik ur idea of stayin in tis page dear…
U expressed my feelings . I too want not to close this site.
@All, Heyyya, it’s me again, I’m so sorry for the delayed update of the story. It had been a busy day and I have come straight here to my dear comment section.
Yesterday night I had tried to write here, but due to the frantic typing my dear old friend gave it’s last breath. Yes, it’s my three year old mobile battery. So, I gave it a proper burial by putting it deep in one of the drawers of my cupboard and baught a new one.
I’m talking idiot again.
Well about the story, hmmm, it’s going to get just a little steamy. I wonder If you guys are ready for steamy. Well, I have told that, now please don’t ready further If u like such u kbow what.
So, shutting up and updating from where I left off…here we go…
Chapter-3( He and I)
The hot shower was a balm to her very haggard and tired body. She turned down the knob of the shower and looked around for a towel. She put on the same bra and panties but she couldn’t wear the jeans and tank top. She needed something lighter.
Well, she wouldn’t get any PJ’s now, would She? She looked around and saw that Arjun’s bathroom was bigger than her own room, It elongated horizontally with tiles and deep red walls. What’s with the colour combination?
It had a large see through glass shower corner. She wondered what was the smaller circular holes were for on the glassed walled corner when she entered it. As she turned the knob up, the hot water sprayed from everywhere. It made her shriek and giggle continously.
She bit her lower lip and saw Arjun’s T-shirt hanging by the shower wall. Well, better than this small towel. She smelled it. It was musky and sweaty and mix of spicy Arjun related cologne. Immediately, his s*xy smirk pictured in her mind.
She took it off from the wall hanger and slid it down her body. The blue looked too colourful on her pale skin as she observed herself into the large clear mirror. It was too large, the tshirt on her small frame, just about reaching down to mid thigh. It repeatedly slipped down her left shoulder. Radhika tugged it up. Her heart shape face looked tired with light dark circles under the eyes. Her brown eyes looked huge on her small face. Her waist length, long half ringlets looked lifeless.
She looked like a homless person. Her shoulders shrugged. Whatever. Hmm, She was wrong. Arjun’s tshirt reached till to the knees. She was almost covered full. God, how tall was he?
Opening the bathroom door slowly she stuck out her head first. The room seemed empty. Thank god, Arjun left her alone.
Radhika sighed in relief and opened it completely, she walked out smiling.
Her legs slipped on the smooth floor and she was about to fall hard when her flailing hand caught an arm for support.
Thank heavens!
“Are you always this clumsy?” Jason’s voice reached her panicked thoughts.
Of, course, who else but him before who she makes a fool of herself. First she was a blubbering fool and now she was a clumsy blind idiot.
She stood straight and let go of his arm.
“I’m so sorry I’m being a pest and a burden to you, I already said that I will walk but you wouldn’t listen, But I can call Viren. He will pick me…”
Arjun wasn’t paying attention to her nervous talk, his body stood frozen and so were his eyes. He was looking down at her waist or something. What? Something wrong? She glanced down.
His tshirt rid up on her thighs. She pulled it down immediately. The shoulder sleeve slid down and she tried to pull it up but unsuccessfully.
Flustered she stared down on the didn’t look up. She peaked a glance up. He was naked up from the waist with grey track pants. He seemed to have showered too. The red scar mark over his ribs stood out from his tanned toned body. It looked a little healed, but just only.
He cleared his throat and she looked up and her gaze settled on his head. His hair was damp as it stick to his forehead. If she could only slid the locks out of the view of his eyes.
He moved away abruptly. Her eyes blinked at the empty space. God, she was mooning over his and he didn’t even look at her.
Well, he did but looked away interested.
“Soo, uh, where is Saina? Is she..um gone?” She asked hesitantly, trying to break the tensed atmosphere.
He visibly stiffened at her question, his expression still blank. His back muscles bunched up. Crap. Did she make him angry?
Why, oh why did she open her mouth and ask him something she shouldn’t. Glueing her lips with instant sticking gum would do a lot good to her safety and sanity. But, that would hurt, right? So, she should just keep her mouth and mind shut.
“It’s really late.” He said placidly, avoiding her question.
He didn’t turn around to the side, where she stood. He only told the unemotional words over his shoulder.
Right. It hurt a teeny weeny bit. Didn’t expect a reply, but still.
“I’ll take the recliner.” She mumbled to herself.
“No, you aren’t.” He sighed, his voice strained, and he turned around fully.
“I’m not?” She frowned.
But where was she going to sleep? He seemed to be really very agitated about something. His hands were folded over his chest. She followed his broody gaze to the clsed door. Outside? He is sending her outside? Oh, how humiliating.
“Okay, Fine.” She said in a low tone.
She was thinking, he didn’t like her questionibg about his girlfriend, but she didn’t say a word against her. She only asked if Saina was here. God, she didn’t know he that sensitive bout her.. Well, it wasn’t her position or her business, was it.
Walking uo to the door, she opened it and took a step outside.
Damn. It was dark. The party packed up and there wasn’t any music or ear bleed blaring sound in high pitch from the speakers. She walked straight into a wall. Her forehead hit the cool smoothness pretty hard.
She rubbed the spot wincing, she put her hand in a strech to feel where she was going. Where was she going by the way? She didn’t even know wherw this room was. Upstairs? Downstairs? Where? She tried to remember.
If there were any stairs near by here, She didn’t think she will be surviving walking down on them.
The lights of the corridor were switched on abruptly. Oh, thank god. Her eyes blinked due to the immense brightness of the light.
Radhika looked down. She gulpled audibly, and the stairs started right on her next step.
“What are you doing here, Radhika?” Arjun asked in the silence.
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Radhika looked sideways at him. She had no idea what she was doing? He proposed her to leave, didn’t he?
Well, guess, what, she will sleep in this corridor. It looks fine. She just needed some sheets and pillows.
“I’ll sleep here.” She said in decision.
Arjun came closer to where she stood.
“Where?” He asked a little annoyed.
“Here.” She looked down at the floor in indication.
He sighed and shook his head.
“Are you this crazy always? or it is just your humour? because if it’s the latter, then I don’t think I have the energy to laugh right now.” He said wryly, smiled wryly, his eyes too dancing in wry amusement.
Radhika narrowed her eyes and folded her arms under her chest.
“Are you making fun of me?” She asked.
“Wow.” He shook his head. “Was I that apparent?” He asked sarcastically, teasingly, and rubbed the back of his neck.
Fine, she was a piece of an amusement to him. She bristled inside in exasperation.
He smiled suddenly and put his hands on her waist. She was pulled closer to his body.
“You look really very s*xy in my tshirt and I was praying for some self control, but I don’t think it’s working.” He expelled a deep breath. His breath was minty and warm as she took it in as her breath. “And you’re obviously uncomfortable with me still.” His voice took a several notch down husky.
Please lose control. Please lose control, her mind kept chanting breathily.
“So, will you stop being incredibly cute with your expressions. It hard not to kiss this frown line away on your forehead.” He took hold of her face in his hands.
The kiss he planted on her forehead was sweet and hot at the same time.
“Or these expressive lovely brown eyes.” He put a kiss both of her eyes.
“Or the pink tinged dimpled cheeks.” His hot breath was making her crazy.
“Or this independent lift of your chin which tells me to back off and this small nose which flares up in anger.” He laughed low in his throat. His lips lightly touched hers.
“Or these red berry lips which invites me in.” He slid his hand behind her head. He fisted his paetly wet hair.
Radhika closed her eyes. Her stomach grumbled loudly in protest at the same time.
Oh, my god.
She froze with eyes closed and with pouted lips. Arjun’s body stiffened, then it shook and vibrated. Radhika opened her eyes a little ashamed. Her face was all red. Arjun threw her head back and laughed hard.
She bet, he is going to take back all those hot and heavy words he just said to her, except the one about her nose. Well, it’s not small nor it’s not long for that matter, Oh whatever, it was normal sized.
Arjun wiped his eyes.
“I was wrong about you earlier.” He smiled wide, his voice pleased.
“You’re way adorable than incredibly cute and I find that really very hot.”
His eyes burned into hers.
He put his forefinger over her lower lip and popped it free from the nibbling on of her teeth.
He kissed her hard then. She put her arms on his naked shoulders and drew nearer to his body.
The kiss went from deep to very wet one. His hands slid down her hips and lifted her up. Her legs went around his wasit as she held on tight.
Radhika’s stupid, traitorous stomach grumbled again. Arjun pushed away his head and put his forehead on hers.
“Alright, you’re hungry.” He grinned, his voice low, affected, husky, breathless.
Oh, god, he was really hot as she looked at his lips. Sliding her hands in his soft hair, she pulled his head back to hers again.
“Oh, no, I’ll be unable to stop myself, Radhika.” He groaned and chuckled at her eagerness.
She pouted. Who is telling him to stop.
His eyes seemed to read hers.
“I’m hungry too, so, let’s go eat something, before….” He drawled ad dropped her on the floor.
“Before I take you to bed.” He declared in a husky whisper and stared straight into her eyes with intensely smouldering look.
Radhika’s body turned to stone when he said the word ‘bed’.
Arjun laughed shortly again seeing her wide eyed look.
“Don’t worry your naievity status will be safe with me…..well, only tonight…there are other ways to….”
Radhika’s ears burned and her cheeks heated super hot.
“Oh, my god. Shut up.” She put her hands over her ears.
Her brearhing got laboured and her body flustered up in agitation. He sure knows how to push her buttons. He held her tight and warm, his body strong and safe.
She scowled at his handsome face and he looked amused as he guffawed loudly. His body vibrated with it…….
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Dinner break..
How do u like it, guys? I typed hurriedly so ignore typos plsss
Kfar superb dear. ..
hey farha…really njoyd buddy…laughed out thr wen radz said”here”,showin the very floor tat she stood on tat time…luvd it wen she ws just a step above the stairs wen lights wer on…hats off 2 u dear…
Wonderful. You made my day. Loved the lines about her worry about nose comment in that critical juncture. Great writing. Thank god ur phone is back with u. Was refreshing this page throughout the day to read ur stories.
@saji,anu,mandy,shub,deepa,mitty,dipika,bushra,raashi,aradhika,anju,annie,renu,all silent readers…thank u so much..i know tis isnt enough…actually i thot 2 giv it a try 2 make me feel better & am very much glad tat many of my dearies feel better raedin tis imaginary part…soooooo happy buddies…..
let my last post b epi 119 n tis post b epi 120 my dearies…
it ws mornin…radz woke up 2 find sam ws missin aside hr…thr ws a chocolate kept in the bed…radz took tat & she ws sure tat sam placed it…an uncontrollable rays of grin were seen on radz face as she ws reminiscin hr past moments wid sam …the moments of sharin chocolate in office,sharin single house 2gether,spent 1 whole n8 sleepless…evrthin flashed back in hr mind which left radz 2 cherish the moment…clutchin the bedsheet,radz laid hr head on hr lap wid hands foldin hr legs & a face wid grin 4m ear 2 ear…
neil woke up 4m hs sleep abruptly as if a loud rumblin passed straight in2 hs head….it ws the knock of a door….he opened the door wid eyes half open 2 see sam standin out thr…he squeezd hs eyes 2 get a clear image of hr….sam said tat she came 2 meet hm as she felt lik eatin an apple,winkin at hm wid a broad smile…she clutchd hs shirt,slid hr fingers inside & pushed hm in2 the room….he movd 2 steps back & balancd hmself 2 stand firm…she went in2 the room & locked the door…she askd hm tat if he didn wish 2 taste orange & went on 2 kiss hm…”oh sammy!….arjunnnnnnn”,neil whispered in hurry….she tugged back in sudden, closed hr eyes wid hr hands….she saw neil in a gap btw hr forefinger & middlefinger wereas neil stood wid a ? on hs face…he ws facin 2 the corner of a bed were arjun slept the previous n8….he ws wonderin wr arjun wud ve gone….”ohhhh!!!!! pineapple has went 4 chasni 2 get a delicious drink”,they said in unison & gave themselves a tight hug….clutchin hs shirt,sam laid hr head in neils bosom…neil had a long gaze on hr,hs eyes filled wid tears of contentment….
radz made hr out 4m the warmth of bedsheet….stretchd hr arms high wid a lil bent on hr body….in al of a sudden she felt a tight grasp on hr waist…really tight….she said ARJUN in a warnin tone withou turnin hr face..”yeah its arjun baby”,he uttered at hr neck…hr hands wer tryin hard 2 release hs grip bt in vain…he lifted hr up n spun hr around…hr hair strands hit hs eye wich made hm 2 fall on bed wid an impact….nw radz on arjun wid still hs hands not leavin hr waist…again she tried hard…but arjun wsnt redy 2 leave hr instead switchd hs side on bed….nw radz ws under arjun,al stuck in hs clutch wich ws never meant 2 giv an escape….thr ws a firm hold on radz wrists,leavin hr fist rotatin ….he went on 2 kiss hr….”arjun pls,arjun,arjun,no pls”,radz murmured wid eyes closed…..”oh!dadajiiiii”,said radz wid hr head up….sudden thr arjun yanked down the bed & slid hmslf under it….he cud see radz peepin under the bed wid a winnin smile on hr face…she greetd hm gm & stretchd hr hand still wid the same smile….arjun came out of hs own wid a grimmd face…she ran out of the room b4 he came out….
arjun came out of the room ly 2 end up wid neil….neil stood thr wid hands folded,seein arjun 4m top 2 bottom….”wat r u dng here man?”,neil gestured wid hs eyes….
thr is remainin part…ll continue later sweethearts…
Thena excellent keep going
Too good!! I am imagining what u hve written and hvn grt fun!! Thnk u deat.. and please write the nxt part soon… 🙂
Great imagination yaar…plz continue
I cld imagine each nd every word of urs…felt tht mmz is still going on
Good job…
Too good. It was like watching continueous episodes. Great imagination. I loved the apple, orange and the pineapple delicious juice witj chasni lines. Keep going.
Theena ..arjun wont be so romantic dude ..he is a gentleman acc to radhu
hi ARADHIKA…but tat ws al b4 luv confession dear.. tat ws y i said “after luv confession” scenes yaar….now let us njoy romantic avatar of arjun buddy…
Great thena…kp gng…waitng for 121st episode
Wow thena great yaar…..continue ur next part soon…eagerly waiting……:)
@ Farha…..awesome…n I don’t mind d steamy scenes at all…bring it on!! Buy I don’t understand Arjun’s equation with Saina…..if he doesn’t want to go out with her anymore….why doesn’t he tell her that…..n also agar chaar saal se Arjun Radhika k bare me info rakha hua hai…then why did he make Saina his gf in d 1st place? He also doesn’t sit with her in classes…if he doesn’t feel for her..toh gf kyun banaya??
@ Thena…waiting for d next episode!! Its lovely:)
Oh my god missing our mmz badly guys. …
Hi Thena, very impressive. please continue, i am loving it.
Hey guys !!
Hi Farha nice story yaar what should I say u r so like indescribable I mean in a gud way !!!???????
Hey Anu u were very imaginative!!?
Hey renu u too were like mesmerisingly deeply into d pov wich is great !!?????
Hey thena dat was a joke wannet to c ur cmnts on my joke coz I m 23yrs studin medical !!! ????
Ur lov confession is very like I m watching it in d TV but unfortunately it’s ended but I m sure u guys will never end !!??❤️❤️??☺️
Hey will miss all !!!???
@raashi- Heyyy i went on the page n read ur comments. First of all big hug. I feel real good dat ur reading it much enthusism. Luv ur wuestions very much dearrrr. Hmm, radhika toothinks da same like u. why if he knw hr from before den why didnt make a move nwhy n on off gf? well itz arjun to clear da confusion. u’ll see his another shadeand also da answers. filhal toh radhika bohot confused hai aur woh ageh jake use maloom hoga….avhise bol diya toh mystery gone…haha hapoy happy happy dat we are discussibg my story buddy. 😀 means a lot.
Thena- Yyar thanx abd i read da story parts….thats realllly nice deary 😀 liked it. Very cooool all characters are loved dadajis interruption everywhere wen ardhika are romancing haha.
and heyyy tumhe bhi amusing laga i too felt da same while wrting. lv dat u observe small things 😀
@Mitty- yaar thanx so much for commenting.@Savera- Oh my god, u’ll buy da book wen it comes out…oh so sweeeet of u 😀 thanx so much.
@Clara- thanx for describing my wrting so well. means a lot 😀
Well..talent should be appreciated!! 🙂
I think you should pursue a career in writing. You’re damn too good at writing skills.
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@renu u r great yarr beutifully u notice ech n evry part of our lovely couple ardhika…meri Maybellen girl hai….still in tht moment….n nice suggestion too dear…will rqst tb….
@Thena u rocked it buddy…tooooo gooood….imaginig our romantic arjun…. wooooo loves is in the air….waiting for nxt epi dear..
Riya- Hey so cute smileys…hw can u hv so many? my stupid only has limited.
Dipika- bank job? amazing yaar main toh utni hard wrking bhi nahi hoon aur utni talented bhi nahi 😀 same age as u aur mba.
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serial kyun band hua yaar 🙁 koi spwale yahan ake dekhetoh sahi
N guys nw sp wil beg on road for trps nxt mnth dey r gng 2 end evn tere sheher mein d last episode wil air on 31st oct so nw sp is in a mission 2 end al youth shows suck plus ur dwnfall hs alrdy strtd
@srju- thanx yaar but fbacnt not der dear.
Mandy n Samiha- hiw was ur day?s. Mandy, my day was hectic. it was filed with headache and my mobi battery dead made me verrry irkful all day :/
ireena- hey hw ru nw? i tired to comment yestsrday but i couldnt.
Thanks dear for remembering me. I saved the whole 20 mins just for you. I read the story. Now i have just 5 mins. Please update it fast, it’s at an interisting turn in the story. But everywhere Arjun is the MYSTERY…
There was a Boy ‘n a Girl,They were best friends for years ‘n years,They could Talk for hours on the Phone ‘n text each other for days,
When They were Together;
Not a single Sad Thought could cross their Minds, everything was Great, But One Day;
The Boy did not Answer any Call or Reply to any Text for a Day,
The Girl was worried that something was Wrong..:(
At night She couldn’t Sleep.., She was sitting in her Room Crying, ‘n It was then that She Realized how much He Means to Her..?
The next Morning;
She woke Up from a Phone call.., It was the Boy..:)
Boy: Hey..,
Girl: I’m so glad that you Called Me, What happened to you yesterday ??
Boy: I was Busy
[ The GIRL Understood that;
Something was Wrong but could not Ask]
[silence]
Boy: You know..; We should Stop talking..!
Girl: What??.., But Why ??
Boy: I am Sorry, Bye..!
[He Disconnected the call, ‘n She Felt as If Somebody
had Slammed the door on Her face]
Everything else Flashed in Her Mind,
Tears :’(
Cars running by Her..
Roof of some building..’n Sunset..
She couldn’t understand anything..
She started Feeling Lonely, Dejected, ‘n broken..:’(
That was the answer to everything! His words were pouncing on her..
Her heart wanted to jump out!
He was the One..! “Why..??”
She Screamed at the Top of her Voice;
Then She made up Her Mind to make a last Try to get Him Back..!
[She called Him Up]
Girl: hi…
Boy: Why are you calling Me?
Girl: I need to tell you Something..
Boy: Go Ahead.
Girl: I Just Wanted You to know one thing before we stopped talking!
Boy: Tell me..!
Girl: Are you All right?
[She broke off..!
She tried but may be he doesn’t really Care about Her,
She Thought!
She wasn’t His friend in the first Place…
Tears were slowly running Worst :'(
She left the House with a Note..!
[5 hours later]
Phone Rang in the Boy’s Room,
It was the Girl’s Mum,
The girl was lying in the hospital, Got hit by a Car, :’(
The Boy rushed to the Hospital where She was.
She Opened Her Eyes with the Boy’s name..,
He took her Hand..
Boy: Im so Sorry Its all my fault..! But;
I promise when U get better I’ll make It up to You..:(
Girl: I wont get Better..
Boy: No..! No Don’t say that..:(
Girl: just tell me one thing Why did you do it?
Boy told her that He had a Heart problem ‘n he did not want her to be worried;
‘n there was a risk that he could have Died..!
Boy: I did that because I…..I…..I Love you..
Girl: I LOVE YOU TOO..‘n After That her heart Stopped Beating…:O
She Died..! :’(
The Boy died 10 mins later from a Heart Attack..:’(
He could not live with the thought that;
She died Because of Him.. :’(
Touching story riya. ..nice. …????
thanxx dear for sayin dat and yep in da prcss, n hey al da best for da exms are dey done yet? @Samiha
@Riya- Ohlalalala amzainnnnnnnn vertyyyy nice. like it.luv.heart it 😀
felt emotional 🙁
The episode starts with radhika and neil leaving to presentation hall and sam starts her presentation. radhika sits worried and couldnt concentrate.. arjun noticies her and gets restless. sam completes the presentation & evry1 gives an applause. Radhika leaves the hall congratulating sam followed by arjun. sam asks neil i feel they are worried.. neil tells her about the mail. arjun asks radhika whats the matter, what is making u worried?
radhika tells about the mail and arjun says its just a mail dont worry about that. neil and sam join them and says the same..they have a talk and NS teases arjun about his care for radhika. Meanwhile radhika’s phone again bangs with a beep. she feels tensed and reads the mail congratulating arjun for the award. arjun & nesam say that sender might be his fan.. radhika stares at them and they tease her saying the sender might be girl. they have a light moments of laugh and they enjoy with their coffee..
In Hrishikesh, dadaji asks mala to know whereabouts of ankush and dilip comes saying i called him & he is fine there. Ankush leaves for abroad for further studies and scene shifts to ankush in london. He & his frens plan to visit an orphanage to offer fund, clothing and neccessary accessories as it is one of his fren’s birthday.. so, they leave for orphanage. Receptionist calls a lady on phone & tells her thar some people has come to meet Mam. The peon goes and calls Mam, and a lady turns back and it is none other than nandini. She comes and meets Ankush & his frens. ankush was shocked to and he couldnt utter a word.
Ankush and his frens play with the kids and gifts them with the things what they bought.They have a happy day with the kids. Nandini from far observes ankush and moves forward to meet ankush. Ankush notices this and gets tensed.
Precap : nandini moving forward to ankush to speak and ankush feels tensed.. both the duo couples chat at birdsong.
Eagerly waiting. ….pre cap is intresting ☺
Very interesting!!! Keep going.we hv extremely talented writers here. Keep rocking!!
Cool i like it 😀
@savera- weny back n read ur comment again, haha tumhara gum toh hamare dil me bas gaya,abhitoh isse samjha lenge filhaal dilse tumhe lagalenge aur mmz ko yaad karenge ( im a bekaar shayaribaaz,pls dont mind me)
Really proud of u guys….u guys r really talented. ..keep going. …keep going keep going keep going. ….
Wow…very hearttouching riya