This is the last part of my previous os.before i start the story i want to inform you something friends.our sweet writer sayunkta(negisayunkta) can’t post her story for next few days because her exam start.so friends we all are waiting for her eagerly and wish her for a good exam.best of luck and all the best dear.we miss you so much dear.
So let’s start the story……
In previous part we see kabir and sanchi live in same village.kabir is a police officer and sanchi is a student.one day kabir propose sanchi in phone and sanchi accept that happily because she also loves him.
Now see what happens next……
Almost 2weeks spent after kabir propose. in 2weeks sanchi and kabir didn’t see eachother but their love increase by their conversation on phone.sanchi is a bubbly girl.she love talking so much.sanchi feel for kabir so much.she love core of her heart.she can’t think her life without kabir.
One day 13th feb (kiss day)
Kabir get some holiday from his duty so he returns home.that day at afternoon in a park far from their village sanchi and kabir decided to meet with each other.
Location:park
Time:5.30 pm
Sanchi wearing a pink and white colour mixed long kurti and kabir wearing a white shirt with black pant.they both are sitting in a bench besides a small stream.sanchi’s head in kabir’s shoulder and tears slowly came out from her eyes.she share her every feeling for kabir since those few years.but one think upset sanchi more that kabir hears her all talking silently and he wiped her tears.only he say……
Kabir:sanchi chalo hum log ghar chalte……late hoga ya…….
Saying this he get up from the bench but then sanchi hold his hand and she also stand up from the bench and hugged him tightly.he is totally shocked with sanchi gesture.he also reciprocate her hug.but soon he break the hug and go from there.sanchi also go behind him.they both go to there own home.
Next morning(valentine day,14th february)9am
Kabir message sanchi meet him 10am near the park where they meet tomorrow.sanchi ready fast and going to the park.she is wearing a beautiful red saree with long sleeve blouse.sanchi reach the place and trying to call kabir.then her eyes notice a couple coming towards her.she see the man face.the man is none other than kabir and girl is isha,one of Sanchi’s friend also lived in same village.looking both of them a sorrowful smile appears in her lips.
Soon some one called kabir so he going some others place attend the call.
In phone
Kabir:hello…..ha bol veer(so veer is called kabir.veer and kabir are best friend you can say soulmate friend)
Veer:kabir tu janta hae mae meri real pyaar ko dhun liya……ha kabir i love swara so so much yaar…….I can’t live with out her…..
Kabir:but tu toh sanchi se pyaar karta hae na……or tu toh uske liya suicide karne gaya tha……app kya hua tuhje…..
Veer:ha yaar tune thik kaha mae sanchi ke liye suicide karne gaye thi ……..but woh pyaar nahi tha yaar woh mera crush tha ……mae real pyaar ko samjha tab jab mere life me swara aye…….that’s all because of sanchi……if that day she didn’t understand me that much then I do big mistake…..
Kabir:tu kis din ki baat kar rahi hae…..
Veer:uss din ki jis din mae ne suicide kiya ……..mae hospital admit thi tu mujko dekhne aya……mae tujko sanchi ke bare mae sab kuch bola …..uske bad tu mere liye medicine lene gaye……tere jane ke bad sanchi ayi thi mujko dekhne……o mujko bhot samjha…..she also became my best friend yaar……she is such a beautiful and nice girl……I am really lucky to get her as my friend……..you know one think yaar she love u much that day she told me that she love you…..you are really the most lucky boy in the world to get a lover like her…..she also told me that you propose her……I am really so much happy yaar……..one request yaar please don’t break her heart …….she can’t tolerate this
When veer told those thing to kabir.kabir is totally shocked and he think about something.
Flash back
2day ago of kabir proposal.kabir in hospital see his best friend who is going to do suicide.he is so so much sad to see his friend cum brother veer like that.he know that behind veer this condition only sanchi is related.(actually veer feel for sanchi so he propose sanchi.but reject him and say she can’t love him because she love someone else and see thought him as a friend.veer could tolerate Sanchi’s rejection so he attempt suicide).Kabir didn’t like sanchi because she is a different.she is totally opposite from kabir imagination of girl.he thought that she is a filtrating with boys or breaks many boys heart.when sanchi told veer that she love kabir that time kabir heard this.he only heart those word .he didn’t hear which sanchi say to veer earlier.s o decided to teach sanchi a lesson.how feel when someone playing love with you.so he proposed sanchi and play ing with her feelings.he and isha in a relationship since 2 months.
End of flashback
Kabir remembering his talks and moment with sanchi.he cuts the phone and running towards sanchi and isha
isha saw sanchi and coming towards her.sanchi saw a truck come behind of isha .isha didn’t hear the horn of the car.when the truck going to hit isha then sanchi came and pulled isha and the truck hit sanchi.
Kabir came that place and see a big crowd one side of road.he hurriedly go there.reached their he saw that sanchi is lying on pool of blood and isha crying and asked for help.seeing kabir isha came to him and crying badly.
Soon ambulance came there and took sanchi from there and kabir going with her and isha go Sanchi’s house.
Inside the ambulance sanchi in half conscious and trying to speak something.
Sanchi:ka….Kabir.. i save your love …….isha is such a nice girl….I know….she able to make you happy…….I know ….I am….a bad …..girl…..that reason god take me from this world……
Kabir(holding her face by his palms): please don’t say this……I know I do this very wrong with ………gods can’t forgive me for …….I didn’t beg forgive from god……I only want your life sanchi…….why you do this sanchi with me……why you love me this much sanchi …….why why why……I am not that much good for get your love….mae tumara nafraat ki vi layak nahi hu ……..I am really so so much bad……that reason I can’t see your love sanchi……..
Sanchi:kabir…….you are very lucky you get isha …….she is…..so so beautiful girl…….
Kabir:how you know sanchi isha or mera relation……
Sanchi:12th feb isha told me everything about your and isha relation………
Kabir:tum sab kuch jante hue vi apna jaan ka vula kar isha ko bacha ya……..
Sanchi:ha kabir…..me utna selfish nahi hu kabir ki kisko pyaar ko kisi se chinlu……or sab se badi bad isha tumara pyaar tumara khushi hae or mera khushi toh tum baasthi hae kabir….. I love u so much Kabir……
Hearing this kabir hugged sanchi tightly and say I love u too sanchi please don’t leave me please.but then she take her last breathe and dying on her lover(kabir embrace) embrace.
The end………
I know yaar it’s really so much sad and emotional.if i hurt some one please forgive me for that.sorry for any grammatical errors and spelling mistakes friends………….lots of love,hugs and kisses for all of my lovely readers and friends.take care yourself friends…….?????????
12 Comments
Oh god anu tumne toh aaj rula hi diya, very emotional one dear, par koi nahi next time come with happy wala os please. Take care
yeah anu dear it was really emotional one…but happy for kabir realized his mistake and at the end time he loved saanchi….good one…come with some happy wala os yarr…bye luv u tc.
i am crying
write more
Sad ??? I’m crying right now!! ??? but it was beautiful… ???
I’m crying right now but I want to know what kabir will do after sanchis death pls post one more
sad story……but end with a beautiful note……………..post next story soon……….tc………love you a lot…..
I’m also crying till now pls post one more just want to know what kabir will do after ssnchis death
I will try to be fulfilled your wish dear…….. Thanks dear
Beautiful and amazing
What did you do anu??????? you killed Sanchi
Btw story was nice but the ending was ?.
sooooooooooo emotional dear but loved it..
Sorry for comenting late…. Really late…. It. was so emotional