Hey guys thanks for your wonderful comments it just made my day ?…….
Guys today ff will not be so good….. please don’t get disappointed or sad …..I promise I will makeup this …..
Now let’s jump into the plot
Scene:1
A big hall is shown which is completely decorated with rose …..it just look so beautiful….mandap was beautifully decorated …..hall was having red& white curtains……the way to mandap was full of rose petals….
Priest is been seated near the mandap
Priest: time is going pls call the bride and groom
Kusum: ji panditji
Kusum saw ishpra and went near them
Kusum: Isha ,pragya please bring sanchi down as it’s the appropriate time
Ishpra: ji aunty
Scene shifts into sanchi’s room
Sanchi was standing near a window and is lost in thoughts just then ishpra enters the room but sanchi didn’t noticed it
Isha: what happened sanchi….. where’s your mind you didn’t even seem noticed us entering the room
Pragya: abheo sanchi agar tum aise hi sochte rahongi na to din nikal jayengi…..sanchi I know u hate him then why are you punishing yourself by marrying him…..he even doesn’t have a heart
Sanchi: ha shayad Shakespeare wo dailogue Mr senior keliye hi banaya honga
Isha: Kya & kesa dailogue ?what and which dailogue
Sanchi: are wo Julious ceaser Wala ‘ they couldn’t find a heart within the beast’s
Pragya: Don’t​ divert the topic sanchi
Sanchi : I’m ready for anything and please don’t ask me further?
Pragya: as you wish
Isha ,pragya and sanchi left the room to go to the hall…..there was a long stairs ahead like that in kabhi kushi kabhi gum…she just reached near that ….she saw the mandap decorated and every guest where looking at her she felt her heartbeats to beat faster ….just then something got into her mind ….yes a flash back
( Flashback:
Lady: wo Teri majboori ti aur yeh Meri…..
Sanchi: yeh waqt kaha lakhar kada kardiya hai mujhe…..
Flashback ends)
She got down through stairs and she went near mandap and sat there
Priest: time is going where is groom …..
Kusum: paditji he will be coming
Just then all got shocked to see Kabir holding a bottle and he is in a drunken state…..his eyes where so red …..we can see ? in it
Kusum: kaaabbbirrrr….yeh Kya bachapana hai…..tum ek din keliye yeh sharab nehi chod sakti….aaj tumne mujhe sabke saamne sharminda Kiya hai Kabir…..Kya jawab doon Mei sabko(kaaabbbirrrr….can’t you keep away alcohol at least for a day….today you made me embarrassed in front of everyone now what will I tell them)
Kabir: maa ….kaun Kya sochta hai usse mujhe koi farak nehi padta…sivaye aapke
…aaj mene uss insan ko dukh Diya jise Mei hamesha kushi rakna chaha…..aur wo tumhari wajah se hai sanchi by saying this he glares at sanchi angrily
Sanchi in mind: Kyu mile ho tum mujhe isthara?
Kabir throws the bottle on mandap due to the liquor present in It ? started to burn dangerously…..
Kabir: now what? I know I’m handsome but it doesn’t mean you guys stare at me like this …..my dear to be wife would feel bad..(.he says this in a drunken style )
Kusum: I apologise to you from the side of my son…..Kabir pls don’t make a scene here….. Are you going to marry her or not
Kabir: I can’t deny you ….did I ever no na
( He enters into the mandap)
Kabir : o panditji now you can recite what all mantra you know
Priest strated to say mantras and he instructed Kabir to fill sanchi’s hairline and he does so…..
Sanchi in mind: sintoor sabse pavitra hai aur uski kasam Mei tumhe har Hal mei badal doongi( sintoor is pure and I promise on it that I will change you)
Priest: now groom should tie mangalsutra
Kabir tied mangalsutra on sanchi’s neck
It was now the Time to take round (phera)
They started the phera ….Kabir holded sanchi and is taking the round just then a piece of glass pierced into her feet and her feet started to bleed ….Kabir notices that and he he takes her and walks …..he was taking round and sanchi was looking at him ……
Sanchi in mind: tum ek khule kitab hai jise Mei chahkar bhi samajh nehi parahi hu……tum wo uljan hai jiski koi thod nehi…..tum esa kyun hai Kabir?( You are an open book which I couldn’t understand …..u are a problem which doesn’t have a solution…..why are you like this Kabir….?)
Priest: now onwards you are husband and wife
Precap: …..sanchi to challenge Kabir……will Kabir be able to stand over it
Jan ne keliye pls read next episode guys…..
Guys I know this one is not so good sorry for?
27 Comments
It was great amaya keep writting dear
Thank you for commenting dear but I think u have a misunderstanding that I’m Amaya ….but I’m not Amaya I’m sana
Ohh so sorry sana at the same time i read two ffs so get confuesed sorry again
Nice
Thank you ?
omg dear, itna suspense build-up kardiya hai ki ab raha nahi jaa raha hai……I’m really curious to know why’s kabir behaving as such…….luv u loads dear……….& plz update the nxt part asap……..
I’m so happy that you showed an interest in this…..thank you dear… please keep commenting as it means a lot
ok this was mind blowing eagerly waiting for next one please update soon
Thanks dear i will post the next part soon …..I will try maximum to make it a better one than this
Amazing one dear … Looking forward to it?
Thank u Soo much for your comment dear
Fabulous dear… Keep going … Update soon?
Sana Dear, it’s too much suspense..i am so curious to know what will happen next…love you dear and please post the next part soon….am eagerly waiting
Thanks dearie…..I wil post the next one soon
Superb can’t wait to see the tashan between these two lovebird
Hey dear it was mind blowinggggg update.
Post another soon
So so beautiful episode…….
Amaz epi sana superb mindblowing … Post nxt asap dear
Yr I don’t understand that why you said that its not good.. Mmi m madly in love with this and kabir’s this side oh god… Mmand suspense… Yr now its like that butterflies are roaming in my stomach to know why they marry…… U r amazing!!
Wow what an update I m scared or angry kabir ??? but love the challenge part only Saanchi can change kabir ???
I am really sorry for the mistake …Actually I had to comment on fenil’s post but by mistake I commented in your ff . I just love your ff and continue soon. A great fan of your ff … That’s my favorite
It was a thrilling episode … I seriously like this episode ..And In love with you and your ff
So different concept and equally awesome
Hey what a suspence…..loved the episode to the core yaar.. it was mindblowing….may I guess something? Do kabeer love someone else? Please dont mind its just a guess? Sorry because I love guessing!!! Waiting eagerly for the suspence to be disclosed…please post next part asap dear….
Nice guess dear…..but he doesn’t love any girl…..not even in the past…
It’s amazing dear kabir telling that I know I am handsome it was amazing to see kaabir in different ways
Hii my bestie,this one is amzing. So sorry for late comment as I was busy.I already told u in PM. Sana, u are amazing writer dearie. I love this suspence. Gm. Have a sweet day.
With so much of love
Niyu.