Hello this is —ANNIE— back with another part of {{WWMTBTF}}
Thank you so much for the comments you gave on last part hope you’ll enjoy this too…
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Episode – 12
@OM
Soon after the revelation elders dispersed to their respective rooms while youngsters were still sitting in the room of girls…just looking at eachother…soon annika broke the silence…
Annika: I think you’re angry on me?
Shivaay: what?
Annika: yeah angry on me? not talking with me…
Shivaay cups her face: no not at all what you have done that I’ll be angry on you?
Annika: pakka?
Shivaay: yes…
Just than rudra walks off from the room silently amazing everyone…
Gauri: what happened to him?
Om: hurt he is hurt because we both knew it but he didn’t and bhavya didn’t told him that’s why…
Bhavya: I’ll see…
Saying so she runs after him…
Shivaay: annika come I need to show you something…
Annika: but…
Shivaay: no but wut come…
Annika nodes and walks out of room with him and as soon as they took a step toward shivaay’s room and went away from girl’s room shivaay lifted her in his arms and started walking toward his room while sharing a beautiful eye-lock…
Om too takes gauri to his room…
@rudra’s room
Rudra enters his room in anger and bhavya follows him and locks the door…
Rudra: what are you doing here? Leave me alone…
Bhavya: what happened rudra what did I do?
Rudra? What you did? Don’t you know?
Bhavya: no I don’t know…
Rudra: wow you don’t know…don’t you remember you hid such a big truth from us?
Bhavya: but no one is angry over this…
rudra: but I am…I thought I know you very welly but alas I was wrong I just assumed it…I didn’t even know who are you!
Bhavya: rudra how come you’ll know me when you never asked about me…
Rudra: never asked? Really? Bhavya don’t you remember the day we went to bring you luggage’s? I asked you to tell me about yourself and you said you’re an orphan…you’re emotional…than why the hell you didn’t tell me about this?
Bhavya: rudra don’t act like a child…I was on mission not on some picnic that I’ll keep on telling everyone that I’m the 3rd senior officer of PS
Rudra: bhavya at least you could’ve told me?
Bhavya: rudra I was here to protect you…If I would’ve told you than I couldn’t safeguard you…
Rudra: I hate you…
Bhavya: rudra…
Rudra lays on his bed on his stomach and pulls a pillow and hugging it starts crying…bhavya moves toward him and places her hand on his shoulder which he jerks off…
Rudra: leave from here I don’t want to even see your face…
Bhavya: okay as you wish…
She stands up and walks toward the door and opens it and then again closes it and hid behind curtain in the room only…
Rudra stands up and looks here there but found none…
Rudra to himself: idiot she is…I said and she left…didn’t even thought to console me…what kind of lover she is…her BOYFRIEND is crying and she left the room…so bad…
Bhavya coming out: not really…
Rudra acting: what you’re doing here? I asked you to leave…
Bhavya: how can I go leaving my BF crying?
Rudra: huh…
He sits on couch and bhavya sits beside him…
Rudra: why you hid?
Bhavya smiles and holding his hand in hers: rudra let me explain in your own way…imagine you’re not rudra but bhavya…
Rudra: I can’t change my gender…
Bhavya: imagine!
Rudra: okay…
Bhavya: good…now you’re bhavya…and I’m rudra…you’re an officer and I’m an oberoi…you’re pretending to be a secretary and I’m your friend…
Rudra: I got it role reversals…
Bhavya: yes…now the one you love so much is surrounded by his enemies and the enemies are of nation too…what you’ll do…?
Rudra: I’ll arrest them…
Bhavya: now they’re not alone there are many other peoples too…if you arrest one another will be alerted and your nation’s and lover’s life will be in risk than how you’ll play this move?
Rudra: than I need to plan something and don’t let anyone know about me and silently arrest them…
Bhavya: what I did?
Rudra: same…
Bhavya: now you understood?
Rudra: yeah…but who was your lover in this?
Bhavya slamming her palm on her forehead: ufff rudra don’t you know whom I love?
Rudra: me…you love me…
Bhavya: then?
Rudra: oh I was your lover…
Bhavya: yes, you’re still my love and will always stay my love only…
Rudra: nice…I would like to join you in PS…
Bhavya starts laughing
Rudra confused: what is so funny?
Bhavya trying stopping her laugh: you need for that you’ve to take training from army and in training you need to stay in forest with many dangerous animals around you…
Rudra: so?
Bhavya: so the one who is scared of rats and monkeys can never join our PS…Not even police will select him…
Rudra: I’m not scared of anything…
Bhavya: Rudraaaa cockroach….
Rudra immediately pulls his leg up: where…where?
Bhavya starts laughing: ohh I was checking if you’re really not scared…
Rudra: you looks cute while laughing…keep on laughing all the time…
Bhavya: oh so everyone thinks that I’m crazy?
Rudra moves closer to her: dare anyone to call you crazy than see what I do…
Bhavya smiles: what you’ll do?
Rudra caressing her face: I’ll brake all the 33 teeth’s of that person…
Bhavya: 32…
Rudra: whatever I will just break…
Bhavya: why?
Rudra: because none has a right to call you anything except me…
Bhavya: you love me so much?
Rudra: none can even think of loving anyone the way I love you…
Bhavya smiles with tears: I love you rudra…
Rudra pulls her in a hug: I love you too bhavya…I’m sorry for my behavior I was just hurt…
Bhavya: ssshhhh no need to say anything…
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Jeene laga hun
Pehle se ziada
Pehle se ziada tumpe marne laga hun…
Mein mera dill or tum ho yaha…
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They got apart and looks into eachothers eyes
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Phir ku ho palke jhukaiyen yaha…
Tum sa haseen pehle dekha nai
Tum is se pehle the jane kaha….
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He leans toward her face and she breaths heavily and heart rate increase as if it is travelling on some bullet train
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Chalti hai saanse phle se ziada
Pehle se ziada dill dharkne laga hai…
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He was about to kiss her when she pushes him away
Bhavya: I don’t like all this b4 marriage I just hate it
Rudra: but it’s just a kiss…
Bhavya: still we are not husband wife so no…
Rudra: as you wish I will not do something which you don’t like…
And he hugs her again and they both sits there in a hug without uttering anything…
@shivaay’s room
Shivika were sitting on bed annika was resting her head in his lap while he was gently brushing her hair…
Annika: shivaay why you’re not saying anything?
Shivaay: I missed you a lot annika…when bhavya told me that you got shot o felt as…
Annika: don’t think about old things…
Shivaay: that isn’t old annika you can’t even think what I’ve gone through at that time…
Annika: I was shot and didn’t think anything bad because I knew till my shivaay’s love is with me nothing can happen to me…
Shivaay smiles and leans down and places a kiss on her forehead…
Shivaay: don’t ever leave me like this…
Annika: never…
Shivaay: I have a question…
Annika: ask?
Shivaay: I heard gauri telling om she loves him from past 5 years…so even you love me from past 5 years?
Annika: actually yes…we 3 mean bhavya me and gauri are in love with you people from past 5 years…
Shivaay: amazing…but why I mean we never met…
Annika: who said we never met?
Shivaay: I do remember I never met you b4…if we have met than till now we would’ve babies *chuckles*
Annika: haha…I’ve met you but in some other way I mean I dressed up in different way so none can recognize me…
Shivaay: really?
Annika: yeah I used to visit Mansion and your office empire as a sales girl name kritika
Shivaay: from whom maa bought beauty stuff…
Annika: yeah…
Shivaay: wow than?
Annika: than this way I used to keep an eye on your activities working on you I mean in your activities gathering every information except your personal I didn’t collect it as it was arranged by muffin so while reading the notes made by muffin I used to feel for you and seeing you daily I fell in love with you…I didn’t know when and at which time I fell so deeply in love with you but that doesn’t matter the thing mattered was love and I love you…
Shivaay: I never thought anyone can love me this much…5 long years…I love you too annika
Annika: how much you missed me in these 2 days?
Shivaay: *stretching his arms* itna saraaaa {a lot}
Annika: really?
Shivaay: yeah…you know I even cried missing you…
Annika: awww
Shivaay: btw surprise was amazing…
Annika: you liked it?
Shivaay: yeah…now I’ll make something for you
Annika: but why?
Shivaay: so that you get fine soon…
Annika: than you must make something desi…
Shivaay: as you say let me dress your wound than I’ll make something for you…
Annika: no sit with me for some time than dressing…
Shivaay: annika as you say…
They both sat there talking while shivaay kept on brushing her hair through his fingers…
@om’s room
Om: tell me what do you mean by loved you from past 5 years…
Gauri: actually when this mission started we started collecting information regarding your family and you annika was working on shivaay bhaiya as she was senior your name and picture was given to me…and I used to meet you daily to know your daily activities…
Om: but we never met…
Gauri: do you remember chitra?
Om: yeah that paint seller…
Gauri: yeah that was me only…
Om: are you serious?
Gauri: yes…I changed my attire to know you and in that process I fell for you…I liked your honesty…your talks…your behavior with everyone…I loved everything about you and soon I fell in love with you…and when we were ordered to enter in your life as someone whom you need we were feeling as someone gifted us heaven…but soon we started feeling guilty for hiding such a big thing from you all…we were not able to understand what should we do…but somehow we managed and look today everything is nearly fine…
Om: gauri I’m so proud of you…I’m lucky to have you as my life partner…you controlled your emotions hid your love and acted as a friend with me…I don’t know how I should thank you I know whatever you did was your duty but you have saved all of us from such a big problem…I can’t even imagine what would’ve happened if you weren’t there…
Gauri: everything is done by annika…I can’t take the whole credit…this all got successful just because of annika…hadn’t she met us nothing would’ve happened…
Om: but how you met her? I mean you are orphan and she has her family…what happened that you both met and how this PS took place? And who made this PS
Gauri: this is a long story and it is linked with king because of whom we are here…he is the reason of our meeting…because of him we met…all is because of him and I would like to tell this all with bhavya and annika beside me…as it is related to them too…and they also need to tell this to rudra and jiju so it’ll be better to tell this in a group so nothing is missed…
Om: but when you’ll tell us?
Gauri: there are 3 more people’s whom we want you people to meet and they will come once all is done so till than we can’t tell you because they are also a part our past and they are the one because of whom we are here and whatever we are today is because of them only…
Om: looks like you are really attached with them?
Gauri: yeah?
Om: your tears…you’re crying gauri…talking about them you’re crying…
Gauri realizing: yeah I’m missing them it’s been 1 year and few months we hadn’t met them yet…
Om: dint worry in few days everything will be fine than you’ll know…
Gauri: om promise me you will never leave me? no matter what the situation will be?
Om: I promise you…my jaan
Gauri hugs him: I love you, om…
Om: I love you too gauri…
——-scene back to shivika…
Shivaay: now it’s getting too late let me dress your wound than food also need time to cook and medicnes time will be gone if we will sit here like this only…
Annika: medicines? No!
shivaay: I didn’t asked you I told you and shivaay singh oberoi never listens any NO
Annika: huh…
Shivaay: stop acting and sit now…
He takes out medical box from his side table and starts dressing her wound…
Annika: you know billu ji …when you blow on my wound it tickles me…
Shivaay: really?
annika: yeah…shivers run through my body…
Shivaay smiling blows on the wound: and now you felt?
Annika: no because it is now numb…the ointment you applied has anesthesia in it so the wound doesn’t pain much…
Shivaay: ufff spoiled the romantic moment now come it’s done we will make something for you…
Annika: yay we?
Shivaay: you’ll see and I’ll make so we will make
Annika: huhhh…
He lifts her and walks to kitchen and make her sit on the corner of the kitchen counter and starts taking out the things needed to make palak panner suggested by annika…
Annika: why you are lifting me I got shot on shoulder not on leg
Shivaay: my wish I’ll lift you whenever I want okay?
Annika: okay why will I say no when I don’t need to walk and even reach the place I want to go…
Just than ruvya and rikara enters…
Om: shivaay you didn’t called us? Why? We also need to eat something such a mean brother you are…
Annika: oh hello long hair oberoi…he is making this for me not for himself and if you need to eat you need to make it by yourself don’t call my billu ji mean…
Rudra chuckles: wow bhabi devar fight?
Om: we aren’t fighting rudra…
Bhavya: he is duffer he will never understand these things…
Gauri: oye choco chip don’t you dare call my rudy bhaiya duffer…
rudra: wow someone on my side…I love you gauri di…
om: she is your bhabhi rudra…
rudra: and b4 bhabhi she is my di you long hair creature…
bhavya: and rudra don’t you dare talk like this with om bhaiya…
shivaay: guys what is wrong with you? Why you’re behaving like kids…?
Annika: om started…
Om: no this rudra started…
Rudra: me?
Gauri: no bhavya started…
Bhavya: hey you started…
Shivaay: stop it you all I started it okay?
Annika: haww? Why you did this shivaay?
Om: I never expected this from you…
Gauri: bade bhaiya how can you do this?
Rudra: because of you we were fighting…
Bhavya: not good bhaiya…
Shivaay: oh god where I’m stuck…
All laughs at him
Shivaay: I’ll not leave you let me finish making this…
Gauri: bade bhaiya are you serious why you’re cutting vegetable so slowly?
Shivaay: if I’ll cut it in speed I’ll also cut my finger along with vegetables…
Gauri: give it to me…I’ll cut it for you…
Shivaay gives the knife to gauri and taking it she rolls it in her hands (knife stunts)
Shivomru: wow…
And she cuts all in a minute…
Gauri: done…
Shivaay clapping: just wow amazing…
Rudra picking a coriander leaf from the vegetable basket: here is your prize bhabi…
Om bowing down his head: applause to you…
Annika: it’s nothing we do more things like this and more than this…
Bhavya: we used to finish making in just 5 minutes…and the rest time of cooking…
Rudra: are you people chef’s?
Om: no I think they are magicians…
Shivaay: same here so much knowledge nearly of everything…
Annika: it isn’t hard to learn everything…
Rudra: but it is hard to learn so much in short time I don’t think you people can hide your ages so till I know you’re not some 50 years old women’s …
Bhavya: yeah…we aren’t but still we learnt na…
Shivaay: how you learnt cooking?
Annika: we used to cook since childhood…because we never depended on anyone in orphanage we used to cook for everyone without any force I mean we did it with our own happiness…
Om: and rest?
Gauri: actually we wanted to be a police officer and started our courses but soon we met someone who helped us in making what we are now…and to do missions we used to read about different things…in missions we used to change our attire’s and with attire we also need to change our profession accordingly…
Rudra: samjha nahi mein {I didn’t understand}
Bhavya: mean…if our mission was related to some doctor or anyone from medical field than we need to learn everything about it…if business than about it…and if teacher than need not because we already know a lot…
Shivaay: okay so you all know everything?
Annika: yeah nearly we know everything…
Om: lucky han… you can get job anywhere…
Gauri: not really we never have no degrees to any learnt thing…
Rudra: I think who made a PS and helped you a lot can also get you degrees…
Bhavya: we never do illegal things…
Shivaay: leave it all they need not to do any jobs…
Annika: as we aren’t quitting our PS
Om: but your mission will be completing na?
Gauri: that doesn’t mean there will be no new problem…ever again…
Rudra: mean you’ll not behave like normal girls ever always OFFICERS?
Bhavya: uf-oo rudy now we are behaving like normal girls only…and after mission will end…I don’t think there will be any problem soon so chill…
Shivaay: dinner is ready…
Soon they dispersed to the table and started eating…
Om: gauri it’s yummy…
Shivaay: but I made this…
Om: it was cut by gauri that’s why it is yummy…
Rudra: bhaiya o has become praya dhan…now all the credit to di?
Om: rudra I haven’t done any engagement shivaay is the one praya dhan now he got engaged…
Shivaay: uhh…
Rudra: what uhh? He is telling the truth only…
Shivaay: rudra your double face idiot…changed the party?
Annika: shivaay don’t worry I’m with you…
Bhavya: me too…
Gauri: me too…
Omru: cheating we are just 2 and you 4
Bhavya: doesn’t matter…
Om: gauri I praised you…
Gauri: when I didn’t make this I can’t even get praised okay?
Rudra laughs: O honesty…haha your second version now you feel it how it feels when someone spoils everything because of their honesty and truth telling logic…
Om hits him lovely: I hate you rudra…
Rudra: yeah I know because I’m not your brother I was adopted na…
Shivaay giggles and Aniriya gets ready to enjoy the drama…
Om: shivaay I told you not to stop this adopted child of mom and dad but you didn’t listen to me…
Rudra: I hate you both…I will leave now only…
Annika: no don’t leave us…
Rudra: no bhabhi…ops sorry di… I can’t call you bhabi when shivaay isn’t my own real bhaiya …
Bhavya: what do you mean?
Rudra: they only know that I’m adopted but they don’t know that shivaay bhaiya is also adopted…
Shivaay: fhat the wuck? I wasn’t adopted rudra…
Rudra: I know you’re…
Shivaay: the truth is that none of us (shivru) is adopted but Om is the one adopted…
Gauri: oh that’s why he is different from you both…?
Rudra: oh yes exactly…deep meaning om…you’re not an oberoi…
Dadi comes from behind of them and Aniriya sees her and giggles…
Om: rudra he is trying to manipulate you; truth is that only shivaay was adopted that’s why he *dadi twists his ear* ahhhhh
Dadi: now say na?
Om: dadi leave na it’s paining a lot…rudra started this all…twists his na…
Dadi twisting rudra’s ear: why you said like this…
Rudra: dadi they both says it all the time that I’m adopted child and they found me near dumping yard…
Dadi: they’re not telling the truth…in fact you all (shivomru) are adopted…
Rudra making cry faces: it means it was really a truth I’m adopted…
Shivaay: I never thought this will be a truth…
Om: O MY MAATA no…
Girls fits into laughter…
Annika: oh god this is so funny…
Gauri: di thank God we never behaved in such way…
Bhavya: they are really dumbo…
Shivaay: I’m not adopted na dadi…
Annika: ufff shivaay don’t behave dumbly how can you all be adopted?
Dadi: they have no brain that’s why they’re behaving in this way I never thought my grandsons will be so much senseless…
Gauri: dadi even I never thought om who says deep sayings all the time will have nothing in his upper floor…
Shivomru: upper floor?
Bhavya: mind…
Dadi: you are done with eating girls go to your room now!
Boys: but dadi…
dadi: no ifs no buts now…you also go boys
girls leave to their room and boys to their room’s
@king’s mansion
King: damn why the hell he isn’t picking my call?
Guru: who?
King: whose name should I tell you? None is picking my call…neither anyone from Russia…none from Delhi none from here Mumbai…
Guru thinking: I think his end is near…why I feel like some one knows everything about us…
Guru: king whom you’re calling now?
King: vikram and roop but they’re not picking it…
Guru: it’s night maybe they’re sleeping…
King: don’t they know…that I need each and every minute’s info and I don’t care If they are sleeping or not…
Guru: calm down and come I need to have a talk with you…
They both leaves…
———-next morning…
Guru got call from vikram…
Guru: where the hell are you vikram?
Vikram: OM it’s a golden chance for us I don’t think we will afford losing it…
Guru: what do you mean?
Vikram: oberoi’s are searching for girls today for 3 of them…and marriage will happen today only…
Guru: why?
Vikram: annika’s video broke shivaay and omru are heartbroken as gauri and bhavya ditched them and in anger they took this decision now it’s the right time for you to come to OM with 3 girls and say that I told you about girls finding…
Guru: are you sure?
Vikram: 1000% sure…
Guru: okay I’m coming…
Vikram was shown calling on gunpoint…
Gauri: nice…
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Guru left with three girls…and reached OM
@OM
Naren (guru) entered in mansion and none stopped him from entering…
Pinky: guru ji you here?
Guru: yes, I got to know you’re searching for girls I’ve 3
Jhanvi: yes, guru ji we are searching…
Guru: your search is over beta…I’ve 3
Shivaay: I don’t need any I’ve one…I’m marrying ragini now at night…
Guru: 3 girls including ragini…and other 2 are orphans and I’m like father to them…
Tej: perfect so it’s decided that we will be marrying them with 3 brothers by night?
Bhavya: no you can’t do this with me…rudra I’m telling you it’s not like the way you’re thinking it to be…
Rudra: I know very well now what you’re in real…don’t even think that I’ll come in your 2 number talks…
Om: khanna throw her out of the mansion…
Khanna comes and takes her out of the mansion…
Shakti: where are girls?
Guru: outside I’ll ask them to come…
He calls them and they enter…
Ragini: I knew it shivaay you’ll marry me only…now why are you wearing annika’s ring still?
Shivaay: I’ll remove it by going to jeweler shop it is tight need to be cut…
Ragini: okay baby…
Khanna comes: everything will be done by evening now only you need to get ready…
Pinky: come I’ll show you your room where you need to get ready…
Shivaay: I know you’ve only mother and brother call them here…so they can enjoy this wedding…
Ragini: sure…
Guru: you get ready I’ll call them…
Om: guru ji come I’ll show you your room for today…
They all starts getting ready in their own rooms…
@evening…
The hall was decorated and there was a mandap in the middle for their marriage…
All gathers in hall and girls and boys sits in mandap for the marriage…
Shivaay: they didn’t come?
Ragini: they will get late…muhrat is passing let’s start the ritual…
Pandit starts the mantra’s and the garland was done shivomru were looking at door again and again…phera’s started…and soon they were sitting to fill the mang
Shivaay’s POV
Where is this samar and her mom, I can’t fill her mang oh god our plan Is on the verge of backfiring…
Rudra’s POV
They haven’t come yet and marriage will be completed soon…come fast why this plan…I can’t marry this witch…
Om’s POV
What should I do now? They haven’t come and marriage is going to be complete anytime soon…where are you gauri?
Pandit: fill the mang and make them wear mangalsutar…
They nodes and does this
Pandit: marriage is completed …
Shivaay’s tears starts flowing rudra turns his face toward her mother and om just sit like a soulless body…
Jhanvi to pinky: we lost? Being so near of wining we lost pinky? They got married really…
Pinky: we made a wrong plan?
Samar and her mom enters…
Ragini: bhaiya you’re so late…we got married…
Samar: mom wasn’t fine so came here after checkup…
Jhanvi to pinky: what if we weren’t able to stop the marriage we will complete this plan and save her…and pinky nodes
Pinky: O MY MAATA samdhan g what happened to you? Why you’re on wheel chair?
Samar: in accident he legs got paralyzed…
Pinky walks to him: come I’ll take her in you come with ragini?
Samar: sure why not?
Pinky in fast walk takes her to the side where her family was standing…
B4 samar could walk Aniriya came closing the main door…
Annika: where are you going Samar jeet Malhotra…
They (enemy) turns to the voice…
Shivomru takes a back and stands with their family…
Guru: you here?
Gauri: why you’re so surprised naren?
Ragini: why you all are here?
Bhavya: we are here to finish your game…
Samar: what game?
Annika: KING! Game
Samar takes out his gun and bhavya shots him on his hand and gauri picks his gun…
Samar: hell why you shot me?
Annika: really? Then what else we should’ve done? Seeing you taking out a gun…
Samar: I wasn’t going to shoot anyone…
Gauri: yeah you were Gonna do arti of that?
Guru: shutup you all…who are you and annika you here?
Annika: you send a wrong girl to Russia…naren…you sent senior army person to Russia…common don’t be surprised don’t you know about your destruction happened in Russia?
Guru: oh now I know why none there were picking my call…
Bhavya: correction…not your call your king’s call…
Ragini: well if you’re done with it let me tell you nothing can be done now as we are married with shivomru…
Shivika, rikara and ruvya looks at eachother…shivomru were crying…
Annika: oh really…do you know for marriage Pandit is needed…
Guru: are you blind can’t you see the priest standing there…
Gauri: who? Oh that man? But he isn’t priest…
Samar: I think you’ve lost your minds with shock…
Bhavya: that you will lose…
Priest: let me clear it…
He starts removing his fake things…and it is revealed that the person is none other than khanna…
Ragini: well let me tell you marriage doesn’t require priest all the time sometime it is done only by MS and sindoor…so we are still married I’ve seen in movies…
Annika: I knew it you’ll say something like this only…so let me now tell you that the sindoor in your mang isn’t sindoor really but grind sugar with red food color…
Gauri: and mangalsutar isn’t mangalsutar is our locket’s of white color and we painted them like MS…
Shivomru smiles at the cleverness of their lady love’s
Soon Aniriya ties guru ragini and samar on the chair’s
Annika: now naren you need to call your boss here…
Gauri: if you want to sneak out and be safe from any charges trap him and leave we will not involve you in any of the cases…
Guru: give it in written…
Bhavya writes and gives him that…
Guru: okay now I’ll call…
On call…
Guru: boss G we are successful come here and take your personal revenge…
King: …
Guru: yes, they are married now…and marriage is registered now we’ve claimed the diamonds…
King: …
Guru: okay I’ll be waiting for you do bring MK too let her see the destruction of oberoi’s…
King: …
Guru: yeah roop and vikram are here too…
King: …
Guru: come soon buddy…
Annika cuts the call and snatches the paper from him…
Gauri: you’ll get this paper let him come and then you can go…
Samar: I’ll not leave you all…you don’t know with whom you’re messing…your duty will take your life damn girls…
Bhavya: this isn’t only duty…not for love only…this is our revenge…and we will take revenge at any cost dude…
Ragini: revenge…
Annika: oh your king didn’t told you anything? No worries…we will tell you let him come and there’s more for you to know and then you’ll regret working for him…
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So guys this is this 12th part of this FF…I hope you’ll enjoy it too the way you all enjoyed the last one…
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Dear’s I’m sorry for the late update as I was out of city…few more chapters and this fanfiction will end…
And I wanted a suggestion do you all want the marriage of all together or separate?
Sorry for the late….
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Do comment both positive-negative are welcomed…
I had tried adding everything but if something is missing do tell it in comment box below…
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I was overwhelmed by the comments I got from silent and other readers keep commenting it just takes few minutes or seconds…thank you guys for reading my FF
THANKYOUSOMUCH EVERYONE
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Annie signing off- tc see you soon stay safe and stay tuned…
28 Comments
Superb yaar.. Plzz do post the next update ASAP.. Loved it to the coreeeee.. U nailed it to the coreeeee
Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awesome fabulous mind blowing part loved it to the core ??????shivomru and aniriya scenes was fabulous…really u give me a mini heart attack in their fake marriage but finally marriage is not real I’m happy about that waiting for next part update soon
Hahah thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Amazing….I loved it…specially the individual scenes of three jodis after revelation…..
Now the story is reaching its climax…can’t wait to read the whole plot….
About the marriages, since the genre of this story is crime thrillers, u can keep the marriages all together n maybe in that give individual lines…I mean it’s just a suggestion, this is your story so your take….
Whatever it is, plz post soon…..n take care…bye!
Awww thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤❤yeah even I’m thinking of that only??tC
its awesome dear..u can keep all the marriages together along with individual lines for the jodis
Yeah thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤❤
Awsome part
Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤
Wonderful update dr….. Post nxt part soon…
Nd yeh i want separate marraige….
Thankyousomuch ❤❤❤❤❤
It is awesome dear
Thankyousomuch ??❤
Superb update dear. Looking forward to next part. Let them have separate marriage s please
Thankyousomuch okay❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Hi dr i’m a silent reader. Sry I couldn’t comment before coz I had exams.bt i read all d prts of ur ff till nw.love dis ff so much. Feeling sad knowing dat dis will end soon. Hope u’ll come back vth another ff after dis.plz post d nxt epi soon dr.bye tc
Hi thankyousomuch dear no need to be sorry for this I’m happy you’ve read alll parts…yeah planning to write something new after it…. bye tC❤❤❤❤❤❤
Fantastic dr…. lovely… amazing… loved it to d core…. still d REVENGE mystery is left to be unfold…. waiting for dat… phenomenal… post nxt soon… loved their adopted n obro moments…
Tc…
Thankyousomuch ?❤?❤?❤??❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤
N yeah I like separate marriage 4 them
Oh ookay ❤
Amazing story dear, thank you so much
Thankyousomuch ?❤❤??❤?❤?❤?❤?❤?❤
Wonderful… Superb… Amazing….loved each n every scene….
Wooowwww its just wonderful
Amazing epi !!! Sry sry… kaan pakad ke sry for such a late comment.
Shivika scenes were so nice. He was carryin her in his arms everywhere… aww caring singh oberoi ?. He wasn’t even angry on her for hiding such a big truth frm him… and the most imp thing was tht his trust in her didn’t shake even for a moment… wish shivay was like this in ishqbaaz. Anika lyin down in shivay’s lap ?… it’s a beautiful feelin. Shivay makin food esp for her and omru feelin left out ?. Bechara while tryin to solve the prblm got stuck in it only ?.
Gauika scene was also good. Now finally om trusts her fully. So all three of them love the obros frm the past 5 yrs… wow so nice. Their scene at the dinin table was so funny…. deep meaning oberoi has nthn in his upper floor ?.
Ruvya scene was also very nice. The wau bhavya explained rudy abt her mission and why she couldn’t tell him was very nice. Nice to see tht bhavya knws her limits…. and rudy also understands. Bechare rudy ko hamesha adopted kehte rahte hain ?.
Shivomru and aniriya scene at the dining table was very nice. They had a lot of fun aftr so much of tension runnin arnd.
Wht a plan of aniriya… even if they reached late and marriage happened.. it was fake. Khanna as the pandit ( would love to see him like tht ?)…Sugar instead of sindoor and normal necklace instead of mangalsutra… shoes instead of varmala would have been hilarious for the girls esp nagini ( for her snakes instead of varmala would have been perfect) ?. Shivomru ki halath tight hui hogi. Nagini… samar and tht guru in aniriya captive. I kinda felt like tht guruji was leavin a clue for tht king but he wasn’t able to get it.
It was just amazing. Sry for commentin so late. Take care and love u ❤❤❤❤❤
I waited and waited and only waited for your comment? i missed you…but it’s okay there must be some reasons behind late comments…welll hope you’re doing fine 13 and 14 is also posted do read and tell if you liked it and and… do give me ideas regarding marriage if you have any ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ no need to be sorry ❤ love u too tc tOo???❤???❤???❤???❤???❤