OMG I scored 100……………..full…yipeee…so happy right now….
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I am talking about my comments not my marks in exam ….
Thanks to all who commented and loved my story…I never thought this would be a success …I though I would get max.of 20 comments..
You guys made my day…uma dear….I am really sorry for making your swara suffer…
And haan I know many people wants to become my friend cause I am too good naa*self praising…. Hehehe…just lidding.
But please don’t ask me if you can be my friend…cause you all are my friend… And please if you guys find any flaws in my story please point it out…don’t feel bad to do it cause then I can try to make it more better..
And haan please continue commenting…
And to all Christians and all tu members..
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR..
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR..
MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR..
I am a christian is there any other Christians here then please comment….
#iamachristian
I have no idea why I am doing this….???
Sorry for that bakbakbak….I am really talkative..if you meet me in real life you will run away….hearing my never ending talk…
??????????
So to the story…
Flashback…3 months back..
Swara was a normal girl like all others…she led a happy life with her dad mom and sister Ragini…
Once swara and shekhar went to market to buy stuff …….
On their way back they met with an a cident due to which shekhar dies and swara hits with a brain injury….
The doctors declared that swara has lost her memory and now has become a 5 year old girl mentally…
All were shocked….
Ragini is married to Laksh Maheshwari and is settled in us..
Sumi takes care of swara. ..
Before dying shekhar requested dp(his best friend) to accept his daughter as their in dil..
Even after knowing about swara’s condition do makes swara marry sanskaar Maheshwari,his younger son…
Sanky was first shocked but then due to Dp he accepted.
Swasan were married…
On the marriage day…
Sumi-beta now you are married to sanskaar ..now he is your husband go with him….
Swara-you also come naa mama…
Sumi-i can’t come beta…
Swara-you have to come…..and cries..
Sumi-listen this is your husband..since you married him you got a new friend to play with..he will play with you always..he is your best friend..
Swara-sachii….he is my dosth…
Sumi nods…
Swara goes to sanky with a cute pout-dosth are you my dosth…
Sanskaar smiled at her cute innocense and nodded yes…
Swara started jumping….-yehuuu…..
They all went to their room leaving swasan alone in their room..
Sanky-swara you sleep in the bed…I will sleep in the couch..
Swara-mama…mama…
Sanky-why are you calling mama now..
Swara-i want ears…
Sanskaar was shocked-nahii..I am not gonna donate my ears..
Swara cries….suddenly sumi calls sanskaar in phone..
Sumi-sanskaar beta…swara has a habbit of catching my ears and sleeping when she was small…please lie next to her and give your ears..she won’t hurt you…she will just catch it and sleep..
Sanky-ok maa..
Sanskaar-listen I will give my ears…but please don’t hurt me..
Swara nods OK..
Sanskaar lies next to her while swara grabs his ears..and slowly falls asleep..
Sanky sees her sleeping like a baby with her left thumb on her mouth and right hand on his ears…she looks damn cute…sanskaar slightly kissed her forehead….
He slept cuddling with her…
Next morning… Swara woke up and found sanky next to her. .
She screamt….sanky woke..
Sanky-what happened…
Swara-theif…theif….
Sanskaar-where where..
Swara pointing to sanskaar….
Sanskaar-shona I am your husband..your friend..remember…
Swara-dosth…
Sanky nods…
Swara hugs him…sanskaar hugs her back…
Swara-dosth I got scared…
Sanskaar-shh..its OK….you go take a bath and come OK..
Swara-my mother used to bathe me…idea you bathe me naa….I don’t know how to bath..
Sanskaar-jesus christ..what the hell is this girl saying….shocked..
Sanskaar-swara I can’t bathe you….you are a girl and I am a boy….
Suddenly Jesus appears…
(Special treat for Jesus on his b’day)
Jesus-son you tell her about boy and girl difference…she will understand everything clearly….mocking…
Sanskaar-haa so you itself tell what will I do..
Jesus thinks..-haa yes idea mill gayi..
Sanskaar-Kya hai..
Jesus whispers something….
Sanskaar-good idea…
He turns to swara and finds her shivering….
Sanskaar-what happened…
Swara-is there a ghost who is speaking to you..
Jesus laughs loudly….sanskaar looks at him angrily while jesus shrugs his shoulders and goes as if he has no idea what’s happening..
Sanskaar-nothing shona….I will bathe you but promise me you won’t open till I tell you..
Swara-ok…pinky promise..
Sanskaar takes her to the toilet…then rushes and calls uttara…
Sanky-uttara…will you help swara in bathing…please..she is telling Me to do it..I somehow managed her..
Uttara-bhaiu…she is ur wife not any stranger..
Sanskaar-uttara…
Uttara-thik hai…I am going…
Uttara makes her bath and gets her ready..she goes out ..sanky comes in…
Sanky-now you can open your eyes…
Swara opens…-thanks sanky….umaah and kisses him…
Sanskaar-jesus…
Jesus again appears yawning…-arrey yaar..what’s your problem..let me sleep…
Sansky-ya go sleep after giving me sleepless nights…
Jesus-ok fine bye..
Sanskaar-arre look..how he is going…..why do I even pray to you…huh…
Jesus turns back and gives a red shot eyes…
Sanky-fine now don’t get angry…
Sanky comes down and finds swara sitting in the chair…
Swara was not eating..
Swara-sanky feed me naa…please..
Sanky-huh….ohk fine…
Sanky feeds her ….all admire them..
Days pass….sanky started to get irritated with her behavior… But still loved it…he started loving her….
One day sanky had gone to his friends marriage function…there he got a bit too drunk…
He came back home and found swara sitting on the bed with an angry pout…
She was wearing a baby pink top with shorts touching her thighs..
Sanskaar couldn’t take his eyes off her..he forgot that she was not mentally fine…
Sanskaar goes to her and touches her cheeks…swara was surprised… Soon sanky remove their clothes…..swara could not protest as she did not feel anything…she just thought he was just helping her change dress…sanskaar totally forgot about her conditions…
Then you can understand what happen…
Swara screams in pain but sanskaar did not listen to that…
Next day…
Sanskaar found her sleeping with him…she had no clothes on…
Sanskaar was shocked…..-what the hell did I do…omg..I just raped her..I know she did not agree..
He wakes up making swara also wake up….she got scared seeing sanskaar…
Sanskaar huged her tightly….
Sanskaar-sorry..sorry swara…did it pain..
Swara nodes crying…sanskaar cups her face…
Sanskaar-sorry swara…won’t you forgive your friend…
Swara nods yes….sanskaar hugs her feeling guilty…
Sanskaar makes swara ready and he also get ready…
Sanskaar hides this from all…as he knows all will not forgive him..
Precap-sanskaar insulting swara….
125 Comments
Merry Christmas …..BT late ho gaya…..koi nahi for bhi a very happy merry Christmas… I love that Jesus wala part?
Thanks dear…
Merry Christmas …..BT late ho gaya…..koi nahi for bhi a very happy merry Christmas… I love that Jesus wala part?….awesome
I guess two times…
Amazing plz. Longg part
Thanks dear….
Nice
Thanks dear…
Awesome
I m not a Christian but i celebrate Christmas
Even i made snowman today not with ice but with cotton. ..
Merry Christmas
Thanks dear…snowman with snow is the most fun part…sowman with cotton is also fun..
Wow loved it ❤️
Thanks dear…
Wow vry nyc. It means later swara could b normal.
Thanks dear..yes she could be normal…
awesome liya…ok ok now i wont kill sanky…bcz he is also innocent….awww mera swara kitini cute ho tum….hooo love u dear….love u liya…MERRY CHRISTMAS….and ya are u in fb..???if yes then give me ur id…
Thanks dear..I told you not to kill him…you can peacefully murder him in the next chappy…no I don’t have fb account…I have g+account…
And Instagram…
its ok then whats ur g account…???
Awesome dear…
Thanks dear…
Marvelous
Thanks dear…
so sad for swara
so sanskar is not bad till now
pls post soon
a belated Merry Christmas Liya
Thanks dii…same to you…
Awesome…?
Thanks diii…
Thanks dear..
Sorry got posted two times..
Awesome dr…
Nxt one soon…
Thanks dii…
awesome Liya…… uugghhh i hate alcohol
Thanks dear..even I hate them..
Amazing part please post next one soon.
Thanks dear will try…
Superb
Thanks dear
awesome
Thanks..
Awesome..update next part soon.
Thanks dear..
Can u provide the link of first part plz
Yes dear..
http://www.tellyupdates.com/mental-wifeswasants-part-1/#comment-3048001
This is the link..
awesome…!!
Thanks dear…
awesome part plzz…update it fast waiting for the next
Thanks dear..
Awesome dear..
Merry Christmas
Thanks dear..same to you..
Hai ….
Awesome part dr. Nd sorry for being late to comment…
Thanks dear..its OK..
Hey liya.. A belated merry christmas to you..
And thanks to jesus, myy sanky is also innocent..?
Thanks dear..sanky is not innocent..read the next chappy..
Why!! He did that in drunken state.. And i agree he is at fault.. But i guess he will deny that he didnt do anything like that, right??
Mee to thinks sanky is innocent????
Liiii..That sanky na??throw him in out of the world… You stupid,monkey,donkey,if you don’t like her,if you can’t accept her in that condition,then who said to you marry her,gadha kahika??.. Loved the chappy specially my innocent swara..Her behavior is so cute??.. Keep it up dear.. Waiting for nxt..
MERRY CHRISTMAS DEAR?????????..STAY BLESSED..
TAKE CARE
KEEP SMILING?
Umaaa lii is my pet name… How do u know..all my family especially my mamu calls me that..I know shona is a cutiee..thanks dear..
Actually I love to give pet name to my frnds..I also thought you as my frnd..Can I call call
Can I call you that..
Ya sure..
Nice….
Thanks dear…
Awsome… But sanky will insult swara??? I can’t see it..
But love u sanky?????? and cutiepie shona
Thanks dear…