Hello people…actually I was not at all satisfied with my previous episode…and yes..i wrote a I shot story Punishment…..thats 1 shot and not Episode 1….I’ll try my best to make this episode as good as possible…..so lets continue…
The episode starts with everyone having fun and teasing eachother…Swara,Sanskar,Laksh and Kavya were too shocked to see the new avatar of Ragini..she was damn cool….not the innocent Ragini….
Servents serve them the snacks..they r all eating it..Manyata eats a food item…Naksh is about to eat it when Manyata goes and takes the spoon from his hand containing the food….
Naksh:Manya….de mujhe mera chamach…
Manya:I am saving your life okay?
Naksh:By taking away my food…
Manya:It has mushrooms…if u still wanna eat it..then have it na…
Kavya:Why can’t he eat mushroom? He has allergy from it?
Manya:Yap….
Manik;Waise..bhai…tomorrow is sangeet….u girls…..kamar kas lo……we r going to give u a hard fight…
Manya:Oh really…..per chalana ata nehi..aye bare challenge karne wale….
Aru:Exactly..we r going to win…..girls r the best….but u see…we r three only and u all….
Swara:No worries…we r girls too..we r on your side…
Pari:Yeah…
Manik:But bhabi….u r groom’s sister in law…how can u support him?
Pari:Devarji..before being anyone’s sister in law..we r girls….
Adarsh:Chod bhai….anyways…she can’t dance…..if she is there then they will definatly lose…
Pari:Oh please,,,,,I dance way better u……
They get on fight…..and leave the terrace…
Its evening…everyone gather at hall…..to practice dance…Manik would be coming a bit late….and our dear Kavya has broken her leg…..I’m feeling so happy to write that….
Arjun and Radhika forces all the people to prepare a couple dance…..everyone deny but then r persuaded by Ardhika…Naksh and Kashish r dancing..being the youngest..they r the naughtiest too and r best friends…..Parish,Ardhika,Swasan r dancing..Aradhya goes and grabs Sparsh’s hand..
Aru:U r dancing with me…
Sparsh:No…
Aru:Why u scared?
Sparsh:No…
Aru:Then come na..
Sparsh:Fine….
Manyata doesn’t find any partner…
Radhika:Oh ho…Manny…u r partnerless….wait a min..Laksh why don’t u be her partner? I mean..Kavya…she has hurt herself and she won’t be dancing na?
Manya:Good idea di..
She grabs his hand…
Manya:Hope u don’t mind…Kavya…
They all r dancng…Laksh is just seeing Ragini’s childish behaviour….Laksh stepped on Ragini’s foot mistakenly..she got imbalanced and she was about to fall when two hands held her….Its was Manik…
Manya:Manik….where were u?
Manik:I had some work…so..
Aru:Laksh..apka patta kat gaya…Manik is here and as he is here Manyata is going to dance with him for sure…
Manya:Sorry Laksh….but…
Manyata holds Manik’s hand and both start dancing..Laksh gets irked…
They start dancing on gerua song…
Actually they were so much into the dance that all the couples were just seeing them……
Kashish;Radhika di.I’m scared…they may take the most hot and happening couple title at your wedding…
Swara:Couple? They r in a relationship?
Kashish;No…we just annoy them…thats it…
Everyone starts clapping seeing their dance..at last they come to the reality….
Manyata goes to her room..Laksh follows her…
Laksh comes to her room..
Manyata;Laksh u here?
Laksh;Please Ragini..what r u doing? Y r u acting? Whats all this crap?
He pins her to the wall…
Manyata gets angry and pushes him and gives him a tight slap…
Manyata;How dare u talk to me like this?
Swasan come there..
Laksh:Please tell her everything Swara.Sanskar…
Manyata:Is he mad? He is continuously calling me Ragini…let me be very clear to u..I am Manyata Suryavanshi…..
She leaves from there angrily…
Laksh;Y is she acting like this?
Swara:Maybe u deserve it Laksh…
Swara leaves from there…
Sanskar:Lucky..maybe she is not Ragini…
Laksh:What should I do?
Sanskar: Apologise to her..
Laksh nods…
Laksh goes to Manyata..
Laksh;See Manyata…u exactly look like my friend Ragini…thats why I behaved like this…I’m sorry..
Manyata:Its okay..and I’m sorry too….i should had heard u before slapping u….
Laksh:Its okay…so friends?
Manyata:Friends…
Precap:Sangeet Dhamaka…….Laksh’s jealousy…..
Now comes the new characters….
People…they r Ap and Sujata’s brother’s family..in my ff Ap and Sujata r sisters….
Abhiman Khanna
Niharika Abhiman Khanna
Arjun Khanna(Played by the Arjun of Manmarziyan/Aham Sharma)
Manik Khanna(Played by Manik of Kaisi yeh Yariyan/Parth Samthaan)
Sparsh Khanna(Played by Purab of Kumkum Bhagya/Arijit Taneja)
Naksh Khanna(Played by Abeer of Badtammez dil/Pearl V Puri)
They r the four sons of Niharika Khanna and Abhiman Khanna…
And there is another family…The Suryavanshis….
Sunaina Suryavanshi
Radhika Suryavanshi(Played by Monica Sehgal)
Aradhya Suryavanshi(Played by Soumya Seth)
Manyata Suryavanshi(Yes….thats our Ragini)
Kashish Suryavanshi(Played by Digangana Suryavanshi)
They r the grand daughters of Sunaina Suryavanshi….
16 Comments
Too good….
eva plz parth and ragini pair
ragman
very very nice ….
Wow…thats awesome
Superb dear
Nice… Laksh feeling jealous…
Nice
awsm
This is also awesome as ur otjer ffs
i also want manik and ragini as pair . update soon next part u are going superb i love ur ff very much
Nyc 1 Eva…. Juz love it… Eagerly waiting fo d next episode…..
super.please make it lengthy
I want ragini and Manik as the pair please…make them confess their love soon
You are the way too amazing………. I loved it.. Pls pair up ragman. . ……………. N pls show jealous sequence of laksh… I’m dieing for it.
Pls post one more episode today… As you said you are in holiday….
Makee rag n manik pair plz