Hiii friends,…I just wanna dedicate this Mega Episode as New year gift to you all,…As I promised earlier,..This is my first ever lengthy update on this New year 2016,…I Hope you all will enjoy this piece,… I further hope All your wishes will be fulfilled in this new year 2016,…And hope our wish of seeing Ardhika back on screen with full josh will also be fulfilled by our almighty,…As usual Ignore my Grammatical errors here and there,…
Episode 14 of Manmarziyan-Missing pieces Part 1:
In lounge,…
Radz looks so tensed was suddenly hugged by her beloved friend Sam from back,…
Sam:Chasni!!!!,…
Radz,who turned to see her friend with a smile on her tensed face began,.,…
Radz:Sam,…I gonna miss you sam,…
It brought tears from both the buddies,…
Sam:Chasni,..where are you going,…Just Hrishikesh na not America or Australia ,…And that too just one week yaar,…Why are you crying pagal,…
Saying so Sam wiped Radz tears,…
Radz:I din have Kajal sam,…Do you have???,…
Hearing this Sam smiled with tears,…
Sam:You have this whole world in your bag na,…Then Kajal also will be there,…
Saying so Sam took radz hand bag from her and started searching kajal from her bag,…Both were busy in searching kajal,… Sam found her kajal and started putting kajal on Radz eyes and Radz too put the same on sam’s eyes,…Sam kissed her friend on her Cheek and hugged her affectionately,..(Background music:Manmarziyan title song) Neil,who was looking this from outside smiled happily seeing both of his girls flawless friendship,…
But their happier moments were not lasted long after hearing a man’s sound,…
Someone: Here Who is Dilip,…
Radz looked puzzled and answered him,
Radz:yes,My papa only,…Why,… what happened???
Someone:Madam,…Your Grand father got hurt near carousel,…We already gave first aid in the terminal building,…Doctor inquired about his realtions,…He informed us your father’s name,…I dunno it’s your Grand father,..So,will you confirm us please,…
Radz was shocked hearing this and shouted Dadaji made everyone panic and Dilip,Mala too joined her to reach dadaji in the terminal,…
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In Terminal,…
All reached terminal along with that man,who informed them about dadaji,…They found Doctor checking Dadaji’s pulse, who was swooning on the Ward Bed increased fear on everyone’s mind especially Radz,…Radz reached doctor and inquired what happened to her dadaji,…Doctor after releasing the sphygmomanometer from dadaji began,
Doctor:Lookslike You ppl are his relative,…Good,..Nothing serious,…But he has to be treated immediately and He needs complete Bed rest atleast for a week…Where were you ppl going,…
Radz:Hrishikesh doctor,…
Doctor:Oh!!!,..How you related to him?
Radz:I’m his Grand Daughter,…
Doctor:Oh!!,..If your relatives are here means,Its good for your dadaji to take rest in mumbai cox he shouldn’t travel at this health condition for few more days,…
Dilip:Doctor,..But,How its happened and When will my father gain consciousness?
Doctor:someone admitted him at this state and we just gave Firstaid sir,…I guess He was slipped on the floor,…By God’s grace,He was not physically harmed but this sudden encounter get him drowned by sudden shock,..That’s the reason He needs to get complete rest for few days and I think he will gain consciousness after few hours,…your luck One of my friend,who is a cardiologist waiting for his flight checked your father and he prescribed these medicines,..So,You can take your father home right now and give these medicines as prescribed,…He will be alright soon…Noting to worry,..
Saying so,Doctor went to his cabin left Dilip confused as their flight to hrishikesh has been announced already,…Right then dilip received call from Ankush and after talking with ankush,..Dilip informed his decision before all,…
Dilip:Mala,… Doctor said na Papa will be alright and nothing serious,..So,You and choti stay here and you take care of choti and papa,…After papa become normal,…you come with him,…
Mala:Ji,..Then You,…
Dilip:I have to go to Hrishikesh now mala,.. I think something went wrong in hrishikesh too,..So,I have to go to Hrishikesh right now,…You don’t worry about me and you just look at Papa and choti,..Ok,…
Radz with teary eyes began,
Radz:Papa,…But what happened in hrishikesh???
Dilip:Nothing beta,..I will manage,…You don’t worry,…Take care of your health too beta,…
Saying so,Dilip hugged his choti affectionately and rushed to catch his flight leaving Radz and mala worried,…
After a while,Sam informed Radz that she has to go to office now and asked her to go with arjun to their apartment,…
Sam:Chasni,..Mom called me and I have to go now yaar,..You don’t worry,..dadaji will be fine soon and chasni,…I think Arjun is waiting at the parking lot,…I’ll inform him to take you ppl to apartment,…So,You go with them,…Ok,…
Radz nodded yes in acknowledgement,…
Sam: Ok,…Where is this Idiot now,…You see him anywhere,…I have to search this fool now,…He is not taking my phone too yaar,…
Saying so,sam was busy in calling neil while walking towards parking lot,…She reached Arjun’s car where Arjun lost himself in some deep thoughts remembering dadaji’s words,…
Sam:Arjun,…Arjun,…
Arjun,who came out of his deep thoughts turned back to see sam coming towards him hurriedly,…
Arjun:What sam,…What happened?
Sam:Arjun,..I have no time to explain you now,…Did you see this Idiot,…
Arjun:Hmmm,…no,…I think he went towards lounge a few minutes back,..And Sam,I think flight Take off to hrishikesh,..You bid final goodbye to your friend,…
Arjun watched sam eagerly for her reply,…
Sam:No Arjun,..I said na it’s a big story,..Only Dilip uncle went to hrishikesh,…Chasni,mala aunty and dadaji were here,…I’ll tell you remaining things later,…Mom called me,…So,I have to go,..You have to do another help for me now,…Just drop Chasni,Mala aunty and dadaji in home yaar,…Dadaji is unconscious in terminal Medical ward,..So,could you help them please,…
Arjun nodded yes without showing his happiness on his face for the first time,..He dunno why this news gave him immense pleasure or boundless joy,…
Sam:Thank you Arjun,…
Saying so sam went hurriedly and catched some taxi to reach Birdsong,…Arjun went inside the Terminal remembering dadaji’s dialogues with a smile on his face,…
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Flashback,…
Dadaji:Arjun,…today my choti is not going anywhere beta,…you look puzzled na,..My son may be strict in his decision, But for me,My choti’s happiness is important beta,..I’ll do anything to make my choti happy,..But,She din like me doing these things but its fun in indulging myself in those things for my choti,…You just wait and watch my tricks beta,…
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Arjun reached medical ward of the terminal stopped seeing Neil with dadaji and their convo gave him mixed feeling that It literally burnt him with a fire of jealousy on Neil as well as pleasure of seeing dadaji’s funny tricks in stopping his choti from leaving mumbai,…
Dadaji eating Chocolate which neil gave him hurriedly,..
Neil:Dadaji,…slowly,…slowly,…chasni is not here,…& Truly,You are really a good actor Dadaji,…If Oscar award juries watched your performance,they might end up giving all the awards to you without any second thought Dadaji,…Even I thought you really got hurt when doctors checking you Dadaji,…But,At One point I thought Dlip uncle doubted when Doctor said you shouldnt go anywhere,…
Dadaji with chocolate in his mouth began,..
Dadaji:My little boy,..That’s why I informed Ankush to create any fake pblm in hrishikesh to force dilip to move,..How’s my master mind,…Your Doctors really over acted littleboy,…I thought we might caught cox of your doctors,…But Its never happen in the history that my Tricks would never fail,…
Arjun,who saw radz coming towards ward hide himself from the entrance while Radz made mala sit at the Passenger terminals till she take dadaji along with her,..Mala too seated there holding their luggages,…
Neil:Wow Dadaji,..A big salute to your master brain,…If you are in military,There will be no war between India and Pakistan,…
Dadaji:They are ready to offer me that honor little boy,…But I din like to go,…If you want any tricks,..You can ask me anytime,…This oldman’s tricks will never fail and you gave me only one Dairymilk,… not fare,..I want another Dairymilk silk Little boy,…
Radz,who heared this from entrance began
Radz:Hmmm,… Dairy milk silk ,…Is this one is enough dadaji,…
Saying so Radz showed a Dairymilk silk to Dadaji,…Neil and Dadaji were shocked seeing Radz,…
Dadaji:Choti,…Whennn youuu came beta,…
Radz:Stop Dadaji,…I told you na,…Don’t do anything wrong to stop me from leaving Mumbai,…So,All these are your plan,…Dadaji,My heart stops a minute hearing sth happened to you and you saw papa na,..How he worried about you and he left Mumbai with high tension,…And in this plan you added My Neil and Ankush Bhaiya too,…
Dadaji:Choti,…Nooo,…Beta,…How do you know Ankush,..
Radzz:I knew everything dadaji,..I knew Papa left mumbai only after receiving call from Ankush bhaiya,…Neil,…Why do you joined hands with Dadaji yaar???You know how this lie hurts me ?…Don’t talk with me neil,…
Neil walked near his chasni and turned her towards him holding her shoulders began,…
Neil:Chasni,…Really sorry yaar,…I never thought It will hurt you this much,…And Don’t be angry with Dadaji chasni,…He did this to make you happy and I just helped him yaar,…Please forgive us for our mistakes Chasniji,…
Saying so Neil hold his ears and started doing sit-ups makes Radz to laugh,…But Arjun,who was standing near window felt uneasy seeing Radz bonding with Neil,…
Radz:Neil stop it yaar,..Please Neil,..Its Ok,..Enough,…I forgave you,…Now happy,…chalo,Sam was searching for you,…
Neil:This is my chasni…
Saying so,Neil pinched Radz cheek friendly,…
Dadaji:Choti,..Its not fair,…You forgive neil alone,…What about me beta???
Radz smilingly hold dadaji’s hand and began,..
Radz:Dadaji,..I’ll forgive you ly after getting one promise from you dadaji,..
Dadaji:What promise choti,…
Radz hold dadaji’s hand on her head and started
Radz:You should promise me that you never do such nasty tricks in future for me,…Promise me dadaji,…
Dadaji literally cried and began
Dadaji:I promise you beta,…I ll never do any such tricks in future beta,…
After getting this promise from dadaji,Radz hugged her dadaji tightly with tears rolling down her cheeks,…Neil and Arjun felt pleased seeing both of their pure affection,…
Right then Mala entered and began,
Mala:Choti,..Papa is fine na,…
Radz wiped her tears began,
Radz:Haan Ma,..
Mala:What doc said choti,…
Radz wiping her tears began,
Radz:Nothing serious ma,.. But,Dadaji shouldn’t eat sweets anymore and we can go home now ma,…
Neil:Haan Ofcourse,..Before that Mala Aunty,Dadaji,…You ppl should come to my home,…
Radz:Neil,..Already sam is waiting for you na,…
Neil:Chasni,…You don’t worry yaar,…I talked with sam,..She went to office and Tomorrow,…you ly gonna present in the Maybeline ad final conference yaar,… I already informed sammmy about this,..And ma already prepared many dishes for all of us,…So,come lets all have lunch in my home,…
Mala:Why beta,…Is this necessary,…
Neil:Aunty,…Today I planned many things,…You all din visit any places in Mumbai na,…So,After lunch we are going outdoor,…What Dadaji???
Dadaji:I’m ready beta,…
Radz looked confused and Neil noticed this began,
Neil:What chasni??,..Are you feeling alright??,…Come lets go yaar,…
Radz:Neil,…I wanna take rest,…I’m going home yaar,…You ppl continue,…And tomorrow Conference is there na,…So,Please Neil,…
Dadaji:choti,…Then,How will you go beta,…
Radz:You don’t take tension dadaji,.Just enjoy this day with neil,…I’ll go by Autorickshaw,…
Neil:Ok chasni,…You can go home yaar,…Dadaji,Mala Aunty,..You ppl wait here,..I’ll drop chasni at home and come,…Then,We will enjoy our day today,…
Saying so Neil started moving with Radz was stopped seeing Arjun there,…
Neil:Harre arjun,..You,Here…I thought,..You went to office,…
Arjun,who looked at radz began,
Arjun:Haan,..Sam ly asked me to drop Radhika’s family at their home,…
Neil turned towards radz and then faced arjun began,
Neil:Oh!!!,…Then Arjun,…Could you do me a favor,..Hold my Bike key yaar,..
Arjun looked puzzled and neil continued,
Neil:Hold it man,…And Please Drop Radhika at her home in my bike yaar and I’ll take Mala Aunty and Dadaji in your car,…After droping her,You leave my bike in my home and take your car man,…You know my home right???You already came to my home,…And I think you dinn forget??? What do you say arjun???,…I hope you will agree,…
Arjun nodded yes hesitatingly and began,…
Arjun:Ya,…I never forget few things in my life easily,…Ok,…Hold my car key,…I’ll drop radhika at her home,…
But,Radz din like to go with Arjun began,…
Radz:Neil,..Its ok,..I’ll go myself,…I don’t need anyone to drop me,..
Mala:choti,..How will you go alone beta,…Now only your wounds are getting cured and if something happens to you again,…Then,I cant tolerate beta,…So,Its better you go with Arjun beta,…Don’t Argue choti,…
Radz:But ma,…Nothing ll happen to me ma,…I,…
Neil:Chasni,..I know you are not comfortable travelling in bike,…But,We need your safety than anything yaar,..you ly said na ,Arjun is good and he already saved you from accident,..So,please,…
Radz,who saw huge concern in her friend’s eyes couldn’t neglect their proposition,…
Radz:Ok Neil,..I’ll go,…
After hearing this,Neil happily pinched his chasni’s cheek and began,
Neil:That’s my chasni,…
Dadaji,Mala Aunty smiled seeing their friendship except Arjun,who wants to fire neil thru his eyes,..but he left him without harming cox he did a favour unknowingly by sending Radz alone with him,…
Mala:Ok,…Choti,…Call us After reaching home beta,…Dont forget to have lunch and medicines beta,…
Radz: Hmmm,..you don’t worry about me and enjoy this day ma,…And Dadaji,..No sweets,…
Dadaji:Ok beta,…I wont eat sweets,..But, where is that Dairymilk silk beta,…
Radz: Dadaji,…
Neil:Ok,…Chasni,Arjun,…Come lets all move yaar,…Its been late,…
Saying so Neil and Mala carried the bags and luggages and started towards parking lot with dadaji leaving Ardhika,…Arjun who smiled at dadaji and mala turned towards Radhika felt a spark,…Radz tried to move leaving Arjun was stopped by Arjun’s words,…
Arjun:What,You din like coming with me???
Radz turned towards him but controlled herself to remain silent,…
Arjun:Why today no words,…If you din like coming with me,..I wont force you cox I din like to travel with you Radhika,…
Radz:Sir,..Dont worry,you are not alone,..I too din like travelling with you,…I accept this just for my ma and Neil’s sake,…So,Don’t imagine much sir,…
Arjun,who smirked hearing this started,…
Arjun:Oh!!,…Then why are you wasting my time,…Come with me,…
Radz:Haan,…I’m ready sir,..
Saying so Radz walked past arjun,who follows her with a smile,…
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In Parking lot,
Dadaji seated at front and Mala seated at back,…Neil excused them to send off Radhika and arjun first,…At the same time,Arjun,who started the Bike waiting for Radz to sit at back began,…
Arjun:I had no time to wait for you Radhika,…
Radhika hesitated a lot to sit at back,…she reached the bike and tries to hold Arjun’s Shoulder for support but stopped and sit one side without touching Arjun,…Arjun,who saw this in side mirror remained silent and tries to start the bike was stopped by Neil,who came in front of the bike,…
Neil:Arjun,One minute yaar…
Saying so Neil went near Radz and began,
Neil:Chani,What are you doing???,…Please,Sit double side yaar,…You wanna meet with another accident,…
Radz: No neil,..I’m comfortable,…
Neil:I said na,..Sit Double side,…
Saying so Neil hold Radz hand and she get down to sit Double side irritated arjun a lot,…He rised the Bike to suppress his anger and Neil added oil in already burning fire by making Radz sit double side holding her arms,…Radz who sat double side kept her Hand bag between them as a wall between her and her Arjun sir,…
Neil:Chasni,..Hold Arjun at times of Speed Break n all yaar,…You wont catch any skin Disease,…Am I Right Arjun,..
Arjun turned his gaze ignoring neil’s words,…
Radz:Neil,…Ok,…You go,…Dadaji and ma will be waiting for you,…
Neil:Hmmm,…Arjun,…Ride slowly man,…I hope you will,…
Neil patted Arjun friendly and went towards car leaving our Angry bird Arjun and balking Radz,…
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In travel,…
Arjun started the bike with a thud made Radz to hit Arjun’s Back,…she distanced herself from him and hold the back of the seat tightly,…Arjun saw this in mirror started riding the bike fastly made radz panic and irritated a lot,…
Radz:Sir,…Why are you riding faster???,…Please,Go slow,…
Arjun:Why,…You are missing your Neil to hold,…
Radz:Sir,,..What are you talking???,…Please Go slow,…You wont get anything by riding faster sir,..Please,…
Arjun:Ya,..You wont get anything,…But,I don’t want to waste my time by travelling with you Radhika,…
Radz:Sirr,…If time is more important for you,Then Why you accepted to drop me in my home,…
Arjun:I did this for Sam not for you,…
Radz got irked by Arjun and began,…
Radzz:Sirr,..Then leave me at this Stop,…I’ll go by Bus or Autorickshaw,…
After hearing this,Arjun raised the speed and started driving in some other route,..
Radz:Sirr,..Why are you going this side,…It will take time,…
Arjun:I know,..What I have to do?,..You no need to preach me Radhika Mishra,…
Radz who hold her back seat tightly got pain in her hands and while she released her hands,Arjun puts sudden break made radz to hold arjun’s shoulder tightly…
Radz:Sir,..Is this the time to put break,…There’s no one in the road,…
Arjun stopped the bike while looking Radzz in the mirror began,…
Arjun:Get down Radhika,…
Radzz:Sir,..What are you saying,…How can I go from here,…Please,…If I did any mistake,..Forgive me,..But leaving me here alone is not nice sir,…
Arjun: I said Get down Now,..
Radz get down from the bike by holding Arjun’s shoulder,…Arjun enjoyed that moment secretly by looking Radz in the mirror,…
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In restaurant,…
Arjun parked his bike in the Nearby Restaurant,…And came near Radhika,who holding her watch strip which was broken cox of Arjun’s fast ride and scolding herself for travelling with Arjun…
Arjun:I gonna have my lunch now,…If you wish,Join me or else just stand here and watch your Neil’s Bike till I finish my lunch,…
Saying so Arjun walked towards Restaurent,…Radz who also felt hungry followed him without uttering any,..
Both seated opposite facing each other,…A waiter came towards them and began
Waiter:Sir,..This table is already booked by a Couple,..so,please you both take that corner table,…And it’s a special Resort usually given for Lovers and Newly married couples,…
Arjun and Radz felt awkward hearing this from waiter,..Arjun began,
Arjun: Married!! and We,…
Waiter:Yes sir We know what you meant,..Sorry for the inconvenience,..There you can enjoy your lunch with lot of privacy as we will give that corner table resort rarely for a Married couple,..
Radz:But, We are not,..
Waiter:Madam,..I understood,..But,it’s believed that the couple who use that table for their dinner or lunch will never separate,…And we din have any other table for you,..So,Please,…If you decide your menu there,…We will serve you within few minutes mam,..
Saying so Waiter went to other table leaving Arjun and Radhika alone,…After a while,Arjun get up from his seat and walked towards corner table resort,..Radz who looks confused followed him by calling him repeatedly,…
Radz:Sirr,…Arjun sir,…
Arjun,who opened the glass door to reach that corner table resort was extremely shocked in its beauty simply stood there by Keeping both hands in his pockets,… It was An extremely spaciously large and wide oval room, painted in Baby Pink color on one side and Large Glass Windows on the other side which portrays the serene beauty of the Sea from the Distance,… Over to the far right corner is a surreal inbuilt waterfall releasing a relaxing sound of water flowing,… To the far side of the water fall is an exclusive 8ft tank which when the sun light falls reveals the slow angelic movements of jellyfish,…At the center of the Room,A single sofa with Golden brown texture facing the gigantic Glass windows and Beautifully decorated Dinning table was placed to enjoy the Delicious Food peacefully,…On top of it,A melodious Violin Tune was played inorder to create a romantic mood to the couple while enjoying their Lunch/Dinner,..
Radz,who followed arjun also stopped yelling his name after witnessing the beauty of the Room,… she in fact freezed seeing the privacy of that Corner table resort,… At the same time, she loved the vision of sea from there, the beauty of dancing Jelly fish in the Fish tank and small Inbuilt Waterfall which challenging the Original one,…Her words were struck in her throat,…Radz started admiring each and every piece in that Resort,…Arjun,who turned back was mesmerized in Radz,who was enjoying her moments by playing with the inbuilt waterfall and her ignorance,..She tried to spit water on the slow Dancing Jelly fish from the inbuilt waterfall,…She even started calling those Jelly fish with names,…Arjun forgot himself in watching his Ladylove,…He felt that room became much more beautiful due to Radz presence and smiled happily watching her cute antics,… (Back ground music:Kawhishon Pe likhi Instrumental Ringtone)
Right then waiter entered their resort and Began,
Waiter:Excuse me sir,…If you place your order means, It will be easy for us to serve you quickly,…
Arjun,who was staring his ladylove got distracted by Waiter Began,
Arjun:Ya,…Ofcourse,..
Saying so,He took the Menucard from the Dinning table and ordered few,…Then,He asked Radz to order her menu,…
Arjun:Radhika,..Radhika,…
Radz was in her world and she enjoying herself with her Jelly fish Friends,…
Radzz: Cummon Monu,…Cummon,…Don’t leave chutki to win the race,…Titu,..You go that side,…Its chottu’s turn now,…
Arjun:Radhika,..come here,..Order your lunch first,…
Radz:Sir,..You Order for me too na,…M busy here,…
Arjun:Radhika,..See,My taste and your taste may differ,..Come and place your order,…
Radz:Sir,..Its very simple,…Order me the dishes which are exact opposite taste of your’s,…Now Don’t disturb me,…
Waiter who saw their cute fight began,
Waiter:Sir,..Madam is saying na,…So,Please place your order sir,…
Arjun looked helpless ordered their menu,..
Arjun:Ok,..you take and come these dishes,…
Waiter after getting the order excused himself from there,…
After Waiter’s Exit,Arjun again continued his staring on Radz,…Whereas Radz was busy with her newly fonud Fish friends and turned towards Arjun began,…
Radz:Sir,…come here na,…I ll show you all my Jelly fish friends,..See,Now all are moving fastly and even enthusiastically,..Come sir,…
Radz with a big smile signed Arjun to come near her to intro her fish friends to him,…Arjun walked slowly towards Radz and He felt that something gonna destroy his fence,…The weapons to Destruct the Fence which he built for himself may be The Beautiful Private Resort with Radz flawless Beauty and on top of it,Radz is now alone with him and She even calling him near her,…His mind is asking him to stop nearing Radz but his Heart is not willing to pay attention to his mind,…As a result,He walked near Radz,…Radz,Who turned to see Arjun there hold his hand and showed him all her Jelly friends,…
Radz:Sirr,…This is Monu,Titu,Chutki,Chottu and Pinky,…Sir,..They are 2 teams,..These 3 are one team and these 2 are another team,…
Saying so,Radz pointed each jelly fish and go on talking about their achievements in this few minutes,…Arjun who saw Radz closer to him couldn’t hear her words as he was just lost in staring her this close to him,…He dunno but he want that moment to be an Everlasting moment in his life for himself,…
Radz: Wow,…very good,..This is the real spirit,…Cummon,…Sir,.See there,.. We won the game,..I said na,…My team only win,…Ok,…Monu,Titu,Chutki,Chottu and Pinky,…You ppl continue,…See you all later,…Bye,…
Saying so,..Radz with a big smile faced Arjun and began,
Radzz:Sirrr,…see there,…Wow,…
Saying so, Radz went near glass window crossing Arjun,…While crossing, Radzz Dupatta got struck into Arjun’s watch strip,…But,due to her Enthusiasm in watching the Serenic beauty of Sea,…She din realize anything around her at that moment,…
Radz:Sir,…See there na,..How Beautiful it is na,…Sir,..Help me to open this window,…
Saying so,Radz tried to open the glass window but failed cox of her duppatta which struck in Arjun’s hands,…Before Radz turned towards Arjun where her Duppatta struck,Arjun Came near Radz and helped her to open the windows,…
Radz smilingly began,
Radz:Thank you sir,…
Saying so Radz bent her head outwards to smell the fresh noon breeze whereas Arjun admired Radz beauty in that breeze,…Due to heavy breeze,her Hair caressed Arjun’s face,…Radz,who feel Arjun near her began,
Radz:Sir,..You also like this place na,…See the Beauty of these dancing waves and this Breeze,…hmmm,..Wow,…I loved it sir,…
Radz was enjoying her moment in that noon breeze but Arjun lost himself completely in Radz ,..He slowly removed Her Hair strands from his face and tries to reduce the distance between them,…He even din like to allow Air coming between them by breaking all his guards,Fence before Radz,…His parted lips were few more inches apart from Radz cheeks,…Right then,Radz accidentally turned towards Arjun was extremely shocked seeing Arjun closer to her and their lips were barely an inch apart,…(back ground music:Kawhishon Pe likhi),…
Precap:Sam was irritated hearing Prema’s words in Mobile,’We all are going to Beach in the evening beta”
67 Comments
Omg renu !! Enna di panna ?! I’m still in trance… Thank you so much for the mega episode…
It was lovely … Dadaji’s tricks … And not to forget the dairy milk silk .. Lol ????
Arjun jealous .. Lol .. Neil pulling radz cheeks…
Bike sceneum super …. Arjun ku saaku kedachiduchu radhz ta vara… He just canr stop himself… Too lovely …
I love the way you imagined the restaurant setting… Really amazing…..
And precap.. Why is Sam irritated?! Puriyaliye… ??
I loved it from the start to finish… Thank you so much di … Aduta update sikrama pannu .. Please..
Love you loads.. Tc.. Keep smiling.. Bear hug..??
Oh shree,…My cutipeee,….
Thank you sooooooooooooo much,….
And I dinn call you brutus,…I just use that phrase cox you too started making me feel shy yaar,…Azhadhadi chellam,….LOL,….
& Sam was irritated,…You will get answer in the upcoming episodes,…She has to feel some sort of Dose yaar,…Cvs forgot and they made her hair brained fool at times,…I knew she is like that but I want her to feel some for neil too,…He always wants sam to be happy but here sam indirectly hurts him a lot than hurting radz and herself,….Then ly we can enjoy Nesam scene too,…Or else it looks like one sided love of our poor neil,…Neil shouldnt be sad always,….This is my philosophy,..Stupid thots,…But i hope you ll like it,…
Love you too shree,,…..
Adada sari sari.. I’ll wait ..
Sam has to feel for Neil … It will happen .. Adhu nedakum only when you feel its the right time…
Enna nee? Appo lerundu patute yirukein stupid thoughts nu yiruka .. Nothing like that … Its these thoughts which make you write beautiful and make us love it … Please anda madri sollade .. Romba valikidu ??
Naan dhaan first iniku … Yey!! ??
Sorry ma,..Innime Stupid thots nu solla matten,..For me its stupid cox m spending my time in imagining sth rather watching Tv and in gossips,…you know shree,..After this flood I stopped watching Tv itself ma,…
Just today i scanned channels to watch Pathankot terrorist attacks,..Felt bad for our precious Brave sols and surfed online reg that issue,..Really We have to pray for their family to give them mental support as they lost their son,Father,Husband and relative in this attack,….RIP,…A big salute to those 7 brave souls,..
This is Renu,…Started sth and went on with sth,…Love you too shree,…Tc deary,….
Wow..! wat an update…love u
thanx yaar
hey renu wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow
what an episode I really enjoy id our supppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppper dadani and neil’s chat woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow. arjun and rads scene their moments restaurant scene and love each and every bit yaar.
total yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy smiling all the time dear. wow what an episode loved each and every bit of it
thanx renu dear what a new year gift yaar love u so much meri jaan.
keep smiling always
truly a mega episode
once a friend always a friend.
Nisha,….How r you???
I hope you are fine,,…If you feel heavy,…Tell me your one fav ardhika scene,…I’ll scribble sth on it for you dear,…You just relax yourself for some time thru our MMz dear,…Everything will be fine sooner,…
I think MMz has that capability to divert our thots,…
Thank you so much deary,…
Renu it was awesome and damaka update
thanx hayathi
renu renu renu no words to for u . just ur name is enough.
jealous arjun on the peaks. After reading i’m missing manmarziyan more n more. i wish i could hav seen all this in TV. arjun being jealous on neil, his stares on radz seeing her, admiring her, unable to control his heart, and telling mind tu bas chup rehna yaar, saamnedekh meri jaan khadi hai aur wo mujhe bulaaa rahi hai. oh god really by reading i’m full on going mad what if we hav seen all this. and that toooo Loooooonnnnggg bike ride. this was a definitely a scene to watch. why they ended our mmz????why??
Resort was tooo gud, radz made fish friends. oh this girl can do anything and our hero can’t control himself except staring her n staring n staring. dupatta n watch, oh another scene for making me angry on SP. aaahhhh SP why did u end this???
Arjun must be on cloud nine by having his ladylove on bike n arjun plzz yaar neil ko thanks toh bolo. usne itni help ki tumhari agar sab kuch tumpe chodenge toh bas hoga. yeh sab toh bhoool jao.
And now time to make sam jealous. Renu u r not leaving anyone now yaar. radz n neil ur friendship is just amazingggg. i love u so much.
oh how did i forget our superhero of today’s epi DADAJI. oh he is such a true sweet heart. how he loves his choti n his masterplans. And yes neil is true he can get oscar easily.
Renu why did u stop it with suspense yaar. u r not leaving any oppurtunity to kill me with eagerness. what is going to happen next. eagerly waiting. i hope u will not take long time.
plzzz update next soooooon. thank u once again.
see thats why i told u to become CV. and again u proved it darlingggg.
i wish i could see our ardhika sooooon.
Manha,,Manha,…Manha,…
Where were you yesterday????
I’m glad that you liked this update,….I just wanna give all sort of feelings in this update starting from Sam-Radz friendship talk,Raneil Friendship,dadaji tricks,Sam missing neil,Neil’s bond with Radz family than arjun to stir Arjun’s jealousy and Last but not least our Ardhika Bike ride,Un expected Date…
I wanna see more Ardhika scenes which we never saw in the original series,…I gave a clumsy update as my new year gift but m glad you liked it,….
yaaa forgot anyone dedicate a song for arjun yaaar. itne shiddat se radz ko dekh raha hai. Ek gaana toh banta hai boss.
like “AANKHON KI GUSTAAKHIYAAN MAAF HO” lol.
nishu my jaanemann HAPPY NEW YEAR.
jaldi se update karo next part mujhe bahut se baatein karni hai tumse. plzzzzz
Manha its been a long time… How are you?!
long time deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees manha shree , roshni, hayathi, devga, roma, mansi, naty, thenA, HAREEM, , harani, nisha, brity, shakthi, chinni, zara, richu, anna, nemi, farha, love u all .
Keep smiling deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees.
Once a friend always a friend.
Nishaaaa !! How are you ? It’s been so loooonnnggg… Love you too ??
Please update your story soon ??
nishuuuu kaha ho. itne dino se baat hi nahi hui.
so how did u celebrate new year.
Just with the family dear. But yet very enjoyable really miss u all tu give us a mauka by removing moderation time but u all are missing
First of all happy new year to all my beloved mms friends…..sorry for late wishes…hope u all enjoyed….and renu what an episode yaar….I don’t get words to appreciate U my dearyyy…..serious uh yena sollrathuney terila ma….dadaji trics,raneil bonding our lover boy jealous….super to watch yaar…..intha episode nerla pakka mudiyalaya ithuku karanam that stupid sp OK nw coming back to episode Tamil l oru proverb solluvanga thina vum mudiyaama vilungavum mudiyum kasta padrenu antha dialogue mamma arjun ku correct uh suite agum…..he can’t control himself yaar with n he is with his ladylove…..renu renu renu ur great yaar….yevlo alagha think panra yaar every scenes are roaming in my head ma……a very tight hug for U my girly….next update sikiram venum wait panna mudiyaala yaar
Thank you soo much deepa,…
Naan antha feel ah knodu vara try pannen I mean from Arjun’s POV and M happy,…I got that feeling dear,…
Happy new year dear and once again thank you deary,….
hey deepa happy new year dear, very much love u dear and miss u a lot . hey waiting for next update eagerly dear.
hey manha miss u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear. but can;t get the time to write these days dear. need to stop writing dear. Life will move on.
But surely will be there with u all in comments deareeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees at least till when situations are allowing me to came on tu . I am always be there for make u all smile.
love u all sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much.
Hey nishu wat happened yaar….y nt continuing ur stories
nishu aise mat bolo yaar. plzz atleast small updates toh do. just 2 scenes that will be enough. with that we can get time to talk yaar. plzzzzzz.
Nishu aise matt bolna yaar plzzz dont try to stop it yaar kya hua buddy u r our awesome friend plzzz dont say like this
Nisha,…See we all are worried about you deary,…Please dont stop writting deary,….Though i dinnnn have a chance to read ur’s but I dinn like you saying that you gonna stop writting dear,…
Nisha please,..Dont stop anything incomplete deary,….If you want a break atleast give some small updates as manha said dear,….Or else give proper ending and start a fresh after you settled down ,…
Sorry If I said anything wrong,…
Once a friend always a friend
nishaaaaa plzzzzzzzzzzzz aaisa mat karo plzzzzzzz…..yaar I totally love ur story……aur abhi toh arjun aur rads ko milana bhi toh hai….yaar plzzzzz….bohot busy ho toh ok…..par aaise mat kao ke tum nahi continue karogi and life will move on….like manha is said give us short updates….but pls don’t stop…..I LOVE YOU….
LOVE LOVE LOVE FOR MY NISHU
hey nishu dear….. Happy new year…..I m really missing u a lot….. but little hectic schedule nowadays… missing ur stories badly…. Plzz come soon with your updates….and why r u thinking to stop writing…. plzz aisa mat karo….varna mujhe rona aa jayega…..sach mein I miss u very much…..mujhe sad wali nisha nahi….happy wali nisha chayiye….so always keep smiling dear…stay happy… Take care…..
Hey nisha what happened to u ?u r fine till ystrdy mrng but what happened to u after that.ur story is too good with ur sweet talks. If u r busy with ur studies then it’s ok, update whenever u get free time.U r spreading happiness and sweetness with ur talks, don’t stop that nisha . Love u nisha…..
wow!! Renu this epi is really outstanding, marvelous n sooooo beautiful yar…..such cute aradhika moments…i jst completely lost in them n forgot word around me….This is the best new year gift….really…. loads of hugggs n kisses for this epi….
u r amazing yarr….i wish would get chance to write for mmz 2….Thank you so much for such splendid gift….muhhhha
Thank you so much Dipika,..
I have no words to thank you all deary,…
Thank 4 mega episode renu…. Omg… Aradhika bike riding…. Arjun jealous 2 neil… Waiting 4 next…. Wish u happy new year renu….
Thanx saran
Renu renu reun…..I’m getting mad in love with u and ur missing pieces….if u were standing in front of me then I donno what will I do…..u r amazing….and I will say “u r totally worth it” many times….I don’t care if u r feeling shy…..I will keep saying this…..
Mega episode wow wow wow wow……u r just amazing…..and u show us everything in a way….that what to do yaar….I just falll for ur story…..
Dadaji is amazing….his silly tricks really saved our rads….u know what….we were not expecting this from him at all when mmz was running….cuz they showed only a little of his wonderful character….but thanks to u….u truly take out every bit of his character….and we r enjoying that soooo much…. no words yaar…..I’m speechless….resort scene was sooo amazing….u also r showing more of radhika’s child in her that we missed in show….and how arjun is affected by her innocence….I always wanted to see this in mmz but once again tkanks to u….ur writing skills r just truly wonderful….it’s like I’m not reading but watching the episode online….I’m waiting for more aradhika scenes….and I’m 100% sure ur imagination will rock in them also….I’m eagerly waiting….really just want to know what will happen next….
And u always updat soon…unlike me….soo I don’t have command u to update soon….cuz I know my sweet cute renu will update sOOn…..love u 4ever….
LOVE LOVE LOVE FOR U?
Ameena,…Ameena,..Ameena,….
You are making me freeze in your love deary,…But Again m glad you liked this update,….Hmmm,..Actually I want to see more lighter moments btw our Ardhika,…Some will be b4 marriage and some will be after marriage in the original series deary,….
I have to fulfill your expectation deary,…Hope I will my sweetheart,….
& please One request my sweet don,…Dont make me shy na,..See Renu cant type reply too she was gradually fallen in love with you all like arjun,…I was laughing while reading your comments and sree’s comments and my mom saw me smiling alone,…She thot SOmething happened to me and scolded me nicely,…Thank god She dinn came and checked my lap or else I ll b caught by my mom,…
LOve you loads,…
Hahahahaha renu!! Nee sirichikutu yirundhadu unga Amma pathangla ?! Titnangla ? Acho its k ..
The same happened to me today morning.. I was reading your reply and smiling.. Appa said kalangataliye phone a vachikitu okandutala .. Lol ??…. Ellarukum vitliyum adhe gathi … So chill di ..
Love you ??
Can you please update Ham Dard story? I am deadly waiting for that… Happy new year to all MMZ fans.
I m speechless yar
Thanx yaar,…
Supr amazing wonderful episode renu. Loved every single part of it…
Thanx dear
Wow renu awesome update dear and thanks for the is long update☺. Dadaji n Neil’s plan was superb and dadaji will do anything to make rads happy. Neil n rads ki dosti ki bareme tho kuch bhi bolo gum hi hoga.woh hamesha rads ka sath diya ,after chipkali scene without knowing whole truth he enquired that if she is ok or not .Sam was really confused kyunki arjun ke bare mein sochne se jyada neil ke bare mein soch raha hai.
I think arjun’s jealousy was at peaks n Neil helping rads for sitting on bike was like adding ghee in fire?.But arjun jaroor usko maaf kiya hoga kyunki usne itne acche moka diya rads ke saath bike ride karne keliye.Arjun don’t want to waste his time but rads ko satane keliya uske pas bohut jyada time hai.Ardhika ki unofficial date before marriage that was fantastic idea dear.Our Rads tho uski jelly fish friends mein ko gayi air arjun hamare rads mein ko gayi .lol.rads answer to order opposite to his likes that was true.I think they r enjoying their precious n unforgettable moments .
Arjun rads ki baat ayi hein tho woh hamesha uski dil ka hi suna tha. And that last scene cliffhanger.lol…Rads tho jaroor pagal ho jayegi arjun ke bare me soch soch ke…Totally episode was amazing renu.
You should write a book definitely it will be sold out in seconds. If u write for any TV show that will be hit for sure….. Love u renu ……take care…..
Thank you so much sweetheart,…
You pointed out all the parts of this piece,…M glad you liked it,…See,I really want these to happen in Original series,…i GOt disappointed but happy that we got some good dialogues,…Good scenes,..And Our Ardhika and NEsam fianlly,…So,Contented with that fact,…
Writing a book and writing for Tv sow,..What yaar,…You too started like Shree,…I’m happy that you all liked this Pieces and m satisfied that you all liked my imaginary thots,..That’s enough for me sweet heart,…Love you too,..
Love you too dear
THANK U SO MUCH FOR THIS WONDERFUL NEW YEAR PRESENT, DEAR. U just nailed it!! It was an amazing episode with a little bit tadka of everything, be it dadaji’s tricks , neil -dadaji’s cute and sweet conspiracy, everyone’s concern towards dadaji’s health, rads -dadaji’s cute convo, raniel’s friendship, Arjun’s jealousy, Ardhika moments……..ahhhhaaa.It was a full package of emotions. Loved it . Plzz upload the next part soon. I’ll be eagerly waiting. Keep writing. Take care 🙂 🙂
Thanx Advaita,..M glad you liked this update dear,…Sure,..Will update sooner,…
Awesomeepisode yaar. I love it very very very much. I’m waiting for next epi.
Thanx dear
Omg renu !! Hw r u ?? First of all !!
Now to ur story by god u write so well I ve been reading ur story at a tym feeling each part each word n trust me it was just perfect !!
Now dis is called d renustory with all d masala n like evrythin !!
Jus loving it !! Dr pls cntinu yaar !!
Hey by d way HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U !
Mandy,…
How r u deary???I’m fine,…
Thank you so much sweetheart,…M glad you read this missing pieces,…Ofcourse,Will continue dear,…
Thanx deary,…Happy new year to you too,…
i loved maha episode dear.enjoyed arjun’s jealousy,Dadaji nd rads,neil nd rads frndship,ardhika scenes.waiting for nxt episode yaar.
renu dear talking abt scoldings. seems like they r like friends to us now. u writers write such beautiful stories n here we r imaging every scene n couldn’t help but laughing, smiling, n that too before family members n they keep staring us n throwing daggers. i think in mind they hav confirmed me as complete mad always seeing screen n laughing. but what to do all the fault lies with u people n ardhika. whenever i imagine automatically smile creeps on n i’m directly booked infront of my mom so many times.
and ha take care of urself from that don ameena. she is really dangerous, always hav dangerous plans in my mind more than arjun’s. 😉 😉 .
u r tooo gud dear. love u soooo much.
n amu baby don’t get angry to let out ur secret. loveeeeeeee u soooooo much my amu.
shree yaa long time. plzzz update dear fast.
I think we all are sailing in the same boat manha,…
hey renu dear…. Wat a new year gift…… Thank u so much…. Superb episode….. No word s to describe…. feeling very happy after reading this….. Arjun-rads romancing….their cute fights…..rads n Sam friendship bond…..Neil-rads cute friendship…. Arjun’s jealousy…. Dadaji tricks to stop radhika…..everything was just awesome……. Arjun dear now u can’t stay much far from ur lady love…. the wall which he build around his heart is breaking….. Yaar..I really wish I could have got to see this in original series……but thanks to u …..bcoz of ur efforts we r able to see what we wished for…..so dear…plzz keep writing…..keep smiling….. Take care….and HaPpy new year to every one….. .
Thank you sooooooo much daizy,…
M glad that you liked all the parts of this piece,….You too take care deary,…
Renu,enna ma ippidi pannita !! What a fantastic update. I lost my way today. Started from office tonight very late. Thought public transport was better. Got in to bus. Started reading your update. Wanted to get down in panagal park. When I finished readong,bus was in vadapalani.I lost my way completely. This is what you do to me. Especially ardhika scenes were out of the world. You brought the corner room abience alive. Waiting when Radhika will realise her love. Keep entertaining!!!
Thank you sooooooo much dear,..
OMG,,…you missed your stop,…The culprit is me na,…So sorry my sweetheart,…
Hey renu I’m bck 4 tday as I cud NT stop myself from missing a sp ardhika epi n I also add tat te lng awaiting for ur epi ws worth!!!!!!!ur epis r. All superb bt tis 1 s mch mre tan tat………
I ws holding bck my laughter after reading dadaji niel convo……dadaji s simply superb…..he evn added Ankush into hs plan…..well dne dadaji!!
I lvd te ardhika moments……..it seems as if I ll miss sooooooo many superb epis if I dnt cme here evy day……i lvd rads dialogue”my taste is opposite of urs sir” …….wherever rads is she s bound to mke friends……….niel s a gud friend…….i enjoyed te whle epi ….tat s I’m blabbering…..i dnt know whether anything I said ll.mke any sense to u…….
Renu I ve a request cud u include ankush-rads-riddimma bnd in ur writing or cud u say smeting abt it????I cud NT watch any in te org track.plz???
Aastha,..I dunno you read my reply in the last update,…
But m glad you came here and relaxed yourself thru TU,…and liked this piece too,….No blabbering n all,…I’m really happy that you liked these small dialogues n all,..
& Reg Ankush,Riddhima,Radz,..Ofcourse i gonna show them before that i wanna clarify their character cox except Radz parents and Dadaji,,…Radz was not closer to Ankush or Riddhima,..
I hate Riddhima,…If you have seen earlier episode,You may know the reason for my accusation,..For Riddhima,Her hubby n her brother-in-law Saral are more imp than her own sis,..Whenever radz tried to talk about her dreams,..She cut off her that girls should marry and she ly the one who arranges Radz alliance with saral,..But she is needed in the story to torture Radz at times,..As Cvs planned them later but left it hanged as they gave more screen space to saral-nandhini and show closure,..
Ankush likes Radz too but not like dadaji or Dilip-mala,…He wants his sis to achieve her dreams unlike Riddhima but he dinn like Radz prying on sam after Sam-Radz slap scene,..He dinn had that much trust on Radz which Dilip-mala had on her,..We may take it as posiive or negative but his character has to be explored more,…He dinn want his sis caring for others like sam by hurting herself and even he was angry on her,..If tym permits,I’ll explore their characters too in brief dear,..
I wanna say a cute common diff in MMZ which cvs dinn pay attention due to show closure but they introduced them with an aim,…
Ok,…Lemme tell you,..Riddhima(Elder sis) to hurt Radz and MAnya(Younger sis) to hurt Sam,…Really hate SP for ending our serial aastha,..Beautiful plot,…
taku renu…..i saw ur msg…tank
actually renu dt hate ridhimma…………she s agirl f old tots.like girls are meat 2 remain within 4 walls f house n tat after marri a girls world shud shrink 2 hr in laws only………….hr prob s tat she s nt ready to cme out f tat tots…..n she tot rads ws loosng nuts .so as a sis she tot tat she shud correct n guide hr sis without attemting a breakout into rads mind…………..
personally i dnt want sch a sis.tank gd i dnt ve sch a 1………..
Hai renu, Yenna sollradhuney theriyala. Just, im saying Thank u sooooooo much for ur mega episode. Ennadhan nee mega episode kuduthaalum, ennada idhu adharkulavey mudindhuduthey thondradhu. Seekkiram, fast, jaldhi, thoragaa, Ennakku next piece vendum.
Naomi,..Thank you sooo much deary,…
But next epi kandippa mega epi kidayathu,…Sorry for that,..Hope you will like the upcoming episodes too,…
Friends,,..Neil of Mmmz (Shravan) gonna act in Tamil serial ‘Krishnadasi’ Remake in colors and same 10.30 time slot yaar,…
Female lead will be sana against Sharavan,…(I dunno her but heard she was lead in DOli armonn ki of zee tv)
Dunno the main characters of Gemini sir,Nalini n all,…Kuti padmini is producing or directing,..I dunno clearly,..But Its a good serial in tamil telecasted more than 10 years back in sun tv,….It gonna telecast from jan 25,..I think so
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Noooooooooo I just want him to be neil nothing else……
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I didn’t accept this from neil……
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Thanks for informing us
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Renu actually nice serial but andha alavukku niyaabagam illa. Character oru alavukku theriyam nalini, ranjitha, gemini sir, adukalam naren, sujatha, i dont know the hero name.
tanku 4 informing…….guys did u know.actu niels parents di want hm 2 act.tey wated hm 2 pursue med or engg…….so he went frm home…………..n mmz is hs cme bck serial.he was out f tis wrld 4 2 yrs due to ligament tear…………….so i love hm…………..bcoz he knows wat s best 4 hm n he s independent……..best wishes shravan reddy………….
O my dear renuuuuu..u killed it honeyyyy….loved this update very very much. ..dadaji’s act n raneil bond was amazing. …what a scene when rads was on bike with our hero arjun..lovely romantic restaurant scene, rads n her fish friends, Arjun totally lost in his dream girl’s thought, fighting with his mind n giving his heart what he really wants…wowww it’s mind blowing. …you nailed it my jaanu….love u muchhhhhh, this is the very best treat for new year…I’m literally watching all this n enjoying it…you left it at very high point, I wish they would accidentally kissed at that moment…but I know it won’t happen soon…going really well renu dear, keep it up buddyyy, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads
Thank you deary,….How r you???
I miss your comments so much,…M happy to see you here,….