OMG I scored 100……………..full…yipeee…so happy right now….
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I am talking about my comments not my marks in exam ….
Thanks to all who commented and loved my story…I never thought this would be a success …I though I would get max.of 20 comments..
You guys made my day…uma dear….I am really sorry for making your swara suffer…
And haan I know many people wants to become my friend cause I am too good naa*self praising…. Hehehe…just lidding.
But please don’t ask me if you can be my friend…cause you all are my friend… And please if you guys find any flaws in my story please point it out…don’t feel bad to do it cause then I can try to make it more better..
And haan please continue commenting…
And to all Christians and all tu members..
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR..
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR..
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR..
I am a christian is there any other Christians here then please comment….
#iamachristian
I have no idea why I am doing this….???
Sorry for that bakbakbak….I am really talkative..if you meet me in real life you will run away….hearing my never ending talk…
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So to the story…
Flashback…3 months back..
Swara was a normal girl like all others…she led a happy life with her dad mom and sister Ragini…
Once swara and shekhar went to market to buy stuff …….
On their way back they met with an a cident due to which shekhar dies and swara hits with a brain injury….
The doctors declared that swara has lost her memory and now has become a 5 year old girl mentally…
All were shocked….
Ragini is married to Laksh Maheshwari and is settled in us..
Sumi takes care of swara. ..
Before dying shekhar requested dp(his best friend) to accept his daughter as their in dil..
Even after knowing about swara’s condition do makes swara marry sanskaar Maheshwari,his younger son…
Sanky was first shocked but then due to Dp he accepted.
Swasan were married…
On the marriage day…
Sumi-beta now you are married to sanskaar ..now he is your husband go with him….
Swara-you also come naa mama…
Sumi-i can’t come beta…
Swara-you have to come…..and cries..
Sumi-listen this is your husband..since you married him you got a new friend to play with..he will play with you always..he is your best friend..
Swara-sachii….he is my dosth…
Sumi nods…
Swara goes to sanky with a cute pout-dosth are you my dosth…
Sanskaar smiled at her cute innocense and nodded yes…
Swara started jumping….-yehuuu…..
They all went to their room leaving swasan alone in their room..
Sanky-swara you sleep in the bed…I will sleep in the couch..
Swara-mama…mama…
Sanky-why are you calling mama now..
Swara-i want ears…
Sanskaar was shocked-nahii..I am not gonna donate my ears..
Swara cries….suddenly sumi calls sanskaar in phone..
Sumi-sanskaar beta…swara has a habbit of catching my ears and sleeping when she was small…please lie next to her and give your ears..she won’t hurt you…she will just catch it and sleep..
Sanky-ok maa..
Sanskaar-listen I will give my ears…but please don’t hurt me..
Swara nods OK..
Sanskaar lies next to her while swara grabs his ears..and slowly falls asleep..
Sanky sees her sleeping like a baby with her left thumb on her mouth and right hand on his ears…she looks damn cute…sanskaar slightly kissed her forehead….
He slept cuddling with her…
Next morning… Swara woke up and found sanky next to her. .
She screamt….sanky woke..
Sanky-what happened…
Swara-theif…theif….
Sanskaar-where where..
Swara pointing to sanskaar….
Sanskaar-shona I am your husband..your friend..remember…
Swara-dosth…
Sanky nods…
Swara hugs him…sanskaar hugs her back…
Swara-dosth I got scared…
Sanskaar-shh..its OK….you go take a bath and come OK..
Swara-my mother used to bathe me…idea you bathe me naa….I don’t know how to bath..
Sanskaar-jesus christ..what the hell is this girl saying….shocked..
Sanskaar-swara I can’t bathe you….you are a girl and I am a boy….
Suddenly Jesus appears…
(Special treat for Jesus on his b’day)
Jesus-son you tell her about boy and girl difference…she will understand everything clearly….mocking…
Sanskaar-haa so you itself tell what will I do..
Jesus thinks..-haa yes idea mill gayi..
Sanskaar-Kya hai..
Jesus whispers something….
Sanskaar-good idea…
He turns to swara and finds her shivering….
Sanskaar-what happened…
Swara-is there a ghost who is speaking to you..
Jesus laughs loudly….sanskaar looks at him angrily while jesus shrugs his shoulders and goes as if he has no idea what’s happening..
Sanskaar-nothing shona….I will bathe you but promise me you won’t open till I tell you..
Swara-ok…pinky promise..
Sanskaar takes her to the toilet…then rushes and calls uttara…
Sanky-uttara…will you help swara in bathing…please..she is telling Me to do it..I somehow managed her..
Uttara-bhaiu…she is ur wife not any stranger..
Sanskaar-uttara…
Uttara-thik hai…I am going…
Uttara makes her bath and gets her ready..she goes out ..sanky comes in…
Sanky-now you can open your eyes…
Swara opens…-thanks sanky….umaah and kisses him…
Sanskaar-jesus…
Jesus again appears yawning…-arrey yaar..what’s your problem..let me sleep…
Sansky-ya go sleep after giving me sleepless nights…
Jesus-ok fine bye..
Sanskaar-arre look..how he is going…..why do I even pray to you…huh…
Jesus turns back and gives a red shot eyes…
Sanky-fine now don’t get angry…
Sanky comes down and finds swara sitting in the chair…
Swara was not eating..
Swara-sanky feed me naa…please..
Sanky-huh….ohk fine…
Sanky feeds her ….all admire them..
Days pass….sanky started to get irritated with her behavior… But still loved it…he started loving her….
One day sanky had gone to his friends marriage function…there he got a bit too drunk…
He came back home and found swara sitting on the bed with an angry pout…
She was wearing a baby pink top with shorts touching her thighs..
Sanskaar couldn’t take his eyes off her..he forgot that she was not mentally fine…
Sanskaar goes to her and touches her cheeks…swara was surprised… Soon sanky remove their clothes…..swara could not protest as she did not feel anything…she just thought he was just helping her change dress…sanskaar totally forgot about her conditions…
Then you can understand what happen…
Swara screams in pain but sanskaar did not listen to that…
Next day…
Sanskaar found her sleeping with him…she had no clothes on…
Sanskaar was shocked…..-what the hell did I do…omg..I just raped her..I know she did not agree..
He wakes up making swara also wake up….she got scared seeing sanskaar…
Sanskaar huged her tightly….
Sanskaar-sorry..sorry swara…did it pain..
Swara nodes crying…sanskaar cups her face…
Sanskaar-sorry swara…won’t you forgive your friend…
Swara nods yes….sanskaar hugs her feeling guilty…
Sanskaar makes swara ready and he also get ready…
Sanskaar hides this from all…as he knows all will not forgive him..
Precap-sanskaar insulting swara….
125 Comments
Awesome……….. Continue soon………
Thanks dear…
Nice
Thanks….
Ooo so it was not in the sense like… Bt then to sanskar did wrong… Update soon dear… N Merry Christmas… ???????
Thanks dear….
Awesome ☺ and merry Xmas
Thanks dear…
i think so sanskaar must have done thyis in alcohol affect
but strill it was not good welll amazing post nect soonwr
Thanks dear…yes he did that in a drunken state..
Amazing but still I feel for this swara..
Sanskar should really get punished.
Thanks dear….ya will try..
Nyc
Thanks dear….
awesome loved it the story is amazing and plzzz post next one soon .i am also christian from kerala.and wish u a merry Christmas .jesus will give all happiness in ur life
Thanks dear…even m a christian from Kerala….
Post soon please….it’s just awesome
Thanks dear…
Nice
Thanks..
Merry christmas dear
Sanskar hawww what u did
Thanks dii…sanky was not at fault…but still was at fault*confused pout..
Epi is awesome. …..jesus part is just mind blowing. …..loved it. …..waiting for next prt. …update soon…….even I an a Christian ?. …..merry Christmas and Happy new year frnds
Thanks dear…same to you..
It’s just awesome and brilliant and a merry Christmas to u
Thanks dear…
Awesome dear…. Continue soon
Thanks dear..
awesome…. merry Christmas dr
Thanks dii…
huhhh whatever sanky done wrongg why liya whyyyyy u made him drunk (angry pout)… now next part soon 😉
oo sorry i forgott a very happy merry chirstmas to u.. stay blessed always 🙂
Thanks dii…if it is that way then I am asking you why did you make sanky’s father very bad towards his mother and sister and him….its necessary na similar way …simple??now leave that angry pout and give me a *cute happy pout…
Awesome
Thanks dear…
nice..
Thanks….
if he loves her den y he is leaving her.. very nice epi. continue soon
Thanks dear..you will soon come to know..
aww…feeling bad for swara. Merry christmas!
Thanks Vyshu…same to you…
NICE Happy christmas waiting for next part
Thanks dear..
Sanskar done wrong he must be punished
Thanks dear….
awesome
Thanks dear…
Awesome when I read about ears part I remembered my brother at childhood he also used to do the same with my mother’s ears.
Thanks dear…actually even I used to do that when I was small…here??
superb.plz post nxt part soon
Thanks dear…
Just awesome dear…..
Thanks dear…
It’s awesome dear & merry christmas.
Thanks dear…
nice story!
merry x-mas!
swara is soo cute!
i lv sanskar.
bt bt he ddnt do right! *gv him a punch
urrgggg
we both r same same!
so dnt wry! i ll nt be bore with ur bak bak!
keep writing
be happy always
Thanks dear…
Awesome chappy Liya Merry Christmas
Ththanks di…same to you..
Loved it dear.. n MERRY CHRISTMAS
Wat sanakar did was wrong… it can b accptble to some point if he hd nvr lft her…
First he raped her dan insult dan lft her which is totally wrong n he dsrve punishmnt… swara shud gt fine n sanky shud knw abt swaraz prgncy n swara shud nt forgve him ??
Thanks dear what you said correct….