Hi guys!! Sorry for the late update as Im juggling between my exam portfolio preparations and internship works….Thanks a lot for Those wonderful comments.. I’m overwhelmed with your response!!Here’s the next one..
Swara leaves sanskaar dumbstruck…He stands wondering what must have happened to this meek girl..and goes near the window..He takes a paper & pen & jumps over the window pane ..there..he sits on the sunshade of the window (this room is For guests in MM mansion..Waise bhi no one wishes to see hanging legs through their window @ night)..Sanskaar starts writing something….whenever he is dull or confused he starts writing his own piece of poetry composition..The Frame is Zoomed to sanskaar’s verses..
“ Time would just pass away my soulmate
That would heal your pain..it’s fate
that gave me this pain for only
I know still I love you..This lonely
Life without you is a hell..please
Come back my princess!!”
Our love is like two hearts looped in a single string..”
His pen disobeys sanskaar..he gets frustrated and throws it away..(his mind ponders around swara…& what happened today)He holds his head like a psych and feels like shouting loudly ….how can he say he is just helpless & wants her back in his life ….This was probably the worst piece he has ever written…He is just faking himself …and for him she is his love and life …He rewinds his moments with her…(kaun tujhe bgm starts)
“Tu aata hai seene mei jab jab saane bharti hu
teri dil ki galiyon se mein har roz guzarthi hoon
Hawa ke jaise Chalta he tu mein retjaisi udhti hoon
Kaun tujhe yu pyaar karega jaise mein yeh karti hoon
Meri nazar ka safar tujh phi hi aake rukhe……………..
Kehna tha jo keha chukhe…”
The song fades slowly as tears roll down sanky’s eyes …He grabs hold of the pane & gets in ..The screen darkens…
Sanskaar wakes up and finds swara missing again..
Sanskaar: what is cooking in her mind these days..?? I must do something..
Swara enters the room dressed up In a bright lovely pink saree ..
Sanskaar: swara its just 7 ..are u leaving somewhere?
Swara: no..
Sanskaar: Then..
Swara leaves without responding..Sanskaar gets angry seeing her attitude and jumps out of the bed..he blocks her way and drags her to the room ..bolts the door..he pins her to the wall..
Sanskaar: What the hell do you think of yourself?? Didn’t you hear me..I was asking you a question…& whats that attitude you leave like that??
Swara: It means Im not interested in saying about my whereabouts to you..
Sanskaar: you should say it to me..and have to..
Swara: why should I ????
Sanskaar: You should ..
Swara: I cant and wont..& what is the need I should report to you everytime I leave ???
Sanskaar presses her hand hard ..
Sanskaar: swara ..stop arguing …!!
Swara : first you stop hurting me..leave my hand sanskaar..waise bhi tum..
Sanskaar: chup swara..mujhe kuch(swara interrupts him continuously speaking without listening him)Swara! Chup kar!!
Swara: mein tumhari patni..(Anyone guessed already???)
Sanskaar stares at her saying “haan..you are my wife na???” and goes near her swara’s bak-bak fades and she stammers seeing him coming close to her…& Holds her from back….sanskaar runs his hands slowly around swara’s waist ..Swara’s eyes widens and she gulps..
Swara: sans..(her voice fades slowly as sanskaar blows her hair strands back ..)
Swara feels his hot breath on her neck..she gets nervous and Crushes her dress ..Sanskaar kisses on her nape & slowly runs his hands around her bare waist ..swara breathes heavily ..she just wanted to push him..but now she couldn’t move even a bit..her hands have turned ice cold …He keeps smooching her nape and turns her facing him..he cups her face and grips her waist pulling her towards him..She keeps looking on sanskaar while he is very sensually Caressing her hair ..he has just lost his fake hate in front of the love of his life..For that second he only thought of her..swara !! his love..his princess!He Cups her face & moves towards her lips..Swara closes her eyes as sanskaar is just a few inches away ..when he is just an inch away..swara opens her eyes and pushes sanskaar..
Swara: Idiot!!
Sanskaar: what happened??
Swara: don’t you have sense??
Sanskaar: you only na said Im ur husband so naturally don’t I have the rights to even kiss my wife?
Swara: No
Sanskaar: yes I have..
Swara: No..you Don’t..
Sanskaar: when you demand other rights as a wife..then why cant I take my advantage as a husband ??
Swara: Are’nt we going to get divorced??then why taking..(she stammers)
Sanskaar: But we aren’t divorced till now right?
Swara: So what?
Sanskaar: So I can….
Swara: No..noo.no sanskaar..
Sanskaar: ok then give me a valid reason then I”ll not kissss (he stresses that word to irritate her)..
Swara: uhh…vohhh..ahmmm..
Sanskaar moves towards her..
Swara: (To herself : kuch toh soch swara!!!)
Swara’s face gleams like a 1000W bulb (probably she got some reason).She goes near sanskaar and ..
Swara: You ……
Sanskaar: me…
Swara : Cant kiss me because ..
Sanskaar: because??
Swara: you didn’t brush your teeth..
Sanskaar: huhhh???? Isn’t it kiddish??
(Of course she is too kiddish..I was laughing while writing this ..)
Swara: No ..Ab jao Meri patidev aur brush kar..yeh tumhari dress pehnke ready ho jao…
She moves back slowly as she speaks and runs away closing the door..
Sanskaar: I could feel …her face ..eyes reveals..her love For me..I hope she changes like how she was before..but still …I wont divorce her at any cost..But what about my promise to sakshi Di…!??
He looks confused posing his hands on his waist..Suddenly he Feels something behind…the door was moving back and forth..He turns and finds no one..he nods his head disapprovingly and closes the door..
She peeps after hearing the door closure ..obviously its sakshi…
Sakshi: agar swara iss ka attitude continue hoga..no..no…this attitude of hers is drawing sanskaar towards her..its not good!!!Kuch toh karna padega..Dont worry swara I’ll soon put an end card to your love story..Time for my trump card moment!! Watch out swara!! Ab aayega asli mazaa..
@ college:
Sanskaar parks his car and rushes as he is already late..But he stops a second finding some people crowded..
Sanskaar: whats with these people??always poking nose into others business..
Ankit: haan voh toh ek dum sacch..
Sanskaar: hey bud!!
Ankit: Haan..why is your voice exploding with excitement & enthusiasm?? Whats the matter???
Sanskaar: wohh bud!!
Ankit gets a call &laughs aloud
Sanskaar: what ??everything fIne na??? Bud..areyy stop laughing yaar!!
Ankit: (controlling his laugh)..Huhh..voh actually ..someone is proposing his love to a girl..ur girl!!
Sanskaar: So..
Ankit: buddd..u still don’t get me uh?? Ohh man !! a boy is proposing to your wife..
Sanskaar: what????who is that??
Ankit: actually ur wife has many secret admirers…most of them are behind her..My 10 fingers are not enough to count them..(He smiles naughtily…)but you know the best part??
Sanskaar: what?
Ankit: you cant do anything about it..(Laughs)..i hope she will accept his proposal because the boy seems handsome(He didn’t even see the guy ..just irritating sanskaar)..ohh k bud come lets go to canteen!!!
The screen freeZes on an annoyed sanskaar..
Precap: Sanskaar slaps a guy and later swara and sanskaar dance together..
HOPE YOU LIKE THIS EPISODE PLEASE LEAVE YOUR VALUABLE COMMENTS..IT MEANS A LOT TO ME..AND I WILL TRY TO POST THE NEXT ONE SOON!!!AND IM WORSE IN ROMANCE PART.SO FORGIVE ME IF IT WAS BAD..and Thanks to all who have been commenting throughout my ff..& I spl thanks to rosey & the FB readers..Thanks guys..I was overhelmed when I saw ur comments…keep supporting me..
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Honestly i didn’t understand 1st scene then again i read dat. Bt sakshi dis much grey? God
he sits on the sunshade of the room exactly below his room..by jumping over the window pane of his room..Sorry yaar..if it was confusing!!
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hey thanks dear..I didnt expect ur comments and Im happy u like it..will post it soon dear!!