manmarziyan – (A NEW HOPE) CHAPTER 10
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Neil entered his home. he found his mom sleeping. Without making noise he slowly moved to his room. While he was walking he found radhika sitting in her room. He knocked her
door and waited for her reply. But she didn’t reply to him. He entered in her room.
NEIL: chashni I am talking to u why u r not replying me?
He turned her around. She was crying. She hugged him tightly he too reciprocated. He cupped her face and kissed on her forehead
NEIL: chashni look at me. Do u still remember him? He is gone forever. He can never come back again chashni. Please forget him. I can’t see u in pain chashni.
RADHIKA: u r right neil he can never come back but I can never forget him.
NEIL: I knew chashni we can never forget him but u have to move on in your life. Now stop crying like a kid and go to sleep.
RADHIKA: neil I have to tell u something.
NEIL: haan chashni
RADHIKA: voh
Neil’s phone ringed. It was sam’s call
NEIL: chashni I’ll talk to u later. Gud night and sleep well.
RADHIKA: ok neil
He picked his phone
NEIL: hi sam
SAM: hi neil sry for disturbing u
NEIL: sam u r not disturbing me and u can call me anytime.
SAM: that’s so nice of u neil. Ugh actually I’ll meet u near park we can go from there. I don’t want arjun or my parents to get involved in this. First I have to calm him down. I have
to make him understand.
NEIL: yeah I understand sam and thanks for trusting me.
SAM: ok neil we’ll meet tomorrow gud night
NEIL: take care sam and gud night.
He disconnected his call. He went to radhika’s room. He fouind her sleeping.
NEIL POV: chashni I want u to move on in your life. I want to see u happy and I can go to any extent for that.
He left her room.
It was morning. Radhika’s phone ringed. It was arjun’s call
ARJUN: hi radhika r u ready I am waiting outside.
She saw the clock it was 11’o clock. She was still sleeping she cursed herself for not getting ready. No one was there in the house. She decided to tell him truth.
RADHIKA: sir I am not ready
She expected scoldings from him
ARJUN: it’s okay radhika I will wait outside. Get ready and come down.
RADHIKA: sir u can come inside
ARJUN: it’s okay radhika
RADHIKA: sir please
ARJUN: okay
He entered her house. He was sitting in living room. Radhika came out of her room she was looking so cute. She suddenly slipped and fell down. Arjun shouted “radhika”. He rushed towards her and lifted her in his arms. She struggled to get down but it’s of no use. He was so strong.
PLACE: PARK
NEIL: hi sam shall we go
SAM: do u think I should meet him.
NEIL: sam don’t worry everything will be fine
PLACE: ADI’S APARTMENT
ADI: oh again sam I don’t want to meet u. u want to listen this right then let me make it clear I hate u sam more than I hate anything in this world.
SAM: bhai plese give me one chance let me explain u anything.
ADI: u ruined my life u want me to listen to u. already I gave many chances to u sam and now I don’t want to do the same mistake again.
NEIL: adi please give her a chance and listen to her.
ADI: neil it would be better if u don’t interfere in this matter. You don’t know her true colours. She is a cheater. I respect u as a gud friend. So please stay away from her.
NEIL: mind your words adi after all she is your sister and she is my friend. I can’t tolerate anything against her. I knew she is good and I trust her.
SAM: adi bhai and neil please stop your fighting.
ADI: so now u r fooling neil. Sam u always play with other feelings.
NEIL: that’s it adi I can’t hear anything more
ADI: ok neil so let me make it clear I don’t have any relationship with her. If u r her friend then we are no more friends. Gud bye neil.
He closed his door.
PLACE: NEIL’S HOME
Arjun was holding radz in his arms he slowly placed her on bed. They had an intense eyelock. Their lips were few inches apart. She could feel his hot breathe. He forgot himself in her beauty. He just wanted time to stop. He wanted to live each and every movement. When he was about to kiss her radz said sir. He distanced himself from her and stood up.
Radz was feeling uncomfortable she couldn’t able to see his face. He moved from her room and went to his car.
RADHIKA HAVE A PAST SHE WANTED TO GET RID OF IT BUT SHE CAN NEVER MAKE IT. NEIL WANTED TO SEE CHASHNI HAPPY HE WILL DO ANYTHING FOR HER. SAM TRUSTS NEIL MORE THAN ARJUN SHE CANNOT FIGURE OUT HER FEELINGS TOWARDS NEIL. ARJUN IS IN DILEMMA HE WANTED RADHIKA TO BE WITH HIM ALWAYS. BUT POOR ARJUN EVERTHING’S GONNA CHANGE SOON.
PRECAP: still thinking
So friends that’s it sry for the short update. I’m planning to update regurarly I thought it would be better if I update short and sweet episodes. It will be more interesting. Please give your opinions.
32 Comments
Good one Rishi now I want more loved it a lot. I got so many qns will wait for u to reveal the past. Tc
Thanks Gianna TC ☺☺☺☺
Awesome episode, waiting for the next update. 🙂
Thanks brin
Really superrrrrrbbbbbbbbbbb dear 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 loved it 🙂 🙂 rads have past??? Hooooooooo waiting for dat part pls disclose it soon 🙂 🙂
Thanks suga soon I will reveal all the mysteries
Awesome chapter rishi…Arjun plz somebody put some sense into his mind…he is in love with radz!!Adi ..don’t know which problem but I like him…neil stay behind ur chasini to catch her when she fall…? ?
Forgot to say …good decision…update regularly though short update…i like it..dude u r too good…? ? ?
Thanks Rosie
Too cute!! Why is it that happened to Adi that he hates Sam so much?! Please reveal Radhika’s past…
Post soon.. Love you ??
Thanks shree soon I will tell the past
too good Rishi 🙂 now please disclose why is Adi angry with Sam and make sam realize her feelinhs for Arjun:) waiting for next 🙂 love you 🙂
Gauri thanks a lot
Superb rishi….as usual amazing one…ardhika little moments cute…what did sam ..adi too much angry with her…Neil se bhi…make him fine soon…and reveal radhu past too…overall amazing dear…waiting for next one..love u loads …tc…muaaahhh..
Thanks susi take care ☺☺☺☺
Superb ?
Thanks ab ????
thanks rishi for this beautiful epi………so when’ll you reveal Rads past ??????? and plzz update sooooooooon………………
Thanks aastha I will reveal radhika’s past soon
Hey I have a confusion. Was any person named adi was in the actual show? Cause somewhere I missed it…
Well I really want the things to be cleared 🙂
Adi was not a part of the show. He is an imagination in my story
Nice One Rishi ?
Thanks naaga
awesome episode..eagerly waiting next one.tc
Thanks subha
amazing episode.
Thanks usha
awesome chappy…and wats it…radhs have her past..interesting…..and dont make adi and neil separate,,,,.. not fair…. but i liked it…its bcuming interesting………..
thanks feby
AWESOME CHAPTER…
thanks bhabya
Awesome episode, loved it very very muchhhh. ..keep it up. eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads