Hey guys I’m back. I was on cloud nine after reading your comments. First let me apologise coz I did blunder in my first post only. I wrote the word “compete” which was very wrong. I just wanted to say m not as good as others. Is blunder ke liye kaan pakad ke sorry, choti behen samajh ke maaf kar dena.?. But after reading ur comments mujhe pata chala ki mere under bhi hidden writer hai.
“Aap sab ke comments padne ke baad hmra ke pata chalal ki hmo likh saka tani, sach kaha tani aap sab ke comments padne ke baad hum khushi se phulal naikhe samawa tani”??
Hey guys nhi samajh aaya kya. This was bhojpuri language. Yes. ..I’m from Bihar.
Actually I also know a little bit bhojpuri coz my maid speaks in bhojpuri only. I was just trying to say I was very happy after reading ur comments.
Nd I promise I will never let u all down with my articles.
Enough of my bak bak. Actually when I start talking I myself can’t stop me. It’s my record from childhood. ??
Ek chiz to reh gyi.
Saare sabuto or gunaho ko madte nazar rakhte hue court sabhi readers ko advance me diwali ki subhkamnaye deta h or zindagi bhar khush rehne ki saza sunata h.
? ?HAPPY DIWALI IN ADVANCE ??
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Let’s start
Recap – kabir nd saanchi met on social media with different names (karan nd synthia ).
So they decide to meet next day in pqr restaurant.
Next morning.
Saanchi was walking along the streets, suddenly a motorcycle came towards her , the boy stopped, took out his helmet nd started teasing her.
Saanchi first glared then she took out her sandal nd started beating him badly.
He ran away from there.
The people around her were praising her.
She wore her sandal nd moved out from the crowd like a celebrity with full attitude nd tashan.
Time skips to evening.
At pqr restaurant.
Saanchi wearing a black crop top with white colored skirt came. She was looking so hot ? just like pattaka.
She asked the manager about karan. ( as they both know each other as synthia nd karan).
She went to the table nd found nobody was there.
Suddenly somebody tapped her shoulder.
When she turned back.
TUM ……both shouted after seeing each other.
(So the boy who teased saanchi in morning was none other than kabir)
Saanchi was about to leave just then he hold her hands.
K – atleast talk to me. I want to clear all the misunderstandings.
S – u want to talk with me. I even don’t want to see ur face. Aaj subah Jo hua uske baad to mai tmhara sakal bhi dekhna pasand nhi karungi.
K – that’s what I want to say aaj jo hua uske liye mai tumse maafi maangna cahta hu.
Aaj maine jo kiya wo jaanbhoojhkar nhi kiya.
After that they both take their seats nd kabir starts explaining.
K – look synthia what I did today was a dare.
I didn’t wanted to do so nd my friends put a condition on me that if won’t do so they will complain my mom dad about my club party. I had no other option left.
I’m really very sorry.
S – ok this tym i forgive u but next tym don’t ever dare to do same with another girl.
K – so friends.
S – friends nd they both shake their hands.
After this they had their dinner nd in mid talk saanchi realised that he was a nice nd good guy.
As time passed they both started falling for each other but didn’t knew about each others feeling. Both decided to meet in club.
Nd thought to confess their love.
At club
Both were dancing.
I want to say something (both at the same time )
S – first u say
K – no first u say.
S – no u say (making a puppy face)
K – ok , I want to say
S – yes say fast. M waiting for my chance also.
K – I love u synthia, will u be my life partner
I don’t know when nd where I started feeling for u. Will u marry me. (He said in one go).
S – (tears came into her eyes). I love u too karan. I also wanted to say the same.
After that she hugged him very tightly.
They both ordered juice. But by mistake alcohol was mixed in it.
They both drank it.
They both were leaving suddenly juice falls on saanchi nd her dress became dirty nd sticky.
Waiter – I’m really sorry ma’am pls forgive me.
S – it’s ok bhaiya.
K – u go nd clean l’m waiting here.
S – no karan. Paas me hi mera farm house h . mai wha change karungi.
K – ok as u wish my ladylove
Saanchi blushed after listening this.
They both headed to saanchi’s farm house as she showed him the way.
In farm house
S – u wait here I will change soon.
Till now there was no effect of alcohol but now they both were feeling dizzy.
Saanchi went inside nd changed her clothes. Now she was out of her mind due to alcohol effect.
She started the music system nd started dancing.
Here kabir also was out of his mind.
He went to saanchi’s room nd found her dancing.
He too joined her.
In between he said.
U know what baby ur lips r so attractive.
S – really, u wanna see how it works on yours.
(Saying this she placed her lips on his).
Kabir took saanchi in bridal style nd kept on her bed . nd switched off the lights.
Next morning
Saanchi woke up in kabir’s arms.
She was shocked to see herself in this position. She started crying. Kabir also woke. He was too shocked to see themselves .
S – karan how could we do this, we aren’t married yet.??
K – don’t worry today only I will talk to my dad.
He started consoling saanchi.
After sometime she stopped crying.
Then he wiped her tears nd hugged him.
Saanchi’s pov – I love him, I will tell him I’m not synthia .
Kabir’s pov – I love her, I can’t lie her. I will tell her I’m kabir not karan.
I want to say something (again both at the same time ).
K – this time u say first.
S – ok dear.
She was about to say suddenly kabir’s phone rang.
He attended the call.
K – what??? The phone fell from his hands.
S – what happened baby why r u so tensed.
K – synthia I will tell u later.
Saying this he wore his t-shirt nd rushed.
Saanchi I will soon tell u karan about my identity. I love u soo much.
Precap – kabir marriage fixed.
Kabir nd saanchi both are crying?
I hope u all will like nd if no then pls do give comments negative or positive but pls do give. Ur comments means a lot to me.
Agar koi galti hui ho to is pagli writer ko choti behen samajh ke maaf kar dena.?
Maine aaj starting me bohot bak bak kiya.
Agli baar se itna nhi bolungi I promise.
Bye
Take care☺
27 Comments
Priyanshi dear …it was amaxing artickes dear.. precap main twist..good..wating for it. And dear hume bakbak pasand hai so chill.. ? next tym or zyada karna.
Thank u dear. Chalo koi to h meri bak bak sunne ke liya. Wrna Ghar me to koi sunna hi nhi cahate. Sure next tym jo man me aayega sab bak dungi?? take care
Nice storyline…nd different also…liking it…update nxt soon…
Thank u so much dear. Ya I will post soon. ??take care.
Good episode ..update soon dear
Thank u so much. I will post soon ☺☺
Sorry guys ek chiz chut gyi.
Kabir says to saanchi that he will talk to his father for their marriage ?
Hey bhagwan koi bachao mujhe iss ladki se…..sorry ka kya copyright lekar rakha hai apne pas…..pagli, we are not angry that u use word’compete’…..we are sad because u say that u are not good like this…..how many times i told u …..u are best dear…..Agar dobara aisa bola…main khai main koodkar jaan de dungi….About episode……..first ball pe sixer…..omg,……such a romantic & cute episode my lil sis…..do update soon sweetie…..precap is shocking….hope u mend everything soon….i know it’s a fs…. but i am request u write a ff too dear….u have amazing writing skills & u should contiue it…. lots of love to u sweetie & a big hug for u….never underestimate urself dear…..hope itna bada lecture sunnne ke baad tumhe samajh main aa gaya hoga.
Are nhi maine sorry ka copyright nhi le rakha h sachi. Agli baar se pakka nhi bolungi. Or haan jaan dene ki baat to krna v mat wrna mujhe comments kon dega.??thank u so so so much aaplog ko pasand aaya. Or haan precap shocking h par agle shot me maza aane wala h aaplog ko.
Or jab priyanshi h to phir darne ki zaroorat hi nhi h kyuki mujhe khud v sad ending nhi pasand. Lol back nd a big hug to my sis.
Or mai samajh gyi afterall apni di se Itna bada lecture sunne ke baad kise nhi samajh aayega
Hey priyanshi koi nahi nd dear tum kya m bhi tumhari jaisi hun sab yahi kahte h ki bas ek baar suru ho jayein to band hone ka naam nahi leti..hehehe.. I just loved it ek hi epi me itne twist nd turns superb.. Interesting precap post nxt asap
Thank u dear nd M glad tu pe sab mere jaise h . Mujhe dar tha ki khi mai akeli to nhi bak bak krne wali.
I will post soon. ☺
Woooow,,lv it soooo much.. Update soon…#
Thank u dear ☺
??? start with a twist ??? awesome Priyanshi ???
Ya twist nd turns ke bina maza hi kaha.
Thank u dear for ur love☺
Priyanshiiiiiiiiiii……………wow………….tamaam sabooton aur gawaahon ko maddenazar rakte hue riya ki adaalat..tumhe apne agle episode mein, aur bhi zyada bak bak karne ki sazaa sunati hai…….haha………yaar, ye bohut zyada achha update tha……mind blowing……….luv u loads sweetieeeeee…………
Hahaha ???sure agli baar bhi apni bak bak zaari rakhungi. Thank u dear M glad u liked it.luv u too sweetie
Img dhamakedar storyline yaar keep going u rocked
Thanks dear. Luv u loads ???
Nice plot… Amazing
Thanks dear. Keep supporting ☺
Oye hoye …..really jhakkasss…..loved it!!! Post soon!!
Thanks dear. Ya I will try to post asap. ???
superb one precap looking interesting update soon
Thanks dear nd ya I will try to update asap ☺☺
Amazing .. Outstanding… Brilliant… Will love to read further… Keep going sweetie.. And am advance Happy Diwali ?
Thank u dear. Will post soon☺☺