Hii dear sweet kanchi family,big big wala thank u for all ur lovely comments…love u guys.i m glad now i m member of such nice family…ok my thnk u speech is over ,so let us jump to the story.
It was a beautiful morning and our hero was still sleeping..
After sometime,sanchi enters the room with cup of tea for him and tried to wake him up..after lots of struggling,she was finally successful in waking him up..he woke up with ieritation ,but after rembering about meeting with malhotra,he quickly ran toward the bathroom..she stood there with a cup of tea waiting for him to come out.
After 10 minutes,he come out of bathroom and was about to leave in hurry when she hold his hand.
S:please dont go anywhere today
K:dear,its very important..i need to go fast.
S:is it more imp than me??? (She said in low voice)
He didnt say anything and just pulled her in bone crushing hug.at first she was shocked but then she too anticipated the hug.
He wrapper his arms around her waist and
K:look at me..
She looked up in his eyes which were full of his true love..
K: sanchi,i need to tell u something very imp.but i fear if u leave me after knowing the truth..
S:i will never stop loving u.no matter what. I trust u
K:thanx baby,but i wont force anything on u..but i have to leave now
S:dont go kabir.i m not feeling anything fine.
K: sanchi i will tell u truth of my life to u..and may be we will start new life.but for that i need to go today..i will come soon..and always remember i love u alot.
S:kabir dont leave me alone today..
But he was already left.
She sat on the floor crying her heart out…
Scene shift to the malhotra mansion,
Kabir reached there after one hour ..he called malhotra and ask him to come down.
Malhotra replied to him that there is no one on the house except him and ask him to come inside..
Kabir walked inside the house..he found malhotra standing near swmming pool and he approached him..
“Come kabir.. u have done fabulous job…”
“Where are ur family members?”asked kabir..
“Actually police gave us her body.and they are gone to burn her body.blo*dy b*t*h” malhotra replied..
Kabir felt like breaking his face right now.but controlled himself..
“U should respect her atleast after her death” kabir said angrily.
“And why u didnt go with ur family?didnt they questioned you?” Kabir asked curiously.
“Oh, i was so much shocked hearing about her and got mild heart attack (he winked) and thats why family didnt wanted me to go with them” he laughed.
“He is nalayak” thought kabir..
Malhotra give him money and ask him to pick any girl he has arranged for mabir.
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Kabir denied and ask him if he can take tour of malhotra mansion..
“Yaa sure.”malhotra replied.
Kabir was roaming in malhotra mansion freely since no one was in house…it was really big house with each and every luxury….
Suddenly he saw a room …he didnt knew why he wanted to go in that room.he slowly started taking steps toward the room.with the each step,he felt like his legs are loosing energy..
He slowly opened the door of the room and walked inside…
Seeing the sight infront of him,his body lost his balance and he fell on the ground on his knees.. he felt like someone stabbed his heart with knife millions of times..
And there she was….
His love,his angel,his sanchi..
In a big photo phrame,with malhotra and *me and my papa* written on it.
His world upside down in a momemt.he stood there like statue.
“Her name was sanchi” said malhotra from behind. “She got to know about my illegal dids in hospital .i told her to remain silent.but she was about to send her own dad in prison,so i send her to god”
As soon as he completed his sentence,loud sound of gunshot echoed in the malhotra’s mansion and very next moment ,malhotra was lying in pool of the blood…
Scene shift to kabirs apartment
She was not in the house.every sign of her existence was missing.she left from his life as soon as her family did her “Antim Sanskar”
It was night
He started taking slow steps and reach at terrace
He just wished that this was just a dream .but no he realised that it was not dream .it was nightmare..that life played with him..
He stood at the edge of terrace and………
THUD…
The Silence was broken………..
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After 25 years,
A beautiful room was shown .
A girl in pink saree was trying to wake up her hubby .and he was saying “bas 5 min”
“It is almost one hour i m trying to wake u up and if u didnt wake up now,then ….then i will punish you to sleep on terrace with mosquitoes tonight”
After listning this,he woke up with jerk and stepped toward her..
With his each step,she started taking steps backward and finally her back touched the wall.
He pinned her to the wall and she became all pink due to the blush..
He came near her ear and sais huskily “u know what..pink suits u alot ”
Saying this he left for bathroom ..leaving her there blended in some oblivion!
Done!!!!!!!so this was the end guys.pls ignore spelling mistakes and yes u want to throw chappal at me for this ,pls throw both the chappals at a time..so muahhhhh .bye bye.
30 Comments
Wowww yr I m dumbstruck with this its really stupendous creation… A love thriller….. Amazing….. But kabir killed sanchi by mistake if I m right! But u r marvelous!!!
Thank u dear .
This was awesome
Thnx for reading and commenting
omg Yaashi dear, just fab………I enjoyed each & every scene of this plot……..luv u loads dear………
Thanx for nice comment yaar..
A leap of 25 years.
Ye dono budhe nhi hue kya.
Interesting ??
Luv u sis
Are wo reborn ho gaye.. btw ty for comment
Yaashi dear..it was a really nice OS..i loved it totally…great job dear..do come back with another OS…love you loads
Thank u dear.ans i will surely comeback with new os soon.because i have such a nice readers
amazing superb mindblowing
Thanx u sweets
Hey dear m drumstruck with the dab ending sweetie awwwsommmmmme wala os yaar mujhe laga sad ending but u r magical queen changed it …lovvvv u a lot..
Thank u yĆ ar.and i personally dont like sad endings so i made it happy ending..
Dumbstruck!! Stupendous!! Fabulous!! Hope you post something new soon
Thnk u palak..i m happy that u liked it
It is superb yaar…..
A big wala thank u
Splendid! Superb ! Perfect ! Awesome ….
Thanku sweetheart
See yaashi I am in big confusion please clear it . Did kabir killed that stupid malhotra and after 25 yrs who was that girl and boy did they born again and one more question did kabir jumped from terrace. Please clear it dear
One answer for three questions:yes
I think u didnt read the first part of os and thats why u r confused.anyways thanx for reading
Tum toh chaa gayee yaar… Wow nice yaar
Thnk u so much yaar
ossssssummmmm yaar.now i m in love with ur story …it was so beautifully written..so it was sanchi’s soul in his home that night..and kabir jumped from terrace??
Thnx sweety and yes kabir jumped.
Omg best os till date
Thank u dear
Omg…. It was such an amazing episode loved it …. Thank you for writing this….
Thanx for reading