They were Kissing.But they realised it was a dream.They were still in water and drenched themselves.The inner turmoil had erupted about thinking of the kiss.But luckily the moon light soothed them.They just had been holding hands.Radhika freed her hand and walked towards the house.Arjun followed her.Suddenly they were silent.No one was opening their mouth.The inner turmoil seemed too powerful to hold back their talks.They did not know what should they talk.Though it was just a dream but it gave them a rememberance of so-called the kiss they never noticed but it was noticed too powerfully and had effect now.Radhika excused herself and took her phone.
In train,
Sam is sitting in the upper berth of the train.She was sad.There Mala did not know what had happened,she asked,”Beta,ladoo ?”Sam said no.Mala had noticed that after talking to Radhika and then to Neil something had happened,but what she did not know.There Neil is crying.He thinks about the events that took place
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Radhika returned home.She was angry and her eyes were red.Her mom was packing bags and Dad was helping him.She went to her room and cried,”I thought I knew him.I thought he trusted me,but no he is still that cold arrogant.” But her heart said,”I can’t believe but still was he sad or he was seriously saying?”At this she calmed down.But Sam heard everything except the heart part.She dialed Neil and said calmly,”Yaar ,why did ur Bro made my Di cry?She is so upset just becoz of your bro.I say if she is hurt I…”Neil could not hear about his brother.His mood was already bad due to Aunt Margaret’s death news.He could not tolerate know and said,”Look who is saying this.You and your sister must have done something.I love my bhai and trust him so much.”With the comment that your sister must have done she said,”I leave you.I love my sister more,she has done sacrifices for us.She healed you when your bro himself distanced himself from you and you say…..I only wanted to but fine as you say.My Mistake all my mistake.Sorry I won’t talk.”She ended the call and cried.There Radhika thinking,”I will have to work else how will I make her dream fulfilled?I will start anew.I want Sam to excel and fulfill her manmarziyan.”She cried at her situation.Both sisters cried for each other.There both Arjun and Neil were broken,they were crying,she was just like brother.They tried to comfort each other
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Sam received call of Radhika.She accepted the call and Radhika said,”Did you have any fight with Neil?You sound so hurt.”Sam said yes and explained everything.Radhika beat her head that why she cried and talked to herself so loud.SHe then said,”Remember Sam,never let your relation be affected due to us.We might even break each other bones but we want to see you happy.Even Neil likes you.Sammy call Neil right away and smile little sister.”She said yes and smiled broadly.Mala did see her talking,she did not know what she talked but was sure It was Radhika who made her smile.Only Neil and Radhika could make her smile.
Sam came to the doorway of the train to call Neil.And she saw Neil.She said,”Neil?”Neil turned and said,”Jaha Samunder Singh waha hai uska Idiot.”She cried and hugged him tightly.She said,”I am so sorry…I”she said in broken tone but Neil said,”Shh no crying I know it was my mistake,thank God Radhika Di already told me.”And she was surprised Radhika called Neil when Sam was crying,he told everything and said Sorry to radhika as he didn’t mean but was sad.She gave him same advice and said,”Chase her till she is happy.”Neil smiled.
There Radhika was listening on her phone,song,”You Belong with me” BY TAYLOR SWIFT(My fav)
She closed her eyes and started dreaming about Arjun and some beautiful girlfriend and Radhika herself as Taylor.All surrounding same as the song but our character imagines herself.
You’re on the phone with your girlfriend she’s upset,
She’s going off about something that you said
‘Cause she doesn’t get your humor like I do.
I’m in the room, it’s a typical Tuesday night.
I’m listening to the kind of music she doesn’t like.
And she’ll never know your story like I do.
But she wears short skirts
I wear t-shirts
She’s cheer captain
And I’m on the bleachers
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you’re looking for has been here the whole time.
If you could see
That I’m the one
Who understands you.
Been here all along.
So, why can’t you see
You belong with me,
You belong with me?
Walk in the streets with you in your worn out jeans
I can’t help thinking this is how it ought to be.
Laughing on a park bench thinking to myself,
“Hey, isn’t this easy?”
And you’ve got a smile
That can light up this whole town.
I haven’t seen it in awhile
Since she brought you down.
You say you’re fine I know you better than that.
Hey, what you doing with a girl like that?
She wears high heels,
I wear sneakers.
She’s cheer captain,
And I’m on the bleachers.
Dreaming about the day when you wake up and find
That what you’re looking for has been here the whole time.
If you could see
That I’m the one
Who understands you,
Been here all along.
So, why can’t you see
You belong with me?
Standing by and waiting at your backdoor.
All this time how could you not know, baby?
You belong with me,
You belong with me.
Oh, I remember you driving to my house
In the middle of the night.
I’m the one who makes you laugh
When you know you’re ’bout to cry.
I know your favorite songs,
And you tell me about your dreams.
Think I know where you belong,
Think I know it’s with me.
Can’t you see
That I’m the one
Who understands you?
Been here all along.
So, why can’t you see
You belong with me?
Standing by and waiting at your backdoor.
All this time how could you not know, baby?
You belong with me,
You belong with me.
You belong with me.
Have you ever thought just maybe
You belong with me?
She smiled at the end of the song. When she opened her eyes,she saw Arjun bent on his knees and holding a box,Omg was he proposing her?She looked at him,her heart beating superfast.He nervously popped out a card and asked will you?It was written Will you be my permanent girlfriend?He waited for Radhika’s slap on his cheek.He closed his eyes.He was waiting.But instead he received a kiss on his cheek.She said,”Yes”She was given a box by him,it had jhumkas.Classic choice indeed.He said,”I thought,might look good at you and matches with your indian dressed.”She said smilingly and says,”Its perfect”.But Radhika said,”But look we will maintain boss-employee relation at work and then outside like girlfriend and boyfriend.”He nervously said yes and said to her,”Anyway now it is diwali vacation so if you want you can stay here.”She said,”ok,but my belongings?”Oh no!Radhika thought he would think of double meaning but he said,”No problem,I will send Miss Cactus to bring your clothes.Till then,you take any of my shirt and jeans.”Miss Cactus? Was it really a name or he named her?But she will have to wear today his clothes.She remembered being teased in Lonavla,now he was his bf.She will have to remain a distance.She choose a black shirt,minimum chances of showing and decided to wear his brown jeans but they seem they will not fit but yes she had her leggings in her bag as she kept it yesterday for matching with Diwali dress.She saw Arjun arranged everything.But something was weird,why was he distancing himself from her.Before he wouldn’t leave any chance.
In the BG song plays,Jab tum chaho..from prdp(Radhika sings and Arjun responds)
Jab tum chaaho paas aate ho
Jab tum chaaho door jaate ho
Jab tum chaaho paas aate ho
Jab tum chaaho door jaate ho
Chalti humesha marzi tumhari
Kehte ho phir bhi pyaar karte ho!
Maana maine galtiyan ki
Thodi thodi saktiyan ki
Ishq mein thodi si mastiyan ki
Jab tum chaaho shiqve gile ho
Jab tum chaaho dil ye mile ho
Chalti humesha marzi tumhari
Jaao bade aaye pyaar karte ho
Dil ki baatein bolte nahin
Raaz apne tum kholte nahin
Apne mann ki tum karte ho sadaa
Mera mann tum tatolte nahin
Sach hain teri ye sab shiqayatein
Tod dunga ye rivayatein
Bhool meri bhool jaana
Mujho aaya na rijhana
Magar chahta hoon ab manaana
Jab tum chaaho hans ke bulaao
Jab tum chaaho ladte hi jaao
Chalti humesha marzi tumhari
Badi badi baatein, pyaar karte ho!
Seekhni hain pyaar ki baariqiyan sabhi
Ho samay toh sikha dijiye abhi
Kaise kisi ko rijhaate baat-baat mein
Door kaise hoti kisi ki naraazgi
Bhole banke karte ho gustakhiyan
Chhod do ye sab chalaakiyan
Baaton mein behlaao naa yun
Baat ko badhaao na
Maanungi na main manaao na yun
Jab tum chaaho shaam saji ho
Jab tum chaaho raat dhali ho
Ab tum chaaho jo bhi sazaa do
Bas thoda sa hans ke dikha do
Radhika laughed at the last line and said,”Tell me whats bothering you?”
Arjun said,”Actually I wanted to propose to you for marriage,so I wrote Permanent life partner but then scribbled and wrote Permanent Girlfriend but you think as latter.So I was in dileema what to do but I know I must give you space for thinking.”Radhika smiled and said,”Lets give some time and our bond gets stronger,we can think to get married”He smiled and locked hands together sitting at the large window seeing the sea calm and moon shining.
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Next chapter: Radhika at Arjun’s home and Neil at Rishikesh with Sam
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How was it?Wrote hurridly.Sorry for any mistakes.Plz do comment and give suggestion.Love u all.
27 Comments
Oh god finally arjun ne radhika ko prupose kiya i just loved irmt ha ha ha….
Hey this song was from prem rathan dan payo movie right……
hey tanya…wat a lovely episode…..finally arjun proposed radhika…it was a cute one…now want to see how there love story goes on……..eagerly waiting for the next….
superb yar…. lykd it
Nice and sweet epi tanya,keep it up..waiting for. More.
Finally proposal given loved it…..pls update next part soon…
Awsome chaptr dr. . . 🙂
Lovely episode. Cute proposal. Love the songs. Waiting to see perfect bonding of nesam n ardhika. Update asap.
Superb episode yaar….aradhika rockzzzz….nesam scenes were too cute
Heyy Tanaya… Lovely episode buddy…. Anyways How are you?? Ummm…Don’t mind but are you Indian??
Nice
Wow… Super awsme episode simply perfect 🙂 loved it… Even you belong wid me is one of my favourite songs… 🙂 waiting for d next update..
Hey tanya, my sweetie, awesome nd cute chapter….love arjun proposal….awww sooo cute….totally loved it…aradhika rocks baby…Im also a swiftie….love her songs sooooooooo much…love u my heart…
One loveee
Superrrrbbbb episode dr..
Hey guys m new here n was amazed and excited 2 see manmarziyaan updates …
Guys just read each n every epi of ff ..so heart touching stories..
I appreciate d efforts of all manmarziya writers…@kfar , Kirti ,Tanya , Thena,Nisha ( a musical writer of our manmarziya planet) , Deepa , Natasha etc ( sorry if I left any of our writer name )..so my dearies M I welcome to ur manmarziya planet…
Hey came 2know ( through ur comments)u all guys r living ur manmarziya…..nd it would b my pleasure to join u N live my manmarziyaa also.
Hi Hareem dear, you are most welcome sweetheart in this mmz planet…we all love to be your friend….keep in touch always…love you loads honeyyyy, meri bhi dosti qubool kar lo…
Hey Roma it is my pleasure to b ur frnnndddd..dear
U all r so friendly ….thank u my
deaaarrrrriiiiii
Keep SMILING always..
Love u loads…
cute blossoming love story!
Arjun prposd Radhika;!!!!!!! I lkd Arjun ‘s tot f ‘vng sme tme bfre marriage ?.I he every thing will be fine in their love ❤ life
Hey tanya , woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow dear.
Loved ur episode completely itna cute proposal wooooooooooooooooooooooow.
I seriously want to pull your cheeks dear.
and nesam fight cutely because of their bro and di another cute thing. Woooooooooooooooow.
Loved this episode dear. Always loving what u write love u always.
Keep smiling dear. Always smile
Once a friend always a friend.
Hey hareem dear, Welcome to manmarziyaan ka planet
Tumhare aur apun ke eshtyle mein .
Is planet me different different aliens rehte hain. Some are cute , some are naughty , some are dude, some are hotty.
But everybody still love each other and always living our manmarziyaan here.
Love u hareem. U are over welcome here. Its our please to be yours friend.
Dear So now the table turns to ur side. Would u accept my friendship . Tell me the answer waiting. dear.
Love u dear.
Once a friend always a friend.
Hey Nisha it would b my pleasure To b ur frnd dear…
As I said bfore U r a musical writer of r manmarziyaan planet hope u love dat title…
Plz keep updating regularly dr …
Love u loads….
Hi Tanya, muaaaaahhhhhh, awesome episode and songs made it really amazing, very cute and lovely proposal from arjun…and also rads reply was very cute…nesam fight and then patch up so lovely…it’s was a very good narration. ..keep it up buddyyy…love you loads, eagerly waiting for the next episode
Love u hareem keep smiling dear. Always phir milenge chalte chalte Luv u
Once a friend always a friend.
Plzzzz update soon…eagerly waiting…love u my heart…??
One lovee?
Hey tanya, updt nxt part soon. . .pls. . .
Hey tanya how r u dear. Its been time to talk to you . Dear Missing u dear. Sometime just to talk to our friends. Obviously missing your two now 3 stories but more than that we are friends.
And missing you dear. whenever get time.
Aake thodii baate karenge sirf baatein
Sometime friends ke saath baath karna acha lagta hain. Luv u dear always smile