Manmarziyan 29th August 2015 Written Episode, Written Update on TellyUpdates.com
The Episode starts with Radhika asking Mala and Dada ji to what will she disagree. Dada ji makes excuses and tells about her earpain, asking her to clean his ear. Radhika asks Mala to say. Mala says someone is coming to meet you today. Radhika says she does not want to meet anyone, she will not marry. Mala asks her to settle down. Radhika says she won’t marry. Mala asks her to tell that person herself. The door bell rings. Mala asks Radhika to come. Radhika says she can’t love anyone else and recalls Arjun.
Arjun come to her while she picks the papers blown by air. She says she won’t come and asks Mala to go. He looks at her. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays………………. He smiles and comes close to her. He holds her. He says your life is like blank paper Radhika, you are incomplete without ink of love. She turns and looks at Arjun. He asks why did she not marry. She says I m willing to marry, someone is coming to see me today. He asks such will with someone else’s signs. She sees mangalsutra and says I was removing it. He asks her to remove and give him. She turns and asks why did he come here.
He says I have to come to take whats mine. She says he can get other mangalsutra in Mumbai and asks him to go. He says he will go after taking his things. She says she has got her everything here. He holds her face and says you can’t lie well even today, if you got your everything, why do you make me feel your presence all the time……………… he asks why is her name in all his talk, why does his every moment wish to have her, I love you Radhika.
He says you left me and came here, but I could not leave you. She says Sam loves you. He says Sam does not love me. She asks then…. He smiles and says where there’s Samandar Singh, there is her idiot too. Sam eats food and Neil enters Radhika’s home. He says wife is resting when husband is working. Sam tells Dada ji about her choice, asking if he is good. Dada ji asks Neil does he know to clean ears. Neil asks what. They all laugh. Dada ji says love is great when there is friendship intact in it. Mala says she will get Radhika. Sam says let them be, even Lord should not come between husband and wife.
Radhika asks Neil? Arjun says Neil… no one knows how love happens, look at me, I fell in love with my way’s stones, I have my heart to my problem. Khwaishon pe likhi……………plays……………… He holds her close and kisses her. She says Sir… He says Arjun…. Just Arjun. She says Arjun and he hugs her.
After two years, scene shifts in Mumbai, Radhika wakes up Arjun romantically. He hugs her and she reminds him the schedule. He says he is getting best copywriter award today. He says you never used to take my name, and now whenever you call, you scold me and call. She says Arjun… and combs her hair. He says just name will not work now, and holds her close. Sam is sleeping. Neil wakes her up and she greets him good morning. He says now this is yours, and handsover the puppy….. They think what to name it, and suggest like Nesam, or Apple.
Arjun, Radhika, Sam and Neil come to Birdsong and greet Piyali. They all work together. Manmarziyon pe ab hum chale……………….plays…………. Arjun puts sugar in his coffee and they laugh seeing him. Some light moments while working are shown. Sam and Neil fight. Arjun and Radhika stop them. They discuss about work, while the title song plays in BG. They all hug and smile.
The show ended with a cheerful scene in Birdsong depicting their happy lives.
Update Credit to: Amena
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Wow zara..so sweet of you..
Zara, thanks for mentioning..so sweet of u♥♥.. hope to c u all in other ahem,monica, shravan or kashmira’s show.. ofcourse expecting manmarzian 2 in other channel.. Till then take care manmarzian fans ♥♥.
So sweet zara. That u remember my prediction.
Wow Zara….that’s so sweet of u!! Take care!
Thanks zara….☺
Hi friends,
this is the first time I am commenting here.but I regularly read all ur comments here.I will really miss u all.KFAR u really love ur story so much.I want ur story to be telecast as mmz 2.RENU I really admire u .ur comments r simply superb.and some other frnds THENA, MITTY ,IREENA, NAKSHATRA, NATASHA,DEVGA,ANU, MANDY, RIYA.none of u know me. But u know u all .bcs u never miss reading ur comments .MISS U ALL. PRAYING FOR MMZ 2
Sry some mistakes its I not u. btw RENU wer r u.waiting for ur comment .n KFAR pls complete ur story before this site gets closed yaar.
@suvi…welcome friend… glad tat u read all our cmmnts & thank u so much 4 reading all dear…
Thank u that u always read my comments.
Thank you dr…
Thanks for noticing us suvi…
Radhika pulled at her hand. He stopped mid step.
He looked back at her in question.
“What?” He asked.
“Look, I only accompanied with you in the car because I don’t know why. It had been a bad day and I wasn’t thinking proper. I don’t want to be here. I’m not a tramp you can string along. This is your party. This is your life….this…”She looked around. “Isn’t my standard, and I better be get going now.”
His eyes flashed when she finished, Radhika didn’t know what to make of such look. He dropped her hand and nodded his head.
Radhika felt a little dissapointed that he let go so easily. But, it was for good, she didn’t want to be a means of some use, between his girlfriend and him, she didn’t want to be plaything and become a laughing stock.
This partying. His reckless behavior and his brutal point of view of people those beneath his social status was way too much to take in for me. He was someone whom she looked at from distance and that’s about it. She didn’t want him to enter into her life and change it forever. She can’t take it if he was good now, but scorned her later. His lifestyle and hers were very different. Way miles apart.
Radhika moved past the crowd of the dancers, but before she could reach the door, she was spun around. Arjun. He looked really very tired now.
Great, her life just sucks big time tonight.
“What’s wrong? You were fine before. What happened now?” His eyes gleamed in curiosity He pushed aside the hair and slid the locks over the shoulders.
Why was he touching always? All rational thoughts evaporate from her mind when he does that.
“It’s nothing, it’s pretty late and…”
“Stay the night.” He cut her words and put his hand on her waist and came closer.
Radhika gave him an ‘are you for real’ look.
“No, Arjun, I don’t think so.” She stepped back and opened the door.
“Radhika, dammit, listen…” He muttered frustrated.
She turned around and got into the porch, Wow, the party spread here too. She walked faster to avoid Arjun.
She was looking over her shoulder, she saw a girl attach herself to Arjun’a chest. God, girls never seem to stop getting attracted to him, she scowled.
She stopped dead and abruptly hit hard with a wall. Hell, her arm.
“Whoa, careful there, babe.” The wall spoke.
What? Oh, good grief. Her eyes widened.
@farah…my dear bud…as usual awesome…cud visualise every scene yaar…but confused with last convo in the above update dear…liked both of ur stories so much..can’t stop reading bud…pls provide a link wer u ll post story in future….here is a mad fan reading it without missin any chap..hehehe…& thank u so much 4 such great words 4 my POV buddy…warm hug..
S Mandy I watch swaragini.. I really miss swalak… I hate ragini to the core.. I can’t tolerate her face on screen.. Just feel like hitting her.. U know she is same like ritika… Both should be tortured yaar…. But ragini should b tortured more… How innocent she was before n now really hating her to the core.. How smartly she confessed her truth but stupid laksh dint even gave a thought !! But still hoping for her tRuth to come out.. But it will not happen so soon.. May b next year they will expose her.. Till then draaaaaaaaggggggiiiiinnnnngggg..
Really sad to see manmariziyan last episode. Gonna miss the crew for sure. Great acting and it was a great serial. Love this show.
“You have to see where you walk, not look behind.” The voice said amused.
The night couldn’t end better than this.
Why don’t you earth open up and swallow me inside tonight. She grumbled inside her head.
She pushed aside her half curled hair which annoyingly fell over her face again. With guilt written all over her features, she looked up very reluctantly.
Viren’s grin faded as he looked at her shocked.
She gave him an uncertain smile.
He opened his mouth and closed it again. She frowned and looked him uo and down. When did he change? The evening he had on something different.
He was wearing a square boxed green buttoned down shirt over a white T-shirt and hems. He was a casual king. His black hair gleamed in all directions like someone slid their fingers and pulled at the locks. Well.
He seemed to come out of the shock as he shook his head.
“What the f**k?” He whispered brazenly.
“Radhika, what the hell are you doing here?” He asked, his voice filled with surprise.
She just shrugged her shoulders and looked anywhere but him.
“You’ve got to be kidding me right now.” He muttered.
“How did you get here? You were at home, right?” His stern mouth didn’t soften.
She got annoyed.
“What? I shouldn’t attend parties now?”
He still looked like he didn’t believe that she was here.
“It’s all night party, Radhika, and I don’t think you ever stepped out of the house after nine.” He said in a matter of fact tone.
Awesome, Now he too was deducing facts about her.
What is her life, an open book for everyone to read? It’s like they are dissecting, remarking and noting down points in a book the aspects of her not so exciting social mingling.
Well, there is nothing here but her an ever dispassionate living, guys.
Seriously, geez. Give her a break.
Amazing,farha.Really ur story is goona making us crazy….
Thanks you verryyy much zara….love u dear..n i will miss u too…if possible then join the fb page made by anu to our friendshp
Guys,heard the news of opening kyy,but as of we know, star plus is completely a disgusting channel what never allows any good serials to reach its home.so I m watching no hope…….
Bye,friends.not feeling good.missing u all….???
And, what the hell was he doing here? He doesn’t like Arjun or his parties and stuff.
Radhika put her right hand on her hip.
“Yeah. Leave it about me, but the main question is what are you doing here?”
Viren looked at her amused and a little patronising.
“Oh, right, change of topic, hmm, not going to happen, darling.” He replied to her dryly.
Well, she tried.
Oh, now, she understood.
Viren can gate crash any party. He was ever enigmatic. He stayed most of the time at the Uni hostel. It was only few miles from the girls hostel. Rumour has it that, he tried to sneak in into that block but the warden caught him and it was hilarious to see how she taught him a lesson the other day in the college. He was a big mischief maker. She heard Misha talking on and on during the evenings about gatecrashing parties along with Viren. It was a bet or sorts between them.
“You shouldn’t be here. It not safe for you.” Viren broke into her thoughts with a firm voice.
Since when did he care about her?
“I’m not a child, Vir, you know that right and I should go out….more.” She said the last five words a little unsurely.
Viren stared at her, then he put his hand over her forehead.
“Radhika, I don’t think you’re fine, lets go the hospital.” He joked and grinned.
She didn’t know how to react to this version of his again.
“Haha, very funny, Vir, I just wanted to….” Right in the middle of the sentence her hand was pulled and she was falling aside.
She was turned around unceremoniously. How rude. What the hell…
Crap.
“Shit! You scared the hell out of me. I thought you had left. It really is pretty late and I don’t think you’ll find any taxi out there.” Arjun’s worried face came into view.
He caught hold of her arm.
“Look, I didn’t invite these guys over here let alone plan a party.” He said in explanation.
He looked genuinely worried and she felt bad about it all that happened.
“It’s okay, I didn’t mean to be rude about it.” She smiled at him.
He didn’t smile back but seemed a little wary.
“Yeah, well…” He looked over her shoulder and his body straightened.
Damn. She tends to forget everything when he was around her.
Arjun looked back at her curiously.
What do I do now? Her mind went blank.
Radhika turned around and glanced up at Viren. His arms were folded on his chest and he looked back at them placidly.
He was staring at Arjun. Arjun was an inch taller than Viren, but she could see the difference now that they stood opposite to each other.
“Hey, man, what’s up.” Arjun nodded his head towards Viren and broke the tensed atmosphere.
“Radhika, can I talk to you for a minute.” Viren didn’t look at her but stared daggers at Arjun.
He kept his icy stare at Arjun. The latter only held his gaze nonchalantly.
“But, Vir…” She began to explain.
“Now, Radhika.” He looked at her and took hold of her hand.
Arjun stiffened beside her. His face was a close stutter. It was scary though. Like a calm sea before a storm.
Viren looked no good. He wouldn’t even let her explain. He was an action kind before a thinking one.
Dammit, he was angry. His fingers tightened on her wrist and she winced in pain.
“Hey, easy there, mate.” Arjun intervened.
He came closer to Viren, shielding her from him. He put his hand on the side of her waist.
Crap, what was happenning here?
“Let go of her hand. You are hurting her.” His voice full of warning.
Viren looked down at her wrist then at Arjun’s hand on her waist. His stance got more dangerous as he glanced up at her eyes.
His searing accusing gaze made her really very guilty. She opened her mouth to explain the situation, but closed it.
Viren stood more straighter and he pushed his chest out. His face really closer to Arjun’s.
“What I do with her is none of your business.” He levelled his eyes at Arjun’s.
Arjun didn’t look like he was intimidated by Viren’s body. Vir was being brutal. His biceps flexed tight within his shirt, like he was getting ready for a fight. Arjun was too lean and Radhika didn’t him to be hit by Viren.
Even though Arjun looked harmless, his demeanor was like a stealth predator. Almost everyone including her could sense a vibe when he walked past. She sees girls fluster up and move around him like butterflies gets attracted to a flower.
His gaze now was like silk. He glanced down into her eyes and back at Viren’s black eyes.
“It is my business as she is with me.” He drawled.
Radhika’s eyes widened.
What?
She couldn’t possibly breath now, could she?
Viren’s jaw ticked. His glare was full of fire and hate.
“I’ll rip your arm off if you ever touch her.” He growled.
Arjun grinned abruptly.
“Oh, I did more than touching her, trust me.” He nodded his head in her direction.
Radhika’s mouth gaped open in shock. The idiot was deliberatly baiting for a fight with Viren.
It happened really fast. Viren’s hand raised up and he punched Arjun right in the jaw.
Arjun’s head flew to the side as his body propelled backwards. He only took a few seconds to steady himself as he put his hand over his jaw. His reaction was instant. He aimed his fist at Viren’s nose.
Viren moved back an inch. He shook his head and his nose started to bleed ing instantly. He chuckled and wiped out the blood.
“Stop it both of you!” Radhika shouted and looked around helplessly.
The music stopped but nobody seem to care or make them stop, instead the guys around only shouted ‘fight!’ over and over and laughed aming themselves. Crazy drunk losers.
“Viren! Please stop it.” She cried out and caught his arm as he got ready to hit Arjun again.
He just pushed her away. She fell down on the floor with an impact.
Arjun was breathing heavy and his body locked tight as he saw her lying on the floor. His eyes hardened.
“Dammit, I said don’t touch her.” Arjun punched Viren in the stomach.
Oh, no, no, She scrambled up.
Viren grunted in pain as he bent forward. His eyes watered. His face all red, he straightened and flexed his arm.
Radhika with widened eyes got to know where he was going hit Arjun. She remembered seeing blood on his tshirt and if Viren hit him there, then Arjun would go straight to the hospital and she couldn’t let that hapoen. She reacted fast.
“Oh, no, please, Vir, don’t.” She put her body before Arjun’s right when Viren’s fist took a hit.
Her body reeled back and she felt immense pain shoot in hwr stomach to all over her body from the middle. Her eyes popped out and she gasped for air. It felt like she was dying.
“Shit! Radhika….” She heard Viren’s shocked voice before everything went black…….
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whoooooo, cliffhanger…hahah tht’s it for today guys…
NeXT paet WOuld be Very Veryyyyyy interestingggg…
How do u like it?
Tell me plsssssss..
Til den, kEeP Rocking Guys.
Ur story s superb! im waiting 4 the rest f it……….i should also add tat ur r write vry well……….where ‘ll u cimplete it???????here???????……..anyway wautng 4 the rest.
” Oh I did more than touching her, trust me!” ……….oh u r such a jerk Arjun!!!!! but I loved it;)
I have been a silent reader at wu of dym and have been reading all the comments since the last few weeks……
@kfar I have to say that ur writing skills are marvelous and at the same time ur story too is wonderful… I wish you continue writing such stories…… and I really wanna read on and on……
@renu. u really write gud review and one gets to know about the episode in detail. u precisely describe every detail of the episode in your review
@mandy. @rashi. @thena. @Annie. @anu.
guys I’m gonna miss you all and ur reviews really
anu dont worry dear.. we can stay connected on this page for next 12days..
later if possible plz visit
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Hey Anu….so sweet of u to say dat u read my review n going to miss it…Take care bud!
I have seen monicas jugaad its nice:-)
Ireena- hey get well soon dear!!! Cm here n cmnt often.
Mandy- Yaar thanx for publicising my story to others means alot.
Samiha- Sorry, i didnt much comment. I have been writing the story. And kudos to u for defending the show, dats great ! Nice view about the story.
Thena- heyyyy thanx for bein the story fan. Made my day. Hugs tight.
And about that convo- rads feels arjun was using her as aplaything to make his girlfriend jealous as he is always patching up with her and breaking up so she though he was a rich brat using her for his benifit. Hehe i hope it made sense.
Zara- Heeeyyyyy wowwww it wud be dream come true if such a thing happens. Sigh. Haha thanx soo much for likin the story.
Suvi- thanx soo much for sayin that and yes i wil try to complete it soon but i hv les time in da day to do it. I’m sure I wil soon complete it. I hv the whole storu im gonna post it somewhere soon.
Thena- i lv ur comments i read dem always 😀
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,……..
MY TAKE ON DYM GRAND FINALE,….
i dunno how 2 express my gratitude 2wards cvs of this show,…they gave us a happy ending 4 this awesome story within this short span yaar,….A big salute 4 u CVs,…
Actually friends,…i gonna discuss wat they showed us n what we have 2 imagine simultaneously,…again cvs understood us so much yaar,..so,they skipped revenge revealing drama n radz sam patch up drama,….instead they satisfied us with blushing n breathtaking ardhika moments & joyful n cute nesam scenes,..so,again hats off 2 u cvs,….atleast they understood v ve brains 2 predict wat ll happen next r8 unlike other SP shows,….
1.NESAM:
Nesam got married without radz,…oh my gosh how its possible yaar,..s radz dinn attend sam’s marriage as she thinks her hubby s sam’s groom,….so,she decided 2 live with arjun’s memories all her life,..wat an idea madamji,….oh its nesam topic ryt,..i 4got,…So,NESAM married cox of arjun n sam s feeling 4 her lost friendship in birdsong n neil teases arjun that he still ve doubt on him,…
they dinn showed nesam confession cox they exchanged this ‘i lov u ‘ many times n so,i think its not necessary but loved neil’s encounter with dadaji,…he teases my neil badly,…dadaji, its too bad,..u r asking my neil 2 clean ur ear,….so,neil too came 2 rishikesh with all baggage just 2 go 4 a holiday vacation with all the 4 ,..they r sure about arjun that ardhika ll b joined,..neil came late as he s more concentrated in BS,…
Btw,…Friends,…cvs tried 2 show SAM-ARJun Friendship like Ra-Neil Freindship yaar,…tat’s the reason they focused more scenes on sam in previous suspense wale epi,..Arjun came inside sam’s room n sam taking arjun’s hand like a parental figure as she felt she s responsible 2 join ardhika forever as arjun s afraid 2 meet radz,..(i ll explain arjun’s IMO in ardhika part),..She planned 2 arrange a meeting with these 2,..so,she joined hands with dadaji n got answer that radz s lost in her love 4 arjun,…tat’s the reason dadaji constantly asked her y she dinn remove her nuptial chain n y she stuck in life without moving n he some how success in finding radz love 4 arjun which makes her live like a heart broken soul,…tat’s make sam 2 give arjun some confidence 2 meet radz n she depicted it in the car scene,..Still Radz loves u n she ll cry as she s stupid,…wen arjun asked her whether she ll 4give them,..she assured him tat s she ll as she s her friend n knew her that she has big heart,…so,cvs proved 3 friendship n 2 love btw 4 leads yaar,…if this story dinn end they might ve shown these developing gradually but now its jet speed,..i ve no complaints friends cox v can imagine watever cvs wanna show ,..hei na,…..
After leap,…
OMG,…how many of u thought that nesam ve child,..i doubted at first but gave up wen the argument started btw these 2,…loved how neil came in with the baby(puppy),..loved how they still argue with each other like friends yaar,..they r the best friendship wala love couple,…i was pretty shocked wen neil says NESAM as their child (puppy) name,…(r cvs reading our fans comments) n sam again named it as apple,..wat sam its too bad, how can u name ur child as apple n how ll u call the child( puppy )with neil’s petname,…its not fair dear,…i couldnt stop myself in laughing louder wen the camera showed wat it s,…cox its not child renu,..its puppy,…i said 2 myself n chided my gutter mind 4 thinking like that,….hehehe,…
LAst BGm part:
Loved nesam so much yaar,..loved how they watching b grade bojpuri film in laptop tat too in office n loved how arjun sneaked in often 2 ve a glance at the film while talking in phone (business convo),..Arjun,…v know u dear,…dont act as a gentleman,…but u ve 2 b cox of ur biwi r8,….N loved how neil makes radz 2 watch the film in laptop n loved how radz blushes away ,..she s still naive yaar,….
btw Nesam,…doing romance in office,flirting with each other,….tooooooooo bad,..where s ur professionalism babies,….See my ardhika babies who acting as nothing happened n behaving as a gentle couple,..(cox arjun ll bcom wild ly in their room privately),…jokes apart,..loved how neil wore scarf coming out of the bathroom like b4,…its reminded me the earlier epi,…where he wore it b4 samrat 2 scare sam n now he s doing truely cox of sam,…sam u r too fast yaar,….even loved how u too fight 4 silly reasons again n loved how arjun n radz tires 2 compromise by holding u both on each side,…i knew neil,..its samendar singh ka mistake,…but no need 2 mention r8,…loved that scene too,….
N thank god they dinn show baby 4 nesam n ardhika cox it was too early 4 both the couple 2 get married as they ve 2 achieve in their career first then babies next,…this s apt 4 real life n cvs showed this without making any flaws like other shows,…such a realistic ending in such a short span of time,…its highly commendable move 4m u cvs,…
2.ARDHIKA(this s my last review on this heavenly made couple):
lemme start with previous epi first,….loved how arjun searched 4 radz after their emotional bonding previous n8 in their bedroom n shouted her name after waking up 4m his bed n loved how radz hear his shouting b4 arjun could find her,…the letter which radz wrote 2 arjun,…friends,…do u remember wat she wrote apart 4m asking his n sam’s happiness,…its all his words 2 her which affects her badly n ve got a solid proof 2 this in this letter,… friends,please try 2 remember the store room scene of ardhika,..wat arjun told s happened acc 2 her,..A STORY OF A GIRL,…So,she felt guilty n tat makes her 2 write those words exactly,..his every words panouti,raaste ka pattar,(badluck,stone in his path) really affects her very much,…She took that seriously in2 her heart,…So,she decides 2 execute her decision of leaving him,……
Loved how arjun read the letter with angst n teary eyes,….he started 2 run behind her 2 stop her 4m leaving him then he stopped in the midway after seeing sam,,…Now comes a big question,..wat makes him 2 stop chasing his love 4m leaving him n y he dinn tried 2 meet her b4 sam’s arrangement,…wat makes him 2 stop ???? Answer s very simple,..wen he found sam,he felt guilty 4 not trusting radz wen she spoke truth n tried 2 reveal the fake relation b4 him n so,he wanna bring back sam’s lost happiness 2 her by making Nesam marry n revealing her sacrifice 2 khanna’s family n he wanna make everything clear in sam’s life which he created b4 4 his meaningless revenge,….
Further he was afraid of a big thing,..REJECTION 4m Radz,..He can even live without radz by walking dead but he cant stand 2 face her rejection of his love,..the very thot which hitches his mind s wat if she dinn ve such feelings over him,..this fear stops him 2 meet radz but after sam’s assurance that radz too love him gives him some courage 2 meet her,….
Even i doubt,he revealed nandhu’s drama cox some secrets should b kept as secrets 4 life long 2 save many lives,…that’s y radz dinn disclose this truth 2 every1 even after knowing it n so,arjun who s in synchronization with radz ll do the same yaar,..He might ve disclosed by putting all the blame on himself,..cox if the truth came out means,..piyali ll never say that Samrat n herself make arjun as BS partner just 4 radz sacrifice without any hatred 4 samrat 4 his extra marital affair,…r it may b he revealed it n samrat accept his mistake,..may b its one sided 4m nandhu’s side n so,he made arjun as partner 4 his genuine move after revealing this truth n flew 2 australia with manya,…
k enof of my imaginary revenge drama revealization which s not at all necessary now,…V ve 2 discuss more about EPIC LOVE CONFESSION EVER in TV of our magic couple,…
Radz telling her mom tat she dinn wanna meet any 1 n she cant love any 1,..please leave me like this,…r8 then Arjun entering the room,..i swear u all guys that radz ve some radar 4 arjun yaar,..She sense his presence n loved how wind blows n makes empty papers 2 flew all over the room,..its not a wind,..its a love breeze,..m i r8 guys???,..next coming breath taking moments of our ardhika,…
loved how Arjun caressing radz arm n back hugging her with all passion n loved how radz closed her eyes after feeling arjun’s touch n loved how arjun too closed his eyes 4 a moment n leaned his head over her neck,..as these both dont wanna end this moment as radz thot she s dreaming about arjun until arjun uttered his words,…’ur life s incomplete like these empty papers without ink of love’ brought radz back 2 real sense n she turned back 2 find her hubby,…
Again loved their light tom n jerry fyt yaar,..arjun found that she s in love with him ,…
Arjun,…’y u dinn marry till now’
Radz,…’2day a proposal coming 4 me 2 see’
Arjun,…’oh then u go like this wearing some1’s nuptial chain n sindoor’
Radz,…’i gonna remove it’
arjun,…’then remove it r8 now n give it 2 me’
shocked Radz turned her back 2 hide her feelings 4 him,…
Radz,…y u came here
Arjun,…2 take wat’s mine,…
Radz,…u can get many nuptial chain in mumbai n go away 4m here,…
omg,…omg,…she s still naive yaar,…wen i heard this dialogue 4m radz,..i dunno how 2 express my feelings 4 her,…arjun understood that she ll never understand his feeling unless n untill he confess,..Nice move CVs,…this leads arjun 2 confess his feelings 2 his wife n the way he holds her cheek n stating how he feels 4 her n how her presence haunting him ceaselessly,…N finally confessed ‘I LOVE U RADHIKA’ without taking breath in his husky voice,…omg m literally dead by tis confession man,…
then,..my chasni thinks about her sam’s love n arjun cleared sam (real Raste ka pattar)btw them by revealing Nesam love,..radz surprised 2 hear this,..n finally loved how arjun explained sam’s love like himself being fallen in love with his panauti,moongfali,raste ka pattar,…loved it man,…Next Radz has 2 confess,…now there s no1 btw them,…so,Arjun wants her 2 confess her love,…Radz calling him ARJUN = I LOVE U,…all ardhiak fans n arjun knew this r8,…Another breath taking moment,…
friends,…how many of u felt diff btw radz kiss n arjun’s kiss on forehead,…There radz kissed him 2 assure him the support he needed as a child n Here arjun’s feather kiss on her forehead,eyes n leaning 2wards her lips s 2 make her confess her love n kill her hesitation,..as they ve their life time 2 get intimate but confession s much needed now,…i loved it a lot,…call me ARJUN,…Sir,..ARJUN,…Sir,,…Arjun,….ARJUN,…Radz arjun makes my lover boy 2 fly in cloud n he hugged her tightly with full passion yaar,…HAts off 2 Aham n Monica 4 this epic scene,…
After Leap,…
Friends,..i ve 2 admit 1 fact that i got all the scenes which i expected 2 see btw ardhika,…thank u cvs,…K,…Arjun’s dream came true yaar,…Radz waking him with her wet hair n Arjun pulling her closer n Radz calling him ARJUN,Arjun,ARjun, in her each line,…M really loved hearing arjun,..k my lover boy wants 2 take leave n spend all his time with his wife,..how cute arjun,…but ur career oriented biwi scolding u n btw,..ly1 dialogue showed us that Radz achieved her dream by getting best copywriter award,…
then loved arjun’s dialogue,..he s complaining like a kid yaar,….’b4 u even dinn call my name,…n now u r always scolding me by calling ARjun’,…even loved radz replying him ARJUN,…hmmm now i understood who’s hand s high,…chasni,..arjun,..u ve no way that u already lost with her in ring finding rasam,,…so,chasni’s hand ll b always high dear,…but u know how 2 lose her,… n 1 sec my heart stopped wen u closed the door cox i thot whether nandhu re-entered,…..as i thot she went 2 london with Rana…but later found that its ur way of making her nervous,…
N they both kissed,…Even radz was expecting this as she left her hair brush,….BTw Arjun,..u kissed Radz without brushing n bathing yaar,..very bad dear,…my chasni s clean always so,better kiss her after taking bath man,…so,she ll not get ur bad smell,..n u ll get a long lasting romance dear,…hehhehe,….
LASt BGM,…
Friends,..i felt radhika a bit shy in last part yaar,…btw loved how arjun continuously adding chasni in his tea,…nesam noticed it n they teased arjun,..n loved my chasni blushing all over,..
Loved sam-radz hug n ARjun neil Hug n last but not least Group hug,..i felt that hug as not character hug but it sounds like all 4 lead actor’s hug,…with this my amazing show comes 2 an end,…
Asusual dinn read wat i wrote n sry 4 many grammatical errors here n there,…n i hope u never mind like always….
What to say?u r amazing renu…nice description…AHAM SHARMA is fabulous in romantic scenes…good to see him in such scenes..
As usual excellent renu…..no words. ….loved it
Renu,that was a superb write up of the last episode,(inch by inch,I would say)really, really good!You have done a great job for the producers of the show,who hurried to end the show abruptly for the reasons known only to them!I think they have to pay you for this wonderful job!(ha,ha,ha!)It was very,very nice to read and felt good as what we missed was told beautifully by you !!Iam sure the director himself wouldn’t have been able to make us feel what you have made us feel!
Renu…..loved ur explanation….of what happened in d show….& what d cvs left for us to decipher…fantastic!! N I felt d same dat d last group hug was more of a actors’ hug than that of characters.
@Renu I luv all ur comments… One last request from me
All manmarziyan fans vl b very happy if u cn recall nd update all the ardhika moments once again..so v cn bid a farewell to our favourite show by refreshing our memory abt our most loved couple..
I knw it vl b difficult BT I luv the way hw u explain each nd every moment.
So plz update it if u cn….itz my request yaar
Suvi- sorry i mistook comments must be my sleepy eyes and hey wil be dream come true if such a thing happens. Thax sooo much for sayin dat 😀
seems like im the only owl here readin comments hehe i think everybody izz asleeep.
Wondering only till yesterday diz comment zone was buzzing wid loads of comnts til now, coz of serial update but now i really feel like itz over. The show ends. Da curtain falls…sad sad sad..cant see ardhika nesam frm tmrw:(
@all- Oh, hell whatever I tried and I didn’t get any sleep.
Updating since where I left off…
Chapter-4 ( He and I)
First thing Radhika heard before she opened her eyes was an argument and it was going on in whipers. She slowly opened her eyes. A wide ceiling of a room came into view. It was all dark and she squinted her eyes to look around as she tried to get up. She winced, shit her stomach was really very sour. She looked down at herself, she was still wearing the same white tank top and blue denim shorts of the morning. Ugh! She needed a shower. Like badly. Like immediately right now.
She was in a bed and it wasn’t her small one. That bed was narrow and this was king size, with soft comforter and silky sheets.
Radhika got up difficulty. Her head spun around and she felt immensely dizzy and extremely nauseous. She put her legs on the floor and got up with the support of the bed.
Where was she? She switched on the bedside lamp. The room flooded with light yellow new colour. She blinked and looked around in wonder. Wow! If was huge and strangely it was all black.
The sheets. The bed covers. The recliner. The floor was smooth shiny marble black except the ceiling and the small library racks at one corner. They were deep red in colour.
It was male and edgy with none soft hues and shades. The large glass windows opened wide. The thin red see through curtains moved as the cool breeze pulled and pushed them with its invisible strings.
Radhika walked towards the window.
The whispered conversation can be clearly heard now.
There were two voices. One was Arjun’s and other was….Saina? His girlfriend.
She was here? Radhika moved closer to the window.
“I don’t know why you’re making it as such a big deal, I mean, you always have parties here like every night except you didn’t have one since three months. You had a fight with Rahul, I don’t know what he said made you two roll on the floor and punch each other to death….God, with all the temper fits, I needed a break. We didn’t have time for each other and….” Her annoyed voice travelled in the room.
“And I thought what could better be to cheet you up than a all night party.” Her voice now turned seducing.
“I didn’t tell you to, Saina, and there is something called personal space.” Arjun replied to her sugary outburst.
His voice was quite different with her than he used with Radhika. Very familiar and friendly.
She then heard a movement.
“Since when do you need space from me. You had always come back for more.” Her previously seductive voics turned smoky.
Radhika drew back. Her face burnt hot.
How did she get here? She frowned in confusion. Her forehead cleared of the crinkle.
Oh, sweet god, The fight, dammit, how did she forget? Well, you just got punched in the stomach and blacked out completely, how will you remember it, her mind mocked her. Yeah, yeah whatever.
Her eyes widened, Oh crap, Vir. He must be really very guilty for punching her, though accidently. The guy had temper yes, but he was not a bad guy. He was just too protective. His parents gave him the responsibility of both hers and Misha’s safety, so he had to feel obligated to duty.
Where was he? She needed to explain the situation or else he would go blurt out to his parents.
Where is her bag? She looked around but she couldn’t find it. Did she even bring one? The room was slick and there was no chance of anything feminine, that too being related to hers.
Heck with it, she will just leave like this. She hoped Viren was here still.
Radhika walked up to the door of the room hurriedly. She opened it and rammed her straight into someone’s chest.
“Whoa! Where is the fire?” Arjun’s chest rumbled under her ears.
Radhika could hear his heartbeat. He was warm and he smelled delicious. Both of her hands were on his waist on either sides. Saina was around, her mind reminded her. Crap. She pushed herself apart from his body.
“I need fo leave. Is Viren here still?” She asked him.
She looked up at his face. He seemed wryly amused. So much has happened in one night. It was like a casette going fast forward.
Radhika didn’t want to create a scene here and she really want Saina to haggle her about ‘making use of the situation. She was a big bully in college and whoever touches Arjun is a big enemy. Radhika has seen girls being the victim of the humiliation she pours evilly. Radhika didn’t want that. Her hateful ire. Nope.
Arjun was truly way out of her league. Saina has got big blue eyes, pretty face, lady long legs and all. Hers were boring brown eyes and black curly hair and she was minion campared to her. But Radhika in appearance was just like her mom and she wasn’t boring, Oh, no, hsr mother had been far from it. The resemblance between them had been quite uncanny. People used to get confused if her mother was her sister and stuff.
She shook her head and put her arms protectively around her waist.
She tried to walk past him, but he caught her bicep before she could take a step any further.
“Where do you think you’re going?” He asked her with raised eyebrow.
She tried to remove his hand with hers but he wouldn’t budge.
“To find Viren, is he still here?”
Arjun’s eyes turned steely.
“No, he is not here and I don’t think you’re meeting him anytime soon.” He said firmly.
Excuse me? Did he just order her?
“And you look pale.” He narrowed his eyes and slid them all over her face.
If he observed the sadness that settled in her eyes, then he didn’t comment on it. He only pushed her into the room and closed the door shut.
Abruptly, the pain came back of the punch, her stomach hurt and she felt extreme nausea hit her. Oh, god, she was going to be sick.
“Arjun…” Radhika fisted some of the soft fabric of his tshirt. ” Bathroom.” She coughed.
She was going to puke on his beautiful looking brown hued carpet if he wasn’t going to do anything but stare at her wide eyed.
“Arjun!” She urged him again. He muttered out a curse under his breath.
First the dry heaves attacked clenching her intestines painfully tight and Oh, god, here it comes, the morning breakfast and afternoon lunch.
Just as immediately Dustin caught her up in his arms and Radhika squeaked surprised. Fast paced he dropped her into the bathroom and she instantly puked her guts out in the pearly white wash stand.
“Get out. Get out. Get out!” Radhika shouted.
She didn’t want him to see her like this. But he didn’t move away. Her hair was lifted off her flushed face.
Arjun rubbed her neck and back gently. She washed her face with the cool water and the soap Arjun handed her. She rinsed her mouth with the cleanser. He gave her a towel which she dabbed all ovsr her face.
“You came here with me in the car just so that I don’t black out and now it’s my turn of concern.” He whispered softly in her ear.
He wants to see her puke? Well, be my guest, she thought as she didn’t even have the strength to argue with him let alone protest him being here.
He held her to his body as support and she felt a little better after a while.
Radhika stood there in his arms. Her back to his front. He slid his arm around the front of her waist. He hesitated but let his fingers inside her tank top, and put them over her stomach and touched his cool fingers lightly all over where it hurt like hell.
“It’s going to be fine.” He whispered, his soft lips over her right ear.
“Hmm.” She mumbled sleepily.
“Are you going to nod off?” He whispered again, his fingers rubbed gently in circles all over the hurt spot.
She only mumbled inaudibly, sleepily as his touch felt good. She didn’t feel any pain now accept a few twinges. He chuckled into her neck.
He moved his lips along her ear shell.
“Feeling better?” He asked huskily.
She didn’t reply but turned around into his arms and laid her head on his chest. He put his arms around again and held her tight.
Her hands were around his waist. They stood tightly held in poignant silence, very familiar with each others touch and without any barrier of tensed up muscles. His body offered strength and comfort to hers. It felt nice to be dependent on him. Well, only once because she felt bone tired and if he did let go of her now, she was bound to fall flat on her face.
“Why did you do it?” He asked her moment later.
His chin rested on her head.
“What?” She whisper asked.
“You know, take a hit for me.” His voice sounded with husky curiosity and something like wonder.
Radhika’s eyes flew open and the haze of peace and quite cleared from her fogged up brain.
Why did she take a hit for him? Well, that’s a good question. Why did she?
Because she can’t see him hurt, as simple as that. That is the reason she took a punch from Viren. The force of such realization jerked her back.
Radhika let her hands fall from around his waist. He didn’t let go and but held her body tight.
“I have got to go.” She said and and tried to move away.
“You aren’t going anywhere tonight.” He stated, his face serious.
Radhika ignored it.
“I know Dustin will be here still. He will take me home. You don’t need to worry about it.” She pushed away and got into the room.
“I sent him away.” He announced, following her out of the bathroom.
She snorted, as if he could sent away big buff Viren. The thought was ridiculous.
Arjun put his hand over the small of her back and turned her around to the way of the plush looking bed.
“Come on, let’s get you to bed, you need rest.” He said in a gentle tone and pushed down her body forward.
He removed the covers aside and sat her down on the bed.
He then put two square pills on her hand and offered her a glass of water from besie the wooden table of the bed.
Radhika frowned.
“What are these for?” She asked.
Arjun sighed and rubbed the back of his neck.
“Painkiller for the hurt and Vomikind for the nausea.” He explained.
Radhika meekly took those and emptied the glass thirstily.
He was looking at her smiling.
She couldn’t believe he lead her here. It was his gentle voice and his comforting touch. She felt like a whining child being scolded.
“Don’t patronize me, I don’t want to ne here. I will walk if Viren isn’t here to take me home.” She grumbled.
“Not in a million years, Sweety.” His eyes and voice flat without humour.
Radhika sighed, giving up.
“I…I want to shower first.” She conceded and wrapped her arms around her waist again.
And he needs one too. He looked wary and tired. His jaw has the fresh punch mark. He slid his hand over his dishevelled silky black hair. it fell back over his forehead messily. And he needs a hair cut too. But, his jaw still looked smooth and soft. She wanted plant kisses all over it. Ohhhkay, where did that come from? did she hit her head too…she blushed and looked away.
“Good.” He said, and took hold of her hand in his.
She got up as he wrapped his arm around her waist.
“Where are you going? She asked him confused.
“To shower.” He replied with wry humour.
His eyes twinkled mischievously as his lips twitched into a smirk.
Radhika narrowed her gaze.
“Not funny.” She bristled.
“Why not? We both need to shower.” He said amused, and kissed her nose.
He slowly moved away. Her eyes widened. He looked into her eyes with the smirk still playing over his lips.
He removed his tshirt over from his head. His lean body and abs flexed, but she saw a fading gash mark around his ribcage. it looked angry red.
Radhika stared mesmerised. The tshirt flew over the room and landed on her face. She removed it and clutched it over her chest.
He smiled boyishly at her and She was at that instant became hook, line and sinker. The charm in his smile blinded her eyes with its thousand volt bulb brightness. His jeans hungs low over his hips.
His hands opened the button of his jeans as he looked straight into her eyes hotly.
Radhika felt feverish rush of feelings run all over her body. Goosebumps rose on her skin. The zipper went down smoothly slowly next and she let out a muffled whimper. Radhika grabbed the Tshirt, covered her eyes and ran hard towards the bathroom.
She heard a booming laughter behind her before she locked the bathroom door. Her heart rate spiked up and she was breathing quite heavily. Jerk, he was playing with her………
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Hahaha, arent deY CuTe 😀
How do U like it?
plssss reply, worked hard for u guys onLY 😀
k den Im wiped…goin sleep finally….
pls tel me how was it…
Hey farha..It’s beautiful..keep it up…
I hv been a silent reader all these days. Cant wait for the next chapter. i wake up reading your stories. It is racy. Your story is kind of solace for missing manmatzian these days. Please keep at and post more.
Farha we appreciate all ur hardwork..sweetie:) M in love wid ur story….n my day is made if I read a part of it….feel soooo happy when I see one of ur updates n my excitement knows no bound then!
N now d story.well it was fantastic as usual…..m loving d Arjun- Radhika track!! I’m liking d caring n concerned Viren but den I also liked his snarling self….but Viren doesn’t like Arjun:( but koi na…I toh love him:D
N Farha m bowled over by ur writing skills..would love to read ur book someday!! Lots of love:-*
hey sory guys in one of the sentence i wrote ‘Dustin’ by mistake.. its Viren..as usual typos hate em :-X
gonna miss the show 🙁
hai @all frnds gd mrning i thought u guys stoped cmnting bt thre is dfrnt… @zara thanks a lot ur xpresing was vry nice….@kfar i didn’t have time fer vi i try my bst 2 read ur stry u r vry talentented…keep it up i think u became a writer like radu….best of luck
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Suddenly I miss this show omg i feel like crying. Star plus should have given this show another chance. Come back with manmarziyan part 2 with same cast and writer specailly.
Renuuuuu feeling like hug u dear…how beautifully describe all the moments again…nw m falling in lobe witb ur pov…great yarrr….no words to describe hw much i like ur pov…pls join the page dear i want more pov by u…plz DEAR….MISSS U FRM CORE…N THANKS FOR THE BEST POV…
in our cntry its raining 4rm mrning n am missing ardika
Renu
thank u so mch for ur POV …so beautifully u explaind characters n situatns…
hope u will continue in dis space with ur povs abt previous ardhika moments or any previous episodes…
hai@anu i dn’t have fb acount bt i.l rmbr al of u anu dn’t u guys see anyothr serial plz infrm then we cn al guys join on that page
@Nakshatra- thanx alot dear 😀
@Tasnim- Heyyy thanx sooo much for sayin that 😀
@Dipika- thanx yaaar means alot comng from u guys
@Ireena @Anu- Best people in da world thanxxx lots dearies n loveliessss 😀
dipika- sorrty i took ur compliment hahaha my eyes r actn up hehe
@renu- verrry nice dear 😀