Hiii friends,…This episode will also have some cute Ardhika moments,…Hope you guys will enjoy it,…As usual Ignore my Grammatical errors here and there,…
Episode 15 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:
In Restaurant,…
It’s true that There’s nothing in this world like sea Breeze at noon to put a big smile on Radhiks’s face after a long time,..She was literally enjoing the warmth of the breeze,..When she turned sidewards,She was freezed by Arjun’s proximity,…She din expect this sudden proximity,..she cant swallow and even felt difficult to breathe too,…That intensity in Arjun’s eyes is too hard for her to tolerate,..
Arjun,who is in the verge of breaking his guards was partly succeeded in his attempt,..He completely lost himself at that moment,..His parted lips carving for Radz rosy lips which is just an inch away from him,…Both can hear other’s breathe and the background violin music took Arjun’s temper into another level,..Radz,who understood the situation slowly opened her mouth to increase the distance btw them before it worsen further,…
Radz: Sirrr
Arjun after hearing Radz voice got his sense back and slowly distanced himself from Radz,…He understood if he continued facing Radz,He might end up crossing his line,..And He also knew it will hurt Radz a lot,…So,He turned back facing the fish tank and started gaining his lost breathe closing his eyes,…Meanwhile Radz too affected lightly by this sudden encounter,..Her eyes were pooled with hidden tears,…After taking a Deep Breathe,..She felt lighter than few minutes ago,…
Right then Arjun’s mobile started ringing made him to come back to his normal and he attends the call from some Business tycoons regarding tomorrow conference,…While talking, he started walking towards the other end of the room near the inbuilt waterfall,…That worried Radzz a lot cox she noticed her Dupatta,which struck in Arjun’s hands only after his phone call,..She don’t want to creaate another awkward situation for both,…So,She followed Arjun silently to release her dupatta from his hold without his knowledge,…But she din know how risk it is,…She cant even touch her dupatta end as he was holding his mobile in the same hand,..She sprang near his collor to get back her duppatta,..But all her trials end up in vain,…She prayed god to help her and murmured,
Radz:God,..Please help me na ,…
Right then, Arjun changed the hold of his mobile to another hand brought Radz belief back in her mission of releasing her dupatta from Arjun’s hand,…But Arjun swings his hand back and fro while talking as he indulged seriously in his call which made difficult for Radz to get her duppatta back,…She annoyingly scolded herself,…she murmured to herself,
Radz:Now, How can I release my Dupatta from his watch strip,…Sir,…Cant you talk by standing at one place and without swinging your hands,…Hey bagawan,…Help me na,…
Right then Arjun kept his hand in his pocket gave a sigh of relief to Radz and she thanked god,…
Radz: Thank god for hearing my prayers quickly,…
Saying so,Radz smilingly bent to release her duppatta from Arjun’s hand was again failed by Waiter’s entry,…Waiter while placing the dishes on the Dinning table saw both Arjun and Radz standing near the inbuilt waterfall began,
Waiter:Mam,..Shall I keep both the orders separately or ,…
Arjun,who end the call turned towards waiter was surprised to see Radz standing beside him with tensed face,..But he din ask her anything and began,
Arjun:Ok.. Listen,…You keep both the order separately,…Serve my dishes which I ordered first here and,..
Saying so Arjun walked near Dinning table,..Radz too followed him surprised Arjun for her weird behaviour,…Waiter laughed at this seeing Radz following Arjun holding her dupatta tightly on her neck and walking closely along with Arjun..Arjun,who noticed Waiter’s act furiously began,…
Arjun:If you served all the dishes,You may go right now from here,…
Waiter:Sorry sir,…
Saying so He served their lunch…And tried to go out was stopped by Arjun’s commands,
Arjun: Hey Listen,…stop this Irritating music right now,…I don’t want to hear this while eating,..Understood,…
Waiter:Yes sir,..I will turn off this music now,…And If you need anything else,Call us by pressing the buzzer sir,..We are here to serve you sir,..Have your pleasant lunch,…Thank you sir and thank you madam,…
Saying so,He left the room without raising his head towards them,…After waiter’s Exit,Arjun turned towards Radz holding her both arms tightly began,
Arjun:What happened to you Radhika??,..why are you following me wherever I go,…Move away Radhika,…I just came here to have my lunch,…I knew you are hungry,..So,If we finish our lunch,I will drop you at your home,…That’s all,…Ok,..
Saying so Arjun moves forward releasing his hold on her arms,.. but radz again tried to remove her dupatta from his wrist,…Arjun,who felt Radz presence near him got irritated turned back and began,..
Arjun:Radhika,..please stop following me,…Tell me what you want??Dont act stupid,…I know you have small brain,..so,don’t lose that too,…What happened???,..Why you are so silent???,…
Saying so Arjun seated on the sofa to have his lunch,…Radz with tensed face decided to ask arjun himself to release the duppatta from his hold,…
Radz:Sir,..sir,…My,…
Before Radz completing her phrase,…Arjun received an incoming call from Someone,..So,He signalled her to keep quiet and took his mobile from his pocket to check who it is,…He was extremely shocked seeing the caller ID in his mobile,..He got up from the sofa to attend his call cox he personaly wanna hide his talk with that person before Radz,…He began,..
Arjun:Radhika,…You have your lunch,..I will join you after few min,…
Saying so, Arjun walked to the other side suddenly made Radz duppatta to completely fall from her Neck and Arjun, who wished to inform her to have her lunch by sitting on the left end of the sofa turned back was also completely freezed seeing Radz without her Dupatta,…Radz was embarrassed and she stood still without doing anything,…Arjun put his mobile down in this sudden embarrassment,…He immediately left his gaze down to avoid Radz to feel awkward and tried to take his mobile noticed Radz Duppatta in his wrist,…He understood the reason for her weird behaviour now,…He tried to remove the Dupatta from his watch strip was failed again and again,…His mobile which was ringing non stop too stopped after a while,..But Arjun couldn’t release the dupatta knot from his Watch strip,…(Back ground music:Kawhishon pe likhi)
Radz,who saw this bent down to take Her dupatta from the floor slowly walked towards arjun,…She touched the end of the duppatta which struck in Arjun’s hand made both their fingers and eyes into contact which inturn induces some unknown tingling spark btw them,…Arjun took away his other hand from the dupatta deliberately to avoid Radz mini touch which affects him a lot,..Arjun stared her closely without blinking his eyes while she engaged herself in releasing the Duppatta,…Radz after few seconds released the Duppatta easily from Arjun’ wrist without any difficulty surprised Arjun as he tried it for minutes but couldn’t succeed,…
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In Birdsong,…
Teji entered Sam’s cabin and informed her about their plan irked Sam a lot,…
Teji:Sam,..What are you doing here till now??,,…Are you not coming with us???
Sam with puzzled face began,
Sam:What???,…Where you all going??,..I cant understand,..Tell me clearly TEji,…
Teji:Sam,..Dont joke yaar,.. U dunno that We all are heading to beach at 4.00 PM today,…Neil only planned this,…And We already completed everything for tomorrow’s conference na,..Just chasni’s part is pending,…So,get ready soon,…I,zubin and krithika already packed our things to enjoy today’s evening at Beach,…We all have fun,..I’m really curious sam,…Ok,..Bye,..come soon yaar,..dont be late ok,…
Saying so,Teji walked out of sam’s cabin leaving sam confused,…
Sam:Neil!!!,..He planned everything,..But why he din tell me about this,..Wait I’ll call this idiot right now,..He cant do anything without me na,… Teji might be wrong,…
Saying so,Sam took her mobile and dialled Neil’s number hurriedly,…
*****
In Neil’s house,..
Dadaji:Little boy,…come here,..Tell me how to play this game,…
Neil smilingly helped dadaji to play his videogame,…
Neil:Dadaji,…Its simple we have to concentrate in the speed of the vehicle by pressing this right button,…Long press will increase the speed dadaji,..Wait,..It also be played with 2 players..So,M also joining you,..Give me that remote Dadaji,..
Saying so Neil too indulged in playing his video game with dadaji,.. Prema,Who saw this had tears in her eyes seeing Neil sooo happy after a long time,…
Right then,Mala touched Prema’s shoulder from back and asked her to taste the Geer,which she made ,…
Mala:Prema ji,..This geer,We prepare mainly during some special occasions in Hrishikesh,…If you taste it,You will never forget its taste,…
Prema smilingly took the Geer cup form mala and tasted it,…After Tasting it she began,
Prema:Wow,..Superb Malaji,..Tell me how you did this,…It will be helpful for me in my business too,…It’s aroma was really tooo good,…Hmmm,…
Mala:thank you so much Premaji,…It’s simple and Sure,I’ll tell you the ingredients and its measure to retain its flavor,..
Right then Neil’s mobile started ringing,..Prema excused herself from mala to give the phone to Neil,…Neil,Who was busy in his game with dadaji asked Prema to attend the call,
Prema:Neil,..U have call,…
Neil:mom,..I’m busy,..You attend the call,..
Prema:Neil,..Its from sam,…
Neil:Mom,…Please,Don’t disturb me na,..Tell Sammy that I’ll call her later,..
***Telephonic Convo,…***
Prema smilingly attends the call,…
Sam:Hello,…Idiot,…Why din you take my call,..I’m calling you since morning,..Tell me where are you now??
Prema:Hello Sam Beta,..How r u???
Sam stammered hearing prema’s voice,..
Sam:Woh!! Aunty,..I’m fine,…Hey Idiot,..No,..Neil,..Where he is???,…Please give phone to him na,…
Prema:Don’t worry beta,…He is here at home playing with Radhika’s Dadaji,…
Sam:Aunty,…What,..chasni’s Dadaji,…
Prema: Haan sam,..You dunno,…
Sam:No Aunty,…Nothing like that,…I forgot it in work tension,…
Prema:Oh!!,..And come soon beta,…Today evening, We are going to beach na,..Dont forget that in work tension,…Ok,..
Sam was hurt hearing this from Prema,…
Prema:Sam,Are you staying in line,…Sam beta,..
Sam,who came out of her trance began,
Sam:Haan Aunty,..sure,…
Prema:Good,..I end the call,..Take care beta,..
Sam:Aunty,..One minute,..Chasni is there,..I mean Radhika is there???
Right then Neil shouted winning Dadaji in the game diverts prema from Phone,…
Prema:Sam,…I couldn’t hear you now,…Anyways we gonna meet in the beach na,..Bye,..Take care beta,…
Saying so,Prema end the call and smilingly went to kitchen to help mala in preparing snacks for the evening program,…
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Whereas Sam at the other end was greatly annoyed by neil’s ignorance towards her,…She threw the mobile on the table,..Right then,Piyali entered the cabin saw sam’s angry began,
Piyali:Sam,…
Sam wiped her face and tugged her hair behind her ears stood erect and began,
Sam:Yes Mom,…
Piyali:What happened???
Sam:Nothing mom,..
Piyali touched Sam’s shoulder and began
Piyali:Then why you are not joining your friends,.Any problem Sam,…
Sam:I told na,..Nothing mom,…Just Head ache,..
Piyali caressed Sam’s head and began,
Piyali:Any problem between you and Arjun,..
Sam: No Mom,…Nothing,..Arjun is a nice guy,…
Piyali:Then,With Neil,…
Sam turned away from her mom and began,
Sam:Mom,..I told you na,..Just headache,..Nothing to worry,…I’ll go to our flat after completing this assignment,…You leave tension mom,..And Thanx mom for your concern,…
Hearing this,…Piyali hugged sam and she went away after confirming sam is fine,…
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In Resaurant,…
Radz after wearing her Dupatta sat on Right end of the sofa started eating Arjun’s Dish silently,…Arjun too after taking his mobile from the floor sat at the left end started his lunch was shocked after eating his first Spoon,…It’s Radzz Dishes,…He ordered all Sweet items for her,…And he couldn’t spit the food out of his mouth but he pretends to do so by running towards washbasin,…Radz stopped eating seeing Arjun’s sudden act,…
Arjun,Who came near the sofa with anger began,
Arjun:Radhika,..I said na,..Sit at left end,…These are the dishes,..I ordered for you???
Radz with puppy face began,
Radz:Sir,.But we started eating na,…Why cant we continue??,..What’s pblm in that??,…Then M also Eating your’s dish,..what, I yelled like you??
Arjun:Stop your non sense Radhika,…I want to eat my dishes which I ordered for me,..Understand,…
Radz:Sir,..How its possible now,..I started eating in this plate and you too started na,..
Arjun:I just had one spoon not like you,..If you din give my food,I wont allow you to eat,…
Saying So arjun tried to take the plate from Radz,..But Radz din allow him to take the plate from her,…She hold his hands to release his hold on the plate and began,
Radz:Sirrr,…Why cant you understand that I ate in that plate,…Please leave the plate sir,..Or else entire food will be spoiled,…
Arjun:That’s what I’m also saying,..If you din leave my plate,Then entire food will fell on the floor,..then,No one can eat,..Not you and not me,..Understand,…
Radz after hearing this, left her hold on the plate,…
Arjun:Wow,..Good,…And tell me which part you ate,,..I’ll put that food in the Garbage,..
Radz with grumpy face began,
Radz: this part,..I too just had 3 to 4 spoon,…So,You don’t worry much sir,..But sir,..I’ll never ask where you eat in my plate,..cox My dadaji told that We shouldn’t waste our food,..We dinn know the true worth of this food until we made it,…So,I’ll eat everything in my plate sir,…
Saying so,Radz took her plate from Arjun’s side and started to eat,…She was shocked while eating cox He ordered all her favourite dishes,…She saw Arjun with smile while chewing the food,.. Arjun who parted the food from Radz tasted part turned towards Radzz caught Radz smiling,..
Arjun:What???
Radz after swallowing began,
Radz:woh!!,…I mean,…Thank you sir,…
Arjun:For what??
RadZ:All these items are my all time Fav sir,…Thank you,..
Arjun hearing this from Radz smiled unknowingly from his heart,…Radz who saw Arjun’s smile began,
Radz:And Sir,..You are looking normal whenever you smile,…I want you to be like this always sir,…
Arjun stopped his smile and started eating from Radz tasted part with some stealing glances at her,…Whereas Radz too turned her gaze away from Arjun concentrated on her lunch,…(Back ground music:KAwhishon pe likhi)
Precap:Sam talking to Neil’s photo on her table,..’Idiot,..You are avoiding me na,..I wont care,…I love arjun alone,..See,I’ll call Arjun now’
38 Comments
Nice update…you know how to give attention to all important characters….WOW you are a good story teller
Thanx lakshmi,…
Sorry deary,…typo error,…
Thanx Roshni
Renu Wow??….yaar if u do like this than it’s not my mistake if I make u shy….amazing….superb….I loved aradhika cute scene….yaar u just left me speechless again….u r amazing …. and I repeat 1000 times if I have to realize u that u truly r a professional writer….love uuu….????
Ameena,..My sweet don,…You decided to kill me by making me shy,…See,..Renu is smiling nonstop and even closed her face with her Dupatta (not Radz dupatta yaar) while typing this comment,…
I’ll shout thousand times,..Ameena is responsible for this,…..
Love youuuuuuuuuuu toooooooooo deary,….
Wow….. again u nailed it dear.Rads ki ek word brings our arjun back to the world from his dreams??? .Sam’s jealousy was nice .superb renu …loving ur ff soooo much????.
Thanx lakshmi,…
Renu what a super epi. I just loved it cmpltly. Really this is an unofficial date. Arjun ordering radz fav food. The dupatta scene was just awesome. Lol. Radz convincing god to save her n scolding arjun in mind to talk without moving. It was just amazing. Arjun he just needs chance to be around her n chance to stare at her. But after all staring session get over he shouts at our chasni for being around. Haha. Really arjun needs treatment now. Don’t worry mr. Arjun mehra we will soon start ur treatment. Then we will see what u do. Haha.
Sam is nw upset for neil’s ignorance. Wow. Really baby now u will call arjun to beach. N there again he will start staring at radz. Oh god anything happens but these eyelocks n stares r nt gonna leave us.
Renu when r ur exams starting dear. U said they r in jan first week. I wish all the best to u. I’m waiting for the next part. Update soon. Loveee u.
Manha,…thank you sooooooooo much sweetheart,…
My exams are at Jan 16 and 17 dear,..I thought it was around first week,..But just today i got my Admit card,…So hoping for the best,….
Thank you soooooooooo much deary,….
Again super episode Renu.aradhika are really cute yar….u have really magic to understand every character n write according to it…brilliant yar…love u
Thanx dipika,….Love u too,…
Renu!! Hi di!! Semma update …. Arjun’s not able to control himself… Acacho
Dupatta sequence.. Lol .. Semma .. Waiter sirikiran… ??
Their meals get exchanged .. Cute
Sam is irritated with Neil for ignoring her. Dada ji playing video games… Choo cute.. He’s back to being a kid.
I loved it from the start to end.. Sikrama update pannu.
Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug ??
Hiiiii shree,…Thank you so much deary,….Love you too,…I got Meal exchange thought during my lunch,….LOL,….M glad i made the impact in you which i felt while imagining that scene,….
Love you too sweetheart,….
Hey renu !!
Hw r u ??
Hey cumin to ur story really yaar I love d first part whr arjun n radz r very close to each but radz …. !!!!
Hey I also really visualised d dupatta part really yaar !! Very romantically thrilling yaar !!
U no wat u literally took my heart !!
Jus cntinu n b mesmerising us wid ur awsome story !!
Love u dearie !!
Update soon !!
Thanx mandy,…Love you too deary,…
M glad you liked this piece,….
Nice…episode…wen wll sam realize her luv 4 neil..
Ardhika part was amazing
waiting 4 nxt part!!!!
Thanx dear,…
Sam reaalizing her love for neil,…It ll take some time deary,… Till then we can enjoy the nesam scenes,…
Oh god yaar one request yaar plzzz dont make sam radhika apart in serial i dont like that part actually so plzzzz dr
hayathi,…This is missing piece and I ll never separate Sam-Radz in this piece,..And planned to write 2 months story after lonovla accident track,….I mean till Saral and Nandhini track,….
I hope you will like this Missing piece btw Lonovla accident track and Saral Nandhini track,….If you ppl want me to continue,…I ll try after Ardhika marriage,…as Missing pieces PArt 2,…But dont worry,…As i said 2 months story,..there’s lot to show in these 2 months on our beloved Ardhika and nesam,….
So,I already planned many tracks in these missing pieces,..I hope you ll enjoy the upcoming episodes,…
Good episode. Loved aradika part so much.. So cute.. Very well done renu..
Thanx ananya,…
god epi renu…………
ardhika fi8 4 food s really cute……………….y s tis sam so jealous??????????????????y does she xpect all love frm niel wen she wot give hm……………..precap s gud….y did she ask whether rads ws at niels place????????????????????????oh i only hpe she wnt misunderstad rads if suppose she s seen with arjun…………………
i forgot to mention tat rads got hr naughtiness frm dadaji……..lovd dadajis lil boy dadaji scenes……………….renu shall i ask u a doubt??????wat s niels mom doing?????????????wat sort f business???????????????????
Thanx aastha,…
Neil’s mom is doing catering business i think so,…THey showed it twice in the starting,…
Hi renu u should really write after ardhikas marriage tooo. Tat is missing pieces part 2. Am already dreaming of all those missed scenes. In d mean time v can c more affectionate arjun. But Wat abt sams misunderstanding abt radhika aft arjun radhikas marriage is tat track thr? Thou tat part is hurting. It ws understandable… Am way ahead I know. But can’t help it renu ur stories r addictive. All d best for ur exams. Loved it. Tc
Ramya,…
Hmm as you said Sam-Radz miss understanding will be there after marriage cox like part 1 where I took lonovla accident scene,….In part 2 I was supposed to take,…..Sorry dear i controlled myself from writing cox it will let your enthu in this piece part 1,…But one thing,..Here in this piece,…both Radz and Sam were together and there in part 2 they were separated but will be united as the story unfold cox I love friendship,…I too do whatever i can for my friends,…That’s y my friends always worried about me and my decision of resigning my job despite facing all hurdles,…
hey renu wow yaar today’s episode is awesome just awesome dear.
I love all the scenes especially the restaurant wala scene awwww to see both of them eating and fighting cutely and arjun ordered rads favourite dishes , and really like ur narration style its truly awesome and getting flow with the story and the characters emotions beautifully very much beautifully
love u dear by heart
keep smiling
Once a friend always a friend.
Hello to all my lovvees how r u all. missing u sooo much.
keep smiling dearees
Once a friend always a friend.
Thank you so much sweet heart,…
Where were you???
Are you feeling good???How are you my deary,…
Hope you are fine,…You too keep smiling deary,….
hey guys I like the bold comments too much it looks good .
see now comments are going bold here dying to speak to u renu ,
love u dear.
Renu…….. semma super po. Dupatta & wrist watch nallavey sikkiduthu. And dishes exchanging scene superoa super. I think that was nandu’s call. Actually im waiting for saral entry. Cox in org track, ennakku threinchi saral vara variykkum arjunkku radu mela softcorner irundhadu & ivva engey poida poraa endra thimirla irundhappula. After saral entry arjun kanla andha softcorner illa jealous, kovam & mukkiyamaga payam, poidavaalo endra payam & poiyum poiyum ivanukkka(saral):-(
Naa saral entry varai konjam relaxa pathutu irundhen after that serial mela romba paithiyam aaitten. And renu ippaovum saral entrykku thaan wait panreyn. Neiloda radu pesradhey thaanga mudiyala naa aalukku innum avvan (saral) vandha sutham kali paiyabula. Nxt updategaga ‘i m waiting’. Bye..
Thanx Naomi,…I too like saral- Arjun scenes a lot,…
I badly want Saral to face ardhika after marriage,…M damn sure,..It will be hilarious one,…
O my darling renuuuuuu, what a unique update. …amazing, awesome, marvellous…no words to describe my feelings. ..I’m totally addicted to Youuuuuuuuu and these missing parts. ..you’re making it more n more interesting with each update and then you’re saying you’re not a good writer…wowwww…ask me dear, I read all these updates holding my breath…now you’ll ask m I alive? Not really yaar…I’m totally flat in your writing and imagination….soooooooo lovelyyyyyy yaar…I’m watching this in reality…the restaurant scene was mind blowing, ardhika’s cute fight n deep emotions…ufff…neil dadaji’s bond n Sam’s jealous was really good. ..n later ardhika’s dupatta n dining table scenes were just outstanding…how can you think so amazingly my dear…I salute you my jaanu for sharing this unique imagination with us…and showing us the pure and deep true feelings of our love birds…keep it up buddyyy, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads and very tight hug. Muaaaaahhhhhh
Roma darling,…..
How are you deary???
Have you read my text in previous update,…
No yaar,…Writting an essay or Analysis is different from writting a story na,…Since i was new to this and less confident on my writings,…All your motivation gave me the needed will to w rite each episodes,…It means a lot for me to put up my imagination into this FF,…
Thank you deary,…Love you too sweet heart,….
A very apt and fantastic title for the equally cool epis. Indeed the missing pieces. Loved the arjun rads ke beauty me khojane wala scene. Her dupatta stuck in around his watch. Prayin to god fr help. Haha awesomely lucid. I can breeze througj the emotions well through ur writing 😀
HaPpy new year dear Renu. Glad dat ur back with a bang 😀
Kfar,…You girle,..Where were you???
I started this FF on Dec with a belief to meet you all and to change my mood form my present condition,….But I dinn saw you in this Tu,…Even I asked Riya that day about you,…I talked with happy,Natasha too,…But You are missing,…I think,.May be you wore Mr,India Watch,…
Ok,…And thanx dear for your appreciation,…
Happy new year too,….
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u4ZR_XwZiGM…. just have a look guess it goes with your story Renu
Wow,..Nice promo,..Roshni,…
They showed only friendship as per tilte,…
4 friendship,….
1.Sam-Radz
2.Neil-Radz
3.Sam-Arjun(though they dinn show in the serial,…But Arjun and sam after realizing their mistake were be friends united in their guilty feeling,….)
4.Arjun-Neil(Even they dinn share many scenes,..But they understood each other feelings like Arjun understood the day he entered btw sam and neil,…That neil loves sam,..And Neil too understood Arjun’s feelings on the day he saw Arjun’s concern over his chasni in breaking her engagement,…)
So 4 friendship and 2 love story,…One with intense passionate love and other with light friendship wala love,….
Thank you Roshni,….
Roshni, Thank u sooo much for sharing The new promo of mmz. Its really superb.