INTRO about ME:
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii friends,…I am Renu,..I used to post episode analysis during MMZ days but then I missed TB completely after a week of MMz closure,..I think so,…I loved some of my friend’s writing here like Kfar,Thena,Natasha,….But missed their stories too,…Today I came here by accident as i felt somewhat stressed,..So, I decided to scribble something on my one and only love birds Ardhika,…And I am not a Writer and in fact not good at writing,…Its easy for me to analyse a written or telecasted episodes but writing something is hard for me,…still, I tried something on my ardhika,…This is my first ever trial of writing A short story on ardhika,….So,please lemme know u like it or not,…so,that I will proceed further,…And please Excuse me for many grammatical errors here and there,…
Prologue:
I don’t wanna start a fresh and I personally felt that MMz original track was changed after lonovla trip with Nandhini and Saral’s Entry.So,I decided to write missing parts after Episode 64 -Radhika’s accident and after completing the above said missing part, I will continue with next missing parts if and only if u people liked it.
Episode 1 of My First Missing part (Epi-65):
Arjun entered the ICU with huge heart after hearing Doctor’s statement. His heart beats faster remembering his promise to radhika that he wont let anything happen to her. He remembered their cute moments earlier in the lonovla trip.He came near Radhika and shouted her to wake up from her sleep which is hurting him like a knife on his neck.He started revealing his intention by holding Radhika’s hands.
Arjun: Radhika, Wake up and don’t sleep,…Why u saved me radhika by risking your life and I am not worth of your concern radhika.I am bad and I always lives in dark radhika,..U asked me the reason for hurting Sam na,I ll tell u the reason now,..Yes u are right ,I din love her and Her tears are the medicine for my deep wounds. U said na that one cant get happiness from other’s tears but her tears are the ly left over medicine for my wounds.But I cant see you hurt in these radhika,…Please wake up radhika,…
Saying so Arjun’s tears fall on radhika and Radz got consciousness by moving her hands,…with that arjun stopped his confession and tried to wake up radhika.He kissed her hands seeing her gaining consciousness and held her chins to make her open her eyes slowly,..
Right then Arjun heard the sound of someone opening the room door,…He was shocked to see SAM there,…After seeing SAM there, He left radz chin and had a puzzled look on his face turning his back to radhika,who opened her eyes slightly,…
Sam: Arjun,What happened to radhika?? Is she fine??
Arjun: Hmmm,She is here…U take care of her,…I ll b in few minutes,…
With that Arjun left the ICU Room,…Sam who stood still seeing radz condition,…turned her back and cried for few min before reaching her Bestie,Radz was blinking her eyes slowly as wound on her head causes her pain while opening her beautiful eyes,…. then Sam reached her friend and teased her for talking continuously even after huge accident and both the girls had some light moments,…And radz who accused arjun earlier said that He is nice guy and cox of him ly she was alive,….After hearing these words from radhika, sam was in cloud nine.
And she called Neil and informed him that radz is fine and also Arjun’s help by saving radz soul,…Neil on hearing those words cried his heart at the other end whose silent screams were not heard at this end,…Neil was happy that his chasni was fine and sad that his love went far away from him.Sam then urged him to come to hospital and neil informed her that he will be there within an hour with Teji,change-mangu(zubin and krithika)
Arjun who went to consulting room, had a chat with doctor heard that radz need a complete rest for 10- 15 days and doctor asked him to sign the formalities but before signing he excused himself from the consulting room witnessing Sam nearby talking on the phone outside the consulting room.He crossed Sam silently and reached the Ganesh Idol in the front corridor of the hospital remembering radhika’s accident which is like a nightmare for him,…
Then he went to radhika’s room where radz trying to sit with the help of pillows on the other side but was helpless due to heavy pain in her abdomen,…She screamed in pain,..Right then arjun rushed towards radhika and hold her shoulder and kept the pillow by her side and makes her sit comfortably.(background music: Kwaishon pe likhi)Radz who was surprised to see this new arjun , stared him without blinking her eyes.then arjun continues his banter on radz.
Arjun: U are really a fool radhika,If you want to get up u could have called me or sister here,..why you stressed yourself as stitches in the abdomen will hurt you na,…
Radz: no sir,Sam is there to help me but she went just now to attend neil’s call.so,ly I tried to wake up myself.And it din hurt me heavily,…
Arjun: stop ur nonsense radhika,…next time if u tried to do sth like this,….I will never help you understand,…And you will be all alone,…
Radz: Sir,why you are so tensed,…nothing happened to me,…And sir,..Thank you very much for saving my life again and,…
Arjun: Stop it radhika,…I already said na next time u tried sth like this,….
Radz: but sir,I din do anything and why u r scolding me,….
Arjun: u know,U have spoiled my car seats,….
Radz:don’t worry sir next time I ll keep the towel beside me to clean the blood strains,…Pinky Promise,…
Arjun: I think this operation makes you further stupid,….
Then Both arjun and radhika had intense eyelock with concern and affection,…Right then Sam came inside calling chasni,which makes them to break their eyelock and Arjun stood up facing sam and sam,who wants to talk with arjun was interrupted by Teji,Zubin,krithika and neil,….Everyone entered the ICU with huge noise which makes Doctor to shout at them to get out leaving one or two here with radz,..Arjun,went out first following sam,teji,zubin and krithika to leave the room,…Neil who was concerned about his chasni felt hurt seeing his friend like this,…
Neil: chasni,what’s this yaar,… how it happened yaar??
Radz: nothing big neil,arjun sir saved me,…so,I am alright ,….
Neil:chasni,be careful yaar,…this time arjun was there so,he saved u,…next time if anything happened to you when you are alone,….what we will do yaar?,…promise me that you will b careful hereafter,…
Radz:neil,…don’t worry,…And I ll b careful from now,…OK,…pinky promise,…
Radhika and neil held their fingers linked with big smile doing their pinky promise,…
Right then Arjun who wants to take his wallet which he kept in the ICU came inside noticing radz and neil’s little finger bonding,…and screen freezes on arjun’s jealous face.
Precap: Arjun told sam that whatever he did earlier was wrong and these two days brought a big change in him cox of Radhika and he wants to start a fresh beginning from now
P.S: I hope you people will like it and I will continue the next episode based on your reviews guys as I am not confident on my writings,…
67 Comments
Hi renu dear, i forgot to mention about rads n Neil convo, it was so cute with pinki promise n arjun’s jealous face was hilarious…this is what we really missed in the show itself and you are capturing everything here, it’s mind blowing….I’m blessed to read you again…I’m so overwhelmed seeing you back…may Allah bless you and give you all the happiness n success in the life…sorry for long comments but I can’t help it….I love you alllllllllll deariiiiiiieeess sooooooooo muchhhhhh, muaaaaahhhhhh
Im not believing myself. Im still pinching myself. Ur back renu!
and im so happy that u still remember me and i came know it after reading ur first lines. Ur analysis is superb. Im remembering the days when u used to write about manmarziyan episode. Renu i have no words to say how happy im knowing that u consider me as ur friend.
And renu im still writing that story. Its name is where is heart there is life.
I wish others like happy, mitty, abi, sonamohan, ireena to come back too. Missing them so much.
Devga,..i remembered u via mitty,happy,…But never had a chance to read your comments then,….
& at first, i just wanna fill the gap between the accident scene & Sam-arjun proposal night,..But then i rem an article during mmz end that the original plot was not carried out by the cvs due to TRP pressure and that’s the reason for this show closure,….
But one thing I want to give credit to cvs that mmz is the ly serial which got good dialogues and good scenes which i will never change in my FF,…I even use the same scenes but the situation may differ,…The entry of Saral may b valid but Nandhini is not at all needed after accident,…The cvs wasted many good episodes by giving more screen space to saral and nandhini,…& one big disappointment in mmz is that they dinn show radz achieving her dreams till end,….which is the main reason for me to follow this serial as i too was same like her,…I wanna pursue my dreams before becoming someone else’s,…
Next they reduced Neil’s screen space,..but here Neil will be the one to play an important character in both Ardhika and Nesam love story,…. U will see the neil which i want him to be on my TV screen,…
& I cant change sam’s character as i analysed her so much as she will dance acc to the other’s tunes and its needed some time for sam to realize her love for neil ,her infatuation for arjun and her ignorance towards her bestie’s worth.SO,i decided to take the story accordingly without changing the main storyline,…
I decided not to disclose this as it will reduce ur interest and there will be some twist and turns then and there accordingly which i cant disclose now yaar,…
I hope you ppl will like this Pieces,….
@Hareem,Devga,Roma…
I am fine yaar and i was escaped from flood as i came to my native place with my parent’s insistence for relaxation as my exams were there,…& Devga,,…I am in Anna Nagar yaar,…
But really speaking its very awful experience yaar,…We spent nights without electricity and food,..I usually afraid of darkness(Achluophobia) and no water in our flat,…In fact we bathed and used the rain water in the terrace,…& its irritating to walk in the rain/flood water on the road yaar,…
& we are safe now,…Just some mental stress yaar,…I hope i will b fine after sometime,…. But heard that my relatives were suffered much in kanchipuram with water fully occupied their ground floor. Thanks for your concern guys,…
sry 4 grammatical errors as i couldnt type yaar,..Hope u understand and another thing is i cant reply for your comments often yaar,..It doesnt meant that i ignore u guys as ur comments alone makes me to write further yaar,…
As my exams were nearer and i already have ly few books and my lappy alone to prepare so,will update this FF regularly in my free time yaar,…and will read all your lovable comments which means me a lot,…Miss u all guys,.
Yes we all heard it but u were in the situation so i understand how bad memory it would be to u. But don’t worry when everything goes fine u will feel more better. Just praying for all the people out there.
U gave the characters explanation. I agree with u. Neil didn’t get enough space n neil-radz friendship was also not shown. There were probably 2 to 3 scenes of them after accident. Nandu’s entry was not needed. And the love story which could be shown between arjun n radz was just ignored n got them married. Radz dreams were kept away. So many flaws. But u can make it correct n give us a superb experience which i could cherish forever. And i am pretty sure abt it. Ya i heard in some of their ivs that the original track was changed for some reason. Whatever they were upto we payed heavily by loosing our superb show. And it can’t be brought back. I really miss it. Thank u once again for this. Loveeee u.
Oh my God! It’s actually Renu! At last you are back… You might not believe me but I actually was waiting for you… And the most surprising and unbelievable fact is that when I only read the title “MISSING PARTS” , I had guessed that it was you… I am so glad to have you dear… It’s been long you commented on TU. And about the story: It’s just marvelous, I had hoped someone would continue the story from Lonavla… And you matched the story perfectly… Your writing skills are awesome dear, so of course, we all would heartily want you to continue your story… Love you loads… 🙂
Oh, another thing… What does ‘change-mangu’ mean as you described Kritika and Zubin?
Sure..!! We all are waiting for the next “piece” 😀 super excited. Feeling like I’m in another world again. I missed this feelings I got because of mmz. I’m not an indian but I loved this series. Because I love the feeling that mmz gave me. It was out of this world. Even though I’m back in reality after watching it. it still feels like I’m in a different world . So thanks again renu for giving me a chance to love back those days. Thankiuj
Hey renu dear…..really very happy to see u here……..we always used to miss u…….its so good to get a fan fiction written by you……..u might not know me but i was a silent reader when u used to post comments on tu…….n i really loved ur analysis on manmarziyan episodes…a warm welcome to u on fan-fiction……..n u have started the story from radhika accident point from original track……..i really wished the story wud hav been something different…..ur story seems to be interesting……loved to see arjun caring about rads…..u r going on right track…..so keep writing…..looking forward for ur next updates…….
hi Renu ,
this is so nice and amazing yar .. it nice to hav this track .. plz do continue ..
Oh renu its been a looooooooooooooong time since I heard anything f u.tanku 4 starting te nw ff.i lkd it…….dnt hesitate to write bcoz we all lve ur writng….. .. … plzzzzzzzzz update nct part sooooooon
Simply awsme 🙂 it’s wow…
Hey samiha dear, how r u , mIssing u sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear.
Love u soooooooooooooooooooo much. Where have u been. Love u keep smiling .
Once a friend always a friend.
Renu its gud tht U remember me …
I am missing Mitty and happy …. Dnt knw Wer they r …. Hope they WIL come back …..
And dear I am happy knowing that u r ok …. Take care … And it’s really very scary the way news channels show in and around Chennai hw it is affected with this flood …. I think ur exmz r postponed right .. Anyways all the best …. Evn I may not B available for a few days coz got my exmz …
Love u …. Inspite of such stress u came here and made us smile …. I WIL thank u for this dear ….
B happy and healthy …..
renu ur episode is nice dear..i liked it alott.u used to come to desitv box page na?
@nisha,roma,anwesha,devga,natasha,ameena how are u all?missing u all alot.
@deepa how r u?where are u?eagerly waiting for ur upadate..missing u alot dear love u so much