Hi guys i am susmi,i am going to write a story regarding manmarziyan.this is my one of the fav shows.okay coming to the story,
Radhika:chubby,talkative,carefreeloves everyone and falls in love easily.
Arjun:smart good looking handsome,loved by everyone and is little secretive abt his heart.
i am going to concentrate in my story only abt radhika nd arjun,i am sorry for sam and neil fans.
AT MORNING,
AT COLLEGE HOSTEL,
Radhika:god why do u give me so much things to temeber,i cant.two weeks before i forget my brother birthday,yesterday i forget my bestie birthday,aishu will kill me. Krishna please save me,i need memory power
AT COLLEGE,
Aishu:where is the idiot radhu?
Karthi:dont know,may be late for college.
Aishu:karthi,i will not spare radhu,yesterday she didnt wish for my birthday. she is not seeing me as her friend,she even cant remember my birthday,how can she….
Radhu comes nd hide behind karthi,
aishu speaks more abt radhu”s carelessness,
RAdhu:aishu sorry sorry sorry,actually i thought to wish u but my phone is dead nd my balance is low,today only i recharged
Aishu:radhu please dont tell the silly reasons to avid my scolding,i will not spare u. i wont talk to u for a week no for a month,
Karthi:aishu radhu just forgot so leave her,its not her mistake,its mistake of her brain
Aishu:ahannnn…..karthi u even supporting for radhu,i didnt expext this,i wont speak to radhu thats final.
Radhu:aishu sorry na plz speak,ok leave i know how u will talk to me
radhu sees karthi gives a weird look.
Karthi:radhu wat????
Radhika:how much this shirt cost
Karthi:950
RAdhika:sorry karthi.
radhika:aishu if u not talk to me i will remove karthis shirt nd pant.
Karthi:wat,radhu this is not fair,
Aishu:do watever
Karthi:aishu u r keeping ur frnds virginity in between u ,god plz save me.
Radu:karthi plz will u do this for me,
Radhu comes near karthi,
Karthi shouts plz help me plz help me plz help me,aishu smiles,and says to radhu to leave karthi,he is innocent,
Karthi:aishu u r soo mean,nd radhu herafter i wont come near u . thankgod,he saved me or else i will a chicken infront of u.
Aishu:radhu come lets go to class.
AT EVENING
Radika takes vomit.
Aishu:radhu i said u not take ur hostel food.i think they are mixing something.
karthi:may be because,u r often getting this kind of problems,can we complain this to police.i know a friend
RAdhu:karthi stop,why r u guys making this a big issue.
Aishu:atleast u can stay with me in my room,we only 3 girls u can join us.
Karthi:aishu ,u r giving a best idea.
Radhu:aishu no,just leave it….,
AT RADHU’S HOSTEL
a lady says to a man here are some girls u can take them but u have to give some amount,i am giving to them drugs,it will take them to next stage.radhika hears it.radhu calls aishu nd karthi and tell them about it..
aishu:radhu we have to do something,they are playing with the life of girls.
Karthi:yeah
Radhu: i think we have to give police complaint.
Karthi:ok tomorrow we can meet ACP sir.
PRECAP:THE HERO’S ENTRY IN ROYAL ENFIELD IS SHOWN….
hi guys,hows it actually first time i am writting fanfiction about a serial,so if there is any mistake sorry and please leave ur comments…
14 Comments
Hi sushmi.This story is superb.loved it.waiting for next
thank u so much chashni,i am glad u have commented,i will try to post next part as soon as possible.
Loved it
thank u so much kavina,i am glad u have commented.
Awesome start, waiting for the next update. 🙂
thank u so much brin, i am glad u have commented for me,i will try to post my next part as soon as possible.
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thank u so much
Sumitra darling superb,excellent,outstanding,nice,awesome,good,mind-blowing episode….. I loved it to the core…. I liked all the scenes….. Tc lots of love to u from me and teddy hugs to u…… Will be waiting for next week……
thank u aarti so much for ur words,actually i will updateing daily,i am so happy for ur comments,once again thanks arti
mindblowing
thank u so much shindhu
excellent ,outstanding
thank u so much subha