Hello Everyone…Its Jessie again…!! Little Queen this time as per your wish…Saran…here is your lil queen…And Chinnu…My belated treat..the stories you would demand is here…
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My Little Queen (Shot 11)
“Dad….Am going with Radhika to meet her ex-fiance Ram..!!”,I said more like a information…her fingers pressed on mine,though ours were intertwined….
“but…”
“Dad..! Ram prefers to meet me it seems..”,I chuckled winking to my dad…
His features turned sharp raising a warning,.”Arjun..this isn’t a deal..! there are..”
“Dad…she is coming with me.”,I saw her to look me terrified…
“That’s the reason..am worried about….its Family and relationships..not rivals and deals..”,my dad said rubbing his forehead…
I could sense my dad’s anxiety …Her fingers slowly lost its grip from my hold…
“Yes dad!!..Of course…Ram is also our Family…”,I sarcastically remarked,intertwining my fingers back with hers…
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“Dare you step back!…Now. Go..Get that folder…”,I said when we walked back to hall..
She stood pouting angrily,glaring at ground…
“Who is visible for you..there?!”,my finger pointed our floor..
“I won’t..! ….You shouldn’t order me like this…”
Retort ! What the heck was that for…
“Pardon me!! Little.darling…”,I tried to sound sweet…
She looked around,to move away..
“Come..lets go home..”I said to her…”Sam..!! We are leaving….”, informing aloud I pulled her with me…
Its not even a day I had proposed,and she orders me…though it was funny…I couldn’t let that go…
“Why ..please…..someone may see….Sir….”,she refused to take a step ahead from my door way…
Biting her lips,”please..”,she mumbled with her gaze at me…
Hesitation!! I just hate it….
“Mom isn’t at home..!! That’s the reason…”,she continued when I stood crossing my arms….”hmm…you know…Saral’s mom is a gossip queen…she…”
I shook my head In a vehement negative and she pursed her lips at that…
“What’s your problem”,I asked annoyed..
Her features lost its liveliness..”Am sorry..I dint mean to hurt you…it’s just…just….I had a thought about neighborhood aunties…”,her eyebrows raised for a a plead with her lips pouting..
Cute!! had someone said the effect it has over the beholder…She exactly does the way one could never get a chance to think to over look it…
“I will change in a minute and come..okay..!!”,her voice came cheerful…
“Yep.Go!”,I chuckled inwardly thinking about my plan…
“I will come fast”,she swiftly made her move before I could speak further…
It was getting too hard to keep my hands off from her..!! That too,after having her over me..!! Did she think to kill me wearing that dress and how could she be naive to the extent of willing to meet that fellow Ram,wearing the same…
She needs a lesson..definitely one..!!
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The area was dead silent and she fears about those nonsensical neighbours…!!
I sighed at the differences we had in every approach towards the life…Her priorities and fears had no space in my life…
Pulling my tees collar,I pressed her door bell for second time…
Why does she always makes me wait…!!
I heard the latches to be unlocked…Good..! She wasn’t careless…she had almost done all the three locks..
Her eyes rounded up like that of a jamun amusing me…and next second it rolled to my left and right…
“What”,I whispered enjoying her discomfort…
“I came with media and press reporters…!! Lets announce our wedding”,I said dramatically,equally surprising myself…
She is turning me more lively…!!
Her orbs blinked after a sec.,as reality knocked her strong…she smiled…
“I…”,she giggled “that..”
“Open it now.!”,I said in my self and her mouth opened like that of a fish…
Oh my.!! It had been a while I got to see her doing this…
“I said about the lock not your mouth.”,I winked chuckling…she instantly glared me..
“You never learn basics…!! Open the door when someone awaits outside”,I said as she unlocked the padlock of that steel gate before the wooden door….
“You got ready?!”,I moved towards dining table..
She stood there in silence…doors still remained opened..
” I will….
“Lock it .”,my words cut hers in middle and she shook her head…”Why…scared of me”,I smiled sauntering towards her..
“Mom will come now.!.”,she said like an sudden alarm, when I pushed the latch up…
Did she really think some thing else..? And moreover…she thought to scare me in her mom’s name..?!!!..
“Is this a way to welcome your husband.?”,I made a face of disappointment…
Her features turned thoughtful but got alerted when I took a step…
“Radhika wait..”,I called when she turned around…
“Welcome home”,she smiled turning half way..
Little one..!! So smart!!..
Reflexes!! She quickly moved away when I tried to pull her….Giggling a little,she ducked away to my surprise,when I tired to hug her…Moving to the other end she laughed when I stood with my arms embracing the vacuum… She gulped down her fear,with a glint of mischief in her eyes when I narrowed my sight to her.,rolling a chair away from my way..Neither of us had a chance to speak a word.,I was too furious to get a hold of her,while she jumped over the sofas escaping from me…If not her muffled giggles filled the air,I would have suspected on myself,over my act of chasing her…
“Please ..No..!”,her words came feeble …she was panting a little heavy after the 2 mins chase around her hall…
“Gimme a hug”,I pushed my tees sleeves behind my elbows..
“You would tease me”,she whined stepping to her right…
“You can’t get away from me…remember..if you make it hard then…”
“That’s bad..I told I will come home..why did you come here,”she followed the same trick of mine..
Diverting with talks…Not bad!!
“Yep..but…”,I faked a cough demanding water…
“Over the table….No..inside the kitchen…”,she corrected her words hurriedly..
She leaves no stone unturned, in getting me behind her with all these antics..!! Little did she know about me…!! It’s just one day and she makes lame excuses to have me at a bay.,wonder what will be her reactions after marriage…
As I expected.,she hopped when I faked a move towards their kitchen..
Lunging to my left I caught hold of her,but her unsteadiness made me to stumble in turn…
“Cheating..leave me..”,she shrieked until my arms claimed her middle…
Our uneven fast breaths and pants filled the silent atmosphere and ours synced together after a while…
She almost made me to play a kabaddi match inside her home..!! Sweat beads made its way right to her shoulder from my forehead…and..and..Her response raised a instant hear inside me…She shivered when my lips traced her shoulder bone.,as I pulled her top a little down…
Sagging more into me,I felt her to be equally drenched in sweat…
“This 5 mins..what not you did..can’t you hug me once”,I walked holding her in between my arms..
“I would have…promise me that you won’t tease me hereafter”,she titled her head and extended her hand a little,when I switched on the fans
Turning her around.,”I promise…I will continue this forever”,I laughed out hugging her close…
I had never been happier like this..! Even my college days fun had its definitions somewhere else..
“Okay..you can tease me,only if you quit smoking at least…”,she said acute after a minute and her arms slowly wound around my waist…
“Will you?”,her head popped up from my embrace..
“Why…you find me as your competitor”,I mocked her…
“Leave me…”,her whole charged against mine.,and gained a new momentum as my grip was strong…if only she got the slightest thought of how much that actually worked in reverse,she would stop it… but No!! I made sure not to give a hint,enjoying the moment..
“You made me plead for a hug”,I pulled her to my height close enough to capture her lips and she froze at that…
“You don’t like me holding you”,I asked suspecting her to be flustered…
“We aren’t married still…”,her eyes downcasted as her cheeks got the tinge of a beet shade..The one which I yearned to look ..
“I see!!…”,I quickly pecked her lips…
Her whole turned like satin fabric in my hold when my lips explored her features..Her eyes..!! Which spoke volumes about her..,me.. and us…!!
Her cheeks…Not less than a creamy cake was just inviting..She yelped as my teeth tested its softness..
And her lips…Not less than a forbidden fruit for my Life…which had the power to turn me crazier.!! Which led me to forget this world and family….even this noon,how I wished to capture those when she was busy tasting those paneer pieces…
Her breath fanned me as I teased her lips grazing with mine..she moaned as I tickled her lips with my tongue….She will definitely turn me mad in exploring her…
Her feminine scent drove me wild…this is so not done..!! I tried to leave her ,but she clung to my neck…
“Rad…”..
Her lips crashed abruptly over mine…!! Sweet….she dint know,how to make me respond,so followed my tricks….
That’s lovely…she whined punching my shoulder with her weightless fist…and I gave up for her..for my love…!! Her soft curves pressing more into mine,was turning me up…still….I knew I need to hold back….Her tongue almost played with mine as I gave her the access to., and I walked without breaking our kiss…
Settling over the couch,I adjusted her and she stopped for a second..her grip tightened when I responded back…Her lips curled inside when I broke up after few minutes…
Trying to calm my racing heart and mind,I relaxed myself holding her over me..I felt her adjusting herself with her face over my chest….
“I…”
“You won’t leave me isn’t…”,her voice shook my insides.,interrupting my love expression
“Still you doubt me”,I asked a little shocked but couldn’t control the severity,from being revealed..
“I fear…I don’t know why”,my tees over my chest got crushed in her hold….”please…I love you…I will..”
“Oh!..Radhika..look me….!! Sweetheart…do you know..how much I value you…!!….”,I tried to make her face me..
But No….she was stubborn snuggling into my chest…!!
How do I express my love for her..?!!….Not even as a day dream I thought I would chase and play with my girl in her apartment….I would live with love…enjoy the pleasure of a kiss..!! Marriage was never in my thought and love was never in my heart…The girl who made it possible was now unsure of my love for her….Caressing her hair.,I patted her slightly…Swiftly twisting in my embrace she pulled my chin facing me..
“Is it really possible for us to get married?”..
“Did you cry?”,I asked in return with a tinge of anger noticing her eyes..
“No..not much..answer me”,her cute voice was enough to engulf my anger…
Am I a love struck puppy to lose myself everytime …But..I know,she is at no fault…
“Much possible..my dear”,I smiled.,unconsciously locking her form crossing my legs…
“Hmm..umm..that…”,she chewed upon as I waited to listen her…
Was she discomfit?
She smiled a fake one confusing me..Am I a kid,unable to differentiate between a lively and fake smile…
“I will get ready”,she smiled again…
After a minute it striked me.,”Radhika…If it was my advances that.,confuses you…then as you said..till we marry..”,I paused before raising my hands a little high in air..”I won’t…Is that ok?”,I smiled assuring…
Blinking like a kid..”I din’t mean it…Its only wedding arrangements..Ram said…that…”
I silenced her with my finger over her lips…
“Get ready..!”,I tried to move…
“I swear..I din’t…”,her voice choked…”I always hurt you Arjun..”,she mumbled with a sad pout…
I raised my hands defeated….”I honestly admit.,I couldn’t get what you deeply think about”
“Our Marriage!! Will they accept me in church?”,the yearn in her eyes demanded an immediate answer..
“You were worried about that?…Listen Radhika!….I will marry you legally…and it would be better if you just speak with me instead of someone else”,I knew those last words were bit harsh..
But her smile amused me…”Possessive”,her smile came like a unexpected rainbow…
I withdrew my hands from embracing her and she frowned a little but smiled wide…
Expressions!! There was no limit for those…
“You wanted a hug isn’t”,she leaped and hugged me.
I laughed as she tried to hold me completely…”You din’t mean about my…”,I winked and she immediately shook her head.. “Good”,I pulled her to my height and she smiled wide kissing my cheek deep…
“You aren’t angry?…you always get me wrong”,she made a face..
Fate! What else I could conclude upon…Scaring and confusing me with tears,she now mocks me..
“How to believe?”,her forefinger hit her chin as she animated a thoughtful pose,after I said I wasn’t angry…The more I turn silent.,she turned playful..the way I love to see her..
“Okay..hereafter Try to understand my words..don’t conclude yourself”,she shrugged her shoulders and patted mine to let her down…
The nerve of her,to stay in my arms and order me!
“I will prove you”,I tickled her and her eyes searched for truth in mine…”Wear your bra next time before stepping out”,I bit my cheeks when her jaw hung low…I could sense her middle convulsing…My wink troubled her more..her hold sagged and cheeks flushed embarrassed…I chuckled aloud…
“Leave me down”,she mumbled..
“How would I…Am enjoying the moment”,I hugged her twirling around….
“You are too mean”,she said when I dropped her over her bed…
“You will get habituated”,I winked pulling her cupboard open..
“What..what..this is unfair”,she jumped but crashed straight to my front when I turned around…the fur like designed top dint serve any good for her blooming beauty yet only benefited me..!
I smiled,closing my eyes only to rile her up and she pouted angrily…
“Next time.,you see..!”,she raised her finger..
“Really…you want me to see…”,I teased her and she closed my mouth..
“What are you searching here?”,she peeped to look behind me…
“That folder..I want it”,I clipped and continued to search on my own…
I chose a wrong drawer I guess.,It was full of her accessories..
“Thats my cupboard…”,I heard her voice to sound little higher..
“So…??”.I pulled open the other one and she quickly covered my view…
“You shouldn’t check like this..I will give you..”,she said.,closing it with her other hand…
What was there inside.,she considered to be that precious
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“I will give your bracelet..Why do you..”,she hesitated as she picked the folder…”It has my childhood memories and…”,she paused when I extended my hand…
“Get ready soon…”,I turned around but got to see her reflection.,she stood lost in her thoughts…
“Btw Radhikaaa…”,confirming that I gained her attention…”You have a good collection, erm..but still why din’t you wear one”,I asked and she took her time to understand my note…
“Good collection!!”,she gasped covering her mouth…!!
My god! that was a epic reaction from her..!
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“Not nice…Try any Salwar”,I dismissed her again when she came wearing a long skirt and shirt..
“Do I need to dress according to your choice.?..this is unfair…My attires aren’t that bad..and I do wear…”
“I only care if you don’t wear….”,
She turned around noticing my eyes over her bosom…”Am wearing..so please”,she ran inside without glancing me..
“I knew that”,I said to her back…
The folder had few pics of her dad…their family ones…and my family too…I kept her diary away as I was sure that she would dislike me reading it…. There it was..!! My pictures!…Nearly 25 photos of mine ranging from my high school times..I myself found those appealing…I had a thick ruggard style those times…Just like that of I had watched in movies.,she had a paper bearing my signature….It was a recent one…My bracelet and my pen..but my shades was missing…
May be I lost it somewhere else…
No !..I cant trust this little thief….I am damn sure Sam would have no knowledge about my photos…
She came adjusting her purple salwar with a broad smile.,which turned into a sheepish one noticing my glare on her…Somewhere am happy with the emerging positive equation between us…I had worried a lot wondering how to mend my relationship with her…and here she astonishes me with her love and kiddish antics…
“How did you…”
“Lets move…c’mon..hurry up…Mom will come”,she shushed me,gathering those carefully…Her eyes softened finding her diary staying away from me…
“Inform your mom that you are with me”,I sat crossing my leg.. “And where is my coolers?”,I asked..
“It is..”,she bit her lips….”Wha..what coolers…”,she blinked fake innocence…
“I will take you to Goa before Marriage..then you will get to know not to play with me”,I said leaning forward…
“I wont come with you”,she said thinning her lips.,after a moment of furious eye lock which was supposed to be a romantic one…
“Why..”,
“Do I need to change this too?”,she asked irrelevant to what I asked…
“No need…You look perfect in this…those were….”
“You mean…Do I look fat?”,she posed the infamous query…
“I dint..”
“No..you did…You are bad”,she faked a cry…
If not I noticed her counting my photos I would have ended up pleading and convincing…What the F**k…!!! This girl is turning me dumb…
“You aren’t fat …but you look….”,
“I look?”,
“I said..you aren’t fat..You are fluffy”,I shook her surprising with a hug… “Too fluffy..”,my lips traced her neck line towards her cleavage…
“…You are…”,pushing me hard,she ran with her folder and came back daring to look my side..Her already full cheeks was now like freshly bloomed flowers.
“I will inform Mom!”,she said but was startled hearing the door bell… “Guess mom came”,she whispered..
Heavens sake!…This aint an illegal affair ..
“Arjun…”,her mom greeted with a smile..
“Hi Aunty…! I thought of having a date with her..and….It seems Ram wants to meet me..So..we will be returning before 9”,I said with a nod and her widened eyes refused to blink….At one point I chuckled to which her mom too turned her side….
“Ram?!..But why…”,her mom’s forehead creased with confusion….
“No idea…Lemme meet him and inform you..”,I stepped away signalling her that I will be waiting…
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“Who asked you to blabber those”,she yelled at me as we crossed our street…
I glared her and she sat mumbling and texting..
“Enough of texting to that loser”,I gritted my teeth unable to hold her silence…
Turning down my plan of bike ride.,she sat texting to some idiot..Her constant giggles did force me to peep once to check if she was watching any video uncaring about my presence…No..! She had no thought to share a word a with me in those past ten minutes..
“Radhika”,I called her sharp…
“Its Neil…He was wishing me..”,she smiled….
I could only nod in response…
“Please…Arjun..”
“Fernandez sir”,I said carefully parking my vehicle…
“Arjun..! Arjun”,she glared me before stepping down…
I couldn’t help the smile to slither beyond the limit I had set for….
“I saw that”,she chriped when I walked to her side…
“Please be cool …For my sake..!! Please..sometimes Ram will say stupid jokes..please dont retort…”,she saw me expectant…
For her sake?!…My reasoning turned as a blabber just because,it was not of that idiot Ram’s so called plan..He must be one trash piece my mind alerted me again…She comes here with rules..Ah..Rules and me.! What did she actually think about me…?
“Its upto you..”,I clipped.. “Mine depends on yours..”,I said crisp…
She needs to understand this..I cant spend my half of life turning a verbose..!!
Her orbs rolled like a deer caught in trap…
“But..Arr..”,her words trailed off when we heard someone to call her…
Idiot! That must be that idiot!
“Radhu”,he called again…
My jaw clenched when almost everyone turned to her side.,but she had her eyes only on me…
I smiled and her shoulders sagged relaxed..I patted her cheeks and had my arm around her…I sensed her willingly staying in mine though I walked fast…Her lifeless greet went unconsidered by the other side…
“So you are Arjun?”,he asked a stupid question…
Will she come with a random guy when she loves me…?
“Arjun Fernandez!”,I snapped as I pulled a chair for her…
“Christian? Radhu! you love a Christian ?”,He asked genuinely shocked and I caught her admonishing herself for something…Her dupatta got crushed in her hold depicting her mindset…
“Have a Seat”,I smiled and he threw a disgusting look at her…
She mouthed Sorry..when we three settled and ordered milkshakes…I was the only person to be happy with that situation.,as I guessed both of their plans had got foiled even before a execution.
“Baby..Relax”,I cooed her only to rile him up….
“Radhu is my…”
“So..Where do you work?”,I asked nonplussed…
“Am a Team leader in a leading MNC…I earn…”
“Nice..And…we love each other…We have planned to get married by next month…Thanks for being supportive…! and…Make sure you are free to attend our wedding…”,I wiped the straw with a tissue and extended that chocolate milkshake to her…
There was a complete silence for few seconds….I turned to my left to see her to finish almost half of milkshake…With her eyes fixed over the table,she sipped steadily…
“You want another one”,I asked soft as never…
She shook her head vigorously still sipping..but glared me a second later when I winked…Her tensed features softened as she looked deep into my assuring ones…Our eye lock got disturbed hearing something to drop…
“Sorry I broke it”,he said looking the glass over the floor..
“Oh..then you need to pay for it!”,I replied uncaring before having my drink….
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48 Comments
Finally Mr.Mr Fernandez agai ?
Yep…Fernandez vantar….!! Nee coolers vachurikiya…Arjun thedikitu irundane…?
nenachen ennada kadha mudijuduchey onnum nadakaleynu nadandhuduchu nadatheteenga ha ha ha baby missed u sooo much finally happy to see u back tadaaa
Ohi arjun coolers enkita eppadi irrukum ?…. Btw my thirai vimarsanam is on the way
Hey j wat a update dear … its sooper awesome…. Mr. Attitude is turning into Mr.Naughty… 😛 😛 his thoughts were lolz i was laughing hard…
i loved each and every scene dear…. Arjun and his dads convo sema he knows well abt his son…Who is visible for you..there?… lolz no one is visible for me too 😛 Little.darling… Mr.Ferr she is not little she said to u already… if u go on calling her little den be ready for the consequenses… u proposed yesterday so wat its her birth rights to order her man… and he finds dat funny ha ha ha… dress to kill illa ye (wink) … eyes rounded like jamun … gosh u reminded me now i need to run for get one 😛 😛 foodie me …media and press reporters… aahan apparam….lolz….husband ah…hug ku eduku pulling sleeves up 😛 😛 kabadi match j i was laughing hard … promise to continue… eda panna kudadu nu solramo ada venune panna vendiyadu… smoking is injurious to health Mr.Ferr…competitor lolz…veetla thaniya irrukara ponnu kita vambu 😛 😛 ..Ardika s convo after dat kiss so sweet yar i adore arjuns love … you always get her wrong.. ha ha ha rads antics seriouly he gonna loose his sanity oneday 😀 😀 again naughty mode on (iam closing my eyes).. poor rads y to tease her this much … dat convo was a six…lovely…peeking into cupboard rofl…Gosh…Good Collection OMG…
I can imagine rads epic reaction poor girl… Mr.Ferr is in full form to tease her 😛 😛 Treassures in the folder wahwah… lolz shades…little thief… totally 3 little as of now …
Goa before marriage is dat a blackmail … those were? wat do u mean? here comes the most difficult ques to answer do i look fat? gosh iam rolling imagining the scene.. fluffy hats off to his choice of word…is she poori or some sort of bun to look fluffy rofl… arjun and rams convo sema sema i corectly named him Mr attitude.. u broke so u pay… arjun didnt leave single chance to show his care towards her… wipiing the straw with tissue not bad… altogeather kzhi kizhi kizhi… i loved it to the core.. waiting for more leg pullings and teasings 😛 😛 u came back with a bang girl love u dear waiting for next one…BTW sry for the late comment take care hugs and kisses… love you muhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Loved it
Thanks Kavina…!! TC
Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂
Thank you Brinzeee…love u loads…TC
Jessie akka.loved this shot.my favourite part is arjun’s teasing rads as competitor and also his attitude towards ram was superb.love you
Chashu…thanks da….glad u loved it…competitor dialogue…haiya..sariana nakkal illa…Sema choice ma….thanks for sharing ur likes dear… love u too..TC
Hi jessie, Fantastic episode……was really waiting for this one ….and was definitly worth no more than that…every thing was good …..nalla nambikai appaku paiyan mela…..was worried when he was leaving….radhikas and arjuns convo superb…..most of all i liked arjuns attitude towards ram…..when captain obvious said..oh u broke then u have to pay…and when he stopped him in the middle before he could say how much he earns…and the he invites him for marriage and never lets him to finish what radhu is to ram. ….every part was very good…..i wonder if its rams heart and not the glass that was broken……never have i liked arjuns attitude like today….serves ram good…..
Hi Kalyani…thanks dear…!! Appada nimathi….appaku paiyan a pathi1 teriyumle…lol….woohoo..last dialogue…thanks da…!! Am happy u shared ur likes…. Haiyo…am happy the way u said abt convo…adhan…adhan…adhey than…!! Correct a sollitenga…!!
“never lets him to finish what radhu is to ram. “Correct da….!! Coz he know isn’t what Ram would say…not ram’s heart da…eyelock…avar broke panitaram…!! Hehehe that’s y Arjun dialogue so…am so happy with ur comments dear…!! Super…Arjun attitude ,,!! Love u loads…TC…thanks again
Jessie..finally little queen is here..really u nailed it dear.all the conversation between arjun and radz ..fantastic..caring towards radz before that ram..too good .u r an excellent writer Jessie.waiting for sweet mistake..thanks for the update dear.take care..
Maddy….Hiii…..thank you so much…am glad u liked it…caring towards Rads…hahah…you will know why he did so…thanks maddy once again for your words…sweet mistake am retyping….first time…am retyping…I will do soon..keep supporting…TC….
The whole chapter was lively. wish I could see real visuals for this though I could imagine it. But very beautiful portrayed the
Growing relationship between Arjun and Radhika.
And Jessie Please write the sweet mistake soon.
Hi Tappi…,thanks dear…!! Glad to know that it was worth imaginable…am happy dear…Ardhika relationship…thank you!! Fingers cross was for that…!! Sweet mistake …am writing….will do dear…TC
jez, i am soooo happy to read this…. full of ardhika…. his teasing rads beautiful scenes…. and then his attitude towards ram, i loved that, poor ram, he don’t know with whom he is dealing with, its Arjun Fernandez Samuel, ram be careful…. i loved the chapter jez, this is amazing….. a beautiful chapter….. waiting for next…. take care dear and come with next soon….
Shona…thank you dear…..thanks for sharing it likes too…am happy dear..!! Poor Ram..,yep he is..,am glad with your comment Shona….ok dear ..TC n stay happy
first where are you busy, missing you like hell. As for the update its amazing as always. That little kabbdi match was awesome and romantic. Ram seems to be jealous to me well he should be Rads is precious and arjun has her. waiting for next love you sweety 🙂
Hey ya….My Frangipani fairy….how zzz u….thanks a lot….am sry…moby pbm and I was unwell too….I took trips being half recovered and got it worse..hehehe….kabadi…kabadi…lol… Ram ..yep…lil jealous…!! You are rii8…miss u too…love u loads…teddy bear hugs…stay happy and smiling…..TC
baby muhhhaaa baby muhhhhaaa konnuta sema awesome… super awesome… radskulla ipdi oru setta kaara pullaya ?? ennada nadakudhu indha naatla ?? ivala azhudhadhu eppapaathalum amaidhiya irundha dhu ?? adangappa idhu ulaga nadipu da saamy sema ha ha ha ponnu romba kurumbu dhan paavam arjun ennanu theiryama love pannitan sir walh… inimey dhan di unakku ha ha ha… indha ponnu romba cute… sema cuto cute.. vandhan da america mapla Ram payala oru poruttavey madhikaliye Arjun… anga nikkara fernandez nee anga nikara.. ivan odachadhukku Arjun kaasu tharanuma poda dai ram odi poidu ivan radhika kitta mattum dhan Arjunah iruppan mathavangaa kitta avan Fernandez sir… nyabagam vachuko da….
Baby idha romba miss pannen unna romba romba miss pannen… love u sooo much baby muhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Baby….!! Thank you so much dear… !! Lalalalal…..hmmm….Arjun ena lesu patavana….I guess I justified her tears….love vera .bayam vera….!! Ram…!! Avana vidateega.. hehe…Arjun character a purinjukale…sathyaraj style…lol….why would he consider anyone…! Ram dint mean that…aaha…dialogue super…
Glad that you loved it…thanks again ..happy to see you here….love u dear…TC
Jess… remember me?? well well well … your writing shows how deeply you idealize Arjun. Every story of yours has an aura a different one that Arjun carries.
hats off… keep it up… u seriously want to potray arjun worh of radhika dont you? and all the best for more ardhika equation that you are about to show…
he really want radhika to be bold and he will surely make her so… keep it up dear…
Amore…Love!!! You thought I would forget you…..I missed you so much…!! You got a new phone…?!! And am happy to see you again.. did I score well in this chapter ..?! You still have my results….hahah…
Arjun…!!! Now what to say…!! You always surprise me with your comments….! Thank you so much…..teddy hugs…love u loads….TC…Arjun….hmm..yea…I do idealize other characters too..but Arjun over looks others at times..??
No i haven’t got a new phone. Just was really desperate to write back so…
Oh..okk….!! Glad to meet you again …TC…
Jessie…… Superb….. Awesome…So romantic in her apartment….. Lovely…. Romantically written your words…. Loved it….. All the whole shot….. Eagerly waiting for next…..
Thanks for updating for me dear….. Thanks a lot….. Take care of yourself….. Update next when you are OK….. Wait for you…. Take care…. Stay happy……
Hey Saran….am happy that u loved it….!! Thank you so much…ok. .will take care…stay happy ..TC….
Each and every line is superb hats off to you take care love u
Each and every line is superb hats off love u take care
Thanks Meenu…..TC…love you too…do keep supporting
Jessie darling superb,excellent,nice,good,outstanding,mind-blowing episode…. I loved it to the core…… I liked all the scenes….. Sorry couldn’t able to comment in the morning was bit busy today and tomorrow also I will be busy….. Tc loads of love to you from me and teddy hug to u….. Will be waiting for next episode……
Thanks Arti…tats ok…I understand….glad u liked…TC stay happy
Hi Jessie.. first of all, thanks for updating little queen which is my all favourite… I like arrr ferrr nok jhok, little romances n the way they try to adjust n understand each other… it always thrills n excites me… and ram.. Arjun handled him in his way… tts humourous… waiting eagerly for next update… stay blessed n pls do take care of ur health dear… can I ask u something? What happened to the desperate silence author? I missed kfar thena m also my lost patience author too…
Hi Farju….thanks a lot dear…loved ur sweet comment….am happy that u liked it….well…desperate silence and lost patience author is Sammy ..and she has her exams now…she will be back by April..! Kfar and Thena….I too missed them.a lot… TC and stay happy.
so much fun and i laughed uncontrolably pls update the next one soon
Hey Masha…glad u enjoyed…Thank you so much…do keep supporting…will do it
Jazz kutty its outstanding darling… Arjun ahh man i dnt no more how much am gonna fall for him with your writings… he is just super cool man… Attitude… huh… i loved it… he is so admirable… and by the way toooooo naughty Arjun… poor Radhika… And Ram he wantedly broked the glass… but Arjun gave sharp mock… haha… totally i loved it… and its fully Ardhika… its fantabulous darling… love you aloads and tc… 🙂
Sulbi jaan…Thank you so much…falling for Arjun…naa illengo…?naughty…attitude…A pram…hehe…am glad with that…poor Rads…ohho….ama venum nu odachan…idiot fellow ..yep..only Ardhika…thank you jaan..love u loads ..TC
It was very nice.plsss update next one soon.waiting dear.
Thank you so much Rasha…will do it
heya jess pi, how r u? missed ya sooooooooooo muchhhhh. u remember me, na?
these exams na, ate my brain off.
but this marvellous shot made my mood. i am glad i could read it. sry for being so late to comment. had something on my platter.
anyways, i am liking na loving Arjun as this story is progressing. He is so damn good in everything he does. he wants to refine her. make her strong. such a supportive sweetheart. and his replies to Ram were awesome. i just laughed imagining that.
radzie is toh an evergreen sweetheart. no words to describe her naivety and innocence. sometimes i compare myself with her character and lets just say, we are in no comparison. i am like lucifer and she is an angel. haha.. amusing reference, ryt?
lol lets stop. this was awesomely amazing update. kep posting, though i doubt i would be able to comment. some technicalities. sry. but i love ya. remember that.
love ya. teddy hugs for u. and loads of ice-cream tubs. summer is on the sleeve na.hehe.
take care.
Hey ya doll….am good and how r u…how would I forget you my sweeto….wanna pull ur ears for asking so….no issues…glad that ur exams are over…
Thanks for the lovely review dear…..am glad you liked both the characters…Lucifer…?!! You are an angel too..
Will do dear…I understand…TC…kids of love …teddy hugs..yep summer ..!! Yum ice creams and loads of chocs to you….stay happy my doll….eat well
My Jessss….Muaaaaahhhhhh. …this is soooooooo adorable. ….I just loved it soooooooo muchhhhhh. …I’m running out of words. …so speechless n spellbound. …loving Fernandez sir n his little queen soooo muchhhhhh. …just wanna give so tight bone crushing hugs. …keep it up honeyyy. Love you loads. muaaaaahhhhhh ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ :* 😉
Roma diii….thank you so much….am so happy di..teddy hugs…yay..love u loads…muaah…
really nice update loved it
Hey Mithra…thank you so much dear