Hai frnds??….this is moni die heart fan of ZKM….???
My first OS….
……..?FEBRUARY ❤ Month of LOVE?…….
? Spl dedication to all lovable couples?
?“The real act of marriage takes place in the heart❤not in the ballroom or church or synagogue. It’s a choice you make – not just on your wedding day, but over and over again – and that choice is reflected in the way you treat your husband or wife.”?
?………? ETERNAL LOVE STORY?……….?
?Introduction……..
………….?characters?…….
✳Shaurya khanna….business man
✳Mehak khanna……house wife
✳Sidharth khanna…. surprise package
✳Karuna…… shaurie’s mom
✳Kanta nd jeevan..m. chachi nd cha-cha
✳mansi nd ravi..m.chachi nd cha-cha
✳Mohit and Nehal…m.cousins
✳Swetlana…..s.mami
✳Sanjay……s.mama
✳Shruti , vicky…s.cousin..
?Cameo role….Dimple….
Scene:-1……. Shaurya’s Manson?
…….One busy Monday morning……
Karuna ? Awara (servant)….yes mam…make it fast ..ji mam…(in kitchen)
?Next we peeping into Svetlana’s room
She didn’t wake up!!…still in bed (hang over)
(Fulla kudichittu flat ,wow family women)
✳Shruti and Vicky’s room:-
She doing her make-up?….heavy makeup(with wild hairstyle, black sleeveless short gown,long earring triangle )
?Vicky brushing his teeth?….suddenly he saw shruti in the mirror and scared…. started shouting bhoot bhoot(pei pei)?…oh no plz save me witch witch!!!!….
?Shruti gets Angry …shut up vicky ?…in what aspect am looking like a witch tell me??
Hmm in every aspects(paaaaaaaaaaaaah po de make up ka kammi panu kannu valikuthu)
Just go and remove the makeup
?Shruti…wat did u say vicky…nthg baby just kidding?…(ivlo makeup podra)
Finally !!!going to meet our love birds MEHRYA…..Door is already opened
yes !!!…first room in 2nd floor
Walls are painted with cream color highlighted with pink wallpapers (shaurya hate pink)and dark blue wall art works……
?A girl in plain green color saree, half sleeve blouse,with mid partition loose hair….
She is Shaurya’s Pretty Mehak .?..?
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Shaurya ?…. snoring like driving a bullet bike?
❣Mehak trying to wake him up..but he is not responding happily sleeping with snoring so
She shouted .??. Shaurya khanna!! shaurya khanna,!!!… finally he opened his eyes..haan wat mehak plz let me sleep sunday oly na…. feeling sleepy
Shaurya … today is Monday!!!
Shaurya ?Mehak …wat Monday?
Oh no … having foreign client meeting at 11 pm…wat to do wat to do!!!!
First go and take bath … come to dining room..have breakfast and go to office..
Wow Mehak …good idea…
Mehak ?good idea???.. nowadays he became too lazy…not doing regular workouts..
?Mr.Fitness freak became lazy boy…?
(Mehak ..wat shaurie…u r looking damn cute in green color saree… love u gundus?(motu)..mehak widen her eyes me gundu ….. shaurie ?..chi po!!!…am not fat (gundu)…am chubby chubby and bubbly..???…
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Scenes:-2…..Dining hall
Mehak is in kitchen preparing spl dish for shaurie….nthng fruit salad ??!..cutting fruits… someone standing behind her.. trying to hold her hand ..she jerks!!..cut her finger…oops it is shaurya…sry Mehak sry … nthg shaurie just a small cut…wait i vl get ur salads..he wipe the blood and kissed her finger..they share an eyelock …?Naan un azhaginilae deivam unarugiren undhan aruginilae ennai unarugiren?(am seeing god in ur Beauty,and am feeling myself better )
?He is about to kiss mehak?interrupted by sudden entry of Svetlana??? (villi).. shaurie murmured ..fox !!she don’t have any other work..always a big problem for me..(konjam neram sandhosham ma irukka vida matra)
?Svetlana… shaurie darling…wat are u doing in kitchen??.. cutting veggies??..
No mami ji ..came to drink water..
Oh water!!!..hmm with (heavy smirks)
Mehak ..get me the salad soon!! Oki shaurie
Mami … Mehak where’s my chocolate milk drink??
Here is it !!… thanks mehak..
After some time…….
Mehak eating poori with paneer butter masala.??… shaurie saw her and started laughing… Mehak don’t eat this much oily foods..u put up weight !!…u don’t worry i won’t …hey gundus (motu)… already u looking a poori ?..kannom la nalla bun madhiri irukku(bun like cheeks)… nowadays it is difficult for me to lift u also..reduce ur weight….amul baby…
Bye c u later…
I never mind…Am hungry…nice poori ??…
(Unakku poramai dhanae shaurie… jealousy )
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Scene:-3…. shaurya’s office
?Shaurie shouting at his manager/workers..i don’t want any excuses…u plp have to do it..or else i will fire u all… phone rings……??…??.??…he smiles …Mehak is calling..?
Yes ladoo…. shaurie m leaving old delhi to chachi’s house some function it seems..
Wen vl u back mehak..i don’t know..oki take care bye..luv u Mehak..luv u too…
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Scene:-4……Mehak’s house
Nehal and mohit fighting for the tv remote
Surprised to see mehak..wow..mehak di..
They 3 hugged each other….
Mansi and kanta chachi busy in kitchen…ravi and jeevan making arrangements for the functions…
Mehak ..chachi , cha-cha… Mehak putar..come come!!….how are u..
Am good..
Chachi u became lean…
But di u became fat…yes I know……..why everyone is saying the same thing..mehak u became fat fat fat….!!!!… it’s oki leave it…
?Nehal started teasing mehak ..di i know …wat u know…i know …nehal wat… tell me yaar….
Jiju called me …wat shaurie y??…he told me ur di is coming…tell her to reduce weight…
?Mehak… shaurie??.. unakku irukku iru de(wait shaurie vl see you)…..
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Scene:- 5…… Shaurya’s Manson
Evening….around…6.30pm.
Shaurya started missing mehak….suddenly get a call from mehak….hello madam ….am shaurya khanna…mehak khanna’s poor hubby …u remember…yeah yeah I know….
I want to see u Mehak…come to old delhi …bye shaurie chachi is calling me…vl call u later..luv u bye…. shaurie saw a little girl standing in the corner…….
____________FLASH BACK___________
23 years Back…….busy delhi road…….
A naughty 6 year old boy…with schl bag on his back and holding lunch bag….kutty shaurya khanna…big shot’s son
A cute chubby 5 year old girl..coming to schl…primary schl
Kutty mehak sharma??
☸First of day school……mehak is new to schl..
She is an orphan living with her chachi kanta…
Shaurie is a playboy..and very naughty??
Used to tease and make fun of teachers also…
Dream boy of LKG A1 section..??
Magical entry of mehak into the classroom…like a angel with school bag…
Shaurie lost in her Beauty….with wide opened mouth(aaha nu pakkaran ?)
He wants to touch and pinch her chubby cheeks………….
?Teacher introduced her to the class …she is mehak sharma..ur new classmate ..say hai to mehak…everyone gets happy seeing her..she too…
Expect one …it is shruti (shaurie’s ex crush)
?Teacher told her to sit with shaurya(good student )
Shaurie ku khanna ladooo thinna asaiya?(want to eat ladoo)….. shaurya yes!!!! yes!!!!…..
➡Hai mehak…am shaurya khanna…hai shaurya… Mehak call me shaurie..oki shaurie…(pesara la illa padrala..ayio…look like she is singing)….
Shaurie try to flirt … Mehak u r looking so beautiful…thanks shaurie.. mehak .. mehak..yes shaurie…if u don’t mind…yes tell me..i want to touch ur chubby cheeks…shall I ???….
Mehak started crying…oh mehak am sry sry sry.
➡Mehak didn’t speak to shaurie after that incident.. shaurie felt bad …so he went and say sry to her … Mehak r u angry with me..no shaurie..nthg like that .. friends ??!!!..
Yeah shaurie… frnds(kadavul irukkan da shaurie)(thank God)……
➡➡➡➡➡➡➡➡➡Days passes……..now both in first standard.. but still shaurie wants to touch her cheeks..and also wants to kiss her cheeks???…
Shruti tried her level best to separate them..but failed …
Varun ..one of his class mate …teases mehak..
Shaurie went and fought with that boy and save mehak like a hero.?
?so mehak is impressed…
She ask him wat u want as a gift for saving her…??✌
Shaurie… i want to kiss u Mehak???
Mehak shocks….she turned and about to leave but he hold her hand and pull her close ..and kissed her???… Mehak didn’t say anything she left…
Shaurie was so happy..hey i kissed her. ?
karuna …wat sharuie ??..wat happened in schl today ..maa finally i kissed her?..
Wat shaurie…maa ..i kissed her i kissed her..new rhymes maa..oh oki oki…
Good boy …keep practicing…maa..rhymes ..oh oki maa…(nalla vela shaurie ..nee veeran da..u should feel proud of u )
Next day morning…..
Surprisingly mehak didn’t say anything ..hai mehak..hai shaurie(enna da idhu silent ta irukka thittu va la illa adipala..be ready shaurie may be she vl slap u)
Shaurie…yes mehak….i like u shaurie??
Wowwwwwwww?
Sweet surprise ??… Mehak u r wrong..sry shaurie..hey u supposed to say i luv u ?..
Mehak blushes???…i luv u Mehak?
Leap…….15 years…..
Both in same clg …
Shaurie…. flirting with juniors girls.. hai girls..am ur senior shaurya khanna….hai bhai(anna)..oh plz don’t call me anna….
Mehak ???..wat …i want to talk to u..(setha da shaurie nee..she gonna kill u)
Mehak….am just talking nthg else..i didn’t ask u anything..(naanae dha olaritano)…
Your mami called me… mamiji!!!… Svetlana?
Let me handle this mehak oki..
Shaurie?karuna…maa am in a relationship with mehak…i want to marry her..i know shaurie maa !!!she is a perfect match for u… congratulations kido…thanks maa..luv u maa..
Shaurie darling…wat mamiji… middle class mehak…oh poor shaurie… mamiji shut up…wer is ur husband???..jail (sanjay mama…)
✳✳✳✳?Both got married?✳✳✳✳
….Wedding night….shared their first kiss(mature) and intimate moments……
______FLASH BLACK ENDS_______
?MEHAK am coming to old delhi….
Someone is knocking at the door… shaurie standing… Mehak shocks seeing him …
She gets emotional and hug him tightly….
Suddenly she fainted…..
Doctor confirms she is pregnant…. Whole family were happy….
?After 10 months……?
blessed with a boy baby……
Siddharth khanna….aka chikku …..
Shaurya….chikku …dad….i hate mom..y chikku she s always scolding me…
I know my son..ur mom (khadoos..)….
Mehak… wat…mom …dad saying u r khadoos..funny mottu irritating…
Shaurie shocks… Mehak no…i said oly khadoos(extra bit la ivan poduran…)
So you said am khadoos?…
(Enakku villan yarum illa ivan dhan dei ..dad tit for tat)…
Mehak sry ?
Dad…enna da(wat)…how to propose a girl ??
Wat propose…hey chikku u r oly 5years old..
Dad am 5 years old?…big boy…i heard someone kissed my mom wen she was 5 years old..(yaru da unaku idhellam sonna who told u )
I heared ur conservations dad?..
So u have to help me dad..??
Dai naa unga appa da(am ur dad)….yes I know dad…so wat ..help me….plz…i love her …
DIMPLE????…
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Scene:- 6….. primary school…
Hai girls….am siddharth khanna…??
Hey beautiful…hey u..
Wat siddhu….call me chikku…
DIMPLE….i luv u…??.
(?Waiting for ur punnagai siridee,come flirt with me … don’t worry don’t worry …hey thirudee steal my heart…hey azhagiyae azhagiyae..hey beautiful?)…….
??❤??DIMPLE similes…?
Chikku yes??✌✌…
Chiku …hey dad thanks…(don’t tell ur mom)…
Dad .. believe me I won’t(ippo dhan da enakku bayama irukku…now oly m getting scared)
Dad m ur son…don’t u believe ur son…?chiku .
At night….mom…i luv dad …mehak i know y …he oly wrote that song na…today u proposed DIMPLE…??
Mom …u r genius…??
? Like Father like son……?
Shaurie… acting like sleeping….vl see u in the morning….(ivana enna pandrathu dai chiku.. vechitan da aappu)(oh no i trusted chiku…it is my fault to trust him after all he is my son… morning am gonna die)
Mehak laughs …..
Luv u shaurie…luv u chikku
My cutie pies….umaaaah???
Story of 3 roses………??❤…???
..……Home sweet Home……???
______________The end______________
Hope u guys like it….thanks for reading my os…sry if i bored you guys…luv u all❤… plz drop your comments??
62 Comments
Very nice moni7?
Thank geeta dear???
Super story. Junior shaurya similar to shaurya ? .please upload another post ?
Thank de hema…oki post pandren????
????? lol… sema sema… ☺☺adhum shaurie oda mind voice… seriyana kd both basanti and rasagulla..?? super family… super os… lovely update..?? this one is for u dr???❤❤
Thanks nive dear…luv u soooooooooo much???❤
Appa pola paiyan…ellam avan vidhi?
Apo onnum panradhuku ila.. Mehak ku DIL ready???
Pudikomo illaiyao nenachen dear…thanks dear
Ipavum Andha doubt irukka.. ? paru ellarkum pidichu irukku.. ☺☺
Nivee ❤❤❤
Nice moonnniiiiiii diiiii…
Its osim..
Thanks u soooooooooo much..swapna dear??????
Sry *sapna
Thanks for your reply guys…love u all?
Dhul kalapitingaa…seemmaa…shaurya oda mind voice….superbb….akkaa…no boring…funny…..I luved it…..onnoru ff illa os eludhunga…..
Thanks priya dear??…hmm os ezhudhara….. enakku suspense pudikkadhu. So no fan fiction…..
hey moni Di. what a os.. just fantastic.
its really cute one. frankly speaking its just lovely.
you wrote very well. so keep writing.
loads of love. tc
Thanks reema Dear???… luv u dear
Hi dear… I don’t know zkm aana sooper uh irunthutu… Tamil counters chance eh illa… Sirichukitte irunthen… 1000 wala maari top speed…. Epdi than yosikiringalo?
..waiting for u’r next…
Thanks dear…???…soon vl post nxt os..un tamil koda super… thanks for ur comment dear..?
Omg mini akka wht an os!!!!!??????….there was so many funny part…shruti applying makeup n Vicky shouting bhoot bhoot?????….. Small shaurie flirting wid small mehek?????…there kiss??????….Siddharth z like shaurie only flirty flirty…….it was really funny yet lovely os????????…..ur writing skill z so good???????…..akka plz accept my one fevor plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz soon post a vry very funny os na plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz akka its my request……seriously akka I
loved dis is from starting to end everything was just perfect……..akka I ll b waiting for ur funny os k……k lov u akka????….keep writing lyk dis…..n plzzzz try to post a funny os plzzzzzzzzz…..?????????????????????????????
With lov??
Urs sweta
Sweta dear…thank u baby???..
Oki oki .. pakka….funny os …i vl post….
Thanks again❤
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For u?
U r most welcome my strawberry????…akka I ll call by dis petpet name k…..n thank u for accepting my request strawberry….lov u too??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????too??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????….strawberry dis hearts from my side…I had accepted ur hearts so u accept mine….
Thanks … strawberry❤✌✌✌..
Me strawberry…wow sweta dear ❤?
Hey hey !!!
Hello moni dear.. I would like to give a detailed response here.. I just loved loved and loved it…. Sooo cute.. And Shaurya was a playboy when he was 6 ?? amazing.. Suits him.. And as usual our laddooo as cute as ever…. Please write some more OS when you get time.. You are perfect at this, an expert to be frank.. Love you for this ??
Thanks a lot for this lovely story of our mehrya ? we just love them…
And amazing lines to begin with.. Marriage is the matter of heart.. Wowww ?? ❤
Vishi dear???..thanks baby?❤…
Thanks again..for ur lovely words??..it means a lot …
Wow di moni darling…my cutie n sweetie…??
Really moni i donno how far u r a good Dentist…LOL??
But i knew u r a excellent writer…✍✍✍
Ennadhu boredom aaaaaa…no way my sweet ???
Excellent,marvelous,outstanding,fantabulous…most important very funny??
Within 1 story u had done magic…from mehrya KG too chikku KG…????
wow wat a thought…hatsoff darling…???
Luv u…dont stop ur thoughts…xpecting more FF from u…???
Atleast daily 1…(rombo asa padromo)???
Irukkattum namma moni thaane…luv u my doll…?????
Dolly darling?…wow thanks dear…naa mokka Dentist dhan??…(tooth removal appo kai la shivering agum building strong basement weak???.. moonji la katta matten ulla marana bayam irukkum???)
Kandipa nxt os post pandren dear… Thank you ??….luv u too dear❤?
Dolly baby…oki inaiku post pandren…..new os..oki va?????
All my lovely sweeties..thanks again..u plp make my sunday …???
Luv u all❤…
Woww. .. amazing .. first i love to read your comments but now your os made me feel so good to read this ff. Funny and romantic awesome. .
Thank salma dear❤
Awesome moni….subrbbbbbb
Thank u shabnam dear?
Most welcome moni….
Moni dr nice OS yarr???……wow wat a creativity di???…..my favorite part was shruti and vicky pei pei super ru athu unmaiyavey pei mathiri tha eruku ana ulaga azhaghi(miss universe)mathiri scene pothutu????……..
Future kids ill be lky tis oly???…….shaurya paiyan shaurya mathiri 420 ah tha erupan athu confirm????…….it was a nice story dr???…….waiting for ur next OS di???
Preethi dear ❤❤❤.. thank you..
Yes avan 420..ivan paiyan 840…?
Moni darling semaya irundhuchi da chance ae ila alludhu. Superb love story like a father like a son chikku character un expected kutty Shaurie.
Love uuuuuu moni sweety. Script semaya ezhudhura. Shaurya mind voice awesome dear. . Adhum 5 yrs laye love play boy kissing scene vallu payan romba superb. funny romantic love story marvellous dear.Happy ending sema sema sema love u ummmah.
Vinitha dear.. thank u.. love u Too???
Yes enakku happy ending dhan pudikom?
Thanks again
Super handsoff you no words say I love lotssssssss???????? come soon with next OS moni
Thank you so much…lavi dear❤❤
Hi Moni dear?
How u?
My mood was off for ZKM, I came to the webpage to read some FFs.
Loving your writing and humour man????
I think you should give the writers of ZKM some guidelines when they writing their scripts.
Hope u have a beautiful day further?
Lots of love??
Hai shama dear…???… Thank you so much dear???…luv u baby?
Hey moni dear…it super duper OS dear…
U made my day with full of smiles….cmng to the plot it’s awesome especially when Vicky screams ? (pei…witch…nejamave Ava pei daan…)and little shaurie…omg appave ennama irunthurkkan payapulla…kissed mehak cheeks I didn’t expect that dear and that rhymes I kissed her kissed her was the highlight…karona ji believed it…ha ha…
Ivan ketathum illama ivan pulaikkum idea kudukran paaren…
Chikku was the surprise package…yean pa ellarum mehak ka otreenga…she is paavam na…
The most imp thng is like father like son…ha ha??
It was totally a pakka entertainment package ???? I loved it to the core…
Sirichu sirichu irumale vanthuttu moni…especially with ur Tamil cmnts…u made my dy…thnks dear…
Keep writing keep smiling and mke us smile more than bfre…
Love you…?? ❤ ❤
Take care dear ?
Thanks dharshini Dear???
Ha ha ha dharshini… thanks again dear.. nxt episode sikirama post pandren dear??
Hi MONi this fantastic you are multi talented so entertaining ,wating for next episode.well done.
Thank u sooo much for ??
super, very cool. great job
Thank you?
Good morning dear, fantastic episode, i mean it u done a great job, god bless u, eagerly waiting for next episode darling.
Thank you ammu dear…??
Ammu i posted in nxt os…..
Mehrya… magical moments with bubble❤
Wow moni nice post next one soon
Thanks somi ????
Sure sure..will post soon??
hi moni dear,
your story is awesome just loved it!!!!!!
Thank you so much…. likhitha. Dear???
Very sweet?????
Thank you so much fambe???
Omg❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤such a cute sweet story my dear moni………
Love u a lot dr?????
Best wishes for Ur writing skill?