Thank u so much friends… Now I am alright dr… I will continue my ff defiantly because of this ff I get a lot of friends and also sisters… And I will try my best… I replied all of ur comments… Pls check it in previous episode…. Your lovely comments made me forgot all the sorrows and feel so good…. After my CLG I will return my home at 6…. After freshen up my first work is to read ur comments it made me so cool and tension free… No more bakbaks let’s get into the story….
In the hall of oberoi mansion, all are discussing about tmr reception…. Om comes there and sees Gauri and goes and sit beside her…. Gauri: his close ness affected her more she tries to leave but Om hold her hand and smiles at her…… she recall the incidents before happened in their room and get tensed…..he don’t leave my hand how could I am escaped from him… At the time she sees Anika goes to kitchen she says I will go to help Anika di…
Om shockingly looked at her and think again she go to kitchen…. Oh godji how could I stop her now.. (What happened yesterday in kitchen in the form of fb)
Gauri: first I will prepare palkova ( milky Sweet) next I will prepare a brakefast…
Om shockingly asked did u prepared brakefast also…
Gauri: why u have any problems…
Om: not only me today all will have to faced a big problem to eat ur brake fast… Godji u only save my family… Her first day itself she going to kill my family… His thoughts are disturbed by Gauri,
Why are u standing like a statue…
Om: thinking about my poor family….
Gauri: you can think whatever but pls give me a way to do my work… Saying this she take a one utensil…
Om: says I will prepared this palkova u cut these vegetables…
Gauri: no I knows only prepare the palkova u can’t take that with me… ( enaku terinchate athu matum than athaium enkita irunthu parikaraya) u go and do the break fast I will guide u…
Om: she will guide me to prepare break fast… What a cruelty… ( enna kodumy) says I can manage… Pls cut the vegetables…
Gauri: no I will not accept it…
Om: ok u do only with my observation…
One more thing guys om only do the break fast and also palkova without her knowledge… Fb ends….
Om: no baby u must tired na because of doing breakfast u take rest..
Rudy: first day itself u saved bhabhi in her work ah.
Om think I am not saved her I am saved u only…
Sivaye yes Om is wright u should sit here.. I will go and help with my wife… Saying this he moves to kitchen…
Rudy: today is wife’s day…
All are laughed at him….
In kitchen,
Sivaye goes there secretly and hugs her from back…
Anika: shouted…. Sivaye shuts her mouth and says,
Its me Sivaye ur husband…. Anika smilies at him….
Anika: what are u doing sivaye… I have lot of work pls leave me…
Sivaye: u do ur work…
Anika: how I will do my work when u are huged me…
Sivaye: he don’t leave her… And he turn her to face him and always u are engaged with work then how I am spend time with my wife… Saying this he moved his hands to her face… He cares her face…
Then he touched his lips he brushed her lips with his hand…. Then he started to move forward he tried to kiss her but rice cooker sound apart them…
Sivaye: because of it I lost my kiss…
Anika: Sivaye pls leave here I have lot of work saying this she pushed him outside… Sivaye goes there with a pout…
I will stop here guys…. Pls give ur suggestion…. Waiting for ur lovable comments…..
By,
B.K.Maha….
48 Comments
Maha u r amazing
But next time longer one
I hope u will accept this sisters request
Ur ff is really intresting
Thank u Shrinidhi09……… Sure next time I will give it long…. I will surely accept my sister request…
Fab part
Thank u Alekhika20…. Keep reading…..
superb dear
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Aww .. amazing . U r an amazing writer. Keep writing. Loved it .
Thank u Surbhi Sharma… Keep reading…..
Mann… Superb episode
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Supera Iruku continue pannunga plz
Thank u Haritha…. Keep reading….
Amazing your ff is getting intresting day by day….loved it
Thank u Ayeshashk…… Keep reading….
I want to share with u one thing to all…. I said na one girl say me I am not capable of writing ff and I also I insulted that language etc…. That girl asked me sorry guys….. She fought with her bf that’s why she said that much…. She realized her mistake because of u guys…. So all are pls forgot her mistake…. And one more thing because of that incident I got to know how much u are loved me….. Thanks for that….. Keep reading….
Wow that was great. Waiting for the next episode. Make it a bit longer. Romba nalla pannringa ma
Thank u Akshaya… Keep reading….
Awesome…
Thank u Lilly… Keep reading…
Wow. Semaiyaa irukku. Waiting for the next. Therikka vittuta…..
Thank u Ragavi… Keep reading….
Why less shivika part in your ff make it bigger
Sry for that dr… Next time I will make it longer… Thank u for ur suggestion… Keep reading…
Very nice… Keep writing… And update soon..
Thank u Jane… Keep reading…
It is nice one dear
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Interesting
Thank u Charitha… Keep reading…
Very Nice…too gud..sry for couldnt able to comment on yesterdays part…sry dear…ur ff is so cool and cute…keep Going on dear..
Thank u Adhya… Its ok dr…. Keep reading…
Amazing maha didi waiting for your next part next time post a bit longer one
Thank u Shivika1233…. Keep reading… Sure I will try dr…
Wonderful story l want more romance of omkata and gauri
Thank u rags…. Keep reading…. Ya sure dr…
Very nice dear
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Nyc….
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hi Maha very nice epi ? plz more shivika scenes and after I read ur ff I become a fan of omkara . kalakunga maha
Thank u Nila…. Keep reading…. Ya sure dr…
Dear happy for u nd jus continue dr……
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Yaa ka this was really an awsm epi .. But one request plz plz add rumya n shivika part a lil bit …n I’m really happy that she realized her mistake n apologized to u …
Next time I will add rumya science dr…. Thank u….. Keep reading….
Want some more romance of om and gauri plz update next story as soon as possible
Thank u Ishita…. Sure keep reading….
Hahaha I really enjoyed tat fb part.. funny.. keep writing dr