So,I am back after a very long time…hope you guys remember me…I am sorry for being late…as I said this would be the last part ..this time being the last part , you guys should comment openly…if it was bad you can throw tomatoes at me .
Actually I thought of putting one more part , but the fact is that how long you will be able to suffer this boring os…so I thought to end it up and may be ,i will come back with a unique story…
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Its night,
Shivaay: om..rudra
Om rudra: ha ..bhaiyyaa….
Shivaay: we should cook something for dinner…
rudra: what about your favourite pasta soup..
om: no we will cook aloo ka paratta..
shivaay: I think we should cook something like what om suggested..
rudra: but we can include western dishes right..
shivaay: fine fine..
shivaay starts cooking and om and rudra helps him…
in between rudra takes some cashews in his hand and eats them..
he hears some giggling sounds..he looks around..there were four heads peeping in one above the other..
rudra signals shivaay..shivaay cleans his hand..and goes towards the door..he cathes hold on priyanka’s ears
priyanka: sorry bhaiyya..are you cooking aloo paratta..
om : haa so..
ishana: I will taste it first…
om: arey yaar. ..we had asked you to watch tv..right..
ishana: papa and bade papa’s are discussing about about someone’s marriage…
hearing marriage , both shivaay and anika are shocked..shivaay drops the utensil down..
om , rudra,ishu,sumo and priyanka stares at them with a smile..
anika:who’s marriage…
ishana: may be yours…
shivaay: anika’s..
om: don’t worry bhaiyya ..you are the first preference…
shivaay gives a death glare to om..
om: I was thinking about our childhood talks …actually shivaay bhaiyya …you always talked about anika ….right bhaiyya…
shivaay: even you..you were always praising ishana right..
om and shivaay continue their cute fight…
seeing this ishana and anika laughs silently..
suddenly the current goes…
rudra: power failure…and that too at oberoi mansion…
soumya had been holding priyanka and ishana tightly….
Ishana: anika dii…are you standing somewhere near me..(saying this ishana puts her hands straight and waves in the darkness searching anika…
Om:(in silent tone…somewhat in the manner of whispering ) I don’t think you will find her near you…but she will be near bhaiyya for sure…
Ishana : (whispering)how can you say that so surely….
Om: I have seen her doing the same in childhood…anyway you can see the truth with your own eyes….wait till the current comes..
In a few minutes the current comes…
Everyone is surprised to see anika hugging shivaay so tightly..shivaay had reciprocated the hug..
Rudra who returns after checking the fuse
Rudra: bhaiyaa I never knew that there was a movie going on here…
Rudra: so did the climax finish…or I am at the right time..
Om: you are on the right time man..
Shivaay is feeling embarrassed..
Shivaay: can you stop it…she was scared and that’s all…
Soumya: anika di..lights arrived…
Anika slowly moves her hands which were kept around shivaay’s shoulders…
Anika is about to slip on the oil that had fallen on the ground…shivaay pulls her..and prevents her from falling..
Anika and shivaay are caught on a cute eye lock…
Rudra: bhaiyaa hum under age haii….can’t watch these things …
Shivaay and anika are still looking at each others eyes…
Om: bhaiyaa you will become tired standing here…you both can sit on the sofa and do the same..
Priyanka: om bhaiyaa ..i think they are really lost…just go and pat on shivaay bhaiyya’s shoulder..
Om comes near them and pats on shivaay’s shoulder ..
Shivaay and anika comes to sense and move apart…
Dadi comes just then…
Seeing dadi everyone composes themselves..
Dadi: shivaay…is the food ready…
Shivaay: haa dadi…
Dadi: billu’s and anika’s marriage is fixed for next week …so shopping’s will be there tomorrow…
Saying this dadi goes from there…
Rudra: its too late ….the shaddi should have been tomorrow…
Shivaay: just stop it…saying this he moves outside still holding anika’s hand..
Ishana: bhaiyya…if you don’t mind can we take anika didi with us…
Shivaay being embaressed again ..smiled in a different way and signed anika to go…
The scene shifts to tejs room where he gets a phone call…
Tej: what….ok….thanks..
Jhanvi ,shivaay and shakti comes there..
Shivaay: what happened..any problem..
Tej: actually a major problem got over…
Jhanvi: a major problem..
Tej: haa…gayatri is arrested..
Shakti: that’s a great news..
Dadi comes there and they tell her about gayatri’s arrest..
Dadi: I was afraid she would create troubles during the marriage…now I am relieved…
Dadi: everyone is waiting for you guys ..come have food..
Everyone accompanies her to the dining room..
After dinner….
Priyanka , anika ,soumya and ishana is sitting in the drawing room…
Priyanka: anika dii..can I ask you something…
Anika: haa ..what is it dear…
Anika is sitting on the sofa opposite to priyanka..
Priyanka: dii actually …when did you fall in love with bhaiyya
Anika: vo..vo..
Shivaay who was attending some calls passes by and hearing the conversation stops..he comes behind anika’s sofa..
Anika: I actually don’t remember the first time..but I always liked him being near me ..he was ever ready to help me..his kanji eyes were really beautiful..
Ishana was sitting near soumya and anika ..and the trio didn’t realize shivaay’s presence..
Ishana: ok how about playing a game…
Soumya: which game..
Ishana: truth or dare..
Priyanka: I’m ready..
Shivaay messaged rudra and om to come there…om and rudra arrived there in no time and was listening to their conversation without letting them know..
Anika: okk
Soumya keeps a bottle on the table and turns it…the bottle points at ishana…
Ishana: okk..i will tell you a truth…actually I’m in love with someone..
Girls are surprised to hear it…
Soumya: you will have to tell the person’s name..
Ishana: actually it’s a one sided love…I believe…I am in love with om…
Om is shocked hearing it..he was about to go towards ishana ..but rudra stopped him..
Rudra: control bhaiyaa..i know you love her from childhood and thought that your’s was one sided….
Rudra: you can talk to her later..for now be here..
Om gives and angry smile to rudra..
anika turns the bottle again..now it points at soumya,
Soumya: ok dii..so the truth that I am going to say is that…I ..i am the love angel..
Everybody is shocked and rudra was supershocked…he comes out and girls are surprised to see the boys..
Anika: you listened to the whole convo…
Soumya:I am sorry rudra…
Rudra: its okk…but I want it still to be a secret at college…yippee I am the boyfriend of love angel…
Soumya: huh..boy friend…
Rudra: friend is enough…
Dadi comes there…
Jhanvi also comes there,
Jhanvi: I think its too late why aren’t you asleep…
Dadi: ha..i will tell u where you are supposed to sleep..
Rudra: I will come in a minute…
Om signs him to go..
Shivaay gets a call and he too leaves…
Dadi:ok…since there is work going on in the room near om’s room ,ishana will sleep in rudra’s room with soumya…and rudra will sleep with shivaay…om will sleep alone.. and sahil with anika in the room next to mine..
Dadi: anymore doubts..
Everyone signals her that they understood..
Sahil:dii can I sleep with om bhaiyya…
Om:sure…
Anika: no ….vo…he has works to do before sleeping..
Om: nothing is there anika…let him sleep with me..
Anika: ok ..so I will be sleeping alone…
Just then priyanka comes..
Priyanka:why don’t you sleep with me..
Anika: ok ..i will come after picking up some stuffs…
Priyanka: ok dii..i will be in my room…
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shivaay is on some call….searching for a pen he accidently comes to priyanka’s room…he was writing something calling someone…
Anika finishes her work and come to priyanka’s room…she see’s shivaay there ..
Anika goes to the next room…
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Dadi and everyone goes to sleep…only a small lamp is lightened…its darkness..the silence has provoked the oberoi’s and arora’s to sleep..
Anika was sleeping peacefully…she turned herself to the other side and accidently puts her hand over the person next to her….
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Here rudra who had missed dadi’s talk returns to his room…
Rudra understands that someone has occupied his room so he thinks to go to shivaay’s room…he find’s room near dadi’s room empty ..
Rudra:(thinking to himself)why should I sleep in shivaay’s room…he wont allow me to sleep peacefully..i can’t even turn..he needs silence ..i will sleep alone…
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Shivaay’s room..
Shivaay feels someone’s hand on him..
Shivaay: how many times rudra should I tell you to sleep properly why is your hand over me..
Saying this he moves the hands and keeps it near the pillow…suddenly on turning shivaay is shocked to see the person sleeping near him..
Shivaay: anika …tum…
Anika: sahil..i told you not to talk at sleep time…sleep now…we will discuss everything tomorrow..
Shivaay is shocked to see anika’s behavior…he moves away..anika is about to hug him thinking him as sahil…shivaay moves further more and he is about to fall and suddenly anika catches him…
She sleeps hugging him..
Shivaay is not able to move and sleeps in the same position..
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Next morning,
Shivaay wakes up hearing someone screaming..
Anika: tum..why did you sleep with me..
Shivaay: actually I should ask you this…
Om , rudra, sahil ,dadi ,priyanka ,ishana and soumya comes there hearing anika shouting..
Dadi: what happened billlu…
Shivaay: dadi you know that I never tell lies…
Anika: again a lie…
Anika: dadi isn’t this priyanka’s room…
Priyanka: no anika…and where did you sleep yesterday…I mean I was waiting for you …
Anika: I slept here thinking that its your room…
Everybody is shocked to hear this…everyone eyes at shivaay and says: shivaay ki saath…
Shivaay Is shocked..
Rudra: that too before marriage..
Om: shut up rudra..
Shivaay: stop it guys ..i was sleeping in the sofa…I was really tired…I did not see her sleeping on the bed..
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Every body goes….
Shivaay: I said a lie because of you ediot…
Anika:why did you lie…you could have saved yourself…I …
Shivaay: what the wuck..now I am the one who is blamed huh…
They continue their fight as usual…and the oberoi mansion yet again trembles in fear of these two loving angry birds….
A NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR….
Actually I am grateful to all those who had supported and commented me…its amazing when you feel there is someone to support and correct you..i had great time writing this os and enjoying your beautiful comments..thanks a lottt friends…
forgive me for any logical and grammatical errors…
55 Comments
beautiful
thanks mukta…
Woh…..shivika always rock
Awesome
thanks a lott..
Nice episode… Pls continue writing
dear ..its my last part and I will be coming back with something new..
I love reading shivaye n Anika scenes…. N their mom jhoks
It’s nok jhok
thanks dear…happy that you enjoyed it…
Wow…awesome yaar. Really hilarious especially ishkara and exchange of bedrooms. Wish same ishkara story in actual serial also . sad that u r ending or ff
hey don’t be sad …I will come back soon with a much better plot…
Amazing….. Please update new episode ASAP….
thanks a lot dear…
Myself and yourself share the same name, may I know who are you, I think people may confuse between you and me. I am 10th,. Just wondering how telly updates gave two people with different account with the same name, just worried about the confusion
don’t worry sat….you are always unique by your words and style nobody can replace you ..
I loved the shivika argument
thanks mihra..
Good one dear Anshi sleeps under a roof in a room but I was little confused that whose room was allotted to whom can you clear it as I red that part 4 times …
Its not at all boring dear infact amazing and yes being a so called writer as we all are not professional whenever a person does hardwork on something with innocent heart he/ she get appreciation and our readers come friends are so big hearted na that they accept all the ff in a warm manner.. Do continue because something which gives you happiness or to others we should do that if fortune and net pack permits …
Your OS always made a big carve on my face? sorry if there is spelling mistakes ….
# do u agree what I said guys ….
eventhough dadi gave them different rooms to sleep they had interchanged it and thus confusions occurred and so they slept like this..
in om’s room. – om is sleeping with sahil…
rudra’s room- ishana soumya
Priyanka’s room– Priyanka alone
shivaay’s room- anika and shivaay…
in the room near dadi’s room- rudra..
hope its cleared dii…actually I am sorry for confusing you guys..
your comment means a lot to me dii…
I am stopping here becoz..I want to come back with something that’s really unique…masterpieces are made just once..we have to wait till they arrive but sometimes you have to strive a little to do so..and for me I feel I need to improve a lott ..
.you supported me a lott and I am really grateful to you…
Same on this sides sometimes words are not able to describe our feelings in depth …
amazing nt at all boring plz continue
thanks dear..but I am stopping the os with this..because I want to come back with something really special..
Heyyy luv this os skivikas nokjok oh my god no words for me to explain plss be back with another wonderful os as soon as possible ???
yupp…I will be back …and I am really happy that you guys enjoyed my os…
Loved shivaay’s fall and shivika scenes and ishya confessions. Great job dear . Loved shivika fight
thanks a lot akshaya….
Love the shivika part….❤
thanks sabhya…
Awsm..!
thanks asha…
Nyc one dear…..i always luv their cute fight…..n i agree wid shama di…evn i was a bit confused abt d roomss…..epi was ultimatee….?
eventhough dadi gave them different rooms to sleep they had interchanged it and thus confusions occurred and so they slept like this..
in om’s room. – om is sleeping with sahil…
rudra’s room- ishana soumya
Priyanka’s room– Priyanka alone
shivaay’s room- anika and shivaay…
in the room near dadi’s room- rudra..
hope its cleared…
thanks a lot for the beautiful comment…
Got it dear…..bt d best thng is shivaay n anika sleepng together…..☺
lovely 🙂
come back soon with another shivika os plz 🙂
sure dear….I will come back..but not that soon…I need a different story and a unique plot …I am thinking about it…it seems that my brain is taking lot of time to design my works…
loved episode shivika sleep in same room
okk..thanks..
Awesome update dear loved it
thanks pinkyy…
superb , shivika marriage , udate nxt one asap
thanks dear…and this was the last part..
super super super awesome please update next one soon i love ur os….
thanks for loving my os…but actually this was the last part…
Hey ann, sorry for the late comment yar, I am really really very busy. I didn’t even complete my next episode as I am very much depressed with the decreased number of comments. And now I came out of that moody feeling and then started reading all ffs. A big big gigantic sorry for the late comment.
And oh my god , sorry for the above bakwaas bakbas.
And yar I never can find a writer like you, your literary art simply touches my corner of the heart. And as I don’t that much poetry like, this is a small comment, hope you are happy, I am glad that you are continuing and I always support in all deeds and needs
And as a friend I am telling you, don’t be sad if you get less comments, many can’t estimate writers feelings and many might be busy. So they don’t comment but your ff is being read by everyone and enjoyed by them. There is just a barrier called communications nd expression gap. People immediately can’t just comment as there are many SSOs like me in the society.so no worries dear
And Ann
Coming to the episode, I just loved it to the core
What a script and storyline yar
And that shivika moment, their hug and eyelocka nd ishara whispering to each other was awesome and rukta moments are always good
I am very sad that this is the last part.
But I know my friend never disappoints me, so you are going to start an another ff or os or ts or anything, we would love to see it.
Missing your story dear
With love
Sat?????
how sweet..your comment was really wonderful..i was really missing you and your ff’s..really happy that you returned…I will write …but I am waiting for my brain to design a unique story…
hey nice we will wait for the next one by u anyways had a good time reading all ur ffs
thanks a lot tanu….
Nice
thanks..
thanks..
I jus love your ff awesome ff please continue
thanks a lottt….
I love your os and shivika moment and this story concept is awesome please continue we want this ff continue please please please please please please please please please please please please please plese please please
thanks a lot for this motivational comment…
I am uploading my new ff’s first part today…
I am sorry for hurting you by stopping this os…
Ohh but i love this ff please if you can than please update next part