Hi guys….
I m crying.. ?????? itna gussa aaraha hai mujhe… I wrote the whole shot in 2 weeks and TU rejected it. I don’t know why… I m just toooooo angry with them. How can they do that? I m writing it again… huhhh seriously tooo much angry ??????
Well sorry for being late. I guess no one is interested in it. I m sorry for being late.
Since its the last one so, special dedication from Priya:
Aamna, Adeeba, Baby, Presha, Ramya, Neha di nd Paavu..
Well meri special dedication to Aamu ko jaati hau because she is back…. Muaaaahhhhh ???????? I m sooo happyy Aamu jaan that u r back…
Shot 3 (Last one)
Kunj and Yuvi went to office. Bebe and Twinkle were at home.
B – “Twinkle puttar .. mujhy aj shaam jo yuvi ke saath jaana hai tu ghar pe rehna or apna khayal rakhna.. okk?”
T – “Ji theek hai Bebe.”
She said and left to the kitchen.
B – “Chalo .. mera kaam to hua ab Kunj or Twinkle ek saath.”
(You guys must be confused)
Flashback –
Bebe went to Yuvi’s room. He was getting ready for office.
Y – “Array bebe ap?”
B – “Oye puttar ek baat toh bata?”
Y – “Ji bebe?”
B – “Menu twinkle ne bataya tu or Kunj. Usne Kunj ko tujhe propose kerty dekha or fir….”
Y – “Arrrayyy bebe.. ap ko to pata hai Twinkle kitni badi Siyappa Queen hai. Kuch bhi sochti hai, ab dekho kunj ki bhi uske saamny bolti band hojati hai. Twinkle ko propose kerny ki practice ker raha tha. Kehta hai k jab twinkle ko bolny ka sochta hai bolti band hojati hai.”
B – “Matlab such mein? Mere pass ek idea hai. Kyun na kunj or twinkle ko thoda time akely bitany dein.”
Y – “Haan bebe idea bura toh nhi hai.”
They both gives a hi-fi to each other.
Fb ends.
Next Scene (At Night) (bht jaldi hogayi na raat)
Kunj was in office. He gets a phone call. It was Yuvi’s call.
Y –“Hello kunj, me and bebe are going out. You go to home twinkle is at home.”
K – “Array per bata to diya hota.”
Y – “Chod wo sab or ek baat bata doon. Tujhe aj twinkle ko propose kerna hai kuch bhi hojaye. Or else i will tell her.”
K – “Arraayy yuvi. Sunn to.” He tried to talk to him but yuvi cuts the call.
K – “Ye saala marwaye ga. But nhi aj twinkle ko propose ker dunga. That’s final.”
He grabbed the car keys and left.
Twinj’s home.
Kunj reached the house. He went inside and saw no one. A servant was passing by.
K – “Listen where is Twinkle.”
Servant – “She is in Kitchen I guess.”
K – “Okay!”
He went to his room and opened the door. He sat down on the bed. His eyes went to a photo frame kept on the side table. He took it. It was the photo of Twinkle. He smiled.
K – “Oye Siyappa Queen!!! Kya matlab! Matlab kya? Kya jaadu hai tujh mein. Haan! How u managed to do that. Yarr you drive me crazy jaaneman (hehehe jaaneman ki bht aadat hogayi hai….) Meri bolti band ker deti hai meri matlab kunj sarna ki. Tu jaan hai meri. Basss I can’t wait to confess my love.”
K – “Ufff its tooo hottt.. I should take a bath. Yes..”
He kept it on the side table and got up. He took off his coat and also took off his shirt. He went to the washroom and opened the door, went inside and bolted the door. He turned around and shouted aloud. But it wasn’t only one person’s shout. It was of two. Yesss…. (You must have guessed it. Tell me who guessed it??)
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Twinkle was standing in her pink bathrobe with her wet hairs tied in a bun. Kunj adores her beauty.
T – “Kunj,tum.. get out. Tum knock ker ke kyun nhi aaye?”
K – “Tum ne lock kyun nhi kiya.”
T – “Ye washroom mera hai toh you should have knock.”
K – “Kya bola tera hai? Haan? Ye washroom mera bhi hai samjhi..”
She took few steps ahead but.,
T – (pointing finger at him) “Kunj Sarna you….” Her foot slipped and she was about to slip when Kunj holds her from her waist. In this process, the shower tap got opened and they both were drenching in the water. They share an eye lock.
Kaise bataayein, kaise jataayein
Subah tak tujhmein jeena chaahein
Bheege labon ki geeli hansi ko
Peene ka mausam hai peena chaahein
Ek baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ek baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko.. aadat hai o..
Aadat hai, aadat hai 0.. aadat hai
Kunj looked at her soft, rosy lips. He looked in her eyes. She closed her eyes. He moved closer and their lips met. Kunj’s lips on Twinkle’s soft lips. It was a slow passionate kiss. Both were lost in each other.
Ehsaas tere aur mere to
Ek dooje se jud rahe
Ek teri talab mujhe aisi lagi
Mere hosh bhi udne lage
Mujhe milta sukoon teri baahon mein
Jannat jaisi ek raahat hai
They broke the kiss because of the lack of oxygen. Her eyes were closed. Both of them forget the world around us. They both wanted to be lost in each other. Kunj dug his face in Twinkle’s neck. He kisses her neck. She dug her nails on his bare back. He placed his love marks on her neck.
Ek baat kahoon kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko.. aadat hai o..
Teri aadat hai
He kissed her earlobe and bites it, she moaned his name. Her hands travel into his hairs. He turned her around kissed her on her back neck. He again turned her and kissed her jawline. She let out a soft moan. Her moans were giving him immense pleasure. It was the pleasure to listen his name again and again from her mouth. He kissed her collar bone. She hugged him tightly.
Kyun sabse judaa, kyun sabse alag
Andaaz tere lagte
Besaakh ta hum saaye se tere
Har shaam lipat te hai
Har waqt mera
Qurbat mein teri
Jab guzre toh ibadat hai..
Ik baat kahun kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko aadat hai
Ik baat kahun kya ijazat hai
Tere ishq ki mujhko..
Aadat hai oh o.. aadat hai..
Aadat hai oh o.. aadat hai..
He didn’t stop and kissed her ears. She broke the hug and he cupped her face. He kissed her all over her face. He kissed her forehead, her eyes, her lips, her chin. His hands travel down to the knot of her bathrobe. He was about to open it when Twinkle remembered his confession to Yuvi. She came in senses and pushed him. He was shocked at her behaviour. Tears started flowing from her eyes.
T – “How dare you Kunj Sarna? How dare you touch me?”
He moved towards her,
K – “Twinkle….!!” She cuts him in between and moved back.
T – “Don’t touch me.”
K – “Twinkle why are you behaving like this? I m your husband!”
T – “Yes, you are my husband but…” she shouted
K – “But what Twinkle? Haan bolo?”
T – “You loves Yuvi.” She said with much difficulty then break down into tears. Kunj was boggled. He didn’t understand what she said. He was not getting her. Then he remembered practising to propose Twinkle. He remembered that and burst into laughter. Twinkle was confused. She looked at him with ‘you are impossible” look.
T – “You are seriously impossible Kunj. You are laughing. You never thought what will happen of me. How will I accept this bitter truth. How will I convince myself for not loving you. No, you only cares for yourself. Tumhe koi parwah nhi ke meri kya feelings hain. You will never understand me and I hate you for that. You are….”
Kunj holds her from her waist and kept his hand on her mouth preventing her to speak further.
K – “Chup bilkul chup. Kitna bolti hau tu. Kitna stamina hai, matlab how u manage. Mujhy kuch bolny bhi degi. Nhi bs jo khud ke dimaag me aaya samajh liya wohi sachai hai. You are seriously .. matlab Twinkle tu kya kya sochti hai.. I love Yuvi. Pagal hai tu.”
He left her.
T – “Per Kunj me ne tumhe dekha Yuvi ko propose kertay huay,”
K – “Twinkle tu pagal hai. How can you even think that. I was practising to propose you. But no, you.. I only Love you Twinkle. Yes, I love you more than anything in this universe. I fell in love with you .. I fell in love with my wife. Isn’t it funny, ke main tujhy bol hi nhi paa raha tha kyunki tu jab saamny hoti hai meri bolti band hojati hai. Kuch bolna bhi chahta hun toh tujh mein kho jata hun. I get lost in your beautiful eyes. I get lost in your sweet voice. I love to hear scoldings from you. And i don’t mind to be lost in you for the rest of my life. You don’t know how much I love you. How much I crave for you. I LOVE YOU TWINKLE.”
Twinkle was in a big shock. She never expected this. Her eyes became watery.
T – “Kunj why didn’t you told me this before.”
K – “Kyunki me tujhse itna pyaar kerta hun ke jab tu saamny aati hi tab kuch keh nhi paata.”
He turned to go when Twinkle held his wrist. She back hugged him. Kunj was on cloud9. She started sobbing.
T – “Kunj, I m sorry. Me bht badi stupid hun. Kuch kerny se pehly sochti hi nhi. Me such mein siyappa queen hun. Aj bhi dekhi me kitna bada siyappa karny wali thi lekin tum ne bacha liya mujhy hamesha ki tarah sambhal liya mujhe.”
K – “Twinkle tu abhi bhi nhi samjhii..”
T – “Me samajh gayi kunj ke tum mujh se bht pyaar kertay ho or me…”
K – “Or me?”
He turned around and cupped her face. She looked down blushing. He made her look into his eyes.
K – “Or me?”
T – “Kunj I LOVE YOU TOO SOOOOO MUCH.”
She said and tightly hugged him trying not to blush. He reciprocates with the equal passion.
K – “Twinkle?”
T – “Hmm?”
K – “Yarr Its too hot, I wanna take bath.”
T – “Then I m going.”
She turned to move but Kunj holds her wrist and pulled her towards himself. She collided with his chest.
K – “I want to take bath with you.”
T – (blushing) “Kunj. Stop it. I already had a bath.”
K – “So what? Once again with me plsssss….”
T – “No means no.”
He knows that she will not agree so he pulled her under the shower.
T – “hawww Kunj… What was tha. I told you na..”
She struggles to move but Kunj holds her waist.
T – “Kunj let me go plsss.”
K – “No.”
She struggled to free herself but he was indeed strong. She couldn’t do anything so gave in.
T – “Khush?” she gave a sarcastic smile.
K – “Bht ziyada?” he smiled.
T – “Huhh Kunj you are so bad.”
K – “I know.”
He let her hairs open. They both were fully drenched. Kunj looked at her lips which were covered with water droplets. He came close to her. She closed her eyes. He sucked the water droplets from her lips. She was about to bite his lip but he moved back and kisses her nose tip. He moved down and kissed her collar bone. She let out a moan. He nuzzled on her neck making her go weak. Her knees were not supporting her. She holds his shoulders. He kissed her jawline. He moved to her neck and placed love bites. She was continuously moaning his name. (Read at your own risk. Don’t bash me afterwards.) He moved his hands to the knot of her bathrobe. This time Twinkle didn’t stop him. He was kissing her on her neck and open her bathrobe’s knot. He slipped his hands into her bare waist. She shivered and feels butterflies dancing in her stomach. She cupped his face and moved closer.
They were about to kiss when Kunj kissed her cheeks, then her ears. She made a pout. He then came near her lips and captured them in a slow, passionate lip lock. Soon it changed into a wild kiss, both fighting for dominance. Both were not ready to gave in. He nibbles on her lips. She bites his lower lips and he bites her upper lip. She opened her mouth to let out a moan and he entered in her mouth exploring each and every corner of her mouth. Their tongues were fighting. She then entered in his mouth exploring his mouth. Both were out of breath but were not ready to back off. They broke the kiss but again Kunj cupped her face and smashed his lips on hers. Her lips were the most sweetest thing Kunj had ever. He bites her upper lip and she bites his lower lip. Both again entered each other’s mouth exploring each and every corner. It was enough for Twinkle. She hugged him tightly.
T – “Kunj, I need you. Please.”
K – “Twinkle, Are you sure?”
T – “I m damn sure Kunj. Pleaseee..”
He threw her bathrobe to a corner and picked her in his arms not stopping to kiss her. He was kissing her all over her neck. He turned off the shower tap and reached up to the bed. He placed her on the bed and came on top of her. He dug his face on her neck giving her wet kisses all over her neck. She dug her nails on his bare back. It actually gave him pain but the pleasure took over this pain. He came close to her face and kissed her forehead. He then captured her lips nibbling onto it. She responded with equal passion. Both were out of breath so broke the kiss. He then came down kissing her feet rather giving wet kisses. He kissed her thighs. He came up and kissed her navel giving her more pleasure. She moaned his name which was a sweet melodious voice for him. It was enough for Twinkle, she switched their positions and came on top of him. (I m again saying read at ur own risk, don’t Bash me afterwards)
She kissed his bare body giving him immense pleasure. He groaned. She kissed his chest. He again switched their positions. He again captured her lips. They broke the kiss and Kunj nibbles into Twinkle’s neck. He kissed her cleavage.
K – “Twinkle should I?”
T – “Kunj go ahead.”
He covered themselves with blanket and the screen got blurred. The stars, the moon, the wind and the sky were the witness of their love. That night, two souls became one.
(Bass yarr thodi toh privacy dedo. Bht peep ker liya unke room mein)
Next Morning –
Sun rays fell on a beautiful couple who were peacefully sleeping in each other’s embrace. They were our Twinj. Kunj was cuddling into her and her head was resting on his chest. Kunj opened his eyes and saw a beautiful creature next to him. He smiled remembering the night. He kissed her forehead. Her sleep was disturbed. She opened her eyes just to find Kunj staring at her.
K – “Good morning Lifey.”
T – “Good morning Kunj.”
K – “Twinkle thank you for coming in my life and making me complete.”
T – “Kunj thanks to mujhy bolna chahiye.. kyunke tum mujhy mily bina maange wo sab kuch mil gaya jiski ek ladki ko khwahish hoti hai. Kunj, mujhy tum mein rab dikhta hai..”
K – “I love you twinkle, last night was the best night for me.” He kissed her forehead.
T – (blushing) “I love you too kunj, or last night mere liye bhi bht special thi.”
K – “Ab Twinkle don’t blush so much fir tu itni cute, hot dikhy gi toh I won’t mind repeating the same thing.”
She beats him on his chest.
T – “Kunj you are becoming so naughty.”
K – “Ab itni hot biwi ho toh koi kesy control ker sakta hai.”
T – (blushing badly) “Kunjjj….”
K – “Yeh see. How much s*xy you are looking.”
He captured her lips and again pulled the blanket over themselves.
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Kunj and Twinkle were a single soul dwelling in two bodies. They were never perfect but they make each other perfect. They were not complete since they met each other. There is the relation of 7 births between them. Their love is everlasting. Nothing is immortal except their love for each other.
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How was it guys? I was writing it for many days andd thank god its completed. Since its the last, so plssss we want dher saaaare comments.. plsssssss… i m very hungry for comments. Plssss silent readers break ur silence plsss, its a request. ????????????
Guys, I wrote this much romantic for the first time. Tell me how is it? I know its not good but still.
Nd haan do tell me how were the last lines. Its written by me. Do tell me?
Take_Care
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Bye
Loads of love ?❤❤???
Regards
Purvi and Priya!