So guyz..im very much happy that u all liked my ff….so here is my 17th part…
Scene1:
The scene continue with shocked faces of maheswaries
Sanskar:uncle are u serious
Shekhar:yes….she doesnt have any mercy towards people..exept her badi people
Dp:we will take a leave…
In maheswary mansion
Sujatha:jiji…what an acting…I wondered how could u do it…
Ap:thanx to swara….else
Sujatha:its good that she tells us about shaurya…or else our daughter life is reined
Ap:ha sujatha….bt I wonder hiw he knws laksh…there is something big behind it…else swara will never change to old swara…
Sujatha:bt I pity on her jiji….shekar ji didnt trust her….how can he slap her…I just dont knw wats there….
Ap:I was also thinking same…this kaveri naa…I just want to kill her…how dare she allign swara and her maa….how can she ask hand for that bakwaas kavitha….
Sujatha:they why did u promise that u will get them married
Ap:then what else I will do…anyways leave it….sujatha just call swara
Sujatha dials swara no.and puts in speaker
SwRa:hii badi maa chotti maa…kaise he
Ap:we are fine beta….
Swara:thanq so much for trusting me…u knw papa didnt trust me…bt u too
Sujatha:we are ur maa swara..a maa can understand her child feeling, she can her pronlems…..
Swara:thanq u both
Ap:swara we need to ask one thing
Swara:I knw badi maa…its about laksh naa….bt sorry I cant tell it now…bt I promise one day I will….take care…
She hangs up the phone….
Swara:u will never get an answer…
Sanskar:don’t make me do anything…..I dont knw what I will do….
Swara:just move away frm me….
Sanskar:swara plz….I accept I didnt trust lucky….there is a reason for that….plz swara I want to knw what happened to him…
Swara:so u want to knw everything
Sanskar:yes….
Swara:then one contition
Sanskar:I will accept everything
Swara takes outa box…
Swara:fill my mang with vermellion..with this holy sindoor…accept me a ur wife with all rituals….
Sanskar stands there in shock…..but sonewhere he is happy
Sanskar:swara…what are u saying
Swara:u can choose….
Sanskar:I will say tomorrow
Swara:okk fine….
Sanskar leaves
Swara to herself:sorry sanskar….I should be there in ur house. .I need to fullfill my cutie and paals promise…I should expose shourya in frnt of whole world…For that I need this mangalsootra….
Sanskar reaches home and says everything to ap and sujatha…Ap forgets about the drama and becomes frm happy
Ap:wow…sanskar accept her…she will become ur wife our daughter
Sanskar looks on
Sujatha:jiji….
She signs her
Ap:no..sanskar..dont marry her….she is not good….
Sanskar feels suspicious and goes out
Sujatha:what happened jiji…if he came to knw the truth….
Ap:thank god…..
Sanskar enters
sanskar:what are u hiding..
Ap:nothing
Sanskar:maa….u will not say naa..kk fine…here after dont call me ur son…
He starts emotional blackmile
Ap:I will say
Sujatha:jiji
Ap:promise me..u wont say this to swara
Sanskar:k fine…I promise
Fb
Swara calls ap and sujatha
Swara:I want to see u both
In park
Swara:u knw shourya…
Ap:ha swara…he is going to be our son in low
Swara:plz trust me..dont do that…he is not perfect guy…he have ditched many girls
Sujatha:are saying truth
Swara:haa…plz trust me…I dont have any proof till now…but I promise I will expose him…plz
Ap:kk swara…we trust our daughter…
Swara hugs them
Fb ends
Sanskar:how can u trust her
Ap:she is our daughter….we can understand whether a daughter is telling lie or not by looking into her eyes
Sanskar:only daughter..not son
He keeps a pout face
Sujatha:sob alo…happy naa…
Trio hugs
Precap:swasan marrige….swara opens laksh’s room
Hope u enjoyed….plz comment
ALWAYS SMILE
21 Comments
its short yar
Awesome
Oh my god.. such a short update.. waiting for next update..
awesome waiting fr their marriage plzzz update dat part too plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Awesome and I have no words for your episode. Just the name of your ff in this page makes me so happy and by reading it I can’t even say how happy I am. Thanks for posting it. Post the next one immediately.I knew that you would be busy but its just out of curiosity I will ask you to post the next episode…
What is the meaning of paal
So small yar but very good one
its so nice .Please post one more episode today .
Hey so laksh is sanskar’s bro n raglak r dead.oh no .plz update next episode ASAP
Very small part….update longer one…..
So small… but superb…. post the next part soon
Ek din mein thumari update keliye intezhaar Kiya… Lekin hume ek choti si chapter mila… What is this yaar…. But whatever it is I love your story very much….. Keep going and I love this bold Swara very much…. Keep going..
oh ap trusts swara…..i have badmouthed her……but dis s very short…..pls make it long
Waiting for next update…
Nice……
Awesome. Waiting for next epi..
great but it was short one please post one more epi today
Plz reveal the secrects asap m dyng to read that
Awesome yaar…swara…
Awesome… Yaar
Pls update the next part.